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高中英语读后续写课件(共42张PPT)
appeared between them. C. The man and the woman had an enviable love.
Ending
Development Beginning
Climax(高潮)
Endings of our students
Endings of our students
1. 被打动的；受感动的
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Ending
Development Beginning
Climax(高潮)
Endings of our students
Endings of our students
1. 被打动的；受感动的
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高中英语读后续写专题课件(43张ppt)
材料 Everyone had a different answer 结尾 The police caught the robber
事物状态：“主语+系动词+表语”
材料 Arthur was surprised, Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before 结尾 The man shouting behind is the bank thief, The man was innocent
(有趣的，可笑的)
“趣”
核心矛盾
Money or
Other things
矛盾中心
“情节核”
发散性
the young man or another man
关键人物
Thief Not thief
矛盾身份
箱子里 所属人
Young man 身份
可能情节发展
1
thief
碰巧抓住抢劫犯（即结尾1）
2
the young man not thief
(1)情节基调的铺设：“向心性” (2)核心矛盾的预设：“发散性” (3)故事框架的搭建：“顺延性” (4)隐含语言的定位：“一致性”
情节基调
向心性
“A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day”。
funny: cause amusement, laughter, etc.
“Unforgettable”, Says New Journalist Robot – Satisfaction Guaranteed
“读后续写”与阅读课的契合
1. M3U2 Come and eat here 2. M7U2 Satisfaction Guaranteed
事物状态：“主语+系动词+表语”
材料 Arthur was surprised, Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before 结尾 The man shouting behind is the bank thief, The man was innocent
(有趣的，可笑的)
“趣”
核心矛盾
Money or
Other things
矛盾中心
“情节核”
发散性
the young man or another man
关键人物
Thief Not thief
矛盾身份
箱子里 所属人
Young man 身份
可能情节发展
1
thief
碰巧抓住抢劫犯（即结尾1）
2
the young man not thief
(1)情节基调的铺设：“向心性” (2)核心矛盾的预设：“发散性” (3)故事框架的搭建：“顺延性” (4)隐含语言的定位：“一致性”
情节基调
向心性
“A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day”。
funny: cause amusement, laughter, etc.
“Unforgettable”, Says New Journalist Robot – Satisfaction Guaranteed
“读后续写”与阅读课的契合
1. M3U2 Come and eat here 2. M7U2 Satisfaction Guaranteed
高考读后续写模拟七大话题训练 精品课件 75张PPT
love on it, and on the last page it was written as follows: "Hi.. pretty girl, I wrote RRRRRING on a piece of paper to you. Do you see it?"
Paragraph 2: The mother was deeply moved by her son. Sure enough, this kind of courage could make people touched. What is love? As an old saying goes, "Live beautifully, dream passionately and love completely." (157 words)
高考读后续写模拟七大话题训练 精品课件 75张PPT
参考范文
高考读后续写模拟七大话题训练 精品课件 75张PPT
高考读后续写模拟七大话题训练 精品课件 75张PPT
写作思路
高考读后续写模拟七大话题训练 精品课件 75张PPT
高考读后续写模拟七大话题训练 精品课件 75张PPT
读后续写话题素材二
高考读后续写模拟七大话题训练 精品课件 75张PPT
高考读后续写模拟七大话题训练 精品课件 75张PPT
高分范文
Paragraph 1: It was the girl! The mother couldn't hide her deep sadness, so she began to cry and said, "Lovely girl, my son is already gone." The girl kept silent for a second, and then continued to comfort the boy's mother. A few minutes later, she had to say goodbye to the mother. Eventually, the mother lost control of her emotions and burst out crying. "What a good girl!" she said. And then she was collecting his son's relic in his room. She was surprised to find out a new notebook, which was placed among all his CDs, from which the notebook dropped. There was full of
Paragraph 2: The mother was deeply moved by her son. Sure enough, this kind of courage could make people touched. What is love? As an old saying goes, "Live beautifully, dream passionately and love completely." (157 words)
高考读后续写模拟七大话题训练 精品课件 75张PPT
参考范文
高考读后续写模拟七大话题训练 精品课件 75张PPT
高考读后续写模拟七大话题训练 精品课件 75张PPT
