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Advertisement is the main cause of unhealthy eating habit.Eating habit is of great importance for our daily life. （应该是是否拥有一个好的饮食习惯对我们很重要）It provides enough energy and nutrition, and enabl es us to handle everyday activities.（层次，IT指代什么？饮食习惯？为我们提供了。

逻辑错误）However, there is a growing trend that peopl e’s eating habits are negatively affected nowadays. （这句话感觉很拗口的样子。

）Keeping a good eating habit involves so many factors, so d oes an unhealthy one, it has something to do with people’s habit and consciousness as well. In my opinion, among all these factors advertisement cannot be counted as the main cause （句子要简洁，结构清晰，然后不要太绕，我看晕了。

）（我觉得，这篇文章开头要把广告和坏的饮食习惯一起引出来，好的饮食习惯不用写，因为文章没有要求你写这个，一定要切题）文章架构：With the development of the advertisement business, advertisement plays a more important role in our daily life. Admittedly, advertisement may somehow contribute to the unhealthy eating habit. But I don't think it is the main cause. （开头一定要新颖，或者间接，开门见山）First of all,...（一句概扩）Secondly,...(最好和上一句对仗）Moreover,...（如果还有观点可以继续补充，没有了可以说，Admittedly,..广告确实。

托福TPO50小作文(经过权威托福教师修改过的)

The reading passage brings about three severe problems that prevent human from landing on Mars. However, the professor refutes all these theories by leaving out three pieces of scientific evidence.First, the writer states that because the trip to Mars may last for 2 years which means that we need to carry a sea of food, water and oxygen on the spaceship, which clearly do not have enough capacity for that. Nonetheless, the lecturer points out that people can use the recycled water to plant some vegetarians on the space ship in order to not only supply themselves but also absorb the wasted gases.Second, the writer states that because there’s no gravity in the spaceship, and the time for astronauts to travel is too long, there’s no doubt that these people’s muscles’mass will be decreased and their bone density will lower than before. And these affects are harmful to human to survive on the spaceship. However, the professor challenges this point of view by putting that, some of the astronauts that living in the space station in the earth’s orbit also have to undergo the 0-gravity for several months, but these people are still in good condition. And some exercises and specific medicine can also heal the symptom mentioned above.Finally, the author points out that the space radiation may be sodangerous that astronauts may do not have enough protection when exposed to these radiations. Nevertheless, the professor claims that most of the radiations given off from the sun are not as severe and frequent as we imagine, if we equip the spaceship with a small shield, and when the radiation storm really coming through, all the crewmembers can move into this shelter and survive.。

托福综合写作范文及批改（原创）

托福写作高分120 中的综合写作题目Marco PoloThe reading passage says that Marco Polo, a V enetian trader and explorer, had traveled to China. The lecturer states her positive opinions in three ways against the naysayers:Firstly, according to the lecturer, the fact that Marco Polo did not mention any Chinese or Mongolian place-names in his books does not necessarily mean that he did not travel to China at all. It was impossible that Marco had borrowed place-names from Persian, which was a common trade language during his period.Secondly, Marco spent most of his time in northern China while the love for tea was only common in southern China 或in the south of China during his period. So it was understandable that Marco did not mention such cultural practice in his books.Finally, there are other explanations, besides that Marco was never appointed in the Chinese court; also we could not find original records in the materials of Chinese or Mongols. It was possible that Marco was referred to different names in those records, which was common in ancient Chinese records. Or the records could be simply missing.In conclusion, the lecturer states his disagreement with the opinion that Marco Polo had never traveled to China.参考分数：24分文章的框架清晰，结构合理，能够抓住材料的主要观点并对其加以阐述，但语句的表达还是有点生疏，不够娴熟。

