book3 Module 5 Writing

3. Big events ( in order of time )
1）be interested in … , 2) work hard at … , 3) devote his lifetime to … , 4) do research about / into … 5) make a big decision /make up one’s mind to do
B.外貌,性格: 巧用with做定语
译：我的地理老师是个漂亮女人，她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发
My geography teacher is a beautiful woman with two big eyes and long hair.
C. 教育经历：
注意尽量用非谓语动词, 使文章精炼
1）Graduating from the department of English of Zhongshan University, she went on further education and received a doctor's degree. D．生平：使用倒装,非限定定语从句等，润色文章 1）Not only is he interested in science, but also he has a gift for music. 2）He set a new world record of swimming, which won a gold medal for China Team.
2. Appearance，character and education
easy - going （温和宽容的） smart （精明的） bright （聪明的） diligent （勤奋的） humorous （幽默的) silent （沉默的） attractive （有吸引力的） talkative （多话的） 我的地理老师是个漂亮女人，她长着两只大眼睛，留着 长发。 My geography teacher is a beautiful woman with two big eyes and long hair.
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Homework:
请参考导学案P67-68的重点单词、短语和句型 写一篇120词左右的短文，介绍一位你感兴趣 的名人。
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海伦.凯勒为我们大家树立了优秀的榜样。她的故事告 诉我们应该珍惜当前，尽力克服生活中的困难。
某英文网站的“全球名人”栏目向广大网友征稿。请你根下列要 点 用英文写一篇介绍美国杰出科学家托马斯﹒爱迪生Thomas Edison 短文，向该网站投稿。供参考的要点如下，可适当扩充要点：
1. 爱迪生出身于美国，是杰出的科学家和发明家。 2. 爱迪生只在学校待了三个月，总是问老师很多与课程无关的奇怪 问题。因此，他受过极少正规学校教育，主要是母亲在家辅导。
Born in America, Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor. Edison was in school for only three months. He asked his teacher a lot of strange questions, most of which had nothing to do with his lessons. He was later schooled by his mother at home. In fact, he was a man full of imagination. I admire Edison a lot because of his great contribution to the world. He had more than 1,000 inventions. In his lifetime, he was always eager to know how things worked, which helped him to be one of the greatest inventors in American and world history. He was also so diligent that he worked day and night. And this was was the reason why he had so many great inventions.
Last sunday, My little sister asked me:"Who is Mencius?" I find it hard to explain this famous philosopher to such a little girl.
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Can you explain "Who is Mencius"?
3. 爱迪生想象力丰富，拥有超过1000多项发明。他是如此的勤奋， 总是夜以继日地工作。同时，这也是他拥有如此多项发明的原因。 4. 爱迪生有一句名言让我深受启发：天才是百分之一的灵感,百分 之九十九的汗水（Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration.），我认识到…… (If possible, please use one or two attributive clauses定语从句。) 可参考导学案 P67-68的重点单词、短语和句型 2014-5-8
sth.
6) try one’s best to do sth.
Samaranch makes up his mind to devote his lifetime to sport. 萨马兰奇下定决心为体育奉献毕生。
4. Influence and evaluation
1) one of the best (most important) … 2) set sb a good example . 3) his heroic story spread all over the city . 4) be respected by everyone . 5) sing high praise for… speak (think) highly of… 6) his hard work brought him great success .
Standards of evaluation点评的标准
1. 书写是否整齐、规范。包括大小写、标点符号，首 行缩进等； 2. 要点是否齐全； 3. 单词拼写和短语搭配是否正确； 4. 时态，语态（主动和被动） 5. 是否切题，条理清楚； 6.以及未提到的各种语言错误......
* 语法，句法高分技巧（tips）
1. Job, birthday and birthplace, family —was born on…in…
She was born in Poland on Nov. 7 , 1867 . （她于1867年11月7日出生于波兰。） Born in a rich family, Chen Luyu received a good education when She was young. （出生在一个有钱人家中，陈鲁豫小时候接受 了很好的教育。）
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What impresses me most is his famous saying,“Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration.” Probably I cannot be an Edison myself, but I can be a hardworking learner. From him, I realize the secret to success is not when or where you were born, but what you are doing and how you do it in your life.
1.A. 概况 : 尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通 顺 译：钟南山１９４１年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一
1)Born in Guangzhou in 1941, Zhong Nanshan is one of the greatest doctors in China. 2)Zhong Nanshan, one of the greatest doctors in China, was born in Guangzhou in 1941.
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Module 5 Writing
Write about a famous person
Writing about a famous person
1. Job, birthday and birthplace, family (概述：职业，出生时间及地点,家庭环境) 2. Appearance，character and education (外貌，性格和受教育程度) 3. Big events in his or her life ( in order of time ) (生平：生命中的大事件) 4. Influence and evaluation (影响以及后人评价) 5. You may add more...
E．评估：
注意运用丰富的动词、形容词等短语、词组
1）Leifeng set us a good example ,so all the people spoke highly of him and all respected him . 2）He is one of the greatest novelists in China and will be always remembered as an outstanding man.
Helen Keller has set an excellent example to all of us. Her story tells us that we should value what we have, and try our best to overcome any difficulty in life.
2. Appearance，character and education 1) graduate from……department of ……university 2) When at college , he majored in…… 3) receive a doctor’s degree 4) get higher education 5) go abroad for further studies Deng Yaping enrolled into Tsinghua University and majored in English and Management in 1997, then she went abroad for further studies. 邓亚萍在1997年被清华大学录取，主修英语管理 专业，然后出国留学深造。