初中英语作文—记叙文 PPT 课件
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初中英语作文范文20篇ppt课件
The Spring Festival The Spring Festival comes in winter. It is the most important traditional festival in China. People usually go home to spend the festival with their family. They have a big family get-together. The Chinese people have big meals and watch TV during the Spring Festival. They also visit their friends and relatives. Children like the Spring Festival very much because they needn't go to school and they have a lot of time to play.
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亲爱的同学，你的初中学习生活马上就要结束了，请你以“My English Study”为题，谈一下三年以来学习英语的心得体会。
要求：1.要点包括你在英语学习中所遇到的困难、解决的方法以及 学习感悟；2.词数80左右。
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My English Study How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study. When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English. I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn't master the words and phrases. For a time I wanted to give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in English. In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.
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亲爱的同学，你的初中学习生活马上就要结束了，请你以“My English Study”为题，谈一下三年以来学习英语的心得体会。
要求：1.要点包括你在英语学习中所遇到的困难、解决的方法以及 学习感悟；2.词数80左右。
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【优秀满分范文】
My English Study How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study. When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English. I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn't master the words and phrases. For a time I wanted to give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in English. In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.
Unit 4作文课件 人教版英语九年级全一册
The biggest change in my life was becoming interested in English.
1. Thanks to my English teacher, Mr. Zhu, who advised me to listen to some English music.
第一段 过去的样子：
我过去矮小瘦弱/害羞/粗心/安静/懒惰… I used to be short and weak/shy/careless/silent/lazy…
我过去对学习/读书/…不感兴趣 I was not interested in studying/reading /…
我过去害怕黑暗/问问题/在全班面前讲话/… I used be afraid of the dark/asking questions/speaking in front of the class /…
人教九年级英语作文 Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark?
Topic: 我们所发生的变化 Function：谈论人物过去的特点 作文主题： 我的变化
英语 作文
Before writing
性格类：
积极 勇敢 外向 安静 有趣 友好 幽默 害羞 严肃 懒惰 勤奋 仔细
第二段
1. 多亏了某人，他做了什么事。 2. 因为我的某次经历，这使我意识
到____。 3. 因为某人一直鼓励我，所以我开
始尽全力。
改变的过程
1. 从那时起, 我开始对______有了兴 趣。
2. 我开始享受做某事。 3. 我读的越多，我就越自信。
改变的结果
1. 我意识到世上无难事，只怕有 心人。
中考英语作文指导课件(共38张PPT)
理由：
on the one hand, on the other hand besides also ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
•God helps those who helps themselves.
•During the process of solving problems, I
你的观点 2至3条理由
Last term, my aunt bought me a mobile phone as my birthday present. After that, I often used it to chat with my friends, even some strangers. It wasted me much time, my eyesight became worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some personal information, I often got many
Different people deal with their problems in different ways. As for me, when I meet problems , I like to deal with them with others. ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
第三部分：结尾 （总结全文，重申观点）
in a word in short all in all ...
正方：
反方：
All in all, it is really important for us to deal with problems by ourselves. It can make us more independent and give us more opportunities to get true knowledge about the world.
on the one hand, on the other hand besides also ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
•God helps those who helps themselves.
•During the process of solving problems, I
你的观点 2至3条理由
Last term, my aunt bought me a mobile phone as my birthday present. After that, I often used it to chat with my friends, even some strangers. It wasted me much time, my eyesight became worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some personal information, I often got many
Different people deal with their problems in different ways. As for me, when I meet problems , I like to deal with them with others. ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
第三部分：结尾 （总结全文，重申观点）
in a word in short all in all ...
正方：
反方：
All in all, it is really important for us to deal with problems by ourselves. It can make us more independent and give us more opportunities to get true knowledge about the world.