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托福说明文写作文版Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed people’slives.automobiles bicycles airplanes Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. The most significant invention at the turn of the twentieth century, in my point of view, is the airplane. It has made a positive contribution to the economic development of the world. Meanwhile, it has changed the way people live. There are three basic reasons for my viewpoint and I will further elaborate them in this passage.The first point that es to my mind is that airplanes have tremendously increased people’s efficiency. Despite that more and more people are willing to travel by airplane due to its speed, day-to-day businesses also rely greatly on airplanes for its inparable efficiency. For example, after airplanes were invented, the time to travel between Europe and America had been shortened by more than three times. Businessmen can take an airplane, get to their destination, have their contraction, and e back home injust one day. In today’s epoch when the whole ball game is about efficiency, airplanes certainly have changed the way people are living.Another reason that cannot be ignored is that airplanes have make people’s dreams e true. Human beings had alwayshoped that one day we can fly like a bird. The invention of the airplane helped to achieve our dream. Thanks to the airplane, we can travel around the world in just one or two days. Suddenly, people realize that dreams do e true, as long as we strive for them. At the same time, peoplerealize that we can achieve other dreams, such as getting in contact with life on other plas, as well. In a word, airplane is not only a means of transportation, it also has bee a symbol of achieved dreams. It has greatly influenced the way people think about our fantasies.Moreover, people find it exciting to travel by airplanes. To some extent, airplanes connect various places on the earth together. For example, when I first came to Canada from my home country where the climate is always very hot and snow is very rare, I was astounded by thesight of the snow-covered land. Since then, I have always hoped to take an airplane again and have another unforgettable sight of the beautiful landscape elsewhere. It is the airplane that makes people’s life more enjoyable and exciting.To sum up, the invention of the airplane has maximized people’s efficiency, made human being’s dream e true, and provide people excitement and pleasure. It cannot be denied t hat the airplane had significantly changed people’s life.。

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giant panda toefl writing 范文-回复熊猫是一种受人们喜爱的动物，是中国的国宝之一，也是全世界珍稀濒危动物的代表。

熊猫的外形憨态可掬，与其他熊科动物相比，它拥有特殊的黑白相间的毛发和圆圆的大圆脸，这使它成为了生物界最受欢迎的明星之一。

第一步：介绍熊猫熊猫是一种以细竹和巨竹为食的典型植食性动物。

它们生活在中国的山地森林中，包括四川、陕西、甘肃和青海等地区。

熊猫是大型的哺乳动物，体长约1.2米，体重可达到100至150公斤。

它们通常以慢悠悠的速度行走，以蔬菜为主食，尤其是竹子，每天需要吃约20至30公斤的竹子来维持其能量需求。

第二步：熊猫的特点与保护困境熊猫的毛皮主要为黑色与白色相间，这使得它们在森林中很容易被发现。

这是一种天生的保护色，对于躲避捕食者非常有帮助。

熊猫的外貌也增添了其可爱指数，这也是它们如此受人们喜爱的原因之一。

尽管熊猫体型庞大，但它们的繁殖能力较弱，且非常依赖竹子这一特定食物。

竹子的生长周期长，以及森林破坏与人类活动的扩张，都对熊猫的生存造成了威胁。

此外，熊猫的栖息地正在不断减少，使野生熊猫的数量不断减少。

第三步：保护措施及其效果为了保护熊猫，中国政府采取了多种措施。

首先，他们建立了熊猫保护区，这些保护区占地面积较大，并提供适合熊猫生存的环境。

这些保护区由工作人员密切监控，确保野生熊猫的安全。

其次，中国政府通过法律和法规加强了对非法狩猎和熊猫买卖的打击力度。

这为熊猫提供了更好的保护环境。

这些保护措施取得了显著成效。

根据最新的统计数据，过去几十年里，野生熊猫的数量得到了显著增加。

研究人员估计，目前有将近2000只野生熊猫生活在自然环境中，这个数字相对于以往来说是一个巨大的增长。

这表明了保护措施的成功。

第四步：国际合作与未来展望熊猫的保护是一个国际性的事业。

各个国家和国际组织已经积极参与到熊猫保护中。

中国和其他国家之间的交流与合作已经取得了一些突破，这为熊猫的保护工作提供了更多的机会。

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托福说明文写作样例修改意见Whether persons would spend their entire lives in one place or not concerns (is a matter of)their life style. Due to differently personal character and experiences, some people like to stay in one place thorough (throughout)their lives, but others in contrast, prefer to move a number of times among different cities. In my view, I would be very happy if I have opportunities to live in different places. The arguments for this propensity are listed as follows.One of the most crucial reasons for my view is that we could (can)have more opportunities to realize our dreams in the process of moving between places. As a young man(young men), we are all eager for suess. However the road to (approach toward)suess is so hard that we have to makegreat efforts. We must possess many aspects, including(去掉) outstanding intelligence, excellent education, rich experience and certainly good luck, most of which are acquired only by insistently pursuing, besides(and)studiously striving in different cities(if necessary).I can take one of my friends for instance. In order(to)receive the best education, after graduating from the senior school, he left his hometown to a remote city, BEIJING. But four years later, to looking for a better job, he left BEIJING and e to SHENZHEN, a beautiful city in his dream. Now his new goal is to enter American B-School toacquire (of)more advanced knowledge in financing. We can see, in just about ten years, he has moves three times, and what is more(more importantly), this moving sill continue. Actually, in contemporary society more and more people are as this(act like him ).Another essential fact why (reason why)I hold my viewis that we can enjoy a more rich and colorful (richer and more colorful)life, as we change places we live in. For my part, enjoying life is as important as, if not more important than, devoting work(hard working). It is a pleasing thing in the holiday to visit beautiful sceneries in different places. My friends mentioned in the last paragraph(before), has visited the snow scene in the north, and the widely (wide)sea in the south.Admittedly, we cannot neglect the virtues (of)spending the entire life in one place. People can attained(attain)the feeling of family to their munity, and the relationships between people are closer. Nevertheless moving between cities perhaps is more attractive to young persons than staying in one place thorough their lives.From all the reasons mentioned above, it is notdifficult to get the conclusion that if it is possible, I would move a number of times throughout my lives to lookfor the best job, house or climate I am eager for.。

