托福写作第2课(第四版)——独立写作

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英语考试作文-托福写作task2兴趣类看电影一定要去电影院吗

英语考试作文托福写作task2兴趣类看电影一定要去电影院吗托福写作共有两大任务类型，task1考察考生对阅读材料和听力材料的内容整合能力，task2考察考生对某一特定话题的独立观点表达，具体任务特点不同我们的应对策略也不同。

托福写作task2又被称为托福独立写作，考察话题多样，涉足各类领域，兴趣类是托福写作task2考察频率最高的话题之一，下面我们来看一篇托福写作task2兴趣类的真题思路拓展：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is better to watch a movie in a cinema than at home.每个人都有自己偏爱的消遣方式，但是对很多人来说只是一种直觉，很难说清楚到底为什么。

那么，我们可以从消遣的花费，舒适度和选择面作为切入点。

Point 1： COST花费是衡量如何消遣的重要指标(indicator)，去电影院看电影比起在家看电影的成本要高很多，而且有些电影不需要电影院的音效(acoustic effect)和氛围(atmosphere)。

Sample sentences:1. Cost is a key indicator for people to decide whether to go cinema or stay at home, because some movies are unworthy to enjoy in cinema.2. People who go to cinema mostly because of the acoustic effect and atmosphere, however, not every movie need to be appreciated in cinema.Point 2：Comfort degree对于不少人而言，在家里看电影比电影院舒服得多，因为电影院是公众场所，而在家里可以“为所欲为”(have one’s own way)。

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写作能力比口语能力更重要吗？ 6．What can help you to succeed? 什么能帮助你走向成功？ 7．Is it more important to work quickly with risks making mistakes than to work slowly with everything correct? 冒着犯错误的风险高速地工作比确保万无一失地缓慢工作更重要吗？ 8．Is it essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize? 年轻人必须具备组织管理才能吗？ 9．Shouldn't people pay for public transportation? 人们应该免费搭乘公共交通工具吗？ 10．Land: for human needs or for endangered animals? 土地用于人类需求还是濒危动物？ 11．Should the government focus more on preserving natural environment and less on economic development? 政府应当更加注重环保，并减少对经济发展的重视程度吗？ 12．Should people work in the same company or for the
19．The most important things for governments to do to improve health care 政府为改善医疗保健需做的最重要的工作 20．The only way the government can conserve energy 政府保护能源的唯一途径 21．Were people friendlier in the past than they are today? 过去的人们比现在的人们更友好吗？ 22．Is visiting museums the best way to learn about a country? 了解一个国家最好的方法就是参观博物馆吗？ 23．Choosing a subject that interests you or one preparing you for a better job or career? 选择一门你感兴趣的学科还是选择职业倾向性强的学科？ 24．Is traveling in a group led by a tour guide the best way to travel? 跟团旅行是最好的旅行方式吗？ 25．Should the government focus its budget more on young children's education rather than on universities?

