作文第一讲高分词

高考英语作文，吸引阅卷老师那些高分词
一、使用高级词汇的4 大原则
1．多实少虚原则
写文章不要空话连篇，要多写一些实际的东西，这就要求写作时多用实词，少用虚词。

虚词是指那些大而没有实际意义的词，多用蕴涵感情色彩的词语。

如good指人时可用以下形容词替换：kind, honest, generous, selfless, brave, warm­hearted, sympathetic, honorable, humorous, smart, gentle等
good指事物或事情时可用以下形容词替换：great, fantastic, splendid, marvelous, excellent, wonderful, meaningful, enjoyable等。

因此，以下句子中的形容词虽然都可以用good代替，但远不如原句出彩。

①I hope everyone can have a wonderful time.
②He is a warm­hearted teacher.
③This is really a nice idea to go climbing Mount Hua this weekend.
老师偏爱“学得晚”的单词，因为使用学得比较晚的单词，可以体现一个人“学以致用”的意识。

如果一个意思既可以用初中单词来表达，又可以用高二、高三单词来表达，那尽量选择高二、高三的单词，如：
（1）Adj.困难的
黯然低分词：difficult
闪光高分词：challenging 有挑战性的
（2）Adj.重要的
黯然低分词：important
闪光高分词：vital 至关重要的；essential 必不可少的；significant 有重要意义的；
（3）Adj.美丽的
黯然低分词：beautiful
闪光高分词：appealing动人的；attractive 吸引人的；charming迷人的；
（4）v. 参加
黯然低分词：join
闪光高分词：take part in
（5）v. 使用
黯然低分词：use
闪光高分词：make good use of
（6）v. 拜访
黯然低分词：visit
闪光高分词：pay a visit to
（7）最常见的换词手段：形容词=of+同根名词
2．短语优先原则
多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。

例如：
①Also, I'd like you to ______ me.
(2013·新课标全国卷Ⅰ)
→Also, I'd like you to .
②I've asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you .(2013·新课标全国卷Ⅰ)
→I've asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you .
这样单词数明显增加，句子更生动，表达也更准确。

写作中要恰当得体地使用高中学过的、较长的词汇。

如可以用eventually代替finally，用challenging代替hard，用attach importance to代替pay attention to，用delightedly代替happily，用immediate代替quick，用be occupied with代替be busy with等
①With your financial aid, I'm ____ more finless porpoises will survive.
→With your financial aid, I'm _________ that more finless porpoises will survive.
②I will _________ traffic rules all the way. (2013·安徽高考)
→I will _____ traffic rules _______ all the way.
③Making full use of time is a good habit, which ____ one to plan carefully.
→Making full use of time is a good habit, which _______ one to plan carefully
4．避免重复原则
尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词，必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替。

例如：①I like reading while my brother likes watching football matches.
→I like reading while my brother enjoys watching football matches.
②We've built a new experiment building beside the old one and we've also built a library where the old playground used to be.
→We've built a new experiment building beside the old one and we've also set up a library where the old playground used to be.
1．第一first→to begin / start with
2．第二second→in addition / what's more
3．第三third→last but not least
4．总之in a word→to sum up/in conclusion/in summary
5．但是but→however
6．机会chance→opportunity
7．选择choice→alternative
8．考虑consider→take into account/consideration
9．课程course→curriculum
10.充足enough→adequate
影响effect→influence
12．最终finally→eventually
13．勤奋hardworking→diligent
14．帮助help→assist
15．分发hand out→distribute
16．后果result→consequence
17．替代replace→substitute
18．拒绝refuse→deny
19．应该should→be supposed to
20．缺点shortcoming→drawback
．理解understand→make sense of / figure out 22．可用useful→available
23．使用use→employ/make use of
24．艰难的difficult→painstaking
25．求同存异agree partly
→agree with reserve /agree to disagree 26．种类繁多all kinds of→a wide range of 27．也；和as well as→in addition to /apart from 28．反对be against→object to
29．厌烦be bored with→be fed up with
30．忙于be busy in/with→be occupied in / with 发生happen→occur/come about
32．几乎不hardly→barely
33．提高improve→promote
34．重要important→vital
35．立即immediately→in a flash
36．不可能impossible→out of the question 37．有趣interesting
→absorbing/striking/appealing
38．参加join→participate
39．幸运lucky→fortunate
40．巨大large→enormous
有意义meaningful→rewarding
42．许多many→a large quantity of
43．明显obvious→apparent
44．合适proper→appropriate
45．丰富rich→abundant
46．小心谨慎be careful→be cautious 47．与……不同be different from
→differ/vary from
48．渴望做……be eager to do
→be dying to do/long to do
49．因为because of→on account of
50．闻名be famous for
→have a reputation for
伤心be sad→be cast down
52．正在建设being built→under construction 53．感到着急feel anxious→experience anxiety 54．感到舒心feel comfortable→feel at ease 55．在我看来in my opinion
→as far as I am concerned
56．美化学校make our school beautiful
→beautify our school
57．故意on purpose→deliberately/by design
58．置若罔闻refuse to listen to
→turn a deaf ear to
59．成功做某事succeed in doing sth.→make it
60．无法描述的美丽too beautiful to describe
→beauty beyond description
(2013·安徽高考)假设你校英语社团举办以“讲求文明，从我做起”为主题的征文活动，请你以“On the Way to School”为题，写一篇英语短文。

