建议信的写作

建议信的写作

建议信是就某事提出自己的建议或忠告,以便让对方接受自己的想法、主张并解决有关问题;建议信可以写给个人,就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法或观点；也可以写给某个组织或者机构,就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告;建议信要给出写信的原因,建议

的内容,提出建议的理由,而且提出的理由要合情合理,语气一定要得当,既要委婉礼貌,又要有说服力;

写建议信首先要明确写作意图,即简要陈述事由,简单介绍自己,注意语气;建议信的特点：简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力;

写建议信也要遵循信件的基本格式：

①信头heading,写信人的姓名和地址要写在右上角,收信人的姓名和地址要写在左上角;

②称呼salutation,即对收信人的称呼,一般用dear/my

dear ...;

③正文body,即信件的主要内容;

④信尾客套语complimentary close,写信人在信的右或左下角,写上表示自己对收信人一种礼貌客气的谦称,一般有sincerely yours,yours sincerely,yours truly,yours等;

⑤信尾签名signature,在信末写上写信人的姓名,如：Li Hua;

建议信有一些常用的句式,如开头常用句式：

I am writing to express my views about ...

You have asked me for my advice concerning ...and i will try to make some useful suggestions;

表达建议的常用句式：

I would recommend that ...

In my opinion, it would be beneficial if ...

As to ... i suggest that you choose ...

You do not have to devote all your time to ...

请同学们给一位承建社区建筑的建筑师写一封建议信,要求使

用委婉的表达,望其改善建筑,给残疾人提供方便;

习作1

Rencently, I’m told that an architect of a new railway station is going to be constructed in our country, I hope you will not mind me writing to make some suggestions.

First of all, with common paths uneasy for disabled people to pass, adequate access for wheelchairs is needed,

which can make them feel as important as other people.

Secondly, I wonder if there would be a space at the end of each row for people in wheelchairs to sit next to their friends in waiting rooms.

Last but not the least, as disabled people face the trouble in moving, it would be handy to arrange for some staffs near the entrance to help them get to the waiting places easily.

Though in some ways, the added construction may occupy much space, the advantages overweight the disadvantages, for it will contribute to the harmony of society.

Enthusiastic to help, I hope my suggestions can meet with your approval.

点评

这篇习作对同学们有三个基本要求：

1. 掌握信件的基本格式；

2. 学会使用委婉礼貌表达进行建议；

3. 提出有效建议并清晰表达;

习作一有以下特点：

1. 没有将信件的基本格式写到位,忽略了开头和结尾;没有称谓和落款,也没有最基本的自我介绍,有时候开门见山会让读信人

摸不到头脑;

2. 正文中提供的建议语气委婉,这一点上完成得不错;如：

I hope you will not mind me writing to make some suggestions.

I wonder if there would be a space at the end of each row for people in wheelchairs to sit next to their friends in waiting rooms.

... it would be handy to arrange for some staffs near the entrance to help them get to the waiting places easily. 习作2

Dear architect,

I head that you are to be the architect for the new railway station in our area, I hope you will not mind me writing to ask if you have thought about the needs of disabled customers. In particular, I wonder if you have considered the following things.

Considering the situation, I want to put forward some suggestions on how to make it more comfortable for people,