托福阅读第三篇AgricultureintheLateOttomanEmpire

第二段，展开讲农业发展的第一个原因：需求增长，经济变好和铁路发展
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The second engine driving agricultural output concerns cultivators' increasing payment of their taxes in cash rather than in kind (that is, in agricultural or other products).（并列上一段，第二点原因是人们更愿意用先进而不是物品来付税） Some historians have asserted that the increasing commitment to market agriculture was a product both of a mounting per capita tax burden and the state's growing preference for tax payments in cash rather than in kind.（递进，对于市场农业的押金一方面是由于单位资产税的提高，二是国家更喜欢现金） In this view, such government decisions forced cultivators to grow crops for sale in order to pay their taxes. （递进，所以有些国家要求农民种庄稼然后买掉来付税）Thus, state policy is seen as the most important factor influencing the cultivators' shift from subsistence farming to market agriculture.（总结，这样看来，国家政策是导致农民从粮食生产转变到市场农业的）

托福说明文优秀作文

托福说明文优秀作文托福说明文优秀作文无论是在学校还是在社会中，大家都有写作文的经历，对作文很是熟悉吧，借助作文可以提高我们的语言组织能力。

那么一般作文是怎么写的`呢？下面是小编收集整理的托福说明文优秀作文，欢迎阅读与收藏。

What are the important qualities of a good son or daughter？Have these qualities changed or remained the same over time in your culture？ Use specific reasons and examples to surport your answer。

There are many good qualities that a good son or daughter should have。

Respect and independence are two of the most important。

These have been true in the past and continue to be the case in the present。

First， a good son or daughter should respect and care for his/her parents。

It is not easy for our parents to bring us up，giving us good education and a comfortable life。

They deserve all of our respect。

There will be times when we have different opinions with our parents。

We should always communicate with them to find a solution to the problem but not losing our temper。

托福作文批改

托福作文批改英文回答：In the debate surrounding the extent to which technology benefits or hinders interpersonal relationships, there are compelling arguments on both sides. While technology can undoubtedly enhance communication and foster connections, it can also lead to social isolation and a decline in face-to-face interactions.On one hand, technology has revolutionized the way we communicate with others. Social media platforms, instant messaging apps, and video conferencing tools have made it easier than ever to stay connected with friends and family, regardless of distance or time zones. These platforms allow us to share our thoughts, feelings, and experiences with others in real time, fostering a sense of community and belonging.Furthermore, technology can help people overcome socialbarriers and form new connections. For example, online dating apps and social media groups can bridge the gap between individuals who might not otherwise have the opportunity to meet in person. By connecting people with shared interests, technology can foster meaningful relationships that might not have been possible without its assistance.However, it is important to recognize that technology also has potential drawbacks in the context ofinterpersonal relationships. Excessive use of social media and other digital devices can lead to social isolation and a decline in face-to-face interactions. When individuals spend too much time on screens, they may neglect their relationships with the people around them, leading to feelings of loneliness and a lack of connection.Additionally, technology can contribute to a phenomenon known as "FOMO" (fear of missing out). The constant stream of information and updates on social media can create a sense of pressure to be constantly engaged, leading individuals to prioritize online interactions over real-world relationships. This can result in a diminished senseof well-being and a decline in overall life satisfaction.中文回答：科技对于人际关系的影响是一个备受争议的话题，双方都有着令人信服的论点。

