高考英语作文的润色与提高课件

参加
• take part in • join in • participate in • compete in • sign up for …
适应
• fit in • adapt to • adjust to • cope with … • be used to • be accustomed to • feel at home …
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4.习惯搭配误用
I once heard from the animal like this. of
We passed away the building. by
5.名词单、复数不分 I made many friend in the summer camp. We can get some informations from the Internet.
因此
• so/ therefore • as a result • as a consequence • consequently
重要的
• important • crucial • critical • significant • of much value
恰到好处的名言、谚语能使文章增色
1.Practice makes perfect. 2.God helps those who help themselves. 3.Where there is a will, there is a way. 4.One false step will make a great difference. 5.A fall into the pit, a gain in your wit. 6.Experience is the mother of wisdom. 7. All work and no play makes jack a dull boy.
I sorry you I can’t with you go Beijing.
英语写作中被认为是亮点的东西
1. 一般中学生驾驭不了的词汇和句型结构； 2. 恰到好处的名言、谚语等； 3. 一语中的的修辞手法。
很多
• a lot of • a good number of (C. n. ) • a large amount of (U. n.) • a great deal of (U. n.) • a mountain of homework • a sea of people • abundant / adequate
夸张 我感觉压力很大。
I feel great pressure.
I felt as if I were under a mountain and I can't even breathe.
拟人 我感觉所有同学都在嘲笑我。
I feel all my classmates laughing at me.
高考英语作文的润色与提高
宋武栋 山东省实验中学
专题一：优秀作文的基本特征
优秀高考英语作文的六个基本特征
1、层次不乱 3、亮点若干 4、蠢错不犯
2、句式多变 3、巧妙串联 6、整洁卷面
开头：第一个要点 层次不乱 主体：第二个要点
结尾：第三个要点
句式多变
长短变化 主、被动变化 主语变化 同义词变化 同功能句型变化 横向比较变化
13.一个简单句出现两个谓语
There was no work to do, he went back home. being
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14.中式英语 Next week have a party. I sorry you I can't with you go Beijing.
合：in my opinion, all in all, in a word...
蠢错不犯：初中二年级学生就应该掌握的 基本语言表达能力。
1. I very like the book. 2. He was very angrily. 3. There have many student in the classroom. 4. The car is yellow color.
英文书写大方、圆润、自然
整洁卷面 不影响交际
词与词间距适当 字母大小适当
无大面积涂改
专题二
肃清基础语言错误
中学生英语写作中常见的14种语言错误：
1.主谓不一致 My father and I likes going fishing by the lake.
Large quantities of soil has been washed away.
11.动词原形作主语/宾语 Take a walk after dinner is very good for you. At that moment, I didn't feel like take a walk.
12.逻辑主语与主句主语不一致 Preparing dinner, the doorbell rang. Walking in the street, a car hit an old man.
有则改之，无则加勉； 用心则易，无心则难。
专题三：第一反应与克制第一反应
第一反应测试： 他是个好人。
He is a good man.
generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospitable, easy-going, devoted, open-minded, modest, friendly…
6.动词单、复数不分 Our teacher often say that success lie in hard work.
Mr. Smith, together with some students, are coming to our school.
7.赘词现象多发 I hope you can return back to our school soon.
追求梦想
• follow my dream / passion • pursue my goal • seek after my destination / objective
大约
• about / around/ some • roughly • approximately • more or less
对不起，我不能和你一起去北京了。 Would you accept my heartfelt apology that I can’t make it to Beijing with you as we have planned.
I’m sorry that I can’t go to Beijing with you.
大胆使用基本的修辞手法
比喻 所有学生都在忙着准备考试。
All the students are busy preparing for the coming exams.
All the students are as busy as bees preparing for the coming exams.
I felt as if even the birds on the trees are laughing at me.
亮点的任务： 使你的作文从千万篇作文中脱颖而出。
谢 谢！
We'll hold a party on next Sunday.
8.近义词的误用 The school requests that all the students should wear the school uniform.
I quarreled with my teacher about my grades.
2.时态、语态混用 Last night, I had enjoyed a party. The painting on the wal∧l damaged seriously. was
3.句子成分残缺
I stood up and saw therwe∧aasboy. The young man∧running in the street.
高中词汇
亮点若干
高中常见短语
各种复合句 倒装句
高级句型 强调句型
虚拟语气句型 非谓语动词结构
起：first of all, to begin with, above all...
巧妙串联
承：in addition, besides... 转：however, on the other hand...
8. More haste, less speed. 9. It’s never too old to learn. 10. All that glitters is not gold. 11. Look before you leap. 12. Rome was not built in a day. 13.Great minds think alike. 14.well begun, half done. 15. A friend in need is a friend indeed.
9.基本词汇拼写错误 I flied to New York directly from Beijing. This will be done immediatly.
10.前后人称不一致 The boy was born in a poor family but she works hard. We watched a few movies and we loved it.