初中英语中考书面表达复习PPT优秀课件
初 中 英 语 中 考书面 表达复 习PPT优 秀课件
初 中 英 语 中 考书面 表达复 习PPT优 秀课件
【高分揭秘】 1. 习作既有对老师外貌的描写，也给出了喜欢
老师的三个原因，符合写作任务的内容要 求。 2. 习作句式丰富，既有简单句，也有复杂一些 的定语从句。习作中还用了admire, expect, remodel等 较高级的词汇，给习作增色不少。
初 中 英 语 中 考书面 表达复 习PPT优 秀课件
初 中 英 语 中 考书面 表达复 习PPT优 秀课件
【素材积累】 1. 词汇 外 貌 ： good-looking, pretty, slim, strong, medium build 性格、品质：outgoing, shy, active, friendly, honest, quiet, clever, smart 兴趣爱好：favorite, prefer, enjoy, be interested in, be fond of, show / have a talent for 其他：admire, regard ... as ..., role model
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4．抽象的内容能加以阐发。所谓“抽 象”，是 与“具 体”相 对而言 ，抽象 的也就 是概括 的。所 谓“阐 发”就 是化抽 象、概 括为具 体。阐 发常见 的有两 种形式 ：一是 举出实 例，一 是分析 因果。
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5．含蓄的内容能加以解说。语句的含 蓄，一 是作者 为了表 达的需 要或某 种目的 ，故意 不直接 表达想 表达的 内容， 而把它 隐含在 字里行 间；一 是运用 了象征 、双关 等修辞 格，采 用婉曲 的手法 来表达 自己的 思想、 观点、 看法。 对此类 材料， 不仅要 理解它 字面的 含意， 而且要 深入挖 掘其 所隐含 的信息 ，即能 用简洁 明白的 语言解 说材料 深层的 内涵。
初 中 英 语 中 考书面 表达复 习PPT优 秀课件
【高分揭秘】 1. 习作既有对老师外貌的描写，也给出了喜欢
老师的三个原因，符合写作任务的内容要 求。 2. 习作句式丰富，既有简单句，也有复杂一些 的定语从句。习作中还用了admire, expect, remodel等 较高级的词汇，给习作增色不少。
初 中 英 语 中 考书面 表达复 习PPT优 秀课件
初 中 英 语 中 考书面 表达复 习PPT优 秀课件
【素材积累】 1. 词汇 外 貌 ： good-looking, pretty, slim, strong, medium build 性格、品质：outgoing, shy, active, friendly, honest, quiet, clever, smart 兴趣爱好：favorite, prefer, enjoy, be interested in, be fond of, show / have a talent for 其他：admire, regard ... as ..., role model
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4．抽象的内容能加以阐发。所谓“抽 象”，是 与“具 体”相 对而言 ，抽象 的也就 是概括 的。所 谓“阐 发”就 是化抽 象、概 括为具 体。阐 发常见 的有两 种形式 ：一是 举出实 例，一 是分析 因果。
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5．含蓄的内容能加以解说。语句的含 蓄，一 是作者 为了表 达的需 要或某 种目的 ，故意 不直接 表达想 表达的 内容， 而把它 隐含在 字里行 间；一 是运用 了象征 、双关 等修辞 格，采 用婉曲 的手法 来表达 自己的 思想、 观点、 看法。 对此类 材料， 不仅要 理解它 字面的 含意， 而且要 深入挖 掘其 所隐含 的信息 ，即能 用简洁 明白的 语言解 说材料 深层的 内涵。
初中英语作文写作课(精编版)-PPT课件(共17张)
Compare (比较)
Different students have different ideas about the Internet. Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, our life becomes more convenient with the Internet. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study.
