浙江省嵊州市高三英语复习写作指导课件 Lesson 2 The Basic Structures of Letters
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高三英语基础写作basic writing课件
（2005年广东高考题）Michael是一名美国中学生，在学 校里选修汉语。他利用暑假到中国进修，希望进一步
了解中国文化。有一天，他看到下面有关成语的漫画， 不大明白其中的意思。请你用英语把漫画所表达的故事 和寓意写成一段短文，向他解释。
注意：1．词数：在80—120词之间； 2．参考词汇：bump into(撞上)，hoe(锄头)
写作要求：请根据以上文字提示用5个句子来描述 故事里的全部内容。注意故事的连贯性和文章的 过渡。
• ①【思路导航】 • 这是一篇记叙文，是一则寓言故事：掩耳盗铃。这里要求用5句话完成，只要抓住记
叙文的要素：时间、人物、地点和发生了什么事就行了。在这里要注意故事情节的完 整性，要有头有尾，但不可瞎编或增多故事情节。考试主要抓住故事的要素和以下几 个要点即可完成一篇漂亮的文章。
基础写作步骤
六、誊写
注重基础,单词短语多。 2. 培养写句意识,以动词为中心。
Summaries:
1. Use different ways to describe one sentence. 2. Making sentences by using non-predicate. 3.Sentence patterns are always useful.
基础写作步骤
一、审题
理清文字信息
判断文章格式、人称、要点、时态、
基础写作步骤
二、抓要点
确定主要行为
用一两个词或短语 写出每句的要点
基础写作步骤
三、扩展成句
形成基本语义单位
用一些简单句、不同句型、不同句式或 高级词汇将要点扩展成句
基础写作步骤
四、连句成文
时间 空间 细节 连贯 呼应
背景（适当增加时间、地点条件等）、 逻辑关系、开头与结尾、巧用连接词和 过渡句
浙江省嵊州市高三英语复习写作指导课件 Lesson 1 Diaries
▪ A diary is composed of two parts. One is the information of the date (and the day of the week, if necessary), and what the weather is like in a separate line; the other is the body of the dairy with what has happened and what you have thought about.
Further PracticeSelf-assessmen
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Looking Ahead (Aims and Contents)
▪ Know the importance of keeping diaries. ▪ Get to know the structure of diaries. ▪ Learn how to write diaries.
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பைடு நூலகம்
Ready to Write
1. Learning Focus
▪ Dairy writing is a very powerful tool in improving your English writing.
▪ Any thing happened or whatever you have thought about may be put in the diaries.
▪ A diary must record authentic activities and thoughts.
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Further PracticeSelf-assessmen
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Looking Ahead (Aims and Contents)
▪ Know the importance of keeping diaries. ▪ Get to know the structure of diaries. ▪ Learn how to write diaries.
English Practical Writing
பைடு நூலகம்
Ready to Write
1. Learning Focus
▪ Dairy writing is a very powerful tool in improving your English writing.
▪ Any thing happened or whatever you have thought about may be put in the diaries.
▪ A diary must record authentic activities and thoughts.
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浙江省嵊州市高三英语复习写作指导课件：Lesson 1 Notices and Posters
from those C-F on Page 60-61 and put it in the way of a notice.
Step 1 Put the fragmental words and phrases into sentences.
Ready to Write
1. Learning Focus
➢ Either a notice or a poster is to publicize or advertise something such as movies, sports games, shows, lectures, or meetings and etc.
1) Expressions for time
1) A meeting will be held on Friday. 2) There will be a meeting tomorrow afternoon. 3) A meeting is to be held on Sep. 9th. 4) A lecture/talk on … will be given …. 5) An English speaking contest will be organized by the Students’ Union in order to improve our spoken English. 6) All the teachers/students are requested/expected/hoped to be present on time. 7) Everyone is welcome. 8) Those who wish to go must gather at the gate of our school at 9.