托福备考之独立写作满分范文5篇精选

托福备考之独立写作满分范文5篇精选下面给大家带来5篇托福优秀范文，欢迎阅读参考。

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篇一Which one do you prefer, to solve problems on your own experience and knowledge, or to ask others for advice?As knowledge and experience serve as twim towers in problem-solving, one is often presented with two major paths that pave the way for final fulfillment, eitther to wrack his brain, just like what happened to Neuton, siiting for many years under an apple tree and eventually figuring out ond of the greatest universal rules that govern the whole globe, or to seek for others’ widsom through their advice, just as in the case of Benjinin Franklin, gathering great minds under one roof and then establishing a most world-renown libray. Both ways work. When a practical goal is involved, however, Benjimin Franklin may best be regareded as a role model in this respect and asking people for advice often turn out to be the prime alternative.Experience and knowledge borrowed or learned f rom others’ advice contribute greatly to effectiveness and effeciency for a goal-accomplishment. Not all experience and knowledge related to problem-solving can be obtained by personal effort alone due to limitations of mind and capabilities of each individual. A single thought in someone’s mind is, more often than not, far less shining compared with group’s wisdom. That explains the famous old saying that one sees further when standing upon the shoulders’ of past great giants; that explains why a great lea der is always with greater minds; that also explains why teamwork in corperation is highly emphasized in the 21st century. Brainstormand exchange of ideas between different thoughts never fail to enhance capabilities of each individula involved, a team, a company, an institution, a country, or even the entire global village.Asking others’ advice instead of getting everything done on one’s own promotes democracy and communication too. In terms of democracy, it is necessary to give others rights and chances to speak since the problem may concern them in different ways, and their saying in turn reflects our respect toward freedom of speech as well as their wisdom. In terms of communication, idea exchange sometimes focuses more than solutions, and hereby better mutual understanding about perspectives, principles, praticalities and personalities of each other.Admittely turning to others for help and suggestion by no means refers to absolute and irresponsible dependence. Consideration upon different thoughts and ideas broadens our mind, enlarges our vision, furthers understanding, enhances more effective and efficient brainstorm, and stresses mutual respect in groups and communities, which undoubtedly gives rise to better, if not the best solutions. As is paraphrased from John F Kenedy, brainstormed, there is little we cannot do while divided, there is little we can do.篇二Case of Benjinin Franklin, gathering great minds under one roof and then establishing a most world-renown libray. Both ways work. When a practical goal is involved, however, Benjimin Franklin may best be regareded as a role model in this respect and asking people for advice often turn out to be the prime alternative.Experience and knowledge borrowed or learned from others' advice contribute greatly to effectiveness and effeciency for a goal-accomplishment. Not all experience and knowledge related to problem-solving can be obtained by personal effort alone due to limitations of mind and capabilities of each individual. A single thought in someone's mind is, more often than not, far less shining compared with group's wisdom. That explains the famous old saying that one sees further when standing upon the shoulders' of past great giants; that explains why a great leader is always with greater minds; that also explains why teamwork in corperation is highly emphasized in the 21st century. Brainstorm and exchange of ideas between different thoughts never fail to enhance capabilities of each individula involved, a team, a company, an institution, a country, or even the entire global village.Asking others' advice instead of getting everything done on one's own promotes democracy and communication too. In terms of democracy, it is necessary to give others rights and chances to speak since the problem may concern them in different ways, and their saying in turn reflects our respect toward freedom of speech as well as their wisdom. In terms of communication, idea exchange sometimes focuses more than solutions, and hereby better mutual understanding about perspectives, principles, praticalities and personalities of each other.Admittely turning to others for help and suggestion by no means refers to absolute and irresponsible dependence. Consideration upon different thoughts and ideas broadens our mind, enlarges our vision, furthers understanding, enhances more effective and efficient brainstorm, and stresses mutualrespect in groups and communities, which undoubtedly gives rise to better, if not the best solutions. As is paraphrased from John F Kenedy, brainstormed, there is little we cannot do while divided, there is little we can do.篇三After they complete their university studies, some students live in their hometowns. Others live in different towns and cities. Which do you think is beterr? Give reasons for your answer.After they complete their univerrsity studies, some students preferr to live in their hometowns while others choose to live in different towns or cities. Everybody has his own reasons for his preference. After my graduation, I will go back and live in my home city. I have made this decision because of the following reasons.Firstly, my home city is a big city that can offer a lot. There are plenty of opportunities for work, many big libraries for studies, several differrent musiums for visit, and numerous cinemas, theaters and centers for entertainment. When I go back there, I will have no difficulty in finding a job suitable for me and I can make use of all the facilities available there.Secondly, if I go back to my home city, I can look after my parents. I take this into consideration because I am their only child and they are now weak and getting on in age. If I live in the same city with them, I can visit them very often and help them whenever it is necessary.Thirdly, if I live in my home city, I will have a lot of friends, schoolmates and relatives to visit and to turn to for help when I need. Of course, I could get acquainted with many people and make many friends if I were to go to live in a strange place, but that takes time. If I go back to my home city, everybody will bewaiting for me and I will be able to settle down comfortably without any trouble and waste of time.In short, my choise is based on a careful consideration of my home city and my family. I think it is a better or sensible choice; in a certain sense, it is a must.Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.篇四If you have a good neighbor, you are a lucky person. You have someone who cares about your needs and your property, who is helpful in the little day-to-day situations that come up, and who is supportive in times of crisis.A good neighbor is someone who, for instance, understands that your children may occasionally run across his lawn,- even though you tell them not to. He'll realize that children can be careless about things like that, and he won't make a big fuss about it unless it becomes a regular thing. In the same vein, he knows that you'll understand if some of the trash from his trash cans blows across into your yard. In other words, he is sensitive to the unintentional things that can happen. He doesn't make a big deal about them.A good neighbor is also respectful of your property. For example, she asks your permission before doing anything that interferes with what's yours. This means she wouldn't plant a huge tree in between your houses without asking how you felt about it. If she wanted to put up a fence, she would let you know first. She might work with you to decide where it should be placed. Maybe the two of you would even split the cost.A good neighbor would lend you some milk if you ran out.She'd give you a ride to work if your car was broken, and let your children stay at her house in the evening if you got stuck working overtime. You would do the same for her. Both of you would help make the other's life easier.When something really awful happens to you, like a death in the family, a good neighbor will volunteer to help in any way he can. This could mean something small, like making some casseroles to put in your freezer to feed visiting relatives. Or it could mean something big, like helping you get through the sadness of the funeral. I think only someone who has experienced a bad neighbor can really appreciate a good one! A good neighbor can be a good friend. He or she can make all the difference in the world to your life.篇五Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and esamples to support your answer.Some people like to eat out at food stands and restaurants, while others like to prepare food at home. Often it depends on the kind of lifestyle people have. Those with very busy jobs ou tside the house don’t always have time to cook. They like the convenience of eating out. Overall, though, it is cheaper and healthier to eat at home.While eating in restaurants is fast, the money you spend can add up. When I have dinner at a restaurant with a friend, the bill is usually over twenty dollars. I can buy a lot of groceries with that much money. Even lunch at a fast-food stand usually costs five or six dollars for one person. That’s enough to feed the whole family at home. Eating at home is better for you, too. Mealsat restaurants are often high in fat and calories, and they serve big plates of food-much more food-than you need to eat at one meal. If you cook food at home, you have more control over the ingredients. You can use margarine instead of butter on your potatoes, or not put so much cheese on top of your pizza. At home, you can control your portion size. You can serve yourself as little as you want. In a restaurant, you may eat a full plate of food "because you paid for it."It’s true that eating out is convenient. You don’t have to shop, or cook, or clean up. But real home cooking doesn’t have to take up a lot of time. There are lots of simple meals that don’t take long to make. In fact, they’re faster than eating out, especially if you think of the time you spend driving to a restaurant, parking, waiting for a table,, waiting for service, and driving home.Both eating at restaurants and cooking at home can be satisfying. Both can taste good and be enjoyed with family and friends. I prefer cooking at home because of the money and health issues, but people will make the choice that fits their lifestyle best.。