The beginning
三段式 The body ----用例子、实事或数据围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。【注意使用 （总-分 支持句 连接词】 -总）
The ending
结论句----对全文的总结和概括。 【结尾画龙点睛，首尾呼应】
Writing skills—seven steps
审清题意 誊写规范
(复述)
Key sentence1
Topic
On the Internet
Body
正文
Most students…
Besides make…more convenient
Supporting sentences Key sentence2
初中英语作文PPT课件(28张)
六、一致性错误
所谓不一致不仅指主谓不一致，它还包括数的 不一致、时态不一致以及代词不一致等。
例1：Once one have money， he can do what he want to do. 人一旦有了钱，他就能想干 什么就干什么。
析：one 是第三人称单数，因此本句的 have 应改为 has。同理，want 应改为 wants。
四、时态的误用
例：She like it very much and reads it to the class. 她很喜欢它 并且读给同学们听。
析：在书面表达中，应根据上 下文或时间状语来确定动词的时态。
▪ 正：She liked it very much and read it to the class.
writing
书面表达六步法
审
抄
抓
书面
表达
改
扩
连
Writing points
一.审题 (体裁 结构 格式 内容 人称 时态） 二.抓要点 三.扩展句子 四.连句成文 （时间 空间 细节 连贯 呼应） 五.查错改错 六.眷写
“中小学生健康 ”为话题写一篇短文 【要求】
(1)内容包括①列举中小学生面临的健康问题。 ② 请谈谈怎样才能保持健康。
例：There are many ways to know the society. For example， by TV radio， newspaper and so on. 有许多 方式来了解这个社会，例如通过电视、广播、报纸等等。
析：本句后半部分 For example， by TV， radio， newspaper and so on 不是一个完整的句子，仅仅是一些 不连贯的词语，不能独立成句。 正：There are many ways to know the society， for example， by TV， radio， and newspaper and so on.
怎样写好英语作文课件(共36张PPT)【优秀课件】
注意:可以补充若干理由,不要仅仅 翻译以上各点.
词数:100左右
怎样写好英语作文课件（共36张PPT） 【优秀 课件】
怎样写好英语作文课件（共36张PPT） 【优秀 课件】
怎样写好英语作文课件（共36张PPT） 【优秀 课件】
练习
某英语杂志社 “家长之友”栏目 要举办一次征文比赛,要求围绕
“You can lead a horse to water, but you can’t make it drink.”这 一主题发表意见. 请根据下列提示 写一篇文章.
怎样写好英语作文课件（共36张PPT） 【优秀 课件】
怎样写好英语作文课件（共36张PPT） 【优秀 课件】
They spare no effort to offer their children as good a chance as possible: They not only send them abroad for further education and to private schools at great expenses, but also hire personal teachers. They buy all kinds of learning materials, computers and so on.
怎样写好英语作文课件（共36张PPT） 【优秀 课件】
怎样写好英语作文课件（共36张PPT） 【优秀 课件】
三.过渡词.
1. first, second, third, in addition, and…
2. immediately , when, later, before, after …
3. beside, beyond, behind, below, inside…
词数:100左右
怎样写好英语作文课件（共36张PPT） 【优秀 课件】
怎样写好英语作文课件（共36张PPT） 【优秀 课件】
怎样写好英语作文课件（共36张PPT） 【优秀 课件】
练习
某英语杂志社 “家长之友”栏目 要举办一次征文比赛,要求围绕
“You can lead a horse to water, but you can’t make it drink.”这 一主题发表意见. 请根据下列提示 写一篇文章.
怎样写好英语作文课件（共36张PPT） 【优秀 课件】
怎样写好英语作文课件（共36张PPT） 【优秀 课件】
They spare no effort to offer their children as good a chance as possible: They not only send them abroad for further education and to private schools at great expenses, but also hire personal teachers. They buy all kinds of learning materials, computers and so on.
怎样写好英语作文课件（共36张PPT） 【优秀 课件】
怎样写好英语作文课件（共36张PPT） 【优秀 课件】
三.过渡词.