内容主要包括：
1．遵守交通法规；
2．注意举止文明。

注意：
1．词数120左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
4．短文的题目已为你拟好，不计入总词数
On the Way to School
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________
请使用高级词汇提升下面考生作文[平庸作文]
On the Way to School
These days, breaking traffic rules and littering are not uncommon, causing serious harm to life and the environment. Changing this situation ①____ considerable effort on the part of everyone. As for me, it should start on my way to school.
I will ②_________ traffic rules all the way. If I ride a bike, I'll always keep to the right and never cross a road until the traffic light turns green. If I walk, I'll ③_________ to use the pedestrian crossing. ④_______________ , I will ⑤_____ it my duty to help keep our environment clean and healthy. I will keep from littering and spitting anywhere and I will ⑥____help clean up the roadside litter whenever possible. I hope my behaviour will be ⑦________.
On the Way to School
These days, breaking traffic rules and littering are not uncommon, causing serious harm to life and the environment. Changing this situation ①_________ considerable effort on the part of everyone. As for me, it should start on my way to school.
I will ②traffic rules all the way. If I ride a bike, I'll always keep to the right and never cross a road until the traffic light turns green. If I walk, I'll ③_ to use the pedestrian crossing. ④, I will ⑤it my duty to help keep our environment clean and healthy. ⑥__________ will I keep from littering and spitting anywhere, I will help clean up the roadside litter whenever possible. I hope my behaviour will ⑦
Ⅰ.请用高级词汇改写下列句子
1．I can no longer ______ the way he speaks to us.
→I can no longer ___________ the way he speaks to us.
2．He didn't _______ what I said in the class.
→He what I said in
3．We all ____ the same chance.
→We all ________ the same chance.
4．His wife came back home after the advanced training class, feeling very .
→His wife came back home after the advanced training class, feeling very ___________.
5．She went there .
→She went there
___________
Ⅱ.请使用高级词汇提升下面考生作文
(2013·山东省高三高考模拟)
目前，中学生利用寒暑假打工现象引起了社会广泛关注，赞成和反对的声音此起彼伏。

请根据下面的提示，写一篇英语短文。

1．简单阐述此种现象；
2．你对此种现象的明确态度……(给出充足的理由)
3．你认为该如何使用打工赚的钱？
①补贴家用？②自己花？……(给出合理的解释)
注意：
1.词数120～150；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

[平庸作文]
Recently more and more teenagers do part­time jobs to earn extra money during the summer or winter vacation. Opinions on this ①__ from person to person. Some are ②it while others ③
.
I think it is ④for us high school students to take part­time jobs in our spare time. It can earn some money ⑤___ broaden our views and ⑥____ our holiday life ___ because we can learn what we can't learn in classes. What's more, through part­time jobs we can get some working experience which will ⑦us for our future.
I hold the view that it's better to help pay our family living expenses instead of keeping it as our own pocket money. It is a good ⑧______ for us to take on an important responsibility for our family.
[升格作文]
Recently more and more teenagers do part­time jobs to earn extra money during the summer or winter vacation. Opinions on this ①from person to person. Some are ②it while others ③
it.
I think it is ④for us high school students to take part­time jobs in our spare time. It can ⑤earn some money, ⑥_______ broaden our views and ⑦_______ our holiday life because we can learn what we can't learn in classes. What's more, through part­time jobs we can get some working experience which will ⑧_____ us for our future.
I hold the view that it's better to help pay our family living expenses instead of keeping it as our
own pocket money. It is a good ⑨____________ for us to take on an important responsibility for our family.
可以看出，这里列举的“大纲词汇衍生词”看上去都相当“有水平”，但都是由大纲中的简单单词加上某些前缀、后缀变来的，可以说又好记，又好用，你学会了吗？
只要运用以上四种方法，在平时的学习中不断积累和使用“闪光高分词”，一定能让你的作文绽放出最美的光辉！
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