高考作文辅导参赛课件

第五档(很好)；(21-25分) 1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 2. 覆盖所有内容要点。 3. 应用了高级的语法结构和词汇。 4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结 构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。 5. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 6. 完全达到了预期的写作目的。 第四档(好)：(16-20分) 1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 2. 虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。 3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 4. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，少许错误主要是因尝 试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。 5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 6. 达到了预期的写作目的。
10多分---20多分作文到底差在哪？
10多分作文基本基础
20多分作文高级复杂
审 ↑
steps
认真审题 把握主题
查错补漏
修饰文章 查
抓
抓准要点 勾勒大纲
添加过渡 确保连贯
↙ 连
↘ 扩 紧扣要点
扩写成文
三练习 假设你是2012年某省高考状元，网名为bookworm。今 年高考即将来临，许多考生在网上发电子邮件向你请 教高考中遇到的问题和取胜之道。请你按照下面表格 中的内容，向各位咨询者发个帖子介绍你的成功经验 并提出一些建议。
体裁 题材 时态 人称
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提纲文章
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高考取胜之道
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一般现在时
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第一人称
Let’s follow the second step:
抓--- 抓准要点，勾勒大纲
努力学习，多动脑筋，多 练习，熟能生巧 有适合自己的学习方法， 勤学好问，互帮互学，共 同进步。
树立信心，保持乐观，有良 好的心态，胜丌骄，败丌馁 合理饮食，保持充足的睡眠 ，丌要熬夜，多运动，保持 身体健康。 use your mind, learning method, team up with , lose heart, make progress, seek help, build up your confidence, keep a good state of mind, have a balanced diet,
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1单复数 2时态语态 3有无冠词 4动宾关系
summary
What can you learn from this period?
Some advice to you
working hard is the key to success find a proper method that suits you Never should you lose heart when you don’t achieve your goals have the belief that
Hearing the news, the young man can't help cryng.
内容第二位-----要点齐全
结构第三位------文章分段结构
structures 1 heading 点题两三句概括性 2body 中心记述部分层次分明 3 ending 小结呼应主题
二 steps
高考英语作文分标准
How to get the highest marks in writing?
a good passage (skills)
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语言第一位 语言高级 (词和句)
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内容第二位 要点齐全
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结构第三位 文章分段
语言第一位-------语言高级
一高级词汇-----人靠衣装，文靠词装
避免重复原则
Let’s follow the third and fourth step:
discussion
扩--- 紧扣要点，扩写成句
(四原则，四不如） 连--- 添加过渡，确保连贯
课堂限时训练
扩
use your mind, learning method, team up with ,seek help,
As to me, Before leaving the classroom , I _________________________ remember to turn off the lights to save electricity .In order to protect our forests, I____________________ It is will use paper wisely. ____ both sides of paper that should be used whenever it is _____________________________________ possible .What’s more, Never will I use things like ______________________ paper cups or disposable chopsticks because they are __________________________________ made of wood.
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形容词副词 修饰原则
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高级词汇 四原则
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地道原则
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词组优先原则
高级句式-----抓住高考英语老师阅卷的心理秘诀
四不如
肯定 双否 1 _____丌如____好
With your help I have made progress in English.
Without your help ,I couldn't have made progress in Englis
We can borrow five books at most for ten days .
Five books can be borrowed for ten days.
4*从句丌如分词傲(难点）
口诀；一去；二看；三改
一去，去连词；
二看，看从句中主语和动词的关系
三改，改分词
When he heard the bad news, he can’t help crying
高考取胜之道
努力学习，多动脑筋，多 练习，熟能生巧 有适合自己的学习方法， 勤学好问，互帮互学，共 同进步。
树立信心，保持乐观，有 良好的心态，胜丌骄，败 丌馁 合理饮食，保持充足的睡 眠，丌要熬夜，多运动， 保持身体健康。
Let’s follow the first step:
审---认真审题，把握主题 ↓ ↙ ↘ ↓

I hope my advice will be of help you.

passage one First of all, we should turn off the lights when we leave the classroom . Second, we should use both sides of paper and don’t waste it. Third ,we should not use paper cups and disposable chopsticks because of they are made of wood .
Reading makes a full man; conference a ready man; and writing an exact man.
--Francis Bacon 阅读使人充实，交谈使人机智，写作使人精确。 -----培根
Enjoy a passage
Dear Li Hua I’m sorry to hear that you are always nervous and stress about exams.With the Collage Entrance Examination is becoming near, for which make you are busy parparing. It’s common phonomance for you to feel nervous. But it’s harmful for you. First , my suggestion is that you should build a good attitude. Second, It’s important for you to communicate with your teachers or students, which is good for taking it easy. Next, Taking exercise regularly will make you relax. What’s more, You’d better form the habit of taking bath.
Everyone can do something for our environment .
I believe that do all these small things will improve our environment .
passage two
Everyone can do something for our environment. ____ To love the environment is to love ourselves. _______________________________________
高考英语书面表达答题技巧
How to compose a good written passage?
learning goals:
1Enable the Ss to master some writing skills 2Enable the Ss to master the five steps in writing;
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25分
I believe that ____________________________________ doing all these small things will improve our environment and help make our world a better ______________________________________________ place to live in. ____________
2 _____丌如______妙 陈述 倒装
Students should have the habit of smoking by no means. By no means should students have the habit of smoking.
被动 主动 3 _____丌如_____巧
make progress, build up your confidence, lose heart,
keep a good state of mind, have a balanced diet,
连
1 顺序，first of all, second , ,last but not the least, in the end 2递进，besides, moreover, what’s more, furthermore, 3总结，in a word , in conclusion,