1. first, second, third, in addition, and…
2. immediately , when, later, before, after …
3. beside, beyond, behind, below, inside…
中考英语作文课件(19张PPT)
看法
我认为……
建议（至少3条） 1. 合理安排时间 2. 参加兴趣小组
3. ……
注意: 100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数 参考词汇: make good use of, interest groups
social activities, do sports, net bar
Hello, everybody! It’s time again for our
第五步：集句成段，组段成篇
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play computer g2a.m迷es恋网吧，上网打游戏 watch too much.T..V... refuse to do homework
2. List some keywords about opinions.
not good for our health and study do harm to focus on Pay more attention to
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初中英语作文 ppt课件
结尾
1. 自然结尾，点明主题 随着文章的结束，文章自然而然地结尾。如“Helping the Policeman (帮助警察)”的结尾 可以是：The two children were praised by the police and they felt happy.再如 “The Tortoise and the Hare(龟兔赛跑)” 的结尾可以是：When the hare got to the tree, the tortoise had already been there。 2. 首尾呼应，升华主题 在文章的结尾可以用含义较深的话点明主题，深化主题，起到“画龙点睛”的效果。如 “I Love My Hometown(我爱家乡)”的结尾可以是：I love my hometown, and I am proud of it. 3. 反问结尾，引起深思 这种方式的结尾虽然形式是问句，但意义却是肯定的，而且具有一定的强调作用，可引起 他人的深思。如 “Learning English can give us a lot of pleasure (学英语能为我们带来许 多乐趣)” 的结尾可以是：If we learn English well, we can …Don’t you think learning English is great fun? 4. 表达祝愿，阐述愿望 这种方式的结尾常出现在书信或演讲稿的文体中，表示对他人的祝福或对将来的展望等。 如“A Letter to the Farmers(给农民们的一封信)”的结尾可以是：I hope the farmers' life will be better and better. 另外，书信的结尾常有以下形式的祝福语：Best wishes;I wish you a merry Christmas and a happy new year;I wish you have a good time等。 ppt课件 7
新人教七年级上册英语作文复习课件(共18张PPT)
Unit 5 Do you have a soccer ball? 根据下列图表中的物品，谈一谈Amy的体育收藏。 不少于50词。
six basketballs
eight ping-pong bats
nine volleyballs
ten tennis rackets
ten tennis balls twelve soccer balls
Unit 8 When is your birthday? 根据下面的信息写一篇短文，了解和介绍这些名人。 Edison 爱迪生 1847 -2 -11 America Lu Xun 鲁迅 1881-9 - 25 China Li Siguang 李四光 1889 -10-26 China Newton 牛顿 1643 -1-4 England Curie 居里夫人 1867-11-7 French 要求：1.词数60左右。
Dear Rose, Here is a photo of my family. There are ten people in my family. These are my grandparents. And this is my father and that is my mother. My parents are teachers. The girl is my sister. Her name is Anna. This boy is my brother, Tom. Those are my uncle and aunt. And that boy is my cousin, Mike. I love my family. Best wishes! Yours, Vera
Unit 1 My name is Gina. 假设你是Kate Jane Brown，你刚刚结交了一位新的笔友 Jennifer。请写信告诉她你的个人情况和在校的情况。 要求：1.词数60左右。
最新初三英语作文教学课件总复习ppt课件ppt
Recently I’ve had a discussion with my parents about whether it is necessary for middle school students to go to training classes or have tutors on weekends.
Music plays an important part in my life.
Write a topic sentence for the report.
A big problem 90% of the city’s rivers are polluted. The air in the city is getting dirtier. Noise is becoming a big headache for
Nowadays the Internet plays an important part in our life. With the Internet，we can get the latest news. It is fast and convenient. We can find and download information that we need. We can send emails to friends. We can play games on it.
we need. 4. We can send some emails to our friends.
5. We can play games on it.
Steps towards writing a good paragraph
Step 2 How to change it into a well- organized 组织 paragraph
Music plays an important part in my life.
Write a topic sentence for the report.
A big problem 90% of the city’s rivers are polluted. The air in the city is getting dirtier. Noise is becoming a big headache for
Nowadays the Internet plays an important part in our life. With the Internet，we can get the latest news. It is fast and convenient. We can find and download information that we need. We can send emails to friends. We can play games on it.
we need. 4. We can send some emails to our friends.
