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21. Help others can make us happy. And how we can volunteer well is a problem. Manypeople misunderstand why it is to be a volunteer. They don’t know how to be a true volunteer.So I have some suggestion.First of all, for a volunteer, you must be kind-hearted. If you want to be a good volunteer, youmust help somebody who is in need of help without hesitation. What’s more, you can be avolunteer whatever you are and whoever you are. A good volunteer knows that helping others isgood thing.I want to volunteer to teach children in poor mountainous areas. I believe that morepeople devote themselves to voluntary work, our world will become more beautiful. Go and do it.We can be volunteer well.!第一句：Help改成Helping第二句：And 改成But第三句：what 改成why第五句：suggestion 改成suggestions第六句：for 改成as第七句：somebody 改成anybody第八句：whatever 改成wherever第九句：在good thing 前加 a第十一句：that 后加if 或把that 改成if第十三句: 删除be22. Recently, I visited the worst quake-striking area in Suchuan Province—Beichuan County. Threeyears after the great earthquake, Beichuan County has taken on the new look. Up to now, 80% ofthe reconstruction projects have completed. The newly-built Beichuan Middle School is verylarge and it caught our eyes at the moment we arrived there. All the teaching facilities in theschool have been updated, and over 5,000 students can study here. The people in BeichuanCounty are leading a happy life, and their annual income doubled in the past three years.Beichuan County and its people have risen completely from the ruin of the earthquake, and sodid Sichuan Province. I feel proud of it and I believe they are able to make much more achievements in the future.第一句：earthquake-striking 改成earthquake-stricken第二句：第二个the 改成a第三句：have 后加been第四句：删除at第五句：here 改成there第六句：doubled 改成have doubled第七句：ruin 改成ruins第七句：did 改成has第八句：it 改成them第八句：much 改成manyHelp others can make us happy. And how we can volunteer well is a problem. Manypeople misunderstand why it is to be a vo lunteer. They don’t know how to be a true volunteer. So I have some suggestion.First of all, for a volunteer, you must be kind-hearted. If you want to be a good volunteer, you must help somebody who is in need of help without hesitation. What’s mo re, you can be a volunteer whatever you are and whoever you are. A good volunteer knows that helping others is good thing.I want to volunteer to teach children in poor mountainous areas. I believe that morepeople devote themselves to voluntary work, our world will become more beautiful. Go and do it. We can be volunteer well.!第一句：Help改成Helping第二句：And 改成But第三句：what 改成why第五句：suggestion 改成suggestions第六句：for 改成as第七句：somebody 改成anybody第八句：whatever 改成wherever第九句：在good thing 前加 a第十一句：that 后加if 或把that 改成if第十三句: 删除be23. I often quarrel with my mother about if I can watch TV after school. She holds view that Senior Three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, I’ll unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eyes. And I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works. Besides , it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus , we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.KeyI often quarrel with my mother about if I can watch TV after school. She hold∧view thatwhether theSenior Three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. Itfullseems to me that once I am allowed to do that, I’ll∧unable to control myself and forget all about her bemy study. She also thinks it is bad for my eyes. And I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion,Butwatch TV can se t my mind at rest after a day’s hard works. Besides , it is important for us to know watching workwhat had happened at home and at abroad. Thus , we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.Has 删除at24. Some day I happened to find a chatting room in my QQ, there people were chatting in English.I tried to chat with some of them . To my surprised, I found the oral English of some junior students was better than me. I asked them advice and they told me to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ. Day by day I learned from many useful words and expressions. With time went by ,I found I could even communicate some college students freely.KeySome day I happened to find a chatting room in my QQ, there people were chatting in English. One whereI tried to chat with some of them . To my surprised, I found the oral English of some juniorsurprisestduents was better than me. I asked them∧advice and they told me to practise more on QQ.mine forBut every day after that I would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ.So practisingDay by day I learned from many useful words and expressions. With time went by ,删除from As 或者went 改成goingI found I could even communicate∧some college students freely.With25. （2011 海口模拟）It was snowing heavily Monday morning. Li Hua was at the bus stop, waited for Bus No.601to go to school. After the while, the bus came and she got on it. There are many passengers in thebus. Some were talking but some were looking out of the windows. Suddenly the bus stopped. Thedriver turned around and said, “Sorry. The bus has been broken down. Please get off and help pushthe bus.” When we heard this, Li Hua and the other passenger got off the bus. They worked hardlytogether, pushing the bus slowly backward. Soon the bus was running again. All the passengerswere smiling and then sun was shining.1. On Monday;2. waited—waiting;3. the—a ;4. are—were;5. but—while;6. 