专题17 书面表达 2020-2021学年七年级英语提分方案(人教新目标)

专题17 书面表达
2020-2021学年【教育机构专用教材+寒假作业】七年级英语提分方案
（人教新目标Go For It）
一、书面表达题型介绍
英语书面表达试题属综合性运用试题，是考查学生运用各项语法知识、正确进行书面表达的能力以及善于理解情景提示的内容，抓住要点和中心思想的能力，是“压轴题”，属中考英语重大题型。

能否把书面表达题型做好对于英语成绩总成绩能否考好非常重要。

二、书面表达题型做题技巧
书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。

注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。

写作六步法：
1.审题：文体，时态，人称。

2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。

3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。

4.连句成文，合理使用连词。

5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。

6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁.
三、寒假作业：书面表达题型考点精准把关练
一、材料作文
1．根据下表提示，以My friend为题写一篇短文。

注意：
1. 词数60左右。

短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2. 短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。

My friend
I have a good friend from England. Her name is Millie. She is 12. She is a student at Sunshine Middle school ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文：
My friend
I have a good friend from England. Her name is Millie. She is 12. She is a student at Sunshine Middle school. She is in Class 1, Grade7.
Millie likes wearing pink and blue clothes. She looks modern and beautiful in them. She likes listening to music. She is good at drawing pictures. Her favourite subject is History. She often helps her classmates with their lessons.
She likes eating hamburgers and chocolate. I think it's time for her to change her lifestyle. She should eat more vegetables and fruit every day. She should take more exercise.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。

要求以My friend为题，根据提示内容介绍自己的朋友Millie的基本情况。

注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。

作文可分为三段，第一段承接上文，介绍Millie所在学校及班级；第二段介绍Millie喜欢的衣服、爱好、喜欢的科目及日常帮助同学；第三段介绍Millie的饮食习惯及对她的建议。

要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

2．你校开展"好习惯伴我成长"的主题活动，表杨了一批以Mike为代表的"好习惯标兵"。

假如你是Mike的朋友，向同学介绍一下Mike的情况。

(70词左右)
要点提示：
Mike
____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________
【答案】范文：
Mike is my good friend. He is thirteen years old and he is from England. He is very tall. He has brown hair and big blue eyes. He is very kind and he often helps me with my English. His favorite Chinese food is jiaozi. He often gets up at 6:50 in the morning and has breakfast at 7:10. At 7:30, he goes to school. I like him very much.
【详解】
1. 题干解读：文章属于材料作文，主要是给朋友介绍Mike的情况，写作时按照题目表格给的提示进行描写，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

2. 写作指导：文章主要用一般现在时，人称用第三人称展开描述。

主要是介绍朋友Mike的情况，包括年龄，身高，籍贯，性格以及作息时间等。

写作时语言要简单易懂，文章结构要完整，多使用简单词语表达，意思要通俗易懂。

3．现在，很多社区在开展“阳光运动，健康生活”的活动。

假如你是李红，请你根据下面表格中的提示，用英语写一篇文章，介绍自己和家人最喜欢的运动，原因以及做运动的时间。

注意：1. 短文须包括以上信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名；
3. 词数：60词左右。

(开头已经给出，不计入总词数)
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hong.
____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________
【答案】例文
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hong. There are three people in my family. We like different kinds of sports. Now let me tell you.
My father likes basketball best. He thinks it is great. So he plays basketball with his friends every Saturday. My mother’s favorite sport is swimming. She thinks it is relaxing for her. She goes swimming on Saturday morning. I love playing tennis best. I think it is very interesting. And I often play tennis with my best friend on Sunday afternoon.
We think playing sports is good for us.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。

根据表格中的提示，介绍自己和家人最喜欢的运动，原因以及做运动的时间。

2.写作指导：本文以第一人称和第三人称为主，时态采用一般现在时。

分为三段描述：第一段概括家庭情况并引出话题；第二段介绍自己和家人最喜欢的运动，原因及做运动的时间；第三段总结运动的好处。

描述时注意保持主谓一致，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。

4．根据要求完成作文。

词数：60词左右。

你是Frank，请根据提示适当增加内容，写一篇短文介绍你自己。

适当使用and，but，because等。

____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________
【答案】参考范文
My name is Frank. I’m 15 years old. My birthday is on August 2nd. I have a happy family. There are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my younger sister and I. I like tomatoes because they’re delicious, but I don’t like candy because it’s not healthy. I like basketball and it’s easy for me, but I don’t like volleyball because it’s difficult.
【详解】
1.题干解读：文章属于材料作文，主要是给朋友介绍自己的个人信息及家庭信息，内容按照表格中所给的信息描写，也可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