写作思路
高考读后续写模拟七大话题训练 精品课件 75张PPT
高考读后续写模拟七大话题训练 精品课件 75张PPT
读后续写话题素材二
高考读后续写模拟七大话题训练 精品课件 75张PPT
高考读后续写模拟七大话题训练 精品课件 75张PPT
高分范文
Paragraph 1: It was the girl! The mother couldn't hide her deep sadness, so she began to cry and said, "Lovely girl, my son is already gone." The girl kept silent for a second, and then continued to comfort the boy's mother. A few minutes later, she had to say goodbye to the mother. Eventually, the mother lost control of her emotions and burst out crying. "What a good girl!" she said. And then she was collecting his son's relic in his room. She was surprised to find out a new notebook, which was placed among all his CDs, from which the notebook dropped. There was full of
读后续写-高考英语作文新题型PPT优秀课件1
读后续写-高考英语作文新题型PPT优 秀课件1 【完美 版】
Interpretation of writing ideas 写作思路解读
Idea 1:
A man
Interpretation of the Text文本解读
Reading for the plot developments.
Life-changing experience
4
Interpretation of the Text文本解读
Reading for the plot developments.
Reading the first sentences of the two continued paragraphs for creation.
Reading the first sentences of the two continued paragraphs for creation.
to describe love. 资本主义社会基本矛盾的普遍存在
10 underlined words: I; a friend; the man; his family; hug; softly; gaze; love; satisfied
The man suddenly stopped smiling and looked me straight in the eye.
6
Interpretation of underlined words and given information 划线词和续写首句解读
2. Interpretation of underlined words下划线词解读：
I; a friend; the man; his family; hug; softly; gaze; love; satisfied
高中语文复习课件：读后续写(共19张PPT) (1)
babysitter or the little son, especially the little son---he was hurt or he was killed... • More questions about the first paragraph:
• Para 2 • Hearing the noise from the dog, the babysitter
• 其次，还存在的问题是学生续写的内容在情节安 排方面不合理，这是因为高中生相对来说生活阅 历不够，文化水平还没有达到很高水平，导致学 生在进行文章写作时，文章顺序比较混乱，情节 设置上也不合理。
• 再者，学生在文章续写时，在语法和词汇的使用 方面还存在着一定的错误，影响了整篇文章的美 观。
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构 一个完整的故事。 注意： 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键
词语。
A Faithful Friend
• Neil loves to travel and he was so fond of forests. Whenever he plans for a holiday, he would choose a place that is blessed by Mother Nature. To celebrate his son’s second birthday, he decided to stay and enjoy the celebration in woods, located at the lap of a mountain. He with his family and friends, reached the village located near the woods and had his stay in the cottage. The cottage was located at the entrance of the dense forest, where the guests can see wolves wandering in the nearby place.
• Para 2 • Hearing the noise from the dog, the babysitter
• 其次，还存在的问题是学生续写的内容在情节安 排方面不合理，这是因为高中生相对来说生活阅 历不够，文化水平还没有达到很高水平，导致学 生在进行文章写作时，文章顺序比较混乱，情节 设置上也不合理。
• 再者，学生在文章续写时，在语法和词汇的使用 方面还存在着一定的错误，影响了整篇文章的美 观。
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构 一个完整的故事。 注意： 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键
词语。
A Faithful Friend
• Neil loves to travel and he was so fond of forests. Whenever he plans for a holiday, he would choose a place that is blessed by Mother Nature. To celebrate his son’s second birthday, he decided to stay and enjoy the celebration in woods, located at the lap of a mountain. He with his family and friends, reached the village located near the woods and had his stay in the cottage. The cottage was located at the entrance of the dense forest, where the guests can see wolves wandering in the nearby place.
