高中英语作文-—-求助信写作 共29张PPT
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Yours. LiHua
词语之外，还可重点考虑几处高级表 达方式，如：现在分词作状语或过去 分词作状语（见模板），so that/ in order that引导的目的状语从句（见模 板）
Dearxx, My name is_____. I'm writing ____. I have much difficulty in _____.
yours
二写作指导 1.该书面表达任务是写一封求助信， 因此首先应该注意书信的格式，并且 表达自己希望得到帮助的急切心情。 2.习作者应认真审题，把握内容要点， 理清写作思路。写作时要注意内容安 排详略得当，语言表述应准确流畅。
学生习作
Dear Mr.Brown, How are you doing? I'm back in China now and thank you for your knidness and help during my stay. I'm writing to you to get some help because I left behind my English dictionary, which was given as a present by my American teacher.
Introduce the purpose of writing the letter and your problems
Faced with___, I have to ask for your help. Would you like to ____? In the meanwhile, I beg you to ___ so that/ in order that ____. Also, I would like you to ____.
Dear Miss Bruce,______________
_______________________
_________________________
Dear Miss Bruce, My name is Li Hua. I'm writing to ask for your help. I have many difficulties in learning English. First, I find there are many new words in the texts which are very difficult to remember.
Ask for help
I'm sure that I can ___ with your help. It will be appreciated if you can help me to __. Predict the
effect and express thanks
Look forward to your reply. yours______, XX
五.求助信的写作指导 1.正确把握时态 写求助信通常是因为目前自己或他人
遇到了一些困难，需要对方的帮助， 因此应以一般现在时为主；在叙述求 助原因和事情经过时应恰当使用过去 时态。
2.贴切使用过度性词语 列举自己所碰到的困难时，可用first, besides, what's more等过度性词语； 请求对方提供一系列的帮助时，可用
In the meanwhile, it would be appreciated if you could give lectures more slowly for the average students to follow.
I'm sure that I can make great progress in my English study with your help.
求助信 一任务呈现 假设你是李华，留学期间寄宿在 Mr.Brown家里，回国后你发现你有一 本英语字典落在他家了。请参照以下 要点给Mr.Brown写一封信。内容如下：
一本英语词典忘记带回国,词典是美 国老师送的，非常珍贵；
词典很可能落在了卧室的书架上； 邮资自付。
注意： 1.词数100左右(信的开头和结尾已给 出，不计入总词数）； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.参考词汇：邮资postage Dear Mr.Brown, _____________________________ ______________________________ ___________________
2.简要交待自己所遇到的困难时可用： I have much difficulty in... Faced with so many difficulties, I have to ...
3.请求对方做某事时可用： Would you like to... I would like you to... I wonder whether you could do me a favor.
6.表示期待对方回复时可用： I look forward to hearing from you.
I'm looking forward to your reply. 这些句型不但使用频率高，而且语气 委婉，态度谦恭，符合求助信的语言 特点。
4.适当使用高级表达方式 写英文求助信时，除使用常用的高级
Signature
六.写作训练 假设你是高中生李华，就读于光明中
学。你在英语学习中遇到了很多问题， 希望得到你的外教Miss Bruce的帮助。 请给Miss Bruce写一封信。内容包括 以下要点：
课文中生词太多，难记； 课文太长，难背； 希望Miss Bruce介绍一些英语学习 方法。 注意： 1.词数100左右 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
I came to realize that it might have been left on the bookshelf in the bedroom. So precious is it that I couldn't afford to lose it. Would you please send it back to me?The postage will be at my expense.
in the meanwhile, at the same time, in addition, also等过度性词语.当写 信需要时，要恰当使用这些词语，以 使行文连贯。
3.熟悉常用句型 写英文求助信时需要经常用到下面 的一些句型： 1）说明写作目的时可用：
My name is... I'm writing to you for some help. I'm writing to you to get some help. I am writing to you to ask for some/ your help.
Besides, the texts are too long for me to recite. Faced with these problems, I hope you can help me out. Could you give me some adivce on how to learn new words so that I can master them better?
4.展望获得帮助后自己的进步时可用： I'm sure with your help I can make great progress. I will appreciate any of your help, and...
5.表示感谢时பைடு நூலகம்用： It will be appreciated if you can... I would be grateful if you could/ would...
Thank you again and hope everything will be OK with you.