5. We can play games on it.
Steps towards writing a good paragraph
Step 2 How to change it into a well- organized 组织 paragraph
初中英语作文写作课PPT教学课件15【优质课】
Topic
On the Internet
Beginning
Beginning Different people have different ideas about ….
Body
正文
Key sentence1
Most students…
First of all learn… from …also… listen to…, enjoy … Besides make…more convenient
Body
正文ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
Key sentence1
Most students…
First of all learn… from …also… listen to…, enjoy … Besides make…more convenient
Supporting sentences
Key sentence2 unhealthy …, make … lose …
Write a topic composition ——by using an outline and linking words
Free talk
WWheactacnan…we do on the Internet? WThheartebadreth…ings are there on the Internet? HInowmdyooypoinuiuosne, wthee sInhtoeurnldet…in .a right way?
from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun.
Besides, our life becomes more convenient with the Internet. However, some
On the Internet
Beginning
Beginning Different people have different ideas about ….
Body
正文
Key sentence1
Most students…
First of all learn… from …also… listen to…, enjoy … Besides make…more convenient
Body
正文ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
Key sentence1
Most students…
First of all learn… from …also… listen to…, enjoy … Besides make…more convenient
Supporting sentences
Key sentence2 unhealthy …, make … lose …
Write a topic composition ——by using an outline and linking words
Free talk
WWheactacnan…we do on the Internet? WThheartebadreth…ings are there on the Internet? HInowmdyooypoinuiuosne, wthee sInhtoeurnldet…in .a right way?
from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun.
Besides, our life becomes more convenient with the Internet. However, some
英语作文 (summary)PPT课件
vegetables.
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Skill 2 Use general (概括性)words instead of specific(具体的) words
EX: In the following six hours, I caught over 10 fish.
1). He likesI scwauimghmtisnogm, reufninshin. g, playing football, basketball and so on.
He likes sports.
2). She bought a few copies of China Daily, English Weekly and People Daily.
She bought some newspapers.
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Skill 3 Paraphrase
Patience is the secret of success. The secret of success is Ppaattiieennccee.is very important to Psuacticeenscse. leads to success.
Task-writing
How to write a sumng principles)
1、本试题总分为25分，分两部分给分 ① 短文概 括5分 ② 主题写作 20分。
2、强调内容健康，观点鲜明，说服力强，表述清 晰。可参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原 文中的句子。
第一类： 记叙文
例文
(1)谁做了什么？ Sam got to a boarding school and he felt ho (2) 结果如何？ He got sick. He was angry with his parents a felt lonely.
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Skill 2 Use general (概括性)words instead of specific(具体的) words
EX: In the following six hours, I caught over 10 fish.
1). He likesI scwauimghmtisnogm, reufninshin. g, playing football, basketball and so on.
He likes sports.
2). She bought a few copies of China Daily, English Weekly and People Daily.
She bought some newspapers.
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Skill 3 Paraphrase
Patience is the secret of success. The secret of success is Ppaattiieennccee.is very important to Psuacticeenscse. leads to success.
Task-writing
How to write a sumng principles)
1、本试题总分为25分，分两部分给分 ① 短文概 括5分 ② 主题写作 20分。
2、强调内容健康，观点鲜明，说服力强，表述清 晰。可参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原 文中的句子。
第一类： 记叙文
例文
(1)谁做了什么？ Sam got to a boarding school and he felt ho (2) 结果如何？ He got sick. He was angry with his parents a felt lonely.
初中英语作文写作课(共15张PPT)【优秀课件】
Different students have different ideas about the Internet. Most students
think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot
Topic
On the Internet
Beginning
Beginning Different people have different ideas about ….
Body
正文
Key sentence1
Most students…
First of all learn… from …also… listen to…, enjoy … Besides make…more convenient
Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, the Internet makes our life more convenient. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study.