高考英语作文专题读后续写一公开课PPT3(22页)
“You waiting for the bus?” my father asked. The man said that they were going to Birmingham, where he had a brother and prospects(希望)of a job. “Well, you're getting wet. There is a cover and some benches(长 凳)in the next bus stop in Winborn,” my father said, “I’ll drive you up there.”
高考英语作文专题读后续写一教学PPT -3（22 页）-P PT执教 课件【 推荐】
高考英语作文专题读后续写一教学PPT -3（22 页）-P PT执教 课件【 推荐】
案例1： 2019期末考读后续写
5W和1H
A light drizzle(毛毛雨)was falling as my sister Jill and I ran out of the Church, eager to get home and play with the presents that Santa Claus had left for us and our baby sister, Sharon. Across the street was a gas station where the bus would stop. It was closed for Christmas, but I noticed a family standing in the rain, huddled(挤) together. I wondered briefly why they were there, but soon forgot about them.
高考英语作文专题读后续写一教学PPT -3（22 页）-P PT执教 课件【 推荐】
高考英语作文专题读后续写一教学PPT -3（22 页）-P PT执教 课件【 推荐】
案例1： 2019期末考读后续写
5W和1H
A light drizzle(毛毛雨)was falling as my sister Jill and I ran out of the Church, eager to get home and play with the presents that Santa Claus had left for us and our baby sister, Sharon. Across the street was a gas station where the bus would stop. It was closed for Christmas, but I noticed a family standing in the rain, huddled(挤) together. I wondered briefly why they were there, but soon forgot about them.
读后续写公开课优质教育课件PPT
读后续写公开课优质教育课件PPT目录如何构思续写的内容读后续写的高分攻略21读后续写的具体要求提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写（150词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。
1如何构思续写的内容Step1 Read for elements Step2 Read for plots Step3 Gather ideas Step 4 Make predictions 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Steve was the most amazing person in all of Minneapolis, and he was my cousin. By the age of 19, Steve was a star baseball player at the University of Minnesota. I wanted to beexactly like him. So when Steve asked me to go with him on a spring fishing trip in northern Minnesota, I was excited! After planning the trip, we gathered clothes and supplies, and began our great adventure. We reached the Superior National Forest in northern Minnesota by early evening. On our way to the campsite, Steve pointed to a small house faraway in one of the mountains, saying that it was the ranger station (护林站) where the forester worked. Finally, after a long walk, we reached the campsite and set up the camp as the sun was setting. Steve knew all the tricksof an experienced wilderness camper. After we gathered enough wood from the forest, he started the campfire using only stone and steel — no matches. For supper we feasted on freeze-dried beef, wild rice and pea soup. I ate greedily after all that work. Tired enough, we climbed into our sleeping bags early and talked about our plans for fishing the next day. We were still talking quietly when a sudden north wind picked up; the temperature droppedand it began to snow. Steve found a way to increase the temperature inside the tent. He dragged a log from the forest to the opposite side of the campfire. Then he wrapped aluminum foil (铝箔) around the log. The heat from the fire reflected off the foil and into the tent. Soon images of lake fish were filling my dreams.The snow had stopped, but sometime later a powerful wind musthave kicked up the flames of our dying fire. I was suddenly awakened by Steve. Our tent was on fire. Frightened, I ran out oftent immediately. The tent collapsed (倒塌) with Steve inside. Without any thought of endangering myself, I reached into the burningtent and pulled him to the icy lake. Fortunately, we were not seriously hurt.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；2. 至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
新高考题型读后续写作文讲解(共17张PPT)【优秀课件】PPT共20页
39、勿问成功的秘诀为何，且尽全力做你应该做的事吧。——美华纳
40、学而不思则罔，思而不学则殆。——孔子
新高考题型读后续写作文讲解(共17 张PPT)【优秀课件】
36、“不可能”这个字(法语是一个字 )，只 在愚人 的字典 中找得 到。--拿 破仑。 37、不要生气要争气，不要看破要突 破，不 要嫉妒 要欣赏 ，不要 托延要 积极， 不要心 动要行 动。 38、勤奋，机会，乐观是成功的三要 素。(注 意：传 统观念 认为勤 奋和机 会是成 功的要 素，但 是经过 统计学 和成功 人士的 分析得 出，乐 观是成 功的第 三要素 。
39、没有不老的誓言，没有不变的承 诺，踏 上旅途 ，义无 反顾。 40、对时间的价值没有没有深切认识 的人， 决不会 坚韧勤 勉。
谢谢！
36、自己的鞋子，自己知道紧在哪里。——西班牙
Hale Waihona Puke 37、我们唯一不会改正的缺点是软弱。——拉罗什福科
xiexie! 38、我这个人走得很慢，但是我从不后退。——亚伯拉罕·林肯
《读后续写》PPT课件
b“eGhivienmd,y suitcase back to me!” Hearing this, Arthur immediately realized
that the young man was the bank thief.