去掉been;7. we—they;8. passenger—passengers;9. hardly—hard;10. backward—forward26. (2011琼海一模) When I was a child, my mom was pushed me to study hard, hoped I could get a chance to goto college. I experience pressure for the first time. I did that my mom expected because I didn’twant to let her down. I was born in a poor family, and I really knew life was not easy. All the thingmy mother did were the result of her hope that I could lead better life in the future. As the sayinggo, “No pains, no gains.” I was finally able to meet my mother expectations and went to college. Thanks for my mother’s push and pressure, I made it. Now, I no longer think pressure is a goodthing.1. 去掉was2. hoped—hoping;3. experience—experienced4. that—what;5. thing—things6. lead a better;7. go—goes;8. mother—mother’s9. for—to 10 good-bad(2011贺兰一模)Dear editor,A new building is being build opposite to our building, and our peace life is over. Every daytrucks run back and forth, raise a cloud of dust. Building materials , such as stones, are here or there. Besides, loud noises can be heard all the day. What was worse, still at night, they don’t stop working. The loud noises make it possible for me to do my lessons. We can’t go to sleep either. My father went to have talk with the director of the building site about the matter. In my father’ssurprise, he just said they had no other choice. What shall we do it now?1. build—built;2. peace-peaceful;3. raise—raising;4. or—and;5. was—is;6. possible—impossible;7. have a talk;8. In—To9. choice-choices 10. 去掉itThis morning I got up early and went to school as usually, only to find there were nobody in the classroom because it is Sunday. “How a bad memory I have!” I couldn’t help laughing. Stand in front of the school gate, I began to wonder what to do next. Suddenly a good idea occurs to me. “Why not get together with some good friends for a picnic in such a fine weather?” I immediately telephoned some of my best friends, but they all agreed to join me. About two hours late, wefinally arrived a pleasant park with trees and flowers here and there. We really enjoyed us greatly.1. usually—usual2. were-was;3. How—What;4. stand—standing;5. occurs—occurred;6. 去掉a7. but—and;8. late—later;9. arrived at10. us—ourselves28. (2011咸阳一模)Time and tide want no man. My mother is becoming a middle-age woman quietly. She had been busy running after us all the years. My father is very busy every day outside. But the heavy burden falls on y mother’s shoulder. Because my school is far from my home, I have to go to school by the train and my mother sees me off at the station every time. I often choose a seat where is close to the window, so I can see her. However, I always can’t help run tears fro my eyes. All thebuilding and people outside the window disappear. I wave gentle to my mother and I look at hertill the view of her back disappears. Up to now, even if he is busy, she still does it as usual. Theview of my mother’s back will never change in my heart.1. wait for ;2. middle-age—middle-aged;3. had—has;4. But—So ;5. shoulder-shoulders;6. where—which/ that;7. run—running;8. gentle-gently9. he—she 10 by train 去掉the29 (2011长春外国语学校模拟)China was the first in the world to discover rockets, and the first “astronaut” was also a Chinese. In the lately 14th century, a man named Wan Hu had himself tied to special chair, the back of that was fitted with 47 original rockets. When he grasped the huge kites on both side, he hoped that the rockets will advance him, and that the kites would lift him into the sky. He died. Therefore, his brave attempt has been acknowledged today. The international community has been named a crater (火山口) on the moon in him. Up to now China has launched three manspaceships.1. discover—invent;2. lately—late;3. a special chair;4. that—which;5. side—sides;6. will—would;7. Therefore—However;8. 去掉been9. in—after/ for 10. man—manned30. 2011吉林实验中学一模：Dear Mr Anderson,I’m not sure whether you can remember me, and we met in Bethany last year. It was at your daughter wedding. You and me had a pleasant talk and I told you a little about my job as reporter for the New York Times. At that time I do like to stay in New York, but nowI’d like to get a job back in my town. My problem is that have been away for a longer time that I have not some job contacts (关系) in Bethany. That’s why I’m writing for you. I wouldappreciate if you could put me in touch with anyone who could help me and advise me.1. and-but;2. daughter-daughters;3. me-I4. reporter-a reporter;5. do-did6. that—that I7. longer-long;8. some-any;9. for—to; 10. 加it31. 2011陕西长安模拟All of us know the old saying “ Practice makes perfect.”. it tells us unless we want torealize our aim, we should practice , and one day we will make it. It’s easy to understand. Once I wanted to learn swimming. At first I found difficult to control my body. I just sank into the water. I feel very frightened. Then I watched others who were good at them and asked them the key to succeed. I went to the swimming pool every day, learned from them and practiced. A day, when my friend pushed me into the swimming pool., I suddenly foundthat I can swim. How exciting I was! Now I can swim much more better than before.1. make-makes;2. unless-if3. 加it;4. feel—felt5. them-it;6. succeed- success7. A-One8. can-could;9. exciting-excited; 10. 去掉more32. 