Yours, Lihua
四,名师点评 亮点展示：
1. I'm writing to you to get some help.开门见山，直接交待了写信目的， 即寻求帮助。
2. which was given as a present该 定语从句准确地说明了词典的来历及 其重要性。 3. it might have done用法恰当，贴 切表达了对过去动作的推测。
4. so... that...结构的倒装用法使用准 确，强调了词典的重要，为本文增加 了得分点。 5.afford一词传神地表达了习作者对词 典的珍爱，是本文的又一亮点。
6. Would you please send it back to me?该句表达委婉，恰当，体现了 习作者希望得到帮助的迫切心情。
词语之外，还可重点考虑几处高级表 达方式，如：现在分词作状语或过去 分词作状语（见模板），so that/ in order that引导的目的状语从句（见模 板）
Dearxx, My name is_____. I'm writing ____. I have much difficulty in _____.
yours
二写作指导 1.该书面表达任务是写一封求助信， 因此首先应该注意书信的格式，并且 表达自己希望得到帮助的急切心情。 2.习作者应认真审题，把握内容要点， 理清写作思路。写作时要注意内容安 排详略得当，语言表述应准确流畅。
学生习作
Dear Mr.Brown, How are you doing? I'm back in China now and thank you for your knidness and help during my stay. I'm writing to you to get some help because I left behind my English dictionary, which was given as a present by my American teacher.
Introduce the purpose of writing the letter and your problems
Faced with___, I have to ask for your help. Would you like to ____? In the meanwhile, I beg you to ___ so that/ in order that ____. Also, I would like you to ____.
Dear Miss Bruce,______________
_______________________
_________________________
Dear Miss Bruce, My name is Li Hua. I'm writing to ask for your help. I have many difficulties in learning English. First, I find there are many new words in the texts which are very difficult to remember.
Ask for help
I'm sure that I can ___ with your help. It will be appreciated if you can help me to __. Predict the
effect and express thanks
Look forward to your reply. yours______, XX
五.求助信的写作指导 1.正确把握时态 写求助信通常是因为目前自己或他人
遇到了一些困难，需要对方的帮助， 因此应以一般现在时为主；在叙述求 助原因和事情经过时应恰当使用过去 时态。
2.贴切使用过度性词语 列举自己所碰到的困难时，可用first, besides, what's more等过度性词语； 请求对方提供一系列的帮助时，可用
In the meanwhile, it would be appreciated if you could give lectures more slowly for the average students to follow.
I'm sure that I can make great progress in my English study with your help.
求助信 一任务呈现 假设你是李华，留学期间寄宿在 Mr.Brown家里，回国后你发现你有一 本英语字典落在他家了。请参照以下 要点给Mr.Brown写一封信。内容如下：
一本英语词典忘记带回国,词典是美 国老师送的，非常珍贵；
词典很可能落在了卧室的书架上； 邮资自付。
注意： 1.词数100左右(信的开头和结尾已给 出，不计入总词数）； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.参考词汇：邮资postage Dear Mr.Brown, _____________________________ ______________________________ ___________________
2.简要交待自己所遇到的困难时可用： I have much difficulty in... Faced with so many difficulties, I have to ...
3.请求对方做某事时可用： Would you like to... I would like you to... I wonder whether you could do me a favor.
6.表示期待对方回复时可用： I look forward to hearing from you.
I'm looking forward to your reply. 这些句型不但使用频率高，而且语气 委婉，态度谦恭，符合求助信的语言 特点。
4.适当使用高级表达方式 写英文求助信时，除使用常用的高级
Signature
六.写作训练 假设你是高中生李华，就读于光明中
学。你在英语学习中遇到了很多问题， 希望得到你的外教Miss Bruce的帮助。 请给Miss Bruce写一封信。内容包括 以下要点：
课文中生词太多，难记； 课文太长，难背； 希望Miss Bruce介绍一些英语学习 方法。 注意： 1.词数100左右 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
I came to realize that it might have been left on the bookshelf in the bedroom. So precious is it that I couldn't afford to lose it. Would you please send it back to me?The postage will be at my expense.
in the meanwhile, at the same time, in addition, also等过度性词语.当写 信需要时，要恰当使用这些词语，以 使行文连贯。
3.熟悉常用句型 写英文求助信时需要经常用到下面 的一些句型： 1）说明写作目的时可用：
My name is... I'm writing to you for some help. I'm writing to you to get some help. I am writing to you to ask for some/ your help.
Besides, the texts are too long for me to recite. Faced with these problems, I hope you can help me out. Could you give me some adivce on how to learn new words so that I can master them better?
4.展望获得帮助后自己的进步时可用： I'm sure with your help I can make great progress. I will appreciate any of your help, and...
5.表示感谢时பைடு நூலகம்用： It will be appreciated if you can... I would be grateful if you could/ would...
Thank you again and hope everything will be OK with you.
Yours, Lihua
四,名师点评 亮点展示：
1. I'm writing to you to get some help.开门见山，直接交待了写信目的， 即寻求帮助。
2. which was given as a present该 定语从句准确地说明了词典的来历及 其重要性。 3. it might have done用法恰当，贴 切表达了对过去动作的推测。
4. so... that...结构的倒装用法使用准 确，强调了词典的重要，为本文增加 了得分点。 5.afford一词传神地表达了习作者对词 典的珍爱，是本文的又一亮点。
6. Would you please send it back to me?该句表达委婉，恰当，体现了 习作者希望得到帮助的迫切心情。