“bSsaoatShnitnekotcphtohen, tisbientafuoc.ekpds!eru”antn.Ainrgtuhnutirl hreeastloizpepdedtahtaatxi.thTheenyoheuqnugicmklyagnotwinatso itthaend
The underlined key words:
Park Avenue
The young man
suitcase
in the back seat loud noise of an alarm
the bank robbery the shouts people the bank thief
Tip1: The key words that respectively stand for the most important information, the main character and the main object should be chosen in your writing.
on the contrary, on the other hand…..
Paragraph 1U: se transitional add some
Use different
As he waswrourndsning, Arthur hdeeataridlsthe younstgrumctuarnesshouting
information 3.Polish your writing
高中英语-读后续写课件(共27张PPT)
“Unforgettable”, Says New Journalist Robot – Satisfaction Guaranteed
“读后续写”与阅读课的契合
1. M3U2 Come and eat here 2. M7U2 Satisfaction Guaranteed
虚构+趣味 思维+语言
叙事 文本
叙事 人称
第一、二、三人称
文 叙事 体 时态
…
叙事 方式
旁白/对白 口语/书面语
语言定位
记叙类故事文
叙事人称：“第三人”的身份讲述（第三人称作为主语）（直接引语除外）
比如，he, she, it, A funny thing, the young man, Park Avenue, Arthur等
读后续写策略
核心矛盾
情节基调
遣词用句 不着痕迹 语言文体 框架完整
情节走向 顺延逆转
情节内容 框架结构
合情合理 的创意
语篇段落
读后续写策略
1、挖掘情节基调，廓清核心矛盾，创造合情合理的创意故事外延。 2、理清叙事角度，把握顺延逆转，构建张弛有度的完整情节框架。 3、定位语言文体，模仿遣词用句，续写不着痕迹的语用叙事文本。
可能情节发展
1
thief
碰巧抓住抢劫犯（即结尾1）
2
the young man not thief
碰巧把刚从银行取钱赶路的人当劫犯，最后 到警局传来抓到劫犯消息
3 Money
碰巧碰到一个刚偷了其他人钱的小偷，最后
thief
到警局传来抓到劫犯并找回银行失钱的消息，
another man
最后在Arthur帮助下抓到另一个小偷
“读后续写”与阅读课的契合
1. M3U2 Come and eat here 2. M7U2 Satisfaction Guaranteed
虚构+趣味 思维+语言
叙事 文本
叙事 人称
第一、二、三人称
文 叙事 体 时态
…
叙事 方式
旁白/对白 口语/书面语
语言定位
记叙类故事文
叙事人称：“第三人”的身份讲述（第三人称作为主语）（直接引语除外）
比如，he, she, it, A funny thing, the young man, Park Avenue, Arthur等
读后续写策略
核心矛盾
情节基调
遣词用句 不着痕迹 语言文体 框架完整
情节走向 顺延逆转
情节内容 框架结构
合情合理 的创意
语篇段落
读后续写策略
1、挖掘情节基调，廓清核心矛盾，创造合情合理的创意故事外延。 2、理清叙事角度，把握顺延逆转，构建张弛有度的完整情节框架。 3、定位语言文体，模仿遣词用句，续写不着痕迹的语用叙事文本。
可能情节发展
1
thief
碰巧抓住抢劫犯（即结尾1）
2
the young man not thief
碰巧把刚从银行取钱赶路的人当劫犯，最后 到警局传来抓到劫犯消息
3 Money
碰巧碰到一个刚偷了其他人钱的小偷，最后
thief
到警局传来抓到劫犯并找回银行失钱的消息，
another man
最后在Arthur帮助下抓到另一个小偷
2025届高考专题复习 读后续写入门课件(共15张PPT)
___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________ It was one of our Post-it notes！
to cheer up someone who was sad or worn out after visiting a patient
What's the potential conflict?