托福独立写作作文模板

作文模板：大作文首段举例：1Never in human history have we experienced such an overwhelming problem of……（world wide pollution）. The controversy largely centers at whether the ……（responsibility of dealing with it should be all on the hand of government). I tend to trust my intuition that……（whoever pollutes should be cleaning it up) for reasons as follows.首段举例：2Never in our modern country have we witnessed such a great emphasis on ……（education of children）. What especially concerns us in this issue is whether……（the responsibility of our public finance should focus more on very young children education or on universities）.To the extent of my observation, having weighed up both sides, I am inclined to believe that……（the government should pay more attention to the young）for the following reasons.中间段落结构：平行段+并列段+让步段In the first place, one compelling argument is that……In addition，another indispensable part of my consideration is that……And of course, I do not intend to create the impression here that……（论点）is all good. However , there is no escaping the fact that……（论点反面）中间句扩充技巧：(1+2+3+4)1、扩展句2、因果局3、比较句4、例证句1、扩展句：1)It is truth universally acknowledged that……2)It is a poor story for our society that ……3)It is a common belief/sense that……4)Common sense tells us that……5)It is generally assumed that ……（我们通常假定）6)It is always taken for granted that （我们想当然的以为）7)It is widely accepted that……2、因果句：1）because/ because of2) due to/ thanks to3) owing to the fact that4) the reason(结果) is that （原因）5）A contribute to B = A lead to B6) B result from A7) sb. attributes B to A = B is attributed to A3、比较句：1）unlike (like)……2）just as ……，……3）compared to……，……4）A is （not）as ……as B5）A is superior to B; A is inferior to B4、例证句：1) 个人经历：personally，My personal experience tells me that……2）其他事件：for example；for instance ; A case in point is thatW e don’t have to look further than the case of……，to find Support of this idea/ argument.To illustrate this viewpoint, I can not fink of a better example than……3）数据调查：we are living in exponential times. According to the statistics，it is predicted that…Data from a recently conducted survey by a related department estimated that……Sometimes，number does number. It is estimated that/ to be ……（有时，数字不愧是数字，它显示出）4/让步段材料;1)however, they overlook one basic fact that2) a singular example may never lead to any universal truth3)they only stand on the behalf of the minority4)they fail to look at the matter in the long run5)they fail to look at the whole picture6)Nevertheless, what I need to emphasize here is that most of these issuescan be solved or even prevented with the development of technology.并列段举例：In the first place, one compelling argument is that the improvement in modern transportation and accommodation has brought convenience in people’s life. It is common belief that the rapid development of our daily means of transport such as bus, automobile, subway and so on has a significant effect on human life. Owing to the fact, people can save time and take easy way to commute during hour traffic. To illustrate this viewpoint, I can not think of a better example than private cars. Compared with walking on foot, it isdramatically fast and driving is not as complicated as operating a carriage. The importance of modern technology is clear to us.In addition，another indispensable part of my consideration is that the efficiency in communication has been greatly improved by the development of technology. It is a truth universally acknowledged that the modern society has a desperate need for efficiency especially in commercial practice or an educational environment. Compared to the past, it took people then one to six months to write letters and made it reach to other end of communication, if the distance was too far away. The present-day society has witnessed the huge amount of time being saved by using computers and E-mails. Sometimes, this can be minimized to as quickly as one second.And of course, I do not intend to create the impression here that technology is all good. However, there is no escaping the fact that technology also has some disadvantages like wars, pollutions, and the decline of our health. W e admit that some modern problems of society ar e attributed to the application of the bad parts and the mistaken extension beyond our law and humanity. Nevertheless, what I need to emphasize here is that most of these issues can be solved or even prevented with the development of technology. They fail to look at the matter in the long run.结尾段落：（表态+论述）1）、转述论点2）、总结论点3）、引申结束In the final analysis, I am still of the firm opinion that……，and sum up the given reasons discussed above, we can safely reach the conclusion that choosing……is a rather wise decision if…….结尾段示例：In the final analysis, I am still of the firm opinion that it is necessary for college students to work on a part-time job during there college years. And sum up the given reasons discussed above, we can safely r each the conclusion that choosing part-time job is a rather wise decision if these students pay more attention to their safety problems and try not to be money-obsessed individuals. It is on a whole an optional act to us to work before graduation.小作文综合写作：Introduction：●Overall, the speaker refutes(反驳) the reading materials argument about___1主题___ by providing contradictory（反对的）evidence concerning several critical respects (aspects) listed below.●In summary, the lecture casts serious doubt on the reading passages in thediscussion of whether ___1主题____ by questioning the following essential parts of the argument.Body paragraph 1:●The speaker begins by pointing out that___2听力反驳的第一个层面___●While the reading passages maintains that___3阅读的相关内容____，thispoint is invalidated by the listening material because the speaker argue that___*4听力第一论据____Body paragraph 2:●Next, the Speaker continues his refutation against the view expressed in thereading with the aid of the fact that___*5听力材料第二层面___.●Although ___6阅读相关内容____, the speaker completely disagrees it andprove that ____*7听力第二论点的论据___.Body paragraph3:●In terms of ___8听力第三个层面___, the passage and the lecture reachnothing but a disagreement.●Differing from the former which claims that____9阅读相关内容___, thelatter remains a suspicious attitude that___*10 听力第三点论据___.综合写作例文：Overall，the speaker refutes the reading materials argument about The School Uniform Policy, by providing contradictory evidence concerning several aspects listed below. In summary, the lecture casts serious doubt on the reading passages in the discussion of whether schools should implement a compulsory School Uniform Policy.The speaker begins by pointing out that cost and expenses in carrying out this policy. While the reading passage maintains that wearing school uniform is to reduce family’s economic burden, this point is invalidated by the listening material because the speaker argues that school uniform will require additional spending of buying more cloths and they are not very likely to be wore for a long time.Next, the speaker continues his refutation against the view expressed in the reading with the aid of the fact that it has a negative influence on students’academic performance. Although this policy tends to reduce transformation and save time in choosing cloths, students show the opposite result and may do harm to individual students taste and freedom.In terms of the connection between wearing trendy cloths and occurrence of violence events, the passage and the lecture reach nothing but a disagreement. Differing from the former which claims that to wear personal and fashionable clothes may incur violence in school environments, the latter remains asuspicious attitude that this approach is far from effective and suggests that alternative methods such as being kind, walking with company and so on.