高考英语作文的润色与提高.ppt
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高三二轮专题复习英语课件 润色习作的两大法宝
目录
巧用三大从句，写出文采
①(2022·全国乙卷)As long as we devote ourselves to English learning, we would make great improvement.(条件状语从句) 只要我们致力于英语学习，我们就会取得很大的进步。 ②(2022·全国乙卷)As is shown by the figures of the chart, thanks to modern technology, a wide range of ways are available for students to polish their English.(定语从句) 正如图表中的数据所示，由于现代技术，学生有很多方法来提高他们的英语。 ③Beijing successfully held the 2022 Winter Olympics, which is certain to strengthen the East and West culture bridge again.(定语从句) 北京成功举办了2022年冬奥会，这肯定会再次加固东西方文化交流的桥梁。
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(2)动词变短语的方法：同义短语替换 know/realize→be aware of help sb→give sb a hand/do sb a favour use→make use of/take advantage of understand→figure out/make sense of ①Besides, he is warm-hearted and willing to help others in need, for which I recommend him to you. →In addition, he is warm-hearted and willing to give a hand to others in need, for which I recommend him to you. ②As for me, there was a time when I had great pressure, which greatly affected my life and study. →As for me, there was a time when I had great pressure, which had a great influence on my life and study.
巧用三大从句，写出文采
①(2022·全国乙卷)As long as we devote ourselves to English learning, we would make great improvement.(条件状语从句) 只要我们致力于英语学习，我们就会取得很大的进步。 ②(2022·全国乙卷)As is shown by the figures of the chart, thanks to modern technology, a wide range of ways are available for students to polish their English.(定语从句) 正如图表中的数据所示，由于现代技术，学生有很多方法来提高他们的英语。 ③Beijing successfully held the 2022 Winter Olympics, which is certain to strengthen the East and West culture bridge again.(定语从句) 北京成功举办了2022年冬奥会，这肯定会再次加固东西方文化交流的桥梁。
目录
(2)动词变短语的方法：同义短语替换 know/realize→be aware of help sb→give sb a hand/do sb a favour use→make use of/take advantage of understand→figure out/make sense of ①Besides, he is warm-hearted and willing to help others in need, for which I recommend him to you. →In addition, he is warm-hearted and willing to give a hand to others in need, for which I recommend him to you. ②As for me, there was a time when I had great pressure, which greatly affected my life and study. →As for me, there was a time when I had great pressure, which had a great influence on my life and study.
【高考】英语写作提升ppt课件
完成式作状语。 四、教法与学法
12. 新路开始常是狭窄的，但它却是自己延伸拓宽的序曲。
教学H目标a：ving realized that your time is limited，you’ll have to
study for your goals without hesitation.
1．We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. →To have more time to read and select books, we can set out early. 2．If it is carried out continuously, it will benefit all of us greatly and we are sure to make obvious progress. →Carried out continuously，it will benefit all of us greatly and we are sure to make obvious progress. 3．Because I thought that his solution might be wrong, I carefully analyzed the problem and tried to work it out in a different way. →Thinking that his solution might be wrong, I carefully analyzed the problem and tried to work it out in a different way.
原则五：用it作形式宾语，不定式作真正宾语
高考英语写作,如何提升亮点课件(共27张)
(8) In my opinion, I am in favor of... (9) Personally，I prefer to... (10) In short，...should learn to...；Only in this way can the most difficult problems be solved properly.
面表达的主要困难有： 1、汉语谓语无字形变化，而英语谓语变
化多、时态、语态、语气的语法概念和英
语动词变化之间的关系，写作应用起来不
明确不熟练，加之英汉在动词意义上有差
别，用英语写作时就很容易出错，这就要 加强英语谓语动词变化的训练。
2、英语的句子结构以动词为中心各有特定 的搭配，写作时感到缺乏表达思想的语感。 经常有汉英翻译词对字硬译的现象，加之英 汉两种语言在文化思维方面语言表达有相当 的差异，也造成英语书面表达的一定困难。 要培养英语表达的语感必须加强平时口头和 笔头整句表达习惯的建立和听力理解。
(5) There is no immediate solution to the problem of..., but... might be helpful/beneficial.