《英语记叙文的写作》课件
表达方式及写作技巧
通过丰富的词汇和直观的描写，使故事更加生动形象。运用比喻、拟人等修 辞手法，以及变化多样的句型和结构，提升记叙文的表达力。
如何处理时间关系
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时间顺序
按照事件发生的顺序叙述，保持时序的连贯性和逻辑性。的插入，让故事更有层次感和张力，激发读者的好奇心。
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时间跳跃
英语记叙文的特点
英语记叙文通常采用过去时态，以时间顺序展示事件和情节。它强调情感表达，通过丰富的描写和细节 让读者更容易投入故事。
记叙文的写作目的和受众
记叙文的写作目的是让读者产生共鸣、理解作者的经历或故事，从而传达作 者的观点和感受。它可以吸引各个年龄段的读者，因为每个人都有自己的故 事。
记叙文的组成部分
合理运用时间跳跃，使故事更简洁紧凑或突出重点，增强故事的吸引力。
如何安排结构
记叙文的结构可以根据故事情节的发展设置多个部分，如引子、承接和高潮。 结构的安排应能让故事流畅、紧凑且引人入胜。
首段
通过引人入胜的开头吸引读者的注意力，提 出故事的主题或背景。
人物
通过描写人物的外貌、性格和动作来塑造鲜 明的个性，激发读者的情感共鸣。
事件
以时间顺序叙述事件和情节，让读者体验故 事的发展过程。
情感
通过用词精准、细腻的叙述，传达作者的情 感和感受，让读者与故事产生共鸣。
描述与叙述的区别
描述主要侧重于展示事物的外貌、特征和属性，而叙述着重于讲述事件的发 展和经过。在记叙文中，两者相辅相成，用以创造生动的故事氛围。
《英语记叙文的写作》 PPT课件
本课程将深入讲解英语记叙文的写作技巧和要点，帮助您提高英语写作水平。 通过生动的图片和实用的例子，让您轻松掌握记叙文的写作方法。
初中英语记叙文写作课件
• 爱好
• (When she is free,) She likes…(doing/ to do) • Her hobby is…(doing) • She is good at…(doing), she always …
• 难忘之处
• help • strict
外貌
• • • • • • • • She is a pretty woman with long straight hair. She is short and a little bit heavy. She has short curly hair. She is of medium build/height. She looks young/old. He’s a tall man with thick glasses. He has blond hair. He is short/ tall/fat/thin.)
家庭生活作文题材
第一类:（以下题材应以记叙为主） • My mother(father)（写人） • My flat(neighbourhood)（写地方） • My favourite present(写物） • A birthday party/ A trip to…(写事情） 第二类:（以下题材应夹叙夹议，着重写自己感受） • My family life • My thanks to my mother(my father) 第三类（以下题材应以议论为主） • How to spend pocket money • The importance of breakfast • The advantages of doing housework
借助图画标题等形式借助图画标题等形式确贴近学生生活符合学生的年龄特点确贴近学生生活符合学生的年龄特点具有教育意义具有教育意义具有教育意义
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试题及满分文赏读
经典命题
上个星期六学生们去西山进行一次野餐，请参考所给词语，记叙此次活动。 go to West Hill, by bike, a short rest , after, the foot of, sing, dance, climb,see,hear,happy 要求：1.条理清楚，语意连贯，字迹工整；2.不少于70词
(4)Last week I am so busy with homework that now I was delighed to be having an outing. 上周我忙于做作业，以至于现在我很高兴出去 游玩一次。
满分文模版
动词时态多用一般过去式，通常分为三大板块来写： 第一段，总结描述。交代清楚故事涉及的人物、时间、地点 开篇句：About––––––o’clock one evening(morning…等时间） in––––,–––––––––––––––––––––––––––––––––––––––––. 扩展句：––––.（展开描述一下时间、人物、时间等） 第二段，具体描述。具体描述事件发生的原因，经过和结果 第三段，对事件的分析。（视写作要点及需要进行取舍。）
满分文展示
It was fine and sunny last
①准确使用现在分词做伴随状
Saturday,so our class decided to go to 语，一方面显示其对语法知识的
West Hill for a picnic.We went there by 娴熟运用，另一方面把一副轻松
bike,laughing and singing① the whole 快乐的画面展现在我们面前，生
way②. At about 10:30 am,we got to the 动、逼真。
foot of the West Hill. After a short rest ② the whole way相当于all the ③,we began to have our picnic lunch.We way，汉语意思是“一路上”， sang and danced happily over picnic. “一直”，进一步渲染欢乐的气
2.解题技巧
(1)仔细审题，确定主题。文章的目的、内容、结构层次 以及语言的运用，都要围绕主题进行。 (2)根据情景提示和主题，安排文章的结构层次，用每段 的首句即主题句来指明段落的中心思想。安排好关键的 主题句，就会使中心更加突出，眉目清楚。 (3)要进行审题，根据内容需要，确定好句子的种类、句 型结构和习惯表达。这样可以避免中国式的英语，提高 语言的正确性。初写时，多模仿句型写简单句，循序渐 进，逐步深化。 (4)句子时态要在上下文中有相关性、连续性；要与表达 内容一致。
Although feeling hot and tired④, Iwas really happy.