口语：第一题：personal preferenceWhat：观点表达句+比较级According to my understanding，the greatest leader of all times was Mahatma Gandhi . and I have several reasons for that.Why：to begin with，——，for example，——Besides，——，simply because，——So，——替换：I think/ believe/ suppose / guess/ betIn my opinion/ I assume thatAccording to my understandingAs far as I am concernedI hold the opinion thatI am under the impression thatI got the feeling that并列结构：To begin with；Also，personally speakingFor one thing；nevertheless，I believe thatFirst and foremost；in additionFor one thing；in the second place，First；That，however，……Like & Dislike:My favorite ……isI love/ enjoy/ have a fancy for/ have a great affection forI care for/ do fancy forI find my self addicted toI absolutely am into/ crazy aboutI am a (mobile) nut/ a big funSth. Entertains/ relaxes/ amuses/ recreates me more than anyting else in the world.Sth. kills most of my spare timesth. is my most effective time killer/ pain killerReasons & Examples:Why this is my favorite? One reason is that……Couple of reasons for thatAnd I have several reasons for that.GE & SEI like all kinds of music, including jazz, blues, and classical.I like music especially classical ones, well, Mozart for example.人物卡：W ell, as far as I am concerned, X is the most helpful teacher to me, and I have two main reasons for that. To begin with，he is really concerned about all the students in his class. For example, he would meet with me and other students after class to make sure that we understand his lessons. Also, personally speaking, he is of great help to those ambitious students who were eager to attend the foreign universities fill out their applications and edit their personal statement till very late.W ell, to be honest, I got the felling that good parents all distinguished themselves in treating their child patiently with an open mind. For one thing, it often takes many efforts to teach their kid about good and bad. Sometimes when kid gets very radical the parents needs to be patient enough to bring him or her back to the track. In addition a good parent also needs to be supportive enough when the child raises a reasonable request. If the kids are in trouble they should trust the kids to make their own decisions, like how to spend their pocket money or which study group to join. Only such parent can one make a good parent.W ell, according to my understanding, Lance Armstrong is my most admirable role model for several reasons. First and foremost, he is a cyclist who has won the Tour de France seven times in a row. That, however, is not the only reason I respected this man. He also battled the cancer. When I heard his story, it changed my life. Lance Armstrong inspired me to never give up my dream of going to the Olympics, even though it may seem impossible. All in all, his qualities of endurance and perseverance compelled me to become a better athlete and a stringer person.物品卡：In my opinion, the most distinctive thing in my daily life is my cell phone, because it has amazingly changed my life in two main aspects. To begin with, it helps me communicate with the world around me. For example, by using my cell phone, I could keep in touch with my friends, family members, classmates, you know, everyone! And even in dangerous situations, it could even save my life. I will just have to make a call telling others that I am in danger. More importantly, if I have to say, it’s also a great entertainment. When I get bored, it’s a music box, because my favorite MP3 music and MP4 movie-clips within my cell will easily cheer me up.W ell, without doubt, I’d like to say comedy amuses me most and I have a couple of reasons. First and foremost, it’s so relaxing. Whenever I want to watch a movie, more often than not, I’m looking for something fun, something thatrelieves my tiredness or sadness. A comedy fits my demand perfectly, as it’s nothing doctrine to teach seriously unlike documentaries, or tragedies or tear-jerkers and so on. Besides, Zhou Xing chi is the most famous and welcome joking star in my country, for 2 years I only focus on his shows, comedies of course. That’s why I really into all sorts of comedies, since they make me laugh every time and forget myself.I think computer is the most important invention in the recent 100 years for the following reasons. For one thing, computer connects the whole world as closely as possible so that different people can share information and communicate with each other by new methods, such as MSN, QQ, and E-mail. In addition, computer has also pushed the increasing trends of science and technology, based on their amazing calculating ability has been applied in the most high-tech fields, many software are developed to help research in other disciplines.事件卡W ell, in my opinion, my 20th birthday, my first surprising party held by my friends, surprised me most, and I have 2 main reasons for that. First of all, I was amazed by the definition of true friendship as some of my old friends traveling 2 hours by airplane coming to celebrate my birthday, who attacked me dramatically with a birthday cake. Another thing that was surprising and touching to me was that they took a photo of me which made the whole occasion unforgettable. Finally, they sang a birthday song for me according to western tradition, which is totally beyond my expectation.I got the feeling that just as people in western countries do, we Chinese hold Spring Festival to celebrate our lunar new year, which is the biggest event for each family as well as the whole nation. First, on the eve there usually is a big family reunion, and all families from all over China will be sitting around the same table, feasting, toasting and chitchatting. At 12 o’clock, we set off fire works and let our crackers in order to celebrate the coming of New Y ear. And after that, we visit our friends and relations to send our best wishes.地方卡W ell, as far as I am concerned, a forest would be my dream land for residence, and I have two main reasons for that. First of all, it is a fantastic way of embracing the great nature. If I got a chance, I would choose to build a splendid garden with whole lot of flowers, which will relieve me from strains burden. Besides, the tropical weather that I will enjoy is a perfect natural environment. For example, I don’t have to worry about the off-gas from automobiles, nor dazzling reflection of sun light from modern skyscrapers at all.W ell, I hold the opinion that living in a modern apartment with large roomswould be a wise decision, and I have two main reasons for that. First, I could always feel relaxed inside, since it has high ceilings and only a few pieces of modern furniture so it would feel more spacious than ever. Besides, I am also crazy about all the big picture windows that I could throw open in summer, so that the whole place would be light and airy. And so my room like that will really lift my spirits whenever I feel down or upset.第二题；paired choice二选一题：A or B ——preferA or 非A ——agree or disagree模板1：W ell, in such a dilemma, I believe __A__ is definitely a better choice in contrast with ___B__. And I have two main reasons for that.First of all, I believe that……, for exampleWhat’s more, I insist that__A1好__，simply because(on the other hand, __B1不好___, obviously, if not___)So，if I have to choose，I think A is apparently a better one。