(6) There is little doubt/denying that...
(7) As far as...be concerned, I believe/think that...
2．借用关键词汇压缩句子长度，提升句子品味
The flat has an area of 25 square metres with a bedroom，a bathroom and a kitchen.
3．语态互换 Someone saw him studying hard in his study. He was seen studying hard in his study. 4．语序调整 The scholar didn't write a single paper the whole term. Not a single paper did the scholar write the whole term. 5．强调句式 You must write to me when you get there. Do remember to write to me when you get there.
面表达的主要困难有： 1、汉语谓语无字形变化，而英语谓语变
化多、时态、语态、语气的语法概念和英
语动词变化之间的关系，写作应用起来不
明确不熟练，加之英汉在动词意义上有差
别，用英语写作时就很容易出错，这就要 加强英语谓语动词变化的训练。
2、英语的句子结构以动词为中心各有特定 的搭配，写作时感到缺乏表达思想的语感。 经常有汉英翻译词对字硬译的现象，加之英 汉两种语言在文化思维方面语言表达有相当 的差异，也造成英语书面表达的一定困难。 要培养英语表达的语感必须加强平时口头和 笔头整句表达习惯的建立和听力理解。
(5) There is no immediate solution to the problem of..., but... might be helpful/beneficial.
(6) There is little doubt/denying that...
(7) As far as...be concerned, I believe/think that...
2．借用关键词汇压缩句子长度，提升句子品味
The flat has an area of 25 square metres with a bedroom，a bathroom and a kitchen.
3．语态互换 Someone saw him studying hard in his study. He was seen studying hard in his study. 4．语序调整 The scholar didn't write a single paper the whole term. Not a single paper did the scholar write the whole term. 5．强调句式 You must write to me when you get there. Do remember to write to me when you get there.
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无大面积涂改
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为你的作文润色-高考英语作文高分就是这样拿的(课件)
较高级词汇(Exercises 3)
5. You can find my house easily. You’ll have no trouble finding my house. 6. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.
2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. （使用名词性从句） What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.
3. He came in and there was a baby in his arms. (用 with结构) He came in , with a baby in his arms.
较高级词汇(Exercises 2)
1.We all think he is a great man. We all think highly of him . 2. As a result the plan was a failure. The plan turned out to be a failure. 3. She went there in order to study music. She went there for the purpose of studying music. 4. In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms. Our school is made up of twenty–six classrooms.
3. 恰当的连接词
丰富的语法结构(Exercises 2)
2024届高考英语写作---如何给作文润色+课件
➢ To tackle challenges, my first advice is to face them positively. ➢ To tackle challenges, my first advice is to face them positively, which will
provide courage for you to get started.
expression (example...)
(reason, influence...)
Challenges are good.
➢ (1) Challenges are beneficial and inspiring. ➢ (2) Challenges are good. For example, they provide chances for us to
➢ concise (简练)
Activity 2 Compare and Analyze
What conclusion can we make about “适当增加细节”when writing? ➢ The added details should be relevant, specific and concise .
Activity 2 Compare and Analyze
Why passage 2 is better?
Paragraph 4
• 1. To tackle challenges, my first advice is to face them positively. Don’t face them negatively or just escape from difficulties. Most importantly, believe in ourselves and never give up. Always remember to keep confident and persistent when you seek success.
provide courage for you to get started.
expression (example...)
(reason, influence...)
Challenges are good.
➢ (1) Challenges are beneficial and inspiring. ➢ (2) Challenges are good. For example, they provide chances for us to
➢ concise (简练)
Activity 2 Compare and Analyze
What conclusion can we make about “适当增加细节”when writing? ➢ The added details should be relevant, specific and concise .
Activity 2 Compare and Analyze
Why passage 2 is better?
Paragraph 4
• 1. To tackle challenges, my first advice is to face them positively. Don’t face them negatively or just escape from difficulties. Most importantly, believe in ourselves and never give up. Always remember to keep confident and persistent when you seek success.