④although与分词连用作让步状 语，相当于Although I felt hot and tired，属于较高级语法结 构，这一结构的准确运用给文章源自增添新的亮点。小试牛刀
Love for My Parents 提示：爸爸妈妈给了你无限的爱，你肯定把这份 深情牢记在心。而你是否曾用适当的方式表达过你对 爸爸妈妈的爱呢？
2.常用句型
(1)There are a lot of activities at the beach.海滨有很多活动。 (2)Autumn is rich with fruit and grain.秋天是瓜果飘香的季节。 (3)In the early spring the scenery is very beautiful.初春的景色分外美 丽。
名师解析
(1)写作要点 ①我们骑自行车去西山②我们在野餐时载歌载舞③我 们爬到山顶，欣赏大自然的美景，倾听大自然的声音 ④我们很快乐 （2）可用素材 句式:We went to West Hill by bike,laughing and singing the whole way.
Aftrer a short rest, we began to have our picnic lunch.
At about 1:30 pm,we began to climb 氛。
the hill. We saw many beautiful trees ③这一介词短语的使用，使语言 and flowers,heard different birda singing 过渡自然。
sweetly and picked up a lot of wild fruits. It was a wonderful experience.
写作前最好有个简明扼要的提纲，是自己的写作有 章可循。审题后要先写出草稿，经修改之后，再正式成 文
必备素材
1.常用词汇
help sb. do sth. 帮助某人做某事 go for a walk 散步 go fishing去钓鱼 go for a outing 去远足 go camping 野营
do exercises 做运动 enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事 do the housework 做家务 hold a party 聚会，开晚会 have a swim 游泳
初中英语作文辅导（一）
记叙文体
文体解读
什么是记叙文？
记叙文是以叙述人物的经历或事物发展的 变化过程为主的一种文体。写作中应遵循以下 几点：一是交代要素，即人、时、地、事；二 是按事件发生的先后顺序叙述完整、具体；三 是要重点突出，目的明确。记叙文所记的都是 过去发生的事，原则上通常用过去时态写。
1.命题形式
一般来说，记叙文它大致分为三类：一是 以记人为主的记叙文，即以人物为中心组织材 料，围绕这个人物可以写一件事，也可写几件 事；二是以写事为主的记叙文，即以事件为中 心组织材料，围绕中心事件可以写一个人，也 可以写几个人；三是以写景状物为主的记叙 文。
但应注意的是，在一篇记叙文中，写人、写 景、写事往往是交织在一起的，不能截然分开，但 各有侧重。
We sang and danced happily over picnic.
We saw many beautiful trees and flowers,heard different birds singing sweetly
and picked up a lot of wild fruits,
要求：1.根据所给题目，用英语写一篇短文，记叙你 为爸爸或妈妈做的一件事，以表达你对他们的感情。词数 不少于60.
2.语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁。
再见！