高三英语二轮复习专题训练：(五)改错专项

【二轮专题练】（五）改错专项

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

A

How does the disease present? Well, from what is known so far, there can be the number of symptoms range from mild to severe. There can be fever and respiratory symptoms such as cough and short of breath. In more severe case, there’s been pneumonia (肺炎), kidney failure (肾衰竭), and death. The mortality rate (死亡率) was not known yet.

How can we tell if someone is infected or not? The infection can be diagnosed (诊断) by a test calling PCR or Polymerase Chain Reaction (聚合酶链反应). This test identifies the virus basing on its genetic fingerprint. There is current no specific medication for the virus and treatment is supportive care. There’s no vaccine (疫苗) to protect the virus. Treatment and vaccines are in development.

B

Sticking to a vegan diet might sound difficult, especial with many popular dishes containing meat or other animal products. Yet in recent years, veganism has become one of the fastest-growing lifestyle trend in the world. According to Huff Post, more than 3 million people in the United States are vegans. In the UK, about 542,000 people choose veganism over the past decade.

What is driving this growth in veganism? One reason may be that people want to protect the environment. Produce meat and dairy products is known to be stressful for the environment. According to a 2013 study by the UN Food and Agriculture Organization, global meat manufacturing causes about 18 percent of the world’s greenhouse gas emissions. This figure is

high than all the world’s cars, trains and planes combined.According to BBC News, another reason is why many of today’s young people believe it’s wrong to kill animals for food.

For many people, veganism simply means eating no meat, cheese or eggs, and going animal-free also applies to fashion and manufacturing. For example, leather is used to make shoes and clothing. Every year more than a billion animals, from cows to snakes, killed to make leather products from their skins. Now, many brands are looking other materials. So, if you’re interested in protecting animals and to saving the environment, you might want to give veganism a try.

C

When I was young, I didn’t know what friendship. When I stayed with my friends, a warm feeling came out of the bottom from my heart. Now I have grown up and got many friend. And I have been tasted the pleasant feeling of friendship. When I am happy, they are also happy and shared the happiness with me. When I make progress, they will be very exciting. Instead, when I’m in a difficult situation, they will offer help to me. So friendship is never an one-way ticket. If we want to get them, we must treat others well at first. We should always be ready to help others, especially that they are in difficult situations.

D

I can’t swim because I have a strong fear of water. Look back my childhood experiences, I think that three reasons might explain the fear. The first reason is that I was not allow to go near the water when I was a child, for my mother had a unreasonable fear of it. So, even as a child that I was taught to see the water as something danger. Second, my eyes became bad when I was five. If I took off my glass in the water, I couldn’t see anything, or this increased my fear. The worst part of my experience is that as a child I saw a neighbor drowning. After then I have been more frightened.

E

Get a good education is more important today than ever before. In Canada mostly children attend public schools. Public schools are mainly found by governments through tax income. Students in Canada taught in English and in French. The rest of Canadian children attend private