托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和范文赏析

托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和范文赏析为了让大家更好的预备托福考试，我给大家整理一些托福考试作文范文，下面我就和大家共享，来观赏一下吧。

托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：important influence of classmates托福写作难点话题一览Are classmates a more important influence than parents on a childs success in school?Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a childs success in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.写作思路绽开结构分析要经过比较之后才能选择，并不能一概而论(We should not make sweeping generalizations)。

以下的问题可以关心拓展思路：孩子与谁相处的时间更长一些?(尽管相处时间越长不见得影响就更大) 孩子与谁沟通的更多一些?(许多父母缺乏与孩子进行沟通的技巧) 家长通过什么方式影响孩子?同学通过什么方式影响孩子?或者，可以使用“It depends”的策略：要看哪一方面的影响?比如：饮食习惯的影响?思索方式的影响?审美观点的影响?本话题高分范文赏析It is extremely difficult, maybe even impossible, to generalize the relationships between parents and children.After all, personalities, temperaments, and values differ from person to person as does the ability to raise children.Furthermore, the relationship between parents and child changes over time, and the same is true for relationships between classmates. As a result, the question of who is a more important influence is difficult to answer, but what is undeniable is that parents should and classmates can have significant impact on a childs success in school.Parents are responsible for raising a child, and they should instill the value of education in him. After all, a child who enjoys education and learning is more likely to do well in school. This success will open up all kinds of opportunities in his future, from studying at a reputable university to finding a good job.Therefore, parents should take an active interest in their childs education and help him through difficult times by encouraging and motivating him. Nevertheless, parents must be careful not to force their child to success, particularly in early adolescence. Many teenagers become temporarily alienated from their parents during this period of their life, and a parents insistence on academic excellence against the childs will could further erode their relationship and also have a negative effect on the childs schooling.Relationships to classmates have a significant effect on a childs academic performance, because it is in their company that most of a students learning takes place. Since it is important for children of all ages to be accepted by their peers, much of a students life is spent trying to fit in. Ideally, students will motivate and learn from each other, but often the opposite is the case. A student who shines in the classroom can become a social outcast, because his/her classmates are jealous of his/her performance. This can then cause him/her to become less inclined to study and work hard, because acceptance by the classmates is more important to him/her than high marks.托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：workerexperience and salary托福写作难点话题一览Hire an inexperienced worker with low salary or an experienced one with high salary?If you were an employer, which kind of worker would you prefer to hire: an inexperienced worker at a lower salary or an experienced worker at a higher salary? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.写作思路绽开结构分析选择哪一个，要看是什么样的工作岗位position。

托福改革写作新题型

托福改革写作新题型
根据ETS（教育考试服务机构）的官方消息，自2021年8月开始，托福写作部分将进行改革，引入新的题型。

下面是关于新的托福写作题型的详细介绍：
1. 独立写作任务（Independent Writing Task）：此题型与当前的独立写作题型相似，要求考生表达自己的观点，支持或反对某个论点，并提供相关的理由和具体例子。

新的改革主要在于测试的内容将更加贴近现实生活和学术领域，主题更加广泛，考生需要针对特定场景和情境进行分析和讨论。

2. 综合写作任务（Integrated Writing Task）：这项任务将取代目前的综合写作和阅读题型。

考生需要阅读一篇短文，并听一段对该短文内容的讲解。

然后，考生需要在规定时间内写一篇文章，总结并比较阅读材料和听力材料的内容、观点和结论。

这个新题型的目的是测试考生对学术和现实生活中的文本和听力材料的理解能力，以及他们的综合思考和写作能力。

这次的改革旨在更好地反映现实生活和学术场景，评估考生的语言能力和思维能力。

新的写作题型将加强对学术和实际领域的涵盖和理解，考察考生的批判性思维、分析能力和逻辑推理能力。

这意味着考生需要更多地进行思考、分析和总结。

为应对这一改革，考生应该加强对各领域的了解和积累，在备考过程中注重提高批判性思维和写作能力，并熟悉新的题型和评分标准。

此外，考生还应该多做练习，通过模拟考试来熟悉新题型的要求和时间限制。

总的来说，新的托福写作题型将使考生面临更多的挑战，但也为他们提供了更多展示自己能力的机会。

通过积极备考和充分准备，考生可以更好地应对新题型的要求，取得更好的成绩。

托福综合写作和独立写作评分标准

托福综合写作和独立写作评分标准一、托福写作评分标准写一篇托福5分作文:文章切中要害，讲解充分，有说服力；段落条理清晰，联系紧密，过渡自然，逻辑性强；段落中句子与句子衔接流畅，句式运用恰当、灵活、巧妙；使用准确恰当的词语。

