【高中英语写作指导】高中英语作文--道歉信解析30页PPT
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道歉信--高三英语复习之应用文写作 PPT课件 图文
• I really hope that you can accept my apologies and understand me. I would appreciate it if you allow me to fix another time to show you around some places of interest in Beijing.
5. I am indeed very sorry that I missed the…. I feel awful about it and want you to know what happened that day.
• I suddenly fell sick early that morning and my parents had to send me to the hospital.
10. Thank you for being patient with us.
11. In order to avoid … happening again, I have …
Part 4 常用模板
模板1：过去没有完成的事情
• I am writing this letter to apologize to
道歉信
— 技法点拨
什么是道歉信？
❀ 道歉信是指因过失或疏忽做错了事， 给别人带来了麻烦或损失，发觉后要 立即写信给对方赔礼道歉时写的信件。 道歉是一种礼貌，道歉信要写得坦率， 诚恳。
❀ 道歉信通常包括三部分内容： 1、表示歉意，道歉的原由； 2、出现差错的原因，提出弥补措施； 3、请求原谅。 ❀ 语言要诚挚，解释的理由要真实。
3. I am sorry for any convenience caused.
5. I am indeed very sorry that I missed the…. I feel awful about it and want you to know what happened that day.
• I suddenly fell sick early that morning and my parents had to send me to the hospital.
10. Thank you for being patient with us.
11. In order to avoid … happening again, I have …
Part 4 常用模板
模板1：过去没有完成的事情
• I am writing this letter to apologize to
道歉信
— 技法点拨
什么是道歉信？
❀ 道歉信是指因过失或疏忽做错了事， 给别人带来了麻烦或损失，发觉后要 立即写信给对方赔礼道歉时写的信件。 道歉是一种礼貌，道歉信要写得坦率， 诚恳。
❀ 道歉信通常包括三部分内容： 1、表示歉意，道歉的原由； 2、出现差错的原因，提出弥补措施； 3、请求原谅。 ❀ 语言要诚挚，解释的理由要真实。
3. I am sorry for any convenience caused.
高考英语书面表达之道歉信公开课展示课件
/under_t_a_k_e__th__e_r_e_s_p_o_n__si_b_i_l_it_y__
14. 难以接受的后果
an unacce_p_t_a_b_l_e_r_e_s_u_l_t_/Biblioteka _o_n__s_e_q_u_e_nce
15. 下不为例
n_e_v_e_r_l_e_t_i_t_h__a_p_p_e_n__a_g_a_i_n
your wishes. 4. Would it be fine with you if I... 5. I wish you could give me a chance to make up
for my fault.
写作模板
Dear Bob, I am excessively sorry to say/tell you that _________（道
10. 更加小心
_b_e__m_o__re__c_a_r_e_f_u_l______
常用语块
11. 犯这样愚蠢的错误
m_a_k_e__s_u_c_h__a__s_tu__p_id__m__i_s_take 12. 应当受到责备 _b__e_t_o__b_la__m_e___________
13. 承担责任 be responsible for/shoulder
Would it be fine with you if I____( 解 决 方 案 ). I would appreciate it if you can forgive me and accept my apology.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Let's take actions! Write an a letter of apology in 15
高中英语作文道歉信写作指导(适合基础好的学生)
道歉信写作指导（提升版）道歉信因为不能按时赴约或者因为过失或疏忽，给别人带来了麻烦或损失，给对方赔礼道歉而写的信件。
道歉信一般分为三个部分，具体内容如下：首段：表达写信目的，表示歉意。
主体段：说明原因，提出补救措施结尾段：再次致歉，请求原谅一．重点短语1.因为某事向某人道歉。
(1)Make an apology to sb. for sth.(2)Apologize to sb. for sth.(3)say sorry to sb. for sth.2.接受某人的道歉Accept my apology.3..为某事而原谅某人Forgive sb. for sth.4. 弥补Make up for5. 另约时间做某事Fix another time to do sth.二．常用句型【part 1】开头常用句式1.I am truly/terribly sorry to say that....which I have promised you. I'm writing to tell you the reason for it.非常抱歉……,这是我之前就跟你约定好的。
我现在给你写信告诉你原因。
2.I'm writing to apologize to you for it.我写信给你是为了向你表达我对你的歉意。
3. I am writing to apologize to you for my absence from our appointment/breaking my promise.我现在写信是为例对我不能赴约表示道歉.4. I am writing to apologize to you for my failing to...I am writing to make an apology to you for my being unable to ....我现在写信是为了表达我没能……的歉意【part 2】中间段落常用句式1.To my regret, I can’t go there with you now because....很遗憾，现在我不能去了是因为......2.The reason why I failed to......is that...... 我不能......的原因是......That is owing to the fact that......3. I am terribly sorry to tell you that I can’t make it with the reason that I am occupied in ... 我非常抱歉地告诉你我不能去，原因是我忙于...4.The reason of my absence is owing to the fact that I have just known that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. 我缺席的原因是...我刚知道那天下午我要参加一个重要的班会...5.The reason why I won’t be available at that time is that my grandfather was ill suddenly yesterday and my family are taking turns to take care of him in the hospital. So I have to stay with him that day. 我那时没空的原因是我爷爷突然生病了，我的家人正在医院轮流照顾他。
高考英语书面表达：道歉信 22张PPT【精品课件】
给某人添了很多麻烦 ➢be sorry for sth. 对某事表示歉意 ➢express one’s regret 表达某人的遗憾 ➢do sb. wrong 冤枉某人
Expressions:
• I am sorry to say that I am unable to attend your birthday party because ….