如何提高高考英语写作水平PPT课件( 36页)
逻辑角度
⑴排序关系 ⑵并列关系 ⑶举例关系 ⑷转折关系 ⑸因果关系 ⑹归纳总结 ⑺递进关系
合适的过渡性词汇
first; firstly; second; secondly; last but not least
and; too; as well as; along with; together with
提高句子档次的小结：
1. 用高级结构和词汇 2. 用分词短语合并句子
用介词短语合并句子 用独立主格结构合并句子 用连接词连接句子 3. 用定语从句、主语从句、强调句、倒装句 4. 用不同结构和词汇 5. 合适的过渡性词汇
Improve this composition, try!
Now students in China celebrate their birthdays in many ways.
4.适当使用过渡性语句 如:The reasons are as follows. Every coin has two sides. All roads lead to Rome. As the result/survey shows. We can draw an conclusion.等
Television is not only a convenient source of entertainment, but also a comparatively cheap one. But_e_v_e_r_y_c_o_i_n_h_a_s__tw__o_s_id_e_s___, television also has disadvantages, such as its effects on young people.
• 3. The flat is in a building on Beijing Road. It is not far from our School.
高考英语书面表达提分宝典课件：超实用书面表达润色提质技巧
I hope that her body will stay healthy.
改： I hope that she will stay healthy.
open a meeting/ the light/ TV
改： hold a meeting/turn on the light/TV
堆词成句:
I think you sended the birthday card to me is so beautiful. students don’t allow see/watch TV The reason of his success has many. Through this journey not only broaden our horizons, but also enrich our knowledge.
We two who and who? How are you? How old are you? I give you some color see see. You give me stop. Watch sister Heart flower angry open Let the horse come on Red face know me Seven up eight down No three no four
①Of the two, I think the latter is the better. ②So I have to bother you to correct my mistakes in the material I attach to the letter.
①Of the two, the latter wins my favor. ②Therefore, I have no choice but to put you to trouble by correcting my mistakes in the material I attach to the letter.
改： I hope that she will stay healthy.
open a meeting/ the light/ TV
改： hold a meeting/turn on the light/TV
堆词成句:
I think you sended the birthday card to me is so beautiful. students don’t allow see/watch TV The reason of his success has many. Through this journey not only broaden our horizons, but also enrich our knowledge.
We two who and who? How are you? How old are you? I give you some color see see. You give me stop. Watch sister Heart flower angry open Let the horse come on Red face know me Seven up eight down No three no four
①Of the two, I think the latter is the better. ②So I have to bother you to correct my mistakes in the material I attach to the letter.
①Of the two, the latter wins my favor. ②Therefore, I have no choice but to put you to trouble by correcting my mistakes in the material I attach to the letter.
高三英语一轮复习---writing句子润色教学课件
Writing
——句子and discussion
Television presents a vivid world in front of us.Through TV, we can learn what is happening half way across the world.
2.使用倒装句。 如：
1. Only in this way can we learn English well.只有用这种方法我们才可以学好英语。 2. So fast was the boy that I couln't catch
up with him. 这位男孩跑得很快以至于我不能追上他。
Having been told many times, he still repeated the same mistake.尽管被告诉了很 多次，他仍然犯同样的错误。
Seen from the top of mountain, the lake
looks like a mirror.
5.恰当使用被动句。如： Above all，some measures must be taken to stop the river from being polluted.最重要的 是，必须釆取某些措施来阻止河流受污染。
In short, the effect of TV's educational role is becoming more and more obvious. Having viewed these several aspects, and
with many TV programs produced, I believe that our life will become even more significant.
——句子and discussion
Television presents a vivid world in front of us.Through TV, we can learn what is happening half way across the world.
2.使用倒装句。 如：
1. Only in this way can we learn English well.只有用这种方法我们才可以学好英语。 2. So fast was the boy that I couln't catch
up with him. 这位男孩跑得很快以至于我不能追上他。
Having been told many times, he still repeated the same mistake.尽管被告诉了很 多次，他仍然犯同样的错误。
Seen from the top of mountain, the lake
looks like a mirror.