文章中有一些语法拼写错误，但不影响内容表达。

写一篇托福4分作文:文章切中要害，讲解基本充分，但在一些细节上有缺陷。

段落组织有序，联系紧密，过渡自然，逻辑性强；句子之间衔接顺畅，句式运用得当灵活；用词基本合适。

这篇文章中有几处用词不当和语法拼写错误。

写一篇托福3分作文:文章切中要害，解释尚可，拓展不足。

段落组织有序，联系紧密，自然，符合逻辑；句子之间的连接基本顺畅；有一些语法错误；用词很常见，有时也不恰当。

词性区分和拼写有一些错误。

写一篇托福2分作文:文章切中要害，段落组织基本合理，符合逻辑，但只存在于语义层面，没有体现在语言表达上；句子的框架结构基本建立，但语法错误较多，句子之间连接不顺畅，往往不善于使用逻辑连词，显得幼稚生硬。

词汇方面拼写错误较多，用词往往不恰当。

写托福1分作文:文章切中要害。

讲解没有开始，仅限于三言两语回答问题；没有段落组织，凌乱，篇幅短，只有一段；句子按照一定的逻辑关系排列，每个句子的基本框架都能看出来，但结构或语法错误较多；用词不当，拼写错误多。

写托福0分:文章各方面都有严重错误，句子不像句子。

总体印象是完全没有写作能力，英语水平太低，达不到一分的标准，只能拿最低分。

二、托福写作考试技巧学会Paraphrase综合写作备考的过程中，需要掌握paraphrase的技巧。

如果有同学不理解paraphrase的话，我简单介绍一下，paraphrase其实就是指意义，通俗地讲就是“换句话说”。

这种能力在综合写作中非常重要，因为综合写作要根据听力和阅读来写文章，但是却不能用原文的内容。

独立写作中，我们要再开头重复问题时也要用paraphrase，不能照抄。

所以大家在平时练习中要掌握这个技能。

托福写作题型简介及备考策略——独立写作

托福写作题型简介及备考策略——独立写作托福写作有分为独立写作和综合写作两个部分今天小编就来和大家分享一下独立写作的题型简介以及备考策略，希望对大家有帮助！托福写作题型简介及备考策略——独立写作1 托福独立写作介绍1.1 典型问法托福独立写作部分(the Independent Writing Task)为新托福写作试题的第二个部分，要求考生针对某个问题提出自己的论点并展开，考试时间为30分钟。

这种题目的典型问法为：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?[A sentence or sentences that present an issue appear here]Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.1.2 评分原则和评分标准评分原则：从2010年1月开始，iBT写作评分系统做出重大改革。

由原来的两位阅卷者独立阅卷给分，两个分数的算术平均值为原始分，改为一个阅卷人和一个电脑评分系统(E-Rater)分别给分。

其中，E-Rater负责Linguistic feature(语言因素)，即语法，句法和结构;人工负责文章内容和含义;两部分相加，即为考生的作文原始分。

而最终的分数则与原始分所占的百分比(Percentile)相关：比如30分对应97.9%，即只有2.1%的人得到了满分。

评分标准：Score 5: An essay as this level largely accomplishes all of the following:Effectively addresses the topic and task;Is well-organized and well-developed, using clearly appropriate explanation, exemplifications, and/or details;Display unity, progression and coherence;Display consistent facility in the use of language,demonstrating syntactic variety, appropriate word choice and idiomaticity, though it may have minor lexical or grammatical errors.评分标准解读：阅卷人会从考生是否切题，如何展开论点，如何组织文章结构和语言运用四个方面评估考生的文章。

托福Independent task(独立写作)指导

Independent task(独立写作）1.Introduction：独立写作是托福写作中的第二部分，所占分值为2/3, 具体考试要求为：Writing based on knowledge and experience directions.For this task, you will write an essay in response to a question that asks you to state, explain and support your opinion on an issue. You will have 30 minutes to write your essay.Typically, an effective essay will contain a minimum of 300 words. Your essay will be judged on the quality of your writing. This includes the development of your ideas, the organization of the content, and the quality and accuracy of the language you used to express ideas.2.Scoring standard：3. 通过分析以上评分标准，不难得出托福独立写作的要点为：1) 观点明确：(effectively addresses the writing topic and task)观点的表明主要存在于开头段和结尾段。

开头段阐明观点，结尾段则是重述观点。

开头段的观点一定要鲜明，结尾与开头的观点必须一致。

2) 论证充分：(well organized and well developed)进行论证的时候避免假大空，要具体、明确，且对论点有支持作用，不能空洞和泛泛而谈。

2024托福独立写作真题及范文

2. Provide additional training in teaching effectively for high school teachers, using online material that each teacher will study individually.
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• Students aged 13-18 are taught different subjects by different teachers while younger students are taught by only one teacher all day long. Some people suggest it would benefit young students to be taught by different teachers. Do you agree with this view? Why or why not?
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Some young people are free in the evenings or have days off at school, which way can bring them the most benefit? 1、to accumulate work experience by a part-time job or volunteering in a community 2、learning to play a sport 3、learning to play a musical instrument
2024.7.2 A city wants to help teachers of its high school students (age14-18)improve their teaching. It is considering two plans: 1. Choose a small group of excellent teachers; these teachers will attend a class led by an expert for additional training in how to teach effectively, and they will then come back to their schools and provide that training for other teachers in school.