What would you feel after doing some kind act? How did the kids feel? What did the girl say? How did I respond? Am I sure of my words?
注意： 续写词数应为130左右。
On Monday morning I was scrolling (滚动) through my Facebook and I found a post by a friend of mine.______________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________ It was one of our Post-it notes！
to cheer up someone who was sad or worn out after visiting a patient
What's the potential conflict?
What would you feel after doing some kind act? How did the kids feel? What did the girl say? How did I respond? Am I sure of my words?
注意： 续写词数应为130左右。
On Monday morning I was scrolling (滚动) through my Facebook and I found a post by a friend of mine.______________________________________________________________________________________
读后续写ppt优质课件
Never ignore the basic tone of the article.
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04
tip1
Using linking words effectively.
Adding some details reasonably.
tip2
Using different sentence structures. tip3
A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day…. surprising
interesting
T i p Sometimes, the general key word can guide us to 3 imagine reasonably.
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02
原文信息
1. Why did the young man look worried?
2. What happened? But everyone had a different answer.
3. Why did he start to run?
02
续写第一段
Why did Arthur run so fast?
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para1
设计
para2
考虑Arthur 在听 到年轻人喊叫时的 心理活动和可能做 出的动作。
设计的关键在于搭建本段 与前文、后文的桥梁，特 别注意动作描写、语言描 写、心理描写
考虑抵达警察局后 Arthur 和警察的语 言交流以及随后警 察的行动。
03
self-evaluation
(plot)
பைடு நூலகம்
Focus on the given
读后续写课件(29张PPT)
一)Avoiding repeating
1.My favorite subject is English while my sister’s favorite subject is History.
My favorite subject is English while my sister
History
problems.
1.I have a little tired. 2.There are some students don’t have breakfast. 3.His body is healthy. 4.If you are convenient, please call me tomorrow.
Task: ① Discuss with your partner
② Draw a mind map by yourself
Further to finish your writing and try to polish it as possible as you can.
Thank you for your attention！
you.
Don’t worry. We’ll you.
to help
1. I have
to study English better this
term. (同义词decide)
2. I
how to enlarge my
vocabulary. (同don’t know)
3. we’ll consider)
do more exercise.