5.恰当使用被动句。如： Above all，some measures must be taken to stop the river from being polluted.最重要的 是，必须釆取某些措施来阻止河流受污染。
In short, the effect of TV's educational role is becoming more and more obvious. Having viewed these several aspects, and
with many TV programs produced, I believe that our life will become even more significant.
作文润色.ppt
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hostile → aggressive opinion → point of view result → outcome doubtful → skeptical hard → rough (艰难的) use → application (应用，运用) best → sound (可靠的，合理的) manage → supervise (监督，管理)
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作文高分点拔
push → boost (推进) according to → adhere to best → optimal motive → incentive (动机) incorrect → problematic be put on → be dumped on (被强置于…之上) unnecessary → undue (不应当的) hide → overshadow (使……失色)
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作文高分点拔
other → additional big → enormous get → obtain doing → conduct give → provide main → primary give → devote meet → come across
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作文高分点拔
give → offer glad → delighted hard-working → diligence connect → attach once a year → annual as the representative of → on behalf of about → concerned with thanks → gratitude
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作文高分点拔
know → be informed consider → take … into account have to → have no choice but to all the time → day and night out of reason → irrational be better → excel comfortable → cozy
高考英语作文的润色与提高宋武栋老师
I once heard from the animal like this. of
We passed away the building. by
5.名词单、复数不分 I made many friend in the summer camp. We can get some informations from the Internet.
审题： “十年后的我” --- “感性的、充满想象的” 切忌：套用了太多所谓的“万能句式” ，破坏了这种 “感性”，使之变得“太理性”、“太刚”了：
（1）运用了大量的表示顺序的词句(太过理性)： Firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally; To start with；Last but not least; My future life is as follows.
The school requests that all the students should wear the school uniform.
I quarreled with my teacher about my grades.
I flied to New York directly from Beijing. This will be done immediatly.
蠢错不犯：初中二年级学生就应该掌握的 基本语言表达能力。
1. I very like the book. 2. He was very angrily. 3. There have many student in the classroom. 4. The car is yellow color.
专题四：打动人心的句型 和 打翻人胃的句型
存点钱是很重要的。
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英文书写大方、圆润、自然；
整洁卷面 不影响交际
词与词间距适当 字母大小适当
无大面积涂改
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专题二
肃清基础语言错误
Yours,
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层次不乱
开头：引入话题
通常只需要2-3句话。提出话题， 并说明你有建议。 主体：陈述观点或给出建议
结尾：呼应、总结
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第一段：引出话题 通常只需要2-3句话。
I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble in making friends. As far as i’m concerned/For my part/In my opinion, there are some ways to solve this problem.
friend... Secondly, you need... Last but not least, it is also important to do...
All in all/ In short/ In conclusion/ In a word, you can improve your present situation. And I believe , with
your trying, you can overcome...
Yours,
Li Hua
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句式多变
长短变化 主、被动变化 主语变化 同义词变化 同功能句型变化 横向比较变化
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高中词汇
亮点若干
高中常见短语
各种复合句 倒装句
高级句型 强调句型
虚拟语气句型 非谓语动词结构
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起：first of all, to begin with, above all...
每一个观点或建议之间要 保持层次清晰，加上适当 的过渡词语。 结尾：呼应、总结
总结，并提出美好愿景。
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第三段：呼应、总结，或者表达愿景。 All in all/ In short/ In conclusion/ In a word,
you can improve your present situation. And i believe , with your trying, you can overcome...
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层次不乱
开头：引入话题
通常只需要2-3句话。提出话题， 并说明你有建议。 主体：陈述观点或给出建议
每一个观点或建议之间要 保持层次清晰，加上适当 的过渡词语。 结尾：呼应、总结
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第二段：陈述观点或建议 To begin with, you should be a friend... Then, you stly, it is also important to do....
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Dear Liz,
I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble in making
friends. As far as i’m concerned/For my part/In my
opinion, there are some ways to .. First and foremost/ To begin with, you should be a
First and foremost, you should be a friend... Secondly, you need... Last but not least, it is also important to do....
