2011年北京高考英语开放作文及参考答案

遣词造句
As indicated in the picture, if the man is willing to look for other possibilities, he can find a better and more rewarding way to achieve his goal. as 引导的非限制性定语从句，if引导的条件状语 从句，to作目的状语
In pursuing a dream, we might focus on only one way of making it come true, forgetting that there may be alternatives. forgetting非谓语作状语，that引导宾语从句 在追求梦想的过程中，我们有时也许只专注实 现目标的唯一方法上，忽视了还有其他很多的方 法。
衔接连贯
本范文采用以下方法，使行文连贯。 空间顺序：从左到右、从上到下。 观点论证：观点+论证+建议。
In the picture, there stands a tree full of fruit on one side of the stream. Across the stream, a man is trying to reach out on the edge of the bank for the fruit with a net attached to a pole. Not far away there is a bridge that can lead him to the tree for more fruit. The message conveyed in the picture is clear. In pursuing a dream, we might focus on only one way of making it come true, forgetting that there may be alternatives. As indicated in the picture, if the man is willing to look for other possibilities, he can find a better and more rewarding way to achieve his goal. All he has to do is to turn around, cross the bridge and walk to the tree.
2011年北京 高考英语（开放作文） 及参考答案
请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。 In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.
遣词造句
In the picture, there stands a tree full of fruit on one side of the stream. there副词句首倒装句 如图所示，小溪的左侧长着一颗苹果树。 Across the stream, a man is trying to reach out on the edge of the bank for the fruit with a net attached to a pole. 小溪右侧，一男子手拿一根前面绑上网子的杆 子，正努力去够小溪左侧苹果树上的苹果。
谋篇布局
S1描图、小溪边苹果树
S4寓意
S2河对岸男子用竹竿够苹果S3一Biblioteka 桥可以过来S7转身、过桥、摘果
S5追梦、专注、其他选择
S6图片论证、其他选择
In the picture, there stands a tree full of fruit on one side of the stream. Across the stream, a man is trying to reach out on the edge of the bank for the fruit with a net attached to a pole. Not far away there is a bridge that can lead him to the tree for more fruit. The message conveyed in the picture is clear. In pursuing a dream, we might focus on only one way of making it come true, forgetting that there may be alternatives. As indicated in the picture, if the man is willing to look for other possibilities, he can find a better and more rewarding way to achieve his goal. All he has to do is to turn around, cross the bridge and walk to the tree.
遣词造句
Not far away there is a bridge that can lead him to the tree for more fruit. that引导的定语从句 不远处，有一座桥。顺着这座桥走，该男子可 以走到那颗苹果树，那样摘更多的果子。
遣词造句
The message conveyed in the picture is clear. converyed非谓语后置作定语 图片中传达的信息很明显。