英语考试作文-托福写作task2生活类孩子应该学好玩好不做家务？

英语考试作文托福写作task2生活类孩子应该学好玩好不做家务？托福写作部分一共分为两大任务，task 1考察考生对阅读材料和听力材料的信息整合能力，task2考察考生对某一特定话题的独立观点表达，具体任务特点不同，我们的应对策略也不同。

托福写作task 2又被称为托福独立写作，话题涉及的领域多样，生活类是考察频率比较高的类别之一，下面我们来看一篇生活类话题拓展的真题解析：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should only study and play rather than help with household chores.这道题是对家庭生活中的“孩子行为”进行探讨，我们可以从每个成员的责任和义务角度来思考。

Responsibility 1: Study学习是孩子的责任之一，因为作为社会的一员，每个孩子的成长都与社会未来的发展息息相关，从而好好学习就是塑造自我(self-cultivate)的一个有力途径。

Sample sentences:1. Some people hold the opinion that study is a free option, which is a misunderstanding indeed, because everyone has the responsibility to self-cultivate as a member of the society.2. Children should learn to be a well-behaved person, which is closely related to the future of the society.Responsibility 2: Family Duty孩子不仅是社会的一员，更是家庭的一员，要成为一个良好公民的前提是能够胜任家庭成员，做力所能及的家务事是培养孩子责任感的一个有效手段(effective means)，不仅如此，做家务可以训练一些基本技能(basic skills)。

托福综合写作和独立写作评分标准

托福综合写作和独立写作评分标准新托福写作考试由两局部组成：综合写作和独立写作。

综合写作：考生先阅读一篇短文，再听一段相关内容的讲座录音，讲座的演讲者直接讨论短文中的观点，要求考生把演讲者就短文观点发表的看法写成一篇摘要。

独立写作：要求考生针对某一发表个人的观点，并用具体的理由和事例来支持自己的观点。

每篇作文都由两位评分人员根据统一的评分标准，在0～5分的范围内评分(只给整数分数)，而后取平均值，最后将这个平均值转换为30分制。

综合写作评分标准1.内容的完整性和准确性。

简单地说，就是文章是否有将讲座中的关键信息点完整、准确地提取出来(通常情况下有三点)，并和阅读材料中的相关内容有效地一一对应。

如果讲座中的信息点有缺失，那么会有一定程度的扣分；如果只写了有关阅读材料的观点，得1分。

2.文章的组织机构，词汇和语法的正确性和准确性。

高分的作文需要做到条理清晰，结构连贯，用词恰当，能够准确地表达讲座中的观点与阅读材料中的观点是如何相互联系的，只要作文中的错误不至于使内容表述出现误解，一些偶尔出现的语言错误，如单词拼写、单复数问题等，不会对作文成绩产生很大影响，当然，错误肯定是越少越好的。

1.有效回应题目，说明文章主题。

一般来说，独立写作完全跑题的情况很少，但是很多考生在展开讨论时所采用的论据，比拟容易出现跟主题关联性不大的情况，即局部答非所问的现象，从而影响了得分。

2.逻辑条理清楚，论证充分展开。

这一点的关键在于文章论证的展开，是否提供了大量的细节和例子来支持观点，而非泛泛而谈地说理。

比方说某位的英文写作能力很强，我光说很强，很厉害，写得很好都很外表，但是我如果说这位同学托福写作考了29分，那么就是很细节很有说服力的论据了。

3.内容连贯一致，衔接自然流畅。

到达内容连贯一致的文章通常全文围绕中心论点展开，而不会论据自相矛盾，也不会重复论证，有时候通过一些表示因果、先后、递进的关系连词可以起到粘合剂的作用。

4.遣词造句地道，语言驾驭娴熟。

托福写作考试内容

托福写作考试内容托福写作考试内容托福写作考试内容新托福考试的写作部分包括两道试题，需在大约50分钟的时间内完成。

第一篇叫做综合写作，要求考生首先阅读一篇文章，五分钟以后，文章隐去，播放一段与文章有关的课堂演讲。

课堂演讲列举了一些论据反驳文章中的论点、论据。

随后要求考生在20分钟内写一篇作文，总结课堂演讲的论点、论据，并陈述这些论点、论据是如何反驳文章的论点、论据的，字数要求为150字到225字之间。

在写作时，文章会重新显示在屏幕上。

这篇作文不要求考生阐述自己的观点。

第二篇叫做独立写作，需30分钟的时间，需要考生根据自己的知识和经验陈述、解释并支持对待某一问题的某个看法。

通常有效的回答应是一篇300个单词左右的作文。

考查综合语言技能的作文题目的评分以回答的.质量、完整性和准确性为依据。

听力听力部分包含两个对话和四段演讲(包括教室对话在内)。

每个对话涉及2个或2个以上的说话者，每个对话对应5道试题；每段演讲对应6道试题。

听力部分共包括34道试题。

每道试题是1至2分，共34至36分。

听力部分的时间大约是20分钟。

每个对话是2至3分钟，每个演讲是4至6分钟。

考生可以在听录音的过程中做笔记帮助答题。

口语新托福考试的口语部分共有6题，总时间约为15分钟。

第1题和第2题为独立回答题，准备时间为15秒，回答问题时间为45秒。

问题会被朗读出来，同时会出现在屏幕上。

第3题和第4题要求考生先阅读一段文字，然后再听一段与阅读文字在内容上相关的听力材料，最后考生按照要求回答相关问题。

通常一道题是情景题，另一道是学术题，阅读材料只含一个自然段，共45秒钟的阅读时间。

听力材料可能是对话，也可能是演讲，其长度大约为1分半钟，考生可以在听录音的过程中做笔记来帮助答题。

考生有30秒的准备时间，60秒的回答问题时间。

第5题和第6题以考试中的听力材料为基础，要求考生回答相关问题。

考生有20秒的准备时间，60秒的时间回答问题。

每个回答的得分是0至4分。

新托福写作真经4test2独立写作解析-智课教育旗下智课教育

新托福写作真经4test2独⽴写作解析-智课教育旗下智课教育智课⽹托福备考资料新托福写作真经4test2独⽴写作解析-智课教育旗下智课教育希望所有备考托福的⼩伙伴都能够真正的参透这份资料，这样的话，托福写作也就差不多了。