• I am writing to apologize for…/ say sorry for…./I am writing to express/convey my heartfelt apology to you for….
• I’m writing to tell you that I can’t make it to the English play as we previously planned.
Once again, I do apologize for any inconvenience caused. Would you please accept my apology? Looking forward to….
Yours sincerely,
…
Writing sample 1:
Dear Anne, I’m indeed very sorry that I didn’t attend
your birthday party the day before yesterday. I feel awful about it and apologize to you.
It was nice of you to invite me to your birthday party. I should have come and celebrated the important occasion with you, but the final exam is around the corner, so I was so busy preparing for the exam that I forgot the appointment. I hope you can understand my situation and forgive me. Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting after the exam? I do long for a pleasant chat with you.
Expressions:
• I am sorry to say that I am unable to attend your birthday party because ….
• I am writing to apologize for…/ say sorry for…./I am writing to express/convey my heartfelt apology to you for….
• I’m writing to tell you that I can’t make it to the English play as we previously planned.
Once again, I do apologize for any inconvenience caused. Would you please accept my apology? Looking forward to….
Yours sincerely,
…
Writing sample 1:
Dear Anne, I’m indeed very sorry that I didn’t attend
your birthday party the day before yesterday. I feel awful about it and apologize to you.
It was nice of you to invite me to your birthday party. I should have come and celebrated the important occasion with you, but the final exam is around the corner, so I was so busy preparing for the exam that I forgot the appointment. I hope you can understand my situation and forgive me. Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting after the exam? I do long for a pleasant chat with you.
高考英语第二轮复习之应用文写作道歉信课件
break my promise of going to the book store with you. （说明原因）I have just been informed that our class is going to hold an important meeting on Saturday afternoon---exactly the time we shall meet. What an awful coincidence! I feel so sorry about it. （另约时间）Now that I’m not able to be present on time, shall we choose another time? I’ll be available any time after the meeting. Will Sunday morning suits your convenience? If so, we can meet then and I’m sure we will have a good time together. （再次致歉）I make an apology again for not going to the book store with you as promised. I sincerely wish we can have fun next time.
I am terribly sorry to let you know that I can’t go to the bookshop with you on Sunday morning as we planned/as promised last week. I am writing to apologize for breaking my promise.
I am terribly sorry to let you know that I can’t go to the bookshop with you on Sunday morning as we planned/as promised last week. I am writing to apologize for breaking my promise.
道歉信--高三英语复习之应用文写作 精品优选公开课件
Part 1 开头常用句式
1. I am writing this letter to apologize to you for …
2. I would like to express my deepest apology for not being able to …
3. I am writing this letter to apologize to you for my failing to…
you for my failing to .
• The reason is that . I am sorry
that I cannot finish
in time, but is itpossible that I make up the loss by ?