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开头：引入话题 通常只需要2-3句话。
层次不乱
主体：陈述观点或给出建议
高考英语作文的润色与提高
以应用文为主
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专题一：优秀作文的基本特征
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优秀高考英语作文的六个基本特征
1、层次不乱 3、亮点若干 4、蠢错不犯
2、句式多变 3、巧妙串联 6、整洁卷面
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开头：引出话题 （第一段）
层次不乱 主体：陈述观点或给出建议 （第二段）
结尾：呼应、总结（第三段）
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题目： 假设你是李华，你的朋友Liz刚刚进入高中，在交 友上面存在一些问题，请你根据如下提示，帮她 度过难关。 1. 要交朋友首先要做一个朋友。 2. 要和朋友同甘共苦；患难之中的朋友才是真的
巧妙串联
承：in addition, besides... 转：however, on the other hand...
合：in my opinion, all in all, in a word...
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ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
蠢错不犯：初中二年级学生就应该掌握的 基本语言表达能力。
1. I very like the book. 2. He was very angrily. 3. There have many student in the classroom. 4. The car is yellow color.
朋友。 3. 友谊需要时间和投入(effort).
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Dear Liz,
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英文书写大方、圆润、自然；
整洁卷面 不影响交际
词与词间距适当 字母大小适当
无大面积涂改
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专题二
肃清基础语言错误
Yours,
Li Hua 6
层次不乱
开头：引入话题
通常只需要2-3句话。提出话题， 并说明你有建议。 主体：陈述观点或给出建议
结尾：呼应、总结
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第一段：引出话题 通常只需要2-3句话。
I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble in making friends. As far as i’m concerned/For my part/In my opinion, there are some ways to solve this problem.
friend... Secondly, you need... Last but not least, it is also important to do...
All in all/ In short/ In conclusion/ In a word, you can improve your present situation. And I believe , with
your trying, you can overcome...
Yours,
Li Hua
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句式多变
长短变化 主、被动变化 主语变化 同义词变化 同功能句型变化 横向比较变化
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高中词汇
亮点若干
高中常见短语
各种复合句 倒装句
高级句型 强调句型
虚拟语气句型 非谓语动词结构
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起：first of all, to begin with, above all...
每一个观点或建议之间要 保持层次清晰，加上适当 的过渡词语。 结尾：呼应、总结
总结，并提出美好愿景。
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第三段：呼应、总结，或者表达愿景。 All in all/ In short/ In conclusion/ In a word,
you can improve your present situation. And i believe , with your trying, you can overcome...
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层次不乱
开头：引入话题
通常只需要2-3句话。提出话题， 并说明你有建议。 主体：陈述观点或给出建议
每一个观点或建议之间要 保持层次清晰，加上适当 的过渡词语。 结尾：呼应、总结
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第二段：陈述观点或建议 To begin with, you should be a friend... Then, you stly, it is also important to do....
12
Dear Liz,
I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble in making
friends. As far as i’m concerned/For my part/In my
opinion, there are some ways to .. First and foremost/ To begin with, you should be a
First and foremost, you should be a friend... Secondly, you need... Last but not least, it is also important to do....
10
开头：引入话题 通常只需要2-3句话。
层次不乱
主体：陈述观点或给出建议
高考英语作文的润色与提高
以应用文为主
1
专题一：优秀作文的基本特征
2
优秀高考英语作文的六个基本特征
1、层次不乱 3、亮点若干 4、蠢错不犯
2、句式多变 3、巧妙串联 6、整洁卷面
3
开头：引出话题 （第一段）
层次不乱 主体：陈述观点或给出建议 （第二段）
结尾：呼应、总结（第三段）
4
题目： 假设你是李华，你的朋友Liz刚刚进入高中，在交 友上面存在一些问题，请你根据如下提示，帮她 度过难关。 1. 要交朋友首先要做一个朋友。 2. 要和朋友同甘共苦；患难之中的朋友才是真的
巧妙串联
承：in addition, besides... 转：however, on the other hand...
合：in my opinion, all in all, in a word...
16
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
蠢错不犯：初中二年级学生就应该掌握的 基本语言表达能力。
1. I very like the book. 2. He was very angrily. 3. There have many student in the classroom. 4. The car is yellow color.
朋友。 3. 友谊需要时间和投入(effort).
5
Dear Liz,
________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________