改版托福写作范文

改版托福写作范文全文共四篇示例，供读者参考第一篇示例：近年来，托福考试经历了一系列的改版，其中写作部分也不例外。

改版后的托福写作要求考生在有限的时间内将自己的观点进行清晰、有条理地表达，同时要求考生能够运用逻辑、分析和批判性思维能力来支持自己的观点。

在这篇文章中，我们将探讨改版后的托福写作范文应该如何去准备和应对。

准备好一些常见的写作主题是非常重要的。

托福写作通常会涉及一些社会热点话题，比如环境保护、科技发展、教育制度等，因此考生需要提前准备好这些话题的相关观点和论据。

可以通过阅读相关的新闻报道、专业文章或者是参加一些写作培训班来提升自己对这些话题的了解。

在写作考试中，能够快速思考并展开自己的观点是非常关键的，只有在有主题基础的情况下才能够更好地展开思维。

要注意托福写作的逻辑和结构。

托福写作要求考生在短时间内完成短文写作，因此在篇幅有限的情况下，要能够将自己的观点和论据条理清晰地组织起来。

一般来说，托福写作可以分为三部分：开头、主体和结尾。

开头部分可以概括性地介绍要论述的话题，并提出自己的立场；主体部分则是展开论述自己的主要观点和支持论据；结尾部分可以对整个写作进行总结，强调自己的观点并给出建议或展望。