Step 1 Put the fragmental words and phrases into sentences.
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1. Learning Focus
➢ Either a notice or a poster is to publicize or advertise something such as movies, sports games, shows, lectures, or meetings and etc.
1) Expressions for time
1) A meeting will be held on Friday. 2) There will be a meeting tomorrow afternoon. 3) A meeting is to be held on Sep. 9th. 4) A lecture/talk on … will be given …. 5) An English speaking contest will be organized by the Students’ Union in order to improve our spoken English. 6) All the teachers/students are requested/expected/hoped to be present on time. 7) Everyone is welcome. 8) Those who wish to go must gather at the gate of our school at 9.
浙江省嵊州市高三英语复习写作指导课件：Lesson 2 Telephone Messages
Here is a sample of a telephone message /memo on Page 81.
▪ Keep a pen and note pad by the telephone. To get the message accurately (such as the caller’s name, title, the company, telephone number), the message should be repeated to the caller to confirm.
and making calls.
Approaching the Topic
Please read the material on Page 80 and answer the questions below. 1. Can you tell what it is?
This is _a__te_le_p_h_o_n_e__m_e_s_s_a_g_e_. _. 2. What is the use of it?
▪ Understand the purposes of telephone messages.
▪ Learn the style of telephone messages. ▪ Write effective telephone messages. ▪ Use telephone messages skills while receiving
▪ Sometimes it is important to write down a specific direction or message. This must express clearly and briefly what the caller wishes to communicate.
浙江省嵊州市高三英语复习写作指导课件 Lesson 2 Farewell Speeches
eful Expressions
1) Today we are gathering here to have a farewell party for sb.
2) We are very sorry to day good-bye to sb. 3) We are going to miss sb. 4) Let’s express our heartfelt thanks to sb. and
You toured our campus, talked and had an exciting match with us. We really like you very much. It is a great chance for us to learn about people from afar and establish a good friendship between us.
Unit 8 Speeches
Lesson 1 Welcome Speeches Lesson 2 Farewell Speeches
Lesson 2 Farewell Speeches Warming-up
Answer the following questions: 1. Have you ever written and made a farewell speech? 2. On what occasions do we deliver a farewell speech? 3. What do people often put in their farewell speech?
Step 4: Cross-check your draft according to the checklist on Page 108. Mark the mistakes with the symbols for correction in Appendix II.
浙江省嵊州市高三英语复习写作指导课件：Lesson 1 Notes of Asking for Leave
▪ Notes can be very helpful in requesting a leave as well as in other occasions of informal communication.
(2) ______________
(1) ___________
(3) __________________________________ _____________________________________ _____________________________________
Step 1: Read the situation carefully and list the points which would be put into your note.
Step 2: Organize the points listed in the proper form.
Step 3: Now please exchange your draft with your partner and check his/her draft according to the checklist on Page 76.
I enclose a doctor’s certificate of advice. Huang Jie
Further Practice
1. Please write a note with the situation below.
Approaching the Topic Exercises 1-2 (pp. 72-74)
Conclusion: Notes of asking for leave may be categorized into note of asking for a sick leave, for an extended leave and for a business leave. Notes of asking for leave should include enough and accurate reasons. Usually in a note of asking for leave, a doctor’s certificate or a medical certificate is enclosed with the note.
(2) ______________
(1) ___________
(3) __________________________________ _____________________________________ _____________________________________
Step 1: Read the situation carefully and list the points which would be put into your note.
Step 2: Organize the points listed in the proper form.
Step 3: Now please exchange your draft with your partner and check his/her draft according to the checklist on Page 76.
I enclose a doctor’s certificate of advice. Huang Jie
Further Practice
1. Please write a note with the situation below.
Approaching the Topic Exercises 1-2 (pp. 72-74)
Conclusion: Notes of asking for leave may be categorized into note of asking for a sick leave, for an extended leave and for a business leave. Notes of asking for leave should include enough and accurate reasons. Usually in a note of asking for leave, a doctor’s certificate or a medical certificate is enclosed with the note.