2011哈师大附中I firmly believe that everyone in the world loves their mother. So am I . My mother is a ordinary teacher. She always works hard, just as other mothers do every day. In fact, she isn’t good health. She had been suffering from arthritis （关节炎）for many years. Despite of this, she never stops working or giving up hope. I still remember the day when my mother accepted a card of congratulations for Teacher s’ Day from her director. The card was read “Thank you for your hard works; Happy Teachers’ Day to you!”At that moment, I was somoving that tears came to my eyes. I am proud of my mother.1. am-do;2. a-an;3. isn’t-isn’t in4. had-has;5. 去掉of;6. giving-gives7. accepted-received;8. works-work;9. 去掉was; 10. moving-moved33. 2011东北师大附中模拟Great changes have been take place in my village. Ten years ago, the small and low houses, which lie on the north of a lake, produced much waste. As the result, the lake was serious polluted. To the west was a sandy field, that was the source of dust. Better still, a brickyard on the southwest side of the lake used up a great deal good soil. Now the poor house have been replaced by green trees and the brickyard by tall buildings. The sandy fieldthat the villagers used to ploughing has been covered with fruit trees. On the lake thevillagers often spend his spare time boating and fishing.1. 去掉been;2. lie-lay;3. the-a;4. serious-seriously;5. than-which;6. better-worse;7. deal of;8. house-houses;9. ploughing-plough; 10. his-their34. 2011东北育才模拟Dear Mr. Johnson,I’ve learned from a newspaper that some clerks are wanting in your company. I am eager to being one of them. So I am writing the letter. My name is Zhang Hua. I was born in the Hebei Province and I am in good health. I’ve just graduated in the Computer Department of Wuhan University. I did very good in all subjects and I am especial good at computer studies and English. I can read science books in English and doing some writing in English aswell.Beside, I know a little French. And in my spare time, I enjoy playing basketball. As is said that your company is very famous and I’ll very glad if you let me work for it. Mytelephone number is 027-089276628. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.1. wanting-wanted;2. being-be;3. 去掉the;4. in-from;5. good-well;6. especial-especially;7. doing-do;8. beside-besides;9. As—It; 10. I’ll be35. 2011太原模拟After supper Liu Wei came and ask me to go and see a film with him. In our way to the cinema, we saw the little girl sitting by the roadside crying. We bought her a cake to stop her cry. When we asked she lived, she said she did not know. So we took her to the police station and asked the polices to take care of her. After that we went to the cinema. And when we got there, the movie was almost over. Although we missed the movie, but we felt very happybecause we did a well deed.1. ask—asked;2. In—On;3. the-a 3. cry—crying;4. his-her;5. polices-police6. And-But;7. but-but8. well-good;9. where she lives;10. 去掉but36. 2011西安模拟Dear Tony,Nice to talk to you again. I would love to tell you something about my new invention,that can catch snakes but not harm them.First I bought an ice-cream maker making of steel. Between the outside and the inside wall of the bowl there is some jelly, which freeze when cooled. I put the bowl into the fridge. Then in the evening I placed a frozen bowl in the snakes’ habitat and the ice-cubes on top of the bowl to keep cool. Finally I covered the whole thing with a large bucket. The next morning when I removed the bucket or the bowl, I found the snakes very sleepily. I collected the passive snakes using a net and released it all back into the wild.What do you think of my invention? Glad to hear from your advice. Thank you.Best wishes. Cathy 1. that-which; 2. making-made; 3. wall-wall; 4. freeze-freezes; 5. a-the6. keep it cool;7. or—and;8. sleepily-sleepy;9. it-them; 10. 去掉from37. 2011陕西模拟I’m a senior 3 student. Recently I have made a survey among 100 boys and 100 girls. The result of the survey is as the follows: That the boys like to do most is to become businessmen while the girls favorite work is to be teachers. Only few boys want to do this job.It is interested that the number of boys and girls who want to be doctors are equal. As for lawyers, more boys expect to have this job. Therefore, there are still students are not clear about their future. In a world, they all express they would work hard at their lessons for the College Entrance Examination. As long as they do this badly, they will realize their greatdreams.1. 去掉the;2. That-What;3. girls-girls’4. a few;5. interested-interesting;6. are-is;7. Therefore-However; 8. who are; 9. would-will; 10. badly-well.38. 2011西安五大名校模拟Alexander was a military genius explorer. But he also had a great ambition. He wantedto rule a country that people could live in peace with one another. From 330 to 327BC, Alexander led his soldier east, through Afghanistan and into Central Asia. As he travel, he builtmore cities. He ordered soldiers, merchants, and scholars from many lands to settle here.In 326 BC Alexander turned south, into India. But by now his men were tired and weak.They were far home in an unknown land. The soldiers refused to go farther. Unwillingly,Alexander turned back. By 323 BC, he reached for Babylon in Iraq. There he caught feverand died at the age of 33. his country was divided between his generals.1. or-and;2. that-where;3. soldier-soldiers;4. travel-travelled;5. here-there;6. now-then;7. from home; 8. 去掉for; 9. a fever; 10. between-among。