在写作时要注意逻辑的连贯性和结构的完整性，这样读者才能更好地理解和接受自己的观点。

托福写作还要求考生能够灵活运用各种写作技巧和句式。

写作技巧包括例如对比、举例、引用权威观点等，这些技巧可以帮助考生更好地展开自己的观点和论据。

句式的灵活运用可以让文章更加生动有趣，增加阅读的趣味性。

考生可以在平时的练习中多加尝试，熟练运用各种写作技巧和句式，这样在写作考试中才能更加游刃有余。

要重视托福写作预测和范文的练习。

考试前可以通过一些托福写作模拟题来了解考试的难度和要求，并让自己对考试形式有一个更清晰的认识。

可以多找一些托福写作范文来进行阅读和分析，在模仿和借鉴的过程中提升自己的写作水平。

练习是提高写作能力的最有效方法，只有在不断实践和反思中才能够真正锻炼出自己的写作技能。

托福独立写作作文修改

托福独立写作作文修改第一篇：托福独立写作作文修改独立5-现象证明P21 2010.10.31NA Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are now easier to become educated than in the cation is the foundation of a country.People today have a stronger concept（搭配不当，改为sense）of being educated than in the past.I agree with the statement that people gain an easier access to all kinds of educations at current times.Firstly, there are much more schools available today than in the past.No matter where you live, in big cities or in the countryside, the local government spends a large amount of money on the constructions of various types of schools, such as primary schools, middle schools, high schools and even schools for adults.More and more universities and colleges have been built to ensure higher education for top students.If you want to study in schools, you will always find a proper one to attend.Secondly, the teaching approach diversifies （there are diversified teaching approaches）.Except for（In addition to包括在内）blackboard and chalks, many advanced teaching devices are being used today in most schools, including computers, multi-media and some other instruments.Moreover, labs and libraries have also come into use for students to study deeper and wider(who want to make a deeper and wider study on the fields they are interested in).What is more, the teachers' teaching levels are greatly improved by communicating with other educators from all over the world.The technology becomes more developed than in the past, so it is easier now to study.Thirdly, people have equal rights to receive education.As we all know, people in the past were in terrible discriminationbecause of their sex and race(many people such as women and the black people were denied the right to education because they were discriminated against in the society because of their sex and race.两句合起来)For example, women and black people were used to be considered as people in lower classes or even slaves and weren't allowed to go to school.However, they have equal rights to study in schools nowadays.（要回到主题，和更容易接受教育要直接联系起来，所以再加一句）Obviously, these people surly have easier access to education.T o sum up, almost everyone today has equal rights to go to all kinds of schools with diversified teaching approaches.So people do have an easier way to receive education now than in past times.The reasons above firmly support my opinion(最后一句话不够有力，可以将三点简明扼要的用一句话概括).(Word Count: 294)独立8-包含因果关系P15 2010.3.20NA Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People today can solve many important problems so they do not need help from the government.With the development of the society, people can do more things by themselves nowadays（于什么时候比较？）than in the past.But I disagree with the statement that people can solve many important problems, therefore the government does not need to help them（therefore they need not depend on the government for any support）.There(are)three reasons as follows: Firstly, People today still cannot solve many important problems by themselves in fact in terms of education, unemployment, war, starvation, poverty and so on.These are international problems all over the world, so a single person or even a group of people may not have the abilities to solve(be capable of solving)them.For example, if a man wants to stop a war between two countries, even he is powerful or wealthy, he(he,however wealthy and powerful,)cannot prevent them from fighting with each other without the help of others.Secondly, people today need more help from the government.As the life standards are getting higher, people have more requirements than before.They ask for all kinds of utilities for entertainment or exercise in public places.They need various insurance to make their lives more comfortable.They also require more schools and hospitals to take care of the young people and patients(the sick).Thirdly, whether people today can solve many problems or not has nothing to do with whether they need the government's help.It is the responsibility of the government to help people.The government must give people help no matter how powerful they are.In a word, the statement that people today do not need help from the government because they can solve many important problems is wrong.The reasons above can firmly support my idea.(260w)独立1-包含should, important, necessary的简单话题P75 2009.5.30 Younger school children(aged between five and ten)should be required to study art and music in addition to math, science, history and language.In order to broaden the horizon of younger school children, it is suggested that they should study art and music as well as other common courses.I agree with it because of the following reasons.First of all, art and music can help students to relax.Campus life is stressful even for younger children who aged between five and ten, with all kinds of homework and assignments.However, by having music and art classes, students can get a much-needed escape from the heavy work.It can help them to relax their mind and study more efficiently in other classes.Second, music and art classes help improve students' interpersonal relationships.Students will meettogether to talk about a same topic if they have common interests.For example, students attending art classes can talk about the masterpiece or life story of a famous painter.Students having music classes will enjoy the beautiful melody or sing songs together.By communicating with each other, they will build a strong friendship and learn how to behave in various situations.Third, music and art classes provide students with plenty of information about great artists and their works.By learning knowledge in artistic fields students can acquire different cultures from different countries.The artists and musicians describe what they see or hear in their works, showing feelings meanwhile, which bring the students the atmosphere at that time.To sum up, art and music classes should be taken by younger school students to broaden their horizon.(248w) 独立2-包含比较(better, prefer)的简单话题P24 2010.10.9NA Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People can take care of their family members better when they live in big cities than in the countryside.No matter where people live, in big cities or in the countryside, they must take care of their family members.Basically I prefer the former one.Living in big cities has more advantages than living in the countryside.Firstly, for old people, living in big cities can be convenient.There are a large number of hospitals which are available to all kinds of diseases.When the old people catch a cold, have a fever or even heart attack, they could be taken to the best hospital nearby and received treat in time and recover as soon as possible.But in the countryside, situations in hospitals are obviously terrible.Secondly, children should receive good education, so living in big cities is a wise choice.Schools in big cities which getfinance support from(the)government provide sufficient teaching facilities for the students in order that the students can study more easily and do more experiments.Moreover, the teaching levels of the teachers in big cities are higher on average than that of the teachers in the countryside.Admittedly, Living in big cities may have a few downsides.For example, the air may be not as fresh as it in the countryside and the noise may make people crazy sometimes.However,(the)government is taking measures to prevent the pollutions and people are also becoming aware of the importance of environmental protection.It is sure that the problems can be solved in the future.In a word, people can take care of their family members much better when they live in big cities than in the countryside, because advanced society welfares are everywhere in big cities.（Word Count: 272）独立7-包含绝对词（never, always, only ,no longer,最高级等）.P92 2007.8.4 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Printed books will no longer exist.With the development of technology, digital books are increasingly coming into use while printed book are less used in our lives.It has been argued that printed books will no longer exist in the future.I disagree(with this opinion)although the statement has a grain of truth.First of all, admittedly, digital books have some advantages over printed books.First, it is cheaper to download a digital version from the internet than to buy a hardcover printed book.You may download Harry Potter for only half the price of the paper version.Second, the digital book is very convenient for us to carry because it is much lighter than the printed book.We can download thousands of articles into our mp4 or electronic books to read them everywhere instead of carrying several heavybooks.However, to say that printed books will disappear from our lives in the future is unacceptable.First, hardcover printed books are worth collecting.They are usually very valuable with their beautiful covers and plentiful contents.Second, the printed books made by(of)papers are good for people's eyes.If we stare at a digital book all the time, our eyes will be tired or even hurt.Reading for a long period may do enormous harms to people's health, especially to children.Third, printed books are of great importance in some special ceremonies.They are usually the symbols of holy things.It is ridiculous for a minister to read with a digital book in a church.T o sum up, although the digital books are more and more useful, it is sure that printed books will exist forever.(267)第二篇：托福 TPO31独立写作托福 TPO31独立写作题目Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the e specific reasons and examples to support your answer.托福 TPO31 独立写作范文：In modern society, there is no denying that our paces speed up.A small proportion of people who cannot keep up with this trend or resist the world for the fittest, may hold a viewpoint that a mutable society leads people to less satisfaction and mitigation of sense of happiness since such a world might cause the alienation between good fellows and contamination of our environment;however, in my view, it is not the case.As a matter of fact, in a world changing more rapidly, people tend to become satisfied much more easily.First illustration which can demonstrate my opinion can be the trail of technologicaldevelopment.In the past five decades, millions of new inventions had appeared, entering our daily life, making it much more convenient.T o name a good example, in 1896,Benz assembled the first three-wheel car in the world.Though it brought accidents and mortality to the world, we cannot deny the enjoyment of ferocious speed brought by cars, which made our jaunt convenient.We can simply drop by a old friend 100 miles, a distance taking at least half day before, away in one hour.Another good instance is the invention of smart phone.in 1972, Martin, the chief engineer in Moto devised the first portable telephone.Then, this innovation revolutionized out life.Just simply imagine what our life looked like without cell phones: people could not keep contact with their friends and exigent messages might be blocked.Then in 2007, Steve Jobs brought iPhone with Facetime to the world.The most significant aspect of Facetime is that this app allows us to communicate with actual image, not just voices.Then, how can we state that modern society steals the sense of fraternity among people? Second demonstration which can help me develop my view that a rapidly changing society makes people more satisfied is the use of new energy resources.We may still remember the Great Smog, one of the gravest air pollution accidents in our history due to the heavily gathered inversion layer of sulfur dioxide originated with burning of coal in 1950s, London.People died of respiratory diseases after inhalation of poisonous air.How can they live happily in a world brimmed with pollutions? But nowadays, we have developed new energy resources to tackle this problem such as hydropower and wind power.To name an example, in 2007, nuclear power plants generate 14% of the total electricity of the US, thus saving tons of coals and reducing the level ofinhalable particles.Recently, governments and organizations have taken measures to support researches of renewable resources and to find substitutes for fossil fuels.Natural reserves and sanctuaries are established, places of interest and spots are refurbished, and factories and manufacturers with pestilent exhaust are shut down.People therefore are provided with much more opportunities to relax by enjoying the beauty of nature.T o draw a conclusion, in a world that is rapidly changing, we are offered a variety of brand-new experiences and highly evolved products, which make life much easier than before.We are in a world filled with convenience brought by high technologies that develop so fast.Then, how can we blame on the changing world while enjoying happiness and satisfactions originated from them? 第三篇：托福独立写作题型分析[推荐]吕欣泽：浅谈托福独立写作题型及策略2013-07-30 10:44小马过河admin分享到：摘要：从题型上来讲，托福独立写作分为绝对型、对比型和隐藏all型。