If so, I will put everything else aside
10. Thank you for being patient with us.
11. In order to avoid … happening again, I have …
Part 4 常用模板
模板1：过去没有完成的事情
• I am writing this letter to apologize to
4. I am writing this letter to express my regret …
5. I feel dreadful about …
Part 1 开头常用句式
6. I must beg your forgiveness for … 7. I am very sorry to say that … 8. Excuse me for my not being able to… 9. Please accept my sincere apology
【高中英语写作指导】高中英语作文--道歉信解析
写作三步曲
Step 1：审题
养成重视审题的习惯。
思考的问题 第几人称？（person） 文章的题材是什么？
怎样安排信息点的顺序？ (order)
动作是什么时候发生的？ (when)
样题分析 第一人称 一封道歉信 说理的逻辑性
一般现在时
写信的一般要求
总结提升
1.内容要简单
对于题中所给的内容： 全面
The name of the book is Adventurers in Deserts. I read them every evening and intend to finish it
it
the next week, but unfortunately yesterday until I
when
道歉信写作4步走
对于自己发挥的内容：
简单
写熟悉的，会写的！ 2.结构要清晰
4.再次致歉望理解
开头段： 中间段： 造句能力 +高分套话
3.提出补救办法
结尾段: 3.语言要精彩：
2.说明具体原因
4.注意内容之间的连接 1.表示歉意
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Basic structure and expressions
第一段:简明说明写信目的，为自己的过失表示歉意， 希望得到对方的谅解。
carelessness
a thing will never happen again. Yours sincerely, Li Ming
诵读经典范文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am awfully sorry to tell you that I have lost the
常用语块
1.因某事向某人道歉apologize to sb. for sth. / make a_n_a_p__o_lo_g_y__to__s_b_. _fo_r__st_h_.
高考英语作文道歉信 ppt课件(完美版)
I am writing to apologize to you for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I feel really sorry for the trouble that I may have caused.
(beyond one’s expectation)。我是我们班的班长，所
以我不能错过这个班会。
The reason why I can’t keep my word is that I will have to attend an important class meeting on Friday afternoon. That is quite beyond my expectation. I am monitor of our class, so I can’t missess your apology
1. I am writing to apologize to you for not handing in my homework on time.
2. I feel really sorry for the trouble that I may have caused.
3. It is mainly because I caught a bad cold last week, which is quite out of my expectation.
第二段：说明道歉原因，对失误进行解释 我不能信守承诺的原因是周五下午我不得不参加一 个重要的班会，那是我没有预料到的(beyond one’s expectation)。我是我们班的班长，所以我 不能错过这个班会。
(beyond one’s expectation)。我是我们班的班长，所
以我不能错过这个班会。
The reason why I can’t keep my word is that I will have to attend an important class meeting on Friday afternoon. That is quite beyond my expectation. I am monitor of our class, so I can’t missess your apology
1. I am writing to apologize to you for not handing in my homework on time.
2. I feel really sorry for the trouble that I may have caused.
3. It is mainly because I caught a bad cold last week, which is quite out of my expectation.
第二段：说明道歉原因，对失误进行解释 我不能信守承诺的原因是周五下午我不得不参加一 个重要的班会，那是我没有预料到的(beyond one’s expectation)。我是我们班的班长，所以我 不能错过这个班会。
道歉信课件-高考英语作文复习专项
尾段 express apology again
Para. 1
I am writing to express my regret that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon .
Please accept my sincere apology for not going to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon .
应用文写作 道歉信
CONTENTS
1
Part one
写作谋篇
2
Part two
课堂实战
1
Writing method guidance 写作谋篇
• 明确体裁话题 Step
1 • ——应用文，道歉信 • 确定时态人称
Step 2 • ——一般现在时，第一人称 • 布局文章结构
Step 3 •• —列—出首核段心、要中点段、尾段
I would like to give you my apology for not going to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon .
Para. 2
原因： 周五要开会
The reason that I fail to go to the bookstore with you that I have to attend a meeting this Friday
Sorry indeed for having made you wait for such a long time. By the way, what is you plan for summer vacation? Looking forward to your early reply.
英文道歉信写作课件
Propose remedial measures
03
In the apology letter, specific remedial measures should be proposed to make the other party feel their sincerity and determination to solve the problem.
3. Practical operation
Learners simulate writing based on different business scenarios to cultivate the ability to flexibly apply language skills in complex situations.
1. Scenario setting: Provide various personal apology scenarios, such as misunderstandings between friends, family conflicts, etc., so that learners can feel the necessity of apologizing firsthand.
2. Language skills
Teach how to use professional and formal wording, such as "We regret the invention caused", "We apologize for any invention this may have caused", etc.
Offer an explanation on how to prevent this from happening again
03
In the apology letter, specific remedial measures should be proposed to make the other party feel their sincerity and determination to solve the problem.
3. Practical operation
Learners simulate writing based on different business scenarios to cultivate the ability to flexibly apply language skills in complex situations.
1. Scenario setting: Provide various personal apology scenarios, such as misunderstandings between friends, family conflicts, etc., so that learners can feel the necessity of apologizing firsthand.
2. Language skills
Teach how to use professional and formal wording, such as "We regret the invention caused", "We apologize for any invention this may have caused", etc.
Offer an explanation on how to prevent this from happening again
高考英语-书信类写作-道歉信-教师备课PPT
结尾 1. 渴望谅解 2. 再次道歉
渴望谅解 我希望你能接受我的道歉并且理解我。 I sincerely hope you can accept my apology and understand it.