接下来，智课教育⼩编和⼤家分享新托福写作真经4test2独⽴写作部分的内容。

新托福写作真经4收录了24套测试题⽬，每⼀套测试题⽬都是托福考试中经常考的话题。

希望所有备考托福的⼩伙伴都能够真正的参透这份资料，这样的话，托福写作也就差不多了。

接下来，智课教育⼩编和⼤家分享新托福写作真经4test2独⽴写作部分的内容。

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The government should invest more money in children’s education than in college students. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. 2009-11-7NA你赞成还是反对下⾯的命题?相⽐⼤学教育，政府应给予基础教育更⼤的投⼊。

请叙述具体的理由，并且通过举例⽀持⾃⼰的观点。

第⼀部分：题⽬分析第⼀：分类:教育类第⼆：适⽤于本题⽬的万能理由1、时间具体⽅⾯：浪费时间;花费时间(投⼊);时间长的影响;例如：Students would receive a better education if they were required to attend classes for 11 months of a year.Disagree：时间太长会降低学⽣对学习的兴趣;其他⾓度：学习太长学习效率会降低，效果差;学习太长会影响学⽣健康;2、压⼒具体⽅⾯：压⼒⼤、负担重;压⼒⼤带来的不良后果;例如：University students should be required to take basic science classes even if they are not part of the field of the study.Disagree：学习太多学科对于学⽣来说有压⼒ (基础科学包括很多学科：数学，化学，物理，等);压⼒太⼤的情况下，很可能学不好;其他⾓度：不是⾃⼰的专业，就业⽅⾯不⽤基础科学的知识;⾼中就学过，⼤学重复学，浪费时间。

托福写作考试介绍：写作考试内容及写作方法

托福写作考试介绍：写作考试内容及写作方法托福写作考试分为综合写作和独立写作，综合写作考察大家归纳能力以及听力和阅读能力，独立写作需要大家写出一篇内容完整论据充分的文章。

托福写作考试想要拿高分必需对考试有个详细的了解，接下来我们来具体介绍一下托福写作考试。

托福写作考试介绍：写作考试内容及写作方法一. 托福写作考试详细介绍托福写作总时长55分钟，需要完成两个写作任务。

1.综合写作托福综合写作任务有3个，即阅读、听力与写作。

大家可以把阅读一篇有关学术性话题的短文，然后在听力部分你将听到一名演讲者从不同的观点讨论同样的主题。

通过阅读或听力材料当成是基础的写作试题，写作时间大概是20分钟。

考生们必须要阅读一篇学术演讲，阅读的时间大概是三分钟。

然后文章隐去，此时考生们要求听一段演讲时间大概是1分半钟。

但是后面当考生写作文时，依然能够看见在放听力材料时隐去的阅读材料。

考生在听录音的过程中可以做笔记来帮助答题。

考生可以使用剩下的20分钟的时间来总结听力材料中的要点，并解释这些要点与阅读材料中的要求有何不同。

通常有效的回答应是一篇150-225个单词的作文。

2.独立写作立写作任务测试你依据自身的经历与知识写作的能力。

大家要把一篇写作完成，通过某一个议题阐述和支持你的观点。

在此主要是用具体细节来支持你的观点或选择。

关于试题方面的时间大概是30分钟。

和如今机考托福的写作或托福写作考试(TWE)类似需要考生根据自己的知识和经验陈述、解释同时支持对待其中一问题的某个看法。

尽管从理论上字数并未有上限，但是通常有效的回答应是一篇300个单词左右的作文。

每个写作任务的分数是0-5分。

考查综合语言技能的作文题目的评分以回答的质量、完整性和准确性为依据。

二. 托福写作方法：3步完成写作第一步：审题、确定立场、列出理由(只需要在草稿纸上用英文单词或汉语列出各个理由，防止遗忘)，最少3分钟最多5分钟。

要避免两个极端：a.用时太少，理由没有想清楚就开始写，不仅造成文章逻辑结构不清，还会引起行文中频繁的修正，欲速则不达;b.用时太多，不要追求一次思考就能把每一条理由及相关例证都想出来。

托福写作评分细则

独立写作实例分析
题目解析
详细分析题目要求
提升建议
分享如何提升写作水平
评分维度
探讨每个评分维度的得分情况
综合写作实例分析
在这一页中，我们将深入分析一道综合写作题目，包括对阅读与听力材料的分析，以及点评写作中的关键要点。通过实例分析，帮助您更好理解托福写作评分细则。
综合写作实例分析
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写作备考展望
未来重点
展望托福写作备考的重点
挑战难题
鼓励勇敢挑战写作难题
学习计划
提出持续学习计划
备考心得分享
01 体会心得
面对托福写作备考的心得与体会
02 成功经验
提供备考中的成功经验分享
03 自信挑战
鼓励相信自己，勇敢迎接考试挑战
备考心得分享
策略分享
分享备考策略和技巧
心态调整
调整心态，保持平和心态备考
综合写作评分标准
程度等级
0-5的七个等级
考察内容
阅读与听力能力综合思考和表达能力
重点
对阅读材料和听力材料的理解和分析
综合写作得分点
准确理解
阅读材料和听力材料的主旨
合理分析
相关信息，抓住核心要点
有效比较
阅读与听力材料之间的异同点
综合写作常见失分点
失分原因
理解不准确导致论据支持不足
逻辑问题
分析不清晰，逻辑脉络混乱
练习反馈持续学习
写作技巧进阶
在托福写作中，除了语言表达和逻辑思维，时间管理也是至关重要的一环。合理安排写作时间，有效利用备考时间，保持高效写作能够帮助提升写作水平。
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