浙江省嵊州市2018届高三英语复习写作指导课件：Lesson 1 Summaries
Unit 4 Summaries and Book Reports
Lesson 1 Summaries Lesson 2 Book Reports
Basic Structure of Lesson 1
Looking Ahead
Approaching the Topic Ready to Write
A summary can be written in the form of an outline
We’d better limit our summary no longer than a third of the original passage
English Practical Writing
– give the information of the author, the title of the article and the publisher
–…
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6
My Writing
Step 1
Read and understand a passage. Step 2
2. After you have read the summary of Jane Eyre, write a summary of a novel you like best.
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Self-assessment
Reflect yourself， encourage yourself, and improve yourself!
Write down or underline the key points while you are reading Step 3
Lesson 1 Summaries Lesson 2 Book Reports
Basic Structure of Lesson 1
Looking Ahead
Approaching the Topic Ready to Write
A summary can be written in the form of an outline
We’d better limit our summary no longer than a third of the original passage
English Practical Writing
– give the information of the author, the title of the article and the publisher
–…
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6
My Writing
Step 1
Read and understand a passage. Step 2
2. After you have read the summary of Jane Eyre, write a summary of a novel you like best.
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8
Self-assessment
Reflect yourself， encourage yourself, and improve yourself!
Write down or underline the key points while you are reading Step 3
浙江省嵊州市高三英语复习写作指导课件 Lesson 2 Telephone Messages
It is used when _a_t_e_le_p_h_o_n_e_i_s_a_n_s_w_e_r_e_d_o_n____ (the situation) behalf of another person. 3. When daddy comes back and read the message, he would _c_a_ll_U_n_c_l_e_L_in_g__Y_u_t_o_c_h_e_c_k.whether he had
Here is a sample of a telephone message /memo on Page 81.
lost his briefcase.
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
Reference
FROM: Abel
To: Kevin
TIME: Sunday Morning
MESSAGE: Call Abel this afternoon at 6670730
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Learning Focus
▪ When a telephone is answered on behalf of another person, a clear and concise telephone message or telephone memo should be written.
▪ Keep a pen and note pad by the telephone. To get the message accurately (such as the caller’s name, title, the company, telephone number), the message should be repeated to the caller to confirm.
Here is a sample of a telephone message /memo on Page 81.
lost his briefcase.
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
Reference
FROM: Abel
To: Kevin
TIME: Sunday Morning
MESSAGE: Call Abel this afternoon at 6670730
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Learning Focus
▪ When a telephone is answered on behalf of another person, a clear and concise telephone message or telephone memo should be written.
▪ Keep a pen and note pad by the telephone. To get the message accurately (such as the caller’s name, title, the company, telephone number), the message should be repeated to the caller to confirm.
浙江省嵊州市高三英语复习写作指导课件 Lesson 1 Welcome Speeches
eful Expressions 1)Expressions for greetings
Ladies and gentleman; fellow students; colleagues; classmates; distinguished guests, Mr. Chairman, honorable judges; …
Basic Structure of Lesson 1
Looking Ahead
Approaching the Topic
Ready to Write
My Writing
Further Practice
Self-assessment
Looking Ahead (Aims and Contents)
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
My Writing
Please write a welcome speech according to the following table.
Arrangement for Australian Students’ Visit
Time
Activity
8:30-9:30 Touring the campus
▪ It is a good chance for us to gather together with / to see/ to meet (here put the guest’s name) here today.
▪ Let’s welcome (here put the guest’s name) with our warmest applause.
▪ First of all, allow me on behalf of (here put the name of your institution) to welcome (here put the guest’s name).
浙江2017届高三英语复习写作指导课件Lesson 2 The Basic Structures of Letters(17张PPT)
Jenny
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Approaching the Topic
Exercise on p. 21 Work in groups and discuss how to improve it.