再次道歉 再一次，为给你带来的不便道歉。 Once again, I’m sorry for any inconvenience caused.
道歉信
道歉信 开头：说明道歉事由；表明写信意图 正文：说明道歉原因；提出补救措施 结尾：渴望谅解；再次道歉
示例范文： 假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你和在上海 上学的英国朋友Tom约好下周末去北京旅游， 但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语 给他写一封电子邮件： 1. 表示歉意； 2. 解释原因； 3. 另约时间。
结尾 I sincerely hope you can accept my apology and understand it. Once again, I’m sorry for any inconvenience caused.
全文 I am sorry to tell you that I can’t go to Beijing with you next
所以呢？
So I have to stay and be well prepared for it. So I have no alternative but to stay and be well prepared for it.
说明具体原因 Just now I was informed that I entered the final of the English speech contest which is going to be held next Saturday. So I have no alternative but to stay and be well prepared for it.
精品课件-高中英语作文---道歉信PPT文档共32页
拉
60、生活的道路一旦选定，就要勇敢地 走到底 ，决不 回头。 ——左
精品课件-高中英语作文---道歉信
1、战鼓一响，法律无声。——英国 2、任何法律的根本；不，不成文法本 身就是 讲道理 ……法 律，也 ----即 明保险的头盔。——爱·科 克 4、一个国家如果纲纪不正，其国风一 定颓败 。—— 塞内加 5、法律不能使人人平等，但是在法律 面前人 人是平 等的。 ——波 洛克
56、书不仅是生活，而且是现在、过 去和未 来文化 生活的 源泉。 ——库 法耶夫 57、生命不可能有两次，但许多人连一 次也不 善于度 过。— —吕凯 特 58、问渠哪得清如许，为有源头活水来 。—— 朱熹 59、我的努力求学没有得到别的好处， 只不过 是愈来 愈发觉 自己的 无知。 ——笛 卡儿
60、生活的道路一旦选定，就要勇敢地 走到底 ，决不 回头。 ——左
精品课件-高中英语作文---道歉信
1、战鼓一响，法律无声。——英国 2、任何法律的根本；不，不成文法本 身就是 讲道理 ……法 律，也 ----即 明保险的头盔。——爱·科 克 4、一个国家如果纲纪不正，其国风一 定颓败 。—— 塞内加 5、法律不能使人人平等，但是在法律 面前人 人是平 等的。 ——波 洛克
56、书不仅是生活，而且是现在、过 去和未 来文化 生活的 源泉。 ——库 法耶夫 57、生命不可能有两次，但许多人连一 次也不 善于度 过。— —吕凯 特 58、问渠哪得清如许，为有源头活水来 。—— 朱熹 59、我的努力求学没有得到别的好处， 只不过 是愈来 愈发觉 自己的 无知。 ——笛 卡儿
高考英语作文道歉信写作技巧课件
Yours sincerely, 2 Li Ming
写作技巧
第一段（开头）——背景，写作目的 1.写明写作目的 2.表示歉意 3.希望得到谅解
I am sorry to tell you that......
3
第二段（内容）——道歉原因以及补救措施 1.说明情况 2.解释原因 3.提出补救方法，弥补过失 注意：语气客气诚恳
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范文
I’m writing to make an apology to you. We have decided to go on a trip to Beijing next weekend but I’m sorry to tell you that I can’t go with you. My mother was ill suddenly which made my father and me very worried. Therefore we took her to hospital as quickly as we can. The doctor checked her and said that she needed to stay at home and rest for a week. What’s more my father will be away on business next week so I have to look after my mother at home. I wonder if you have time on July 14? On that day we can go to Beijing together. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
1.make an apology to sb.向某人道歉
写作技巧
第一段（开头）——背景，写作目的 1.写明写作目的 2.表示歉意 3.希望得到谅解
I am sorry to tell you that......
3
第二段（内容）——道歉原因以及补救措施 1.说明情况 2.解释原因 3.提出补救方法，弥补过失 注意：语气客气诚恳
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范文
I’m writing to make an apology to you. We have decided to go on a trip to Beijing next weekend but I’m sorry to tell you that I can’t go with you. My mother was ill suddenly which made my father and me very worried. Therefore we took her to hospital as quickly as we can. The doctor checked her and said that she needed to stay at home and rest for a week. What’s more my father will be away on business next week so I have to look after my mother at home. I wonder if you have time on July 14? On that day we can go to Beijing together. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
1.make an apology to sb.向某人道歉
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