1.Good good study, day day up. 2.Because it was raining, so we stayed at
读后续写专题(1)ppt课件
以读助写·以写促写
读后续写
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读后续写的具体内容
提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据 该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词 进行续写（150词左右），将其发展成一篇与给 定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。
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第五档： 21-25 第四档： 16-20 第三档： 11-15 第二档： 6-10 第一档： 1-5
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续写步骤：第一步：审题（读）
2.理清写作思路（“顺藤摸瓜” ） 吵架→出走→迷路→失联→自救→思念→寻路
→直升机→获救/？ 段1首句dark again：Jane又得在荒野度过黑夜。
可考虑描写环境及Jane的心理活动，如后悔？ 想念？期待？坚持？夜里会不会遇到野兽？这 一夜又是怎么度过的？ 段2首句woke up：上段应有Jane入睡的情节。 醒来后发生什么？自救成功还是被人所救？抑 或遇难？直升机有无再回来并发现她？
first place，in the beginning，to begin with…，to start with… 表“最近、现在”：at present，currently，lately， recently，presently 表“总说”：generally，generally speaking 其他：it is clear that … ，it is self-evident that…， there is no doubt that …，there is some evidence that …
15
ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ
确保语言连贯流畅的手段：转
用于表达语气的转折
表“让步”：although，despite，in spite of， nevertheless，regardless of
读后续写
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读后续写的具体内容
提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据 该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词 进行续写（150词左右），将其发展成一篇与给 定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。
2
第五档： 21-25 第四档： 16-20 第三档： 11-15 第二档： 6-10 第一档： 1-5
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续写步骤：第一步：审题（读）
2.理清写作思路（“顺藤摸瓜” ） 吵架→出走→迷路→失联→自救→思念→寻路
→直升机→获救/？ 段1首句dark again：Jane又得在荒野度过黑夜。
可考虑描写环境及Jane的心理活动，如后悔？ 想念？期待？坚持？夜里会不会遇到野兽？这 一夜又是怎么度过的？ 段2首句woke up：上段应有Jane入睡的情节。 醒来后发生什么？自救成功还是被人所救？抑 或遇难？直升机有无再回来并发现她？
first place，in the beginning，to begin with…，to start with… 表“最近、现在”：at present，currently，lately， recently，presently 表“总说”：generally，generally speaking 其他：it is clear that … ，it is self-evident that…， there is no doubt that …，there is some evidence that …
15
ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ
确保语言连贯流畅的手段：转
用于表达语气的转折
表“让步”：although，despite，in spite of， nevertheless，regardless of
读后续写PPT课件
5:00 pm, the bank closed, and the clerks and the guards had all
gone home. However, atபைடு நூலகம்that moment, Jack was in the bathroom,
and the guards didn't notice him, of course. When the noises
• work as usual——felt guilty—— tell the truth——be punished
➢manager:
• be to blame——be removed from/be fired
➢Linda:
•be saved / die
2021
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存在问题
➢逻辑混乱，与上文不符 ➢脑洞乱开--Para.2，无视首句话信息 ➢人物关系不明，节外生枝 ➢缺乏常识——无视法制 ➢个别关键词理解不到位--alarm,manager,unlucky
➢ money; operation; suffering
others:➢ the clerks; the guards; the
security system;
➢ theft; suitcase
2021
6
Paragraph1:
After Jack had been gone from the bank for a while, the alarms (警报器)began to ring.
He was all too familiar with the equipment since he had been
working there for 8 years and had been studying the security
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读后续写练习一
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There were beautiful things everywhere—pretty china figures and delicate vases. Rachel stood very still, afraid of knocking something over. Mrs. Willow handed Rachel a small brown bottle. Rachel couldn’t wait to get away, feeling any minute there would be a disaster. She thanked her and turned to the door when something brushed against her leg. Rachel was so surprised that she jumped backwards. It was a cat! But her elbow hit a vase and it fell to the floor, broken. How awkward! (72 words)
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By now I had forgotten about the pie and listened to grandma attentively. “What happened then?” “I told everyone I was caught in a car accident and made sure the newspaper reported it. I had learnt to limp convincingly with a cane before I found your grandfather in the hospital. I told him he was not the only one whose leg would never heal again. ‘So if you think I’m going to let you feel sorry for yourself for the rest of your life, think again!’ As he struggled out of the wheelchair, I took out the rings I bought the day he left for the war…”
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读后续写练习二
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She thought for a while and then continued. “We were very much in love when your grandfather had to go to war. After he left, I put all my energy into dancing. He would write to me and always ended his letters with ‘I love you with my life’. And then one day a letter came with only three sentences: ‘I have lost my leg. I am no longer a whole man. Forget about me.’”
