2018版高中英语人教版必修二学案：Unit5Writing完美版(最新整理)

Writing

如何写征求建议的信件

征求建议的信件，一般分三个部分来写：

1.首先说明自己的情况，写信的目的；

2.第二步要讲明自己面临的困难和问题，要简洁明晰；

3.请求对方给出建议，并且在信的结尾要向对方表示感谢。

[典型句式]

★自我介绍，征求建议

My name is...I'm writing to you for some advice on...

I'm writing a letter to you to get some advice on ...

Please give me some advice and I will appreciate it very much．

★陈述自己面临的困难和问题

I have a new friend．However, ...

I can hardly bear/tolerate/put up with it any

longer．I have great difficulty/trouble in doing...

I don't know how to learn English．

I really feel lonely at the new

school．I find it difficult to...

★请求对方给出建议

What do you think is the best way for us?

Do you think it's a good idea to...?

I don't know what we should do to achieve this

goal．Could you please tell me...?

I would appreciate it if...

I would be grateful if...

假设你叫李华，欲与本校另外四名同学组建一支乐队，但缺乏经验，请就以下情况或问题给知名音乐人卡曾斯(Cousins)先生发一封电子邮件以寻求帮助。

1.成员中有三名男生和两名女生，均喜欢流行音乐与现代舞蹈。

2.每周只在周末排练，时间是否够用？初期演唱宜多元化还是一种风格？

3.怎样获得较多的表演机会？

4.希望他能为乐队取个名字。

注意：词数100 左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

亮点点评

Dear Mr．Cousins，

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua [写作要点]

1.首段点明身份及写信目的。

2.中段介绍所遇问题，即求助内容，可用first，second，last 或to begin with，besides，what's more 等依次陈述。

3.尾段写希望得到别人的帮助，并盼回复，可用Would you like to give us some advice？或I/We'd appreciate it if you would come up with...for...或We are thankful for you to...

Dear Mr．Cousins，

I'm Li Hua．①Since you are a well-known musician，I'm writing this E-mail to②ask you for some advice on how to ②form a band．

I, together with two boys and two girls in our school，want to form a band．Not only are we all fond of pop music，but we like modern dance as well, both of which make our life colorful．I'd like to know①whether we should play one kind of music or different styles to start with．And is it enough to practise only at weekends？③Besides, how can we get more chances to perform? We'd appreciate it if you would come up with a name for our band．

Looking forward to your

reply．Best wishes!

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

本篇文章表意完整，条理清楚，开篇点明目的，内容叙述完整，末尾提出美好期盼，

句与句之间过渡合理，是一篇不错的习作。

①since，whether 引导的从句使表达的内容充实丰富。

②ask...for advice，form a band 等短语运用恰当。

③过渡性词语Besides 等的运用使上下文过渡自然。

假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校上暑期课程，你遇到了一些困难，希望能够得到学

范文示例

校学习中心(Learning Center)的帮助。根据学校规定，你需要书面预约，请按照下列要点写一封信：

1.本人简介；

2.求助内容；

3.约定时间；

4．你的联系方式(Email：lihua@126．com；Tel：12345678)

注意：1．词数100 左右；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．开头及结束语已为你写好(不计入总词数)。

Dear Sir/Madam，

Looking forward to your immediate reply．

【参考范文】Dear Sir/Madam，Yours，Li Hua

I'm Li Hua, a Chinese student who is taking summer courses in your university．I'm writing to ask for help．

I came here last month and found my courses interesting．But I have some difficulties taking notes and I have no idea how to use the library．I was told that the Learning Center provides help for students, so I'm wondering if I could get some help from you．I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons．Please let me know which day is convenient for you．You may email or phone me．Here are my email address and telephone number: lihua@ 126．com; 12345678．

Looking forward to your immediate reply．

Yours，

Li Hua