新版托福综合写作范文

新版托福综合写作范文对于新版托福综合写作范文，我可以提供一个示例来帮助你更好地理解。

请注意，以下示例仅供参考，实际的范文可能因题目要求和个人写作风格而有所不同。

题目，阅读材料和听力材料中提到了大学是否应该提供免费的健身房设施。

请阐述你对这一问题的观点。

范文：在阅读材料中，提到了大学提供免费健身房设施的好处。

首先，免费健身房可以促进学生的身体健康。

大学生活充满压力，提供健身房设施可以帮助他们缓解压力，保持健康的身体状态。

其次，健身房可以成为社交的场所，学生可以在这里结识新朋友，建立健康的社交关系。

最后，健身房可以提供锻炼和健身的机会，有助于学生养成良好的生活习惯。

然而，在听力材料中，提到了免费健身房设施可能会增加学校的开支。

学校可能需要裁减其他项目或者提高学费来弥补这一开支。

此外，听力材料还提到了并非所有学生都会利用健身房设施，因此提供免费健身房可能会造成资源的浪费。

在我看来，尽管提供免费健身房设施可能会增加学校的开支，但其益处远大于弊端。

学校可以通过其他方式来节省开支，例如削减不必要的行政开支。

此外，大学的使命之一就是培养学生全面发展，提供健身房设施可以帮助学生在身体上得到锻炼，并且有助于他们建立良好的生活习惯。

因此，我支持大学提供免费健身房设施。

总而言之，提供免费健身房设施对大学生的身体健康和社交生活都有积极的影响。

尽管可能会增加学校的开支，但这是值得的，因为学生的健康和全面发展是大学教育的重要组成部分。

希望学校能够权衡利弊，为学生提供更好的健身条件。

托福作文写作范文详解impro

托福作文写作范文详解In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.1. 题目翻译：讨论人们现在长寿的原因。