3
• Possible Version Two:
• There were beautiful things everywhere—pretty china figures and delicate vases. All the treasures seemed to boast a long history and thus priceless. “Wow, it is really a land oห้องสมุดไป่ตู้ wonder.” Rachel couldn’t help admiring the elegance of the china figures and vases. Mom’s words echoing in her mind, curiosity still got the upper hand. She reached for one of them, but unfortunately, the vase slipped off her hand and lay in pieces on the floor. Her heart missing a beat, she felt terribly worried. (74 words)
2
With a smile Mrs. Willow comforted her saying it had been broken before. Rachel sighed and stared at her. “I did, when I was young. You couldn’t have been as clumsy as I was,” Mrs. Willow said, her sharp blue eyes shining. “Keep telling yourself you are a swan and it will work.” Rachel doubtfully said that several times. After they cleared up the vase, they drank tea from china cups and ate cakes off delicate plates and Rachel didn’t break another thing. It was a kind of magic. Rachel smiled. (78 words)
• With a smile, Mrs. Willow comforted her, saying it had been broken before. Seeing Mrs. Willow’s sharp blue eyes filled with warmth and affection, Rachel felt extremely regretful for her clumsy behavior. “If I had been more careful, thedisaster wouldn’t have happened.” Rachel knew what Mrs. Willow said might be an excuse to relieve her uneasiness and embarrassment. She made a resolution in her heart that from the day on she would never be so careless and swore to be a kind and thoughtful person like Mrs. Willow. (76 words)
1
There were beautiful things everywhere—pretty china figures and delicate vases. Rachel stood very still, afraid of knocking something over. Mrs. Willow handed Rachel a small brown bottle. Rachel couldn’t wait to get away, feeling any minute there would be a disaster. She thanked her and turned to the door when something brushed against her leg. Rachel was so surprised that she jumped backwards. It was a cat! But her elbow hit a vase and it fell to the floor, broken. How awkward! (72 words)
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By now I had forgotten about the pie and listened to grandma attentively. “What happened then?” “I told everyone I was caught in a car accident and made sure the newspaper reported it. I had learnt to limp convincingly with a cane before I found your grandfather in the hospital. I told him he was not the only one whose leg would never heal again. ‘So if you think I’m going to let you feel sorry for yourself for the rest of your life, think again!’ As he struggled out of the wheelchair, I took out the rings I bought the day he left for the war…”
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读后续写练习二
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She thought for a while and then continued. “We were very much in love when your grandfather had to go to war. After he left, I put all my energy into dancing. He would write to me and always ended his letters with ‘I love you with my life’. And then one day a letter came with only three sentences: ‘I have lost my leg. I am no longer a whole man. Forget about me.’”
3
• Possible Version Two:
• There were beautiful things everywhere—pretty china figures and delicate vases. All the treasures seemed to boast a long history and thus priceless. “Wow, it is really a land oห้องสมุดไป่ตู้ wonder.” Rachel couldn’t help admiring the elegance of the china figures and vases. Mom’s words echoing in her mind, curiosity still got the upper hand. She reached for one of them, but unfortunately, the vase slipped off her hand and lay in pieces on the floor. Her heart missing a beat, she felt terribly worried. (74 words)
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With a smile Mrs. Willow comforted her saying it had been broken before. Rachel sighed and stared at her. “I did, when I was young. You couldn’t have been as clumsy as I was,” Mrs. Willow said, her sharp blue eyes shining. “Keep telling yourself you are a swan and it will work.” Rachel doubtfully said that several times. After they cleared up the vase, they drank tea from china cups and ate cakes off delicate plates and Rachel didn’t break another thing. It was a kind of magic. Rachel smiled. (78 words)
• With a smile, Mrs. Willow comforted her, saying it had been broken before. Seeing Mrs. Willow’s sharp blue eyes filled with warmth and affection, Rachel felt extremely regretful for her clumsy behavior. “If I had been more careful, thedisaster wouldn’t have happened.” Rachel knew what Mrs. Willow said might be an excuse to relieve her uneasiness and embarrassment. She made a resolution in her heart that from the day on she would never be so careless and swore to be a kind and thoughtful person like Mrs. Willow. (76 words)