高考英语二轮复习专题短文改错练

专题9 短文改错[2016·全国卷Ⅰ]假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多着(从第11处起)不计分。

My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.74．honest→honesty 此处指诚实是他成功的秘诀，故用名词形式。

75．or→and从句意判断是并列关系，把or改为and。

76．using→used 此处表示被动含义，be used for“被用来做”。

77．becoming前加of 固定结构： dream of doing sth梦想做某事。

78．the→a 固定短语：in a short time在短时间内。

79．our→his 此处指叔叔的生意，用his指代。

80．stead→steadily 修饰动词grow用副词形式。

[2016·全国卷Ⅱ]假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.[解析]4. but→and 上下文之间是并列关系，而不是转折关系，所以使用and连接上下文。

5. about后加the 此处使用the表示特指。

6. your→our 根据语境，此处应该使用our，与本句的主语we保持一致。

7. knowledges→knowledge knowledge是一个不可数名词，因此不能使用复数形式。

8. 删除can或can→should suggest作“建议”讲时后面的宾语从句应该使用虚拟语气“should＋动词原形”或者省略should。

9. thought→think 本文全文都是一般现在时，因此这里也应该使用一般现在时。

10. many→much 本句中的代词much代替不可数名词much money作动词cost的宾语，而many通常代替可数名词的复数形式。

[2016·全国卷Ⅲ]假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn't seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn't understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.4. yourself→myself by oneself意为“独自地，单独地”，句子主语是第一人称单数I，因此yourself 应该改为myself。

5. such→so 句意：然而“我”的父母亲好像不这么认为。

so作副词，指刚刚提到过的内容。

6. tell→told 此文讲述的是在“我”十几岁时发生的情况，因此行文以一般过去时为主。

故需将tell 改为told。

7. freely→free 作表语应用形容词形式。

be free from意为“挣脱……的束缚”。

8. wear→wearing 介词by后需跟动名词作宾语。

9. to→for leave…for…意为“离开……去……”。

10. whenever后加I whenever引导的让步状语从句的主语也应该是I。

[2015·全国卷Ⅰ]第四部分写作（共两节满分35分）第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之问交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so ,we’ll live to regret it .【答案】76. think –thought77. countryside前加the78. or—and79. on—with80. been去掉81. seriously—serious82. airs—air83. much—many84. found—find85. your—our[2015·全国卷Ⅱ]第四部分写作（共两节，满分35分）第二节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。