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Ready to Write Learn the structure of a personal letter and a business letter.
Get to know the components of the letter.
Learn to write letters correctly.
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Approaching the Topic
People make judgments about you not only from what you say in your letters, but also from the way you write your letters. So if you want to write great letters, first learn how to set out your letters correctly.
Looking Ahead
Approaching the Topic
Ready to Write
My Writing
Further Practice
Self-assessment
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Looking Ahead (Aims and Contents) Understand the structure of the letter.
2017届高三英语复习写作指导课件 Lesson 2 The Basic Structures of Letters
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My Writing
Step 1
Help Jenny find out what’s wrong with her letters on Page 15 and 21.
Focus: Make sure the correct ways to write Heading, esp. Date, Inside address and Complimentary closing.
Yours faithfully, Jenny Jackson
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Further Practice
Xiao Tao is a fan of Harry Potter, and he wanted to write a letter to its author J. K. Rowling to invite her to give a speech in his school. Read Xiao Tao’s letter carefully and try to point out the mistakes he made in the letter.
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Exercise on p. 21 Reread Jenny’s letters (on P. 15) carefully and find out Jenny’s mistakes in the format.
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some even have read all your books. We are all fascinated by them. We
My Writing
Step 1
Help Jenny find out what’s wrong with her letters on Page 15 and 21.
Focus: Make sure the correct ways to write Heading, esp. Date, Inside address and Complimentary closing.
Yours faithfully, Jenny Jackson
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Further Practice
Xiao Tao is a fan of Harry Potter, and he wanted to write a letter to its author J. K. Rowling to invite her to give a speech in his school. Read Xiao Tao’s letter carefully and try to point out the mistakes he made in the letter.
Engllish Practical Writing
Exercise on p. 21 Reread Jenny’s letters (on P. 15) carefully and find out Jenny’s mistakes in the format.
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some even have read all your books. We are all fascinated by them. We
绍兴市高三英语英语高考复习研讨会课件：作文讲评
（陈敏） We can be more sociable. （封雅虹） Exchanging ideas inspires members to come up with new
and better approaches to solving the problem.（余雪芳） When discussing with others, we can’t help wasting time by
Every student will go to the society, and working in a team can improve your ability of communicating with others. What’s more, you may feel happier with many friends around you.
As we know, we are all a part of our class or company, and when we work in a team, we may make the class or the company better. Also we will get more ways to get our work done so that we can choose the best way to get our work done.
清楚的逻辑关系才能准确表达思 想
As a result of not being able to concentrate my mind when being surrounded by others, working in a team is not so reasonable for me.
3、句子拖沓 一句话表述一个核心意思
and better approaches to solving the problem.（余雪芳） When discussing with others, we can’t help wasting time by
Every student will go to the society, and working in a team can improve your ability of communicating with others. What’s more, you may feel happier with many friends around you.
As we know, we are all a part of our class or company, and when we work in a team, we may make the class or the company better. Also we will get more ways to get our work done so that we can choose the best way to get our work done.
清楚的逻辑关系才能准确表达思 想
As a result of not being able to concentrate my mind when being surrounded by others, working in a team is not so reasonable for me.
3、句子拖沓 一句话表述一个核心意思
浙江省绍兴市高三英语高考复习研讨会课件Reading and writing(2)
the location of Jiande description of this area Surrounded by, crystal clear water… rich local products in Jiande is home to… the purposes of coming to Jiande …to visit some scenic spots…
ChangbaiShan
spring
summer
The Lake of tumn
Read the text quickly,
answer: What is a nature reserve? A place kept in its natural state for people to enjoy. Find out the key word of each paragraph.
