表达高级词汇与句子

1、常见的不地道表达

（1）句子开头单调，常以人称代词I或he/she

I think he is a brave boy. /改用短语：In my opinion, he is a brave boy.

I am very pleased to be the owner of the card.

改用形式主语：It is very pleased to be the owner of the card.

I really want to make friends with foreign student s because we’re in the same world.

改变句型：The reason why I would like to make friends with foreign students is that we are living in the same world.

I would like to thank you at the end of our middle school education.

加开头修饰：What I want to do is to thank you at the end of our middle school education. He saved two of his classmates.

改变语序：Two of his classmates was saved by him.

He did his best when he faced great danger.

改变语序：Facing great danger, he did his best to help others.

（2）句子过短或过简

Jim is going to take part in the party. Mary is going to take part in the party.

用连接词连接：Jim as well as Mary is going to take part in the party.

I am a middle school student. I learn many subjects at school. I’m interested in computer science

改为复合句：Being a middle school stud ent, I learn many subjects at school, of which I’m interested in computer science the most.

2、简单词替换成高级词汇

think可换成：believe personally imagine consider personally

as far as I'm concerned

in my opinion

as long as I know

I think if you work har d, you will be successful. →

As far as I'm concerned, I should learn from Lin Hao.

Personally, I should learn from Lin Hao.

want可换成：wonder desire intend

I want to give them some help. →

I wonder if I can give them some help.

I intend to know if I can give them some help.

ask可换成：inquire enquire about

He asked the teacher the question. →

He inquired the teacher about the question.

begin可换成：start set out come on come to exist

At 9 o’clock the sports meeting began. →

The sports meeting set out at 9 o’clock

get可换成：obtain acquire

Reading is the best method to get knowledge. →

Reading is the best method to obtain knowledge.

Reading is the best method to acquire knowledge.

like可换成：be willing to be happy to

be of good cheer be fond of

I like playing basketball. →

I am fond of playing basketball.

I am always willing to play basketball.

can可换成：be able to be capable of

I can help my parents with the housework. →

I am capable of helping my parents with the housework.

I am able to help my parents with the housework.

have可换成：obtain exist gain achieve receive

I have his trust finally. →

I gain his trust finally.

happy可换成：enjoy oneself; have a good time; joyful; cheerful: Everyone is happy after the picnic. →

Everyone have a good time during the picnic.

good可换成：wonderful; nice; great; kind;

This is a good experience. →

This is a wonderful experience.

This is a great experience.

surprise可换成：shock; be lost in wonder, amaze

It is a surprise that you come here so early.

I am shocked that you come here so early.

2、情感类表达

正面情感的表述

be interested in=be absorbed in=bury oneself in 对...感兴趣；对...入迷例句：I am interested in playing games.