2. 审题关键词：Living longer; Life style3. 论证分析：正: The first reason is due to the miracles of modern medicine.正: A second reason why people are living longer now is due to the increasing awareness of the importance and need to take better care of themselves and their health.正：The third reason is that we now have more ways to enjoy the beauty of life.范文：Today people are living to be much older than ever before. Some of the main reasons for this are the improved health care and better nutrition available to everyone.此段结构本段是一个分总的结构。

首先第一句话提供了要讨论的背景，引出了要讨论的话题。

那么接下来第二句话摆明了作者对此的观点，即人们生活的更长是因为他们更加健康而且摄入了更多营养。

此段功能本段是文章的首段，引出了要讨论的问题和作者对此的观点看法。

Medical care is more available to people now than in the past. Although not everyone can get the best health care, everyone can get basic heath care and advice. When people are seriously ill, they can go to a public hospital and receive treatment. Years ago, health care wasn't available to everyone. Some people didn't live near a doctor or a hospital, and others couldn't pay for the care they needed. They made do with herbal medicines or folk remedies. Of course, some of these worked, but not for the more serious diseases. The quality of medical care has improved. That's also a factor in longevity. Doctors know more now about what causes disease and how to treat them., Years ago, doctorsonly knew about the most basic diseases and cures. Medicine was not very advanced. You could die from something as simple as an infection from a cut. Now we have antibiotics and other medicines to help cure infections.此段结构本段是一个总分的结构。