in the golden tour line "Hangzhou-Qian Dao Hu -Huang Shan "
A famous story about the Xin’an Ri
late Tang Dynasty change white ribbon(丝带) into a bridge help the leader of the uprising(起义) Huangcao cross the Xin’an River pursued(追捕) by Tang troops be regarded as symbol of beauty and kindness erect a statue commemorate (树立) (纪念)
…
the most popular attraction is the Xin’an River
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have lots of questions to ask you, such as when you began to learn to write and how you got the fantastic ideas for your books. We all hope that you
can visit us in China and give us a lecture. It would be wonderful if you
Yours faithfully, Jenny Jackson
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Further Practice
Xiao Tao is a fan of Harry Potter, and he wanted to write a letter to its author J. K. Rowling to invite her to give a speech in his school. Read Xiao Tao’s letter carefully and try to point out the mistakes he made in the letter.
could.
▪
Looking forward Leabharlann o your letter.▪
▪
Yours, Xiao Tao.
▪
2003-6-10
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Check your answer with the reference
Class 4, Grade 3 No. 8 Kunming Middle School Kunming, Yunnan China 10th June, 2003 ▪ Dear J. K. Rowling, ▪… ▪ ▪ Yours sincerely, Xiao Tao ▪
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▪ Dear J.K. Rowling,
▪
My name is Xiao Tao. And I’m one of the many Harry Porter fans in
China. All of my schoolmates have seen your Harry Porter movies and some even have read all your books. We are all fascinated by them. We
Looking Ahead
Approaching the Topic
Ready to Write
My Writing Further Practice Self-assessment
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Looking Ahead (Aims and Contents) Understand the structure of the letter. Get to know the components of the letter. Learn to write letters correctly.
Learn the structure of a personal letter and a business letter.
Salutation
Heading
Body
Heading Inside address Salutation
Body
Complimentary closing
Signature
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Approaching the Topic
Exercise on p. 21 Reread Jenny’s letters (on P. 15) carefully and find out Jenny’s mistakes in the format.
Dear Mr. Smith, My Aunt Susan has told me that you have a vacancy for a secretary and I should
like to offer myself to the post. I am twenty-three years old and just graduated from the Cambridge University.
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Self-assessment
Reflect yourself， encourage yourself, and improve yourself!
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PS
Complimentary closing Signature
PS
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Finish the exercises on PP. 22-23
1. Find out and write down the six parts of Paul’s letter. 2. Find out and write down the six parts of Sharon
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My Writing
Step 1
Help Jenny find out what’s wrong with her letters on Page 15 and 21.
Focus: Make sure the correct ways to write Heading, esp. Date, Inside address and Complimentary closing.
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My Writing参考答案
Mr. John Smith The Atlantic Trading Co. Ltd., No. 45 Victoria Street London
20 West 15Avenue London 9th Oct., 2003
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10/9/2003
Dear John, My aunt Susan told me
that you are looking for a secretary. Is that true?
I want this job very much. And I’ll work deadly hard if you give me the chance to try.
Love, Jenny
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Approaching the Topic
Exercise on p. 21 Work in groups and discuss how to improve it.
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Ready to Write
Cates’ letter. 3. Fill in the blanks with the names of the components
of a personal letter. 4. Compare the two letters and tell the differences
between a business letter and a personal one. Make a discussion with your partner.
Unit 2 Letters
Lesson 1 A brief Introduction to Letters Lesson 2 The Basic Structure of Letters Lesson 3 Letters for Various Occasions
Lesson 2 The Basic Structure of Letters
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Step 2 With what you have learned above, check the format of the letter you rewrote for Jenny in Approaching the Topic.
Step 3 Write out your revised letter and check it with the reference.
And I am always looking forward to working in a trade company. If I have the chance to work in your company, I would work quite hard.
I hope I may have the chance for an interview, when I can explain my qualifications more fully.
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Approaching the Topic
People make judgments about you not only from what you say in your letters, but also from the way you write your letters. So if you want to write great letters, first learn how to set out your letters correctly.