为你的作文润色-高考英语作文高分就是这样拿的(课件)

较高级词汇(Exercises 3)
5. You can find my house easily. You’ll have no trouble finding my house. 6. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.
2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. （使用名词性从句） What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.
3. He came in and there was a baby in his arms. (用 with结构) He came in , with a baby in his arms.
较高级词汇(Exercises 2)
1.We all think he is a great man. We all think highly of him . 2. As a result the plan was a failure. The plan turned out to be a failure. 3. She went there in order to study music. She went there for the purpose of studying music. 4. In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms. Our school is made up of twenty–six classrooms.
3. 恰当的连接词
丰富的语法结构(Exercises 2)
4.(由于不知道他的电话，他没法跟Mary联系)(用 非谓语） Not knowing his telephone number ，he can’t get in touch with Tom 5. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型) It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. 6. Tom and Mary like singing songs.( 使用倒装） Tom likes singing songs, so does Mary.
The more he spoke, the more
excited he felt.
9. Because the weather is fine, many people went to climb the Western hill. （使用独立主格结构） The weather being fine , a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.
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1. 较高级词汇
1. 多实少虚 : 2. 短语优先： I cannot bear it. I want it. nice
generous, humorous,ed, hospital
I cannot put up with it. I am looking forward to it.
丰富的语法结构(Exercises 3)
7. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去分词) Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab. 8. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.（使 用句型结构）
３弃旧取新: Ｗe all possess have the same opportunity chance. There exist are more opponents.
较高级词汇(Exercises 1)
学生过街在车辆中穿行危险。 1. It’s very dangerous for the students to go through the traffic. 2. Students are risking their lives when threading their way among cars. 社会应加强对学生的交通安全教育。 1. The students should be taught more about the traffic safety. 2. And also it is of great use to strengthen the safety education over the students.
Thanks to the good weather, our journey was
comfortable. 7. Suddenly I thought out a good idea. A good idea occurred to me. A good idea suddenly struck me.
2. 丰富的语法结构
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with 复 合 宾 语
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运用多种语法结构，句式灵活多变，可 以使文章增色不少。
丰富的语法结构(Exercises 1)
1. When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用 V-ing形式）. On his arriving , please give me an e-mail.