新托福考试专项进阶-中级写作-概述说明以及解释

新托福考试专项进阶-中级写作-概述说明以及解释1.引言1.1 概述在"新托福考试专项进阶-中级写作"这篇文章中，我们将探讨新托福考试中级写作的相关内容。

新托福考试是目前全球范围内广为接受和认可的英语水平考试，其中写作部分是考生们需要迈过的一道重要关卡。

在本文的正文部分，我们将重点介绍三个要点，分别是第一个要点、第二个要点和第三个要点。

通过深入研究这些要点，我们旨在帮助考生们全面提升中级写作能力。

在结论部分，我们将对本文进行总结，并对所述要点进行结果分析。

同时，我们还将对未来的展望给出一些建议和思考。

本文的目的是帮助考生们更好地理解新托福考试中级写作的要求和考点，通过提供相关的策略和技巧，使考生们能够在考试中取得更好的成绩。

在接下来的内容中，我们将逐一介绍这些要点，并提供详细的解释和示例，希望这些内容能为考生们的中级写作提供实质性的帮助和指导。

1.2 文章结构文章结构是指文章的组织和安排方式，它决定了文章的逻辑顺序和内容呈现方式。

一个清晰和有条理的结构可以使读者更容易理解和跟随文章的思路。

在本篇文章中，我们将按照以下结构安排写作内容。

首先，我们将引言部分作为文章的开头。

引言部分需要包括一些背景信息和说明文章的目的。

在本文中，我们将介绍新托福考试中级写作的专项进阶，以及本文的目的是为了提供一些关键要点和技巧，以帮助读者提高中级写作能力。

接下来，我们的正文部分将会包括三个主要要点。

每个要点将会单独作为一个小节，并在正文中详细阐述。

我们将提供一些具体例子和解释来说明这些要点。

每个要点的标题将说明其主题，读者可以清楚地知道该部分将会讨论的内容。

然后，我们将进行结论部分的总结。

总结部分将回顾文章中的主要观点和要点，并对它们进行简要的概括。

在结果分析部分，我们将分析我们在正文中提出的要点，并讨论它们对读者的影响和意义。

最后，在对未来的展望部分，我们将讨论中级写作的进一步发展和提高，以及可能的应用领域。

托福说明文写作范文格式

托福说明文写作范文格式Ｓome people like to do only what they already do well. Ｏther people prefer to try new things and take risks. Ｗhich do you prefer? Ｕse specific reasons and examples to support your choice. Ｍany people like to do things that they already do well, many others like to take risks to do things new. Ｂoth sides are supported by good reasons. Ｆor my part, Ｉthink it depends on what kind of things that people in the face of. Ｉprefer to do things that Ｉ already do well when Ｉ should do things to benefit the others. Ｏn the other hand, Ｉ would like to take risks to try something new in order to improve myself, that means Ｉ will be the person who benefit from what Ｉ do.Ｐeople are all live in the society and have relationships with each other. Ｓo what one do can influence the others directly or indirectly. Ｉn this case, people should do their best to benefit and convenient for the others. Ｉf one does not have enough experience and skills to do things well, the people around them maybe complain or they will ruin their plan. Ｉs it very nice to share their own risks to the others to get more experience for themselves? Ａbsolutely not. Ｔhe society or the small groups can run well only as all the members in it dothe things they can do well.Ｔo benefit oneself, people should do something new. Ｎobody can learn more from the things they already familiar with. Ｔhere are always much more challenges to do something new. Ｂut after overcoming all the difficulties, one can get more new knowledge or experience, and get themselves improved. Ｎo matter what the result it is, success or failure, the course always gives the leaner a great lesson. Ｎothing ventured, nothing gained. Ｉf one never takes any risks, one will never have any success.Ｐersonal experience leads me to conclude that if Ｉ do things to benefit others, Ｉ choose to do things Ｉ already do well, otherwise,Ｉ will choose to take risks to do things new. Ｉn that way, Ｉ can improve myself.[托福说明文写作范文格式]相关文章：。

托福说明文写作

托福说明文写作托福说明文写作范文Some people like to do only what they already do well. Other people prefer to try new things and take risks. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice. Many people like to do things that they already do well, many others like to take risks to do things new. Both sides are supported by good reasons. For my part, I think it depends on what kind of things that people in the face of. I prefer to do things that I already do well when I should do things to benefit the others. On the other hand, I would like to take risks to try something new in order to improve myself, that means I will be the person who benefit from what I do.People are all live in the society and have relationships with each other. So what one do can influence the others directly or indirectly. In this case, people should do their best to benefit and convenient for the others. If one does not have enough experience and skills to do things well, the people around them maybe complain or they will ruin their plan. Is it very nice to share their own risks to the others to get more experience for themselves? Absolutely not. The society or the small groups can run well only as all the members in it do the things they can do well.To benefit oneself, people should do something new. Nobody can learn more from the things they already familiar with. There are always much more challenges to do something new. But after overcoming all the difficulties, one can get more new knowledge or experience, and get themselves improved. No matter what the result it is, success or failure, the course alwaysgives the leaner a great lesson. Nothing ventured, nothing gained. If one never takes any risks, one will never have any success.Personal experience leads me to conclude that if I do things to benefit others, I choose to do things I already do well, otherwise,I will choose to take risks to do things new. In that way, I can improve myself.。

托福作文中说明文

托福作文中说明文托福作文中说明文精选范文在平日的学习、工作和生活里，大家都尝试过写作文吧，作文根据体裁的'不同可以分为记叙文、说明文、应用文、议论文。

一篇什么样的作文才能称之为优秀作文呢？下面是小编为大家整理的托福作文中说明文精选范文，欢迎大家借鉴与参考，希望对大家有所帮助。

Should a person with an incurable illness spend his last days in a hospital where he or she can receive the best possible medical care? Or should this person be permitted to die at home? These two questions are difficult to answer and may cause some heated arguments. My view is that we have to consider two different situations and make our decisions accordingly.The first possible situation is that the patient is still conscious and able to express himself. In this case, we should talk to him and find out his own opinion. If he wishes to stay in a hospital, we should send him there and try to get the best medical care for him no matter how much it will cost. If he wants to stay at home, we should show respect for his opinion and do our best at home for him no matter how troublesome it may be. The rationale of this view is that the best we can do for a dying person is to satisfy his last wishes except when he wants anthanasia in a country in which it is still illegal.The other possible situation is that the patient is no longer able to express himself. In this case, it is better to let him stay at home and spend his last days with his relatives. This view is based on the following considerations. This first is that since the patient is going to die anyway, it is better for him to die at home instead of a place where his relatives are not allowed to stay with him all the time. The second is that it would be a waste of money, time,and energy to hospitalize the patient. The third is that what a hospital can do for a dying person can only bring more suffering to him. For instance, operations or intravenous drips are useless and painful and fist aids applied to him can only make him live longer to suffer more. The best thing a hospital can do is to reduce his pains in his last days, but this can also be done at home.In short, my view is that when the questions are considered objectively, the answer is clear: it is better for him, for his relatives, and for society if the patient stays and dies at home. However, as human beings, we cannot discuss a patient without emotional considerations. To fully understand this position, we can just imagine how we would feel if one of our realties were suffering from an incurable illness.。