高中英语 Module 3 Interpersonal Relationships Friendship作文指导学案 外研版选修6

高中英语 Module 3 Interpersonal Relationships Friendship作文指导学案外
研版选修6
Interpersonal Relationships Friendship作文指导学案外研版选修6学习目标：学习写作议论文。

自学指导：通过写作要领的学习和研模范文学会写作议论文。

【体裁导航】
写议论文要注意三个问题：
1、议论文要有论点、论据和论证三个环节(即三个要素)，并在论证的过程中，让阅卷老师充分感受到你的英语水平。

2、议论文的时态比较灵活，应根据具体内容使用正确的时态。

3、英语的议论文受篇幅限制，短文开头就应提出论点。

杂议短评类的议论文，就是指通过语言或文字，对某一现象进行议论，或对所读的材料进行评析，并通过议论，从而提出自己独到见解的分析文章。

也就是我们平常所说的“小论文”。

杂议和短评本身并无实质性的区别，只是其范畴有时可能存在一定的差异而已。

例如，某年的上海高考英语题，就曾要求对孩子被溺爱的现象进行杂议或短评。

近几年北京的开放作文，也多属杂议或短评类的一种书面表达形式。

【写作示例】
健康是福。

但是随着人们生活水平的提高，生活节奏的加快，越来越多的人喜欢吃形形色色的简单快捷的包装食品；交通工具的改进也使得人们越来越缺少必需的体力运动。

所以出现了很多的“亚健康(subhealth)”人群。

请你以“How to Be Healthy？”为题，写一篇120词左右的短文，就此事发表一下你的看法。

【写作要领】
一、审题要点：
1、体裁：议论文；
2、时态：一般现在时；
3、人称：第一人称。

二、内容要点：
1、描述出目前存在的问题：食物方面：吃快餐；运动方面：缺乏体力运动；
2、这些问题造成的后果：亚健康(描述一些症状)；
3、提出自己的建议：多吃健康的食品，多运动等。

【黄金模板】
一、开头参考句式：
1、Nowadays, because of the fast pace of life, more and more people like eating fast food、
2、Today, people are busy with their work, so they always eat some fast
food、3、In order to save time, many people like eating fast food、4、Because of the fast pace of life, people have to eat more fast food and have no time to take exercise、
二、主体参考句式：
1、How can we keep fit?
2、What is the good way to keep fit?
3、We must pay attention to our health、
4、First we should 、、、and then we should 、、、
5、The most
important thing is 、、、6、It is good for us to、、、为
使各项内容衔接自然，可以适当添加过渡词语。

如：firstly, secondly, thirdly 、、、 on one hand 、、、on the other hand 、、、 when, while, as 、、、 but, however 、、、because, so, as a result 、、、
三、结尾参考句式：
1、In a word, we must eat healthily and take more exercise to keep fit、
2、In short, if we want to keep fit, we must have a good habit and do more physical exercise、
3、As is said above, the healthier we eat, the fitter we will be、可用来表示总结的短语：in a word, in short, in conclusion, all in all等。

【范文点评】
How to Be Healthy?①Today, with the fast pace of life and work, people like eating all kinds of fast food、Besides, the convenient vehicles make people keep away from walking、②Because of these，more and more people
are confronted with the threat of subhealth, for example, some can’t sleep well, some are always feeling tired and so on、③But how can we change these and keep fit?④First, I think a healthy balanced diet is very important for everyone、Less meat, fatty and fast food, more vegetables and enough fruit are good for our health、⑤Only when we are in a hurry can we have some junk food, but not
often、Second，we should take enough exercise because exercise can keep us energetic all the time、⑥In a word, the better we get into good eating habits and the more we take exercise, the healthier our bodies will be、点评：
①with介词短语的使用增加了句子的灵活性。

②关联词使句子上
下衔接自然。

③but领起下文，使文章自然过渡到作者要表达的内容。

④first，second序数词的使用使文章清晰地表达出要表达的观点。

⑤本句为以only开头的倒装句。

不同句式的使用显示出深
厚的语言功底，使文章增色不少。

⑥总结句的使用使文章首尾呼应，内容充实圆满。

【类题尝试】
当今，有些家长选择用金钱奖励孩子在学习上的进步。

请根据以下提示用英语写篇短文。

1、分析这种现象产生的原因及危害(工作繁忙，溺爱孩子，不利于孩子成长……)；
2、你对这种现象的看法。

注意：
1、词数100左右；
2、可根据内容适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

O ne possible version：Nowadays more and more parents choose to reward their children with money for the progress they have made in their studies、Why? Most parents devote themselves to their careers due to fierce competition, thus caring less about their children、However, I don’ t think this is a practical and wise choice、Firstly, if children are always rewarded with money for high marks, their attention will be focused on money instead of the pleasure of studying、Some of them will stop working hard as soon as they get what they want、Secondly, too much money will spoil the children, for they are too young to use money properly、I think a hug and a kiss will work better for children than money、Money may do them more harm than good、。