2.写作指导：文章主要用一般现在时，人称用第一人称展开描述。

主要是介绍自己的情况，包括年龄，生日，家庭情况以及饮食和运动方面的喜好等。

写作时语言要简单易懂，文章结构要完整，多使用简单词语表达，意思要通俗易懂。

5．生活中有一些人对你非常重要，可能是你的家人、老师、同学或朋友。

请用英文写一篇80词左右的短文介绍这位对你来说很重要的人。

提示词语：be moved (受感动), encourage (鼓励)
提示问题：
1. Who is so important to you?
2. Why is he/she so important to you?
3. What do you want to do for him/her?
____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：
My mother is very important to me and I love her.
My mom is very busy and often goes to bed very late, but she insists on getting up early every morning to make breakfast for me. She often helps me and encourage me to solve problems by myself. She also respects my privacy. She never checks my mobile phone.
I always want to do something for my mom. Her birthday is coming. I’m going to cook a surprise breakfast for her on that day.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求介绍自己生命中最重要的人，从以下三方面入手：最重要的人是谁；为什么他/她对你如此重要；你想为他/她做些什么。

2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时、第三人称单数为主，注意主谓一致问题；写作时按要点分段叙述，保证文章层次清晰。

6．假如你是李丽，你的英国朋友Maria12岁了，她的生日是10月20日，就读于格林中学。

请你根据下面的问题提示，向大家介绍一下Maria.
提本：
（1）How many subjects does she have?
（2）What's her favorite subject? Why?
（3）What sport does she like? Why?
（4）What does she have for breakfast, for lunch and for dinner?
要求：
（1）短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。

（2）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。

（3）词数：70词左右。

My Friend Maria
____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ __________
【答案】例文：
My Friend Maria
Hi! My name is Li Li. I have an English friend. Her name is Maria. She is 12 years old. Her birthday is on October 20. She's in Green Middle School. She is a good student.
She has seven subjects. Her favorite subject is math because she thinks it's interesting. She likes sports, too. She
likes playing volleyball. She thinks it's easy and relaxing. She always plays it with her classmates after school. She has good eating habits. She has milk and eggs for breakfast. For lunch, she has rice and chicken. She usually has some salad and fruit for dinner. She's healthy.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文要求以李丽身份介绍英国的朋友Maria。

内容包括她的校园生活和日常生活及她的喜好。

2.写作指导：本文用一般现在时、单数第三人称写作。

从Maria就读的学校、学习的科目、运动、喜爱的科目及原因介绍她的校园生活；从三餐的饮食介绍她的日常生活；书写时要正确使用一般现在时、单数第三人称谓语形式。

二、书信作文
7．假设你是李华，现在是星期日下午3:00，你正在给你的好友Mary写信，告诉她你们一家人现在的活动情况。

要求语句通顺，条理清晰(可适当发挥想象力，进行合理描述)。

要求: 1.文章必须包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节；
2.注意人称和时态；
3.词数: 60词左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Mary,
How's it going? Now it is 3:00 p.m. on Sunday.
____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ Good luck!
Li Hua 【答案】例文
Dear Mary,
How's it going? Now it is 3:00 p.m. on Sunday. The weather is fine. My family and I are busy. My grandfather is reading a newspaper. My grandmother is watering the flowers in the garden. My father's car is dirty, so he is cleaning his car. My mother is in the kitchen and she is making cakes for us. My brother is playing soccer near my house.
We are having a good time.
Good luck!
Li Hua 【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。

给好友Mary写信，告诉她自己一家人现在的活动情况。

2.写作指导：本文以第三人称为主，时态用现在进行时。

介绍时按照长幼顺序介绍，先介绍祖父母做的事情，再介绍父母做的事情，最后介绍弟弟做的事情。

描述时注意要保持主谓一致，逻辑性要强，句子要通顺，无语法和标点错误。

8．假如你是王丽，你的博客好友Maria发来电子邮件询问你在学校的学习及生活情况。

请根据下表内容回复一封邮件。

50词左右；邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Hi Maria,
Thank you for your e-mail, I want to tell you something about my school day.
____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ __________
Yours,
Wang Li 【答案】例文
Hi Maria,
Thank you for your e-mail. I want to tell you something about my school day. We have four classes in the morning. The first class starts at 8:00 am, and the last class finishes at 11:30 am. We have two classes in the afternoon from 2:30 pm to 4:00 pm. I often play tennis with my friends after school. My favourite subject is geography, because it is interesting and useful. I don’t like maths, because it’s boring and difficult.
Yours,
Wang Li 【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。

向好友Maria介绍自己在学校的学习及生活情况。

2.写作指导：本文采用第一人称，时态采用一般现在时。

分别介绍学校的课程安排及时间，课外活动，最喜欢的科目和不喜欢的科目，及其对应的原因。

写作时注意保持主谓一致，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。