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Correct the errors in the following sentences.

Example: After seeing an offensive mouthwash ad on television. I resolved never to buy that brand again.

After seeing an offensive mouthwash ad on television, I resolved never to buy that brand again.

02：

1. I hear that the view from the Sears Tower in Chicago is magnificent, I have never

visited it.

2. Our school‘s computers are more advanced than your school.

3. To answer a phone call politely, your tone of voice must be carefully controlled.

4. You should strive to cooperate with your co-workers to improve communication,

for furthering professional development and to bring about change.

5. He has always and will always exert himself for the highest honors.

03：

1. The rain might last for a while, clouds covered the entire sky.

2. In the evening we would swim in the lake and dancing afterward.

3. That woman just bought her dog a milk shake in a red skirt.

4. To pass the course, your term paper must be handed in on time.

5. Harry wouldn’t make a good negotiator he doesn’t have the patience.

04：

1. To keep the girl students interested in getting in shape, an exercise program was set up for the summer months.

2. Although the season has not yet begun has caused the public to get overly anxious for information about the team.

3. Daisy was an adult, married, and had a young daughter.

4. The reason for Holden’s disappointment being that his sister wasn’t there to

comfort him.

5. She paid five dollars for a dress at the county fair that she wanted.

05：

1. My brother’s house is on Alp Street. Which is getting new sewers next week.

2. Many large department stores issue credit cards to their customers can be used to make purchases at a particular store.

3. Born in New Zealand, it is natural to enjoy eating roast lamb.

4. She hoped, by doing lots of revision and studying, pass the exams.

5. The mayor was described as a round, squat (矮胖的) man with a droopy (下垂的) beard weighing 60 kg.

06：

1. A brother may not be a friend, a friend will always be a brother.

2. Speaking before a group of examiners, the girl’s knees shook badly.

3. The article is difficult to understand not because the vocabulary is technical but

because of the complicated sentence structure.

4. Our teacher showed us how to create E-cards on the computer with an encouraging

smile. (misplaced modifier)

5. We should budget carefully. Even though our income has been greatly increasing.

07：

1. She got A’s in her math exam by using her pocket calculator. Which she was not allowed to use at school.

2. He was staring at the girl by the vending machine (投币式自动售货机)wearing dark glasses.

3. Sara leaped up screaming a black spider was on her leg.

4. Relieved of your responsibilities at your job, your home should be a place to relax.

5. Charlotte loved the movie Gone with the Wind, but Lyde hated it. His chief

objection being that it lasted four hours.

08：

1. In summer, Juanna didn’t love traveli ng in Rome she felt it was too hot there.

2. Shakespeare wrote comedies, tragedies, romances, and the plays which were based

on historical events.

3. While driving on Blueberry Avenue yesterday afternoon, a tree fell toward Jack’s car.

4. One of Jenny’s greatest joys in life is eating desserts. Such as milkshake, cookies or strawberry cake.

5. Peter ordered the meal for his friends ranging from fried shrimp to chopped beef.

09：

1. There is a very beautiful garden on campus, that is my favorite spot.

2. She closed her eyes. Thinking back through the years of being mother, wife, friend,