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批改网简介

批改网简介

句酷批改网——帮你轻松改作文
句酷批改网——帮你轻松改作文
批改网( )是一款基于语料库大数据的英语作文智能批改系统,能有效提高教师批改英语作文的效率,激发学生英语学习兴趣,提升英语写作能力。

截止到目前为止,全国已经有4000多所高校的老师在使用批改网,注册教师数已经突破6.5万人,注册学生数突破950万人,累积批改作文超过1亿篇。

其主要特点如下:
1、反馈及时,支持过程性评价
它通过将学生作文和超过23亿字词的标准语料库进行对比分析后,能够在1.2秒内给出分数、评语和按句点评的反馈。

学生可以根据系统给出的反馈进行多次修改完善,多次提交批改,从而不断提高自己的作文分数。

在2015年寒假北京市教委作文大赛(/?c=mszx&a=home )中,学生平均修改次数14.21次,其中有一位初二学生的作文修改了1123次。

2、大数据分析展现薄弱点,用输出反拨输入
系统会对一批学生的作文或者一篇作文的多个版本进行分析,并提供全面的个性化诊断报告,帮助老师分析学生的个性化问题和共性问题,为学校教学效果评测、教师教学与研究、学生学习提供有效数据支持。

详情可参考:北京市初中学生英文写作诊断数据分析报告(/view/4c84dbf9caaedd3383c4d39b )
3、自适应批改引擎适应中国各学段使用需要
该套系统拥有超过192个评分维度,通过机器学习可以适应各类测试环境下的个性化评分要求,目前已有初中、高中、SAT 、四六级、雅思等十多种打分公式,供师生使用。

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英语作文自动评价反馈对学生词汇修改的影响——以批改网为例

英语作文自动评价反馈对学生词汇修改的影响——以批改网为例

71英语作文自动评价反馈对学生词汇修改的影响*——以批改网为例黄爱琼 张文霞(清华大学 外文系,北京 100084)摘要:文章通过对调查问卷、总结报告和访谈记录的分析,对37名学生基于英语作文自动评价(Automated Writing Evaluation ,AWE )反馈的写作过程进行了探讨,并以批改网为例,重点研究了AWE 提供的词汇反馈点和AWE 提供的反馈对学生的词汇修改的影响这两个问题。

文章研究的结果表明,批改网提供的词汇反馈点主要为学习资源反馈点,给予的词汇警示和词汇错误反馈点主要集中于名词、冠词、动词和搭配错误;学生比较关注批改网反馈给予的词汇错误和词汇警示,反馈有助于提升文本词汇的多样性和复杂性,学生对涉及单词、搭配/短语的反馈比较满意。

此外,文章还讨论了AWE 反馈影响学生词汇修改的相关因素,以期有针对性地发挥AWE 反馈的积极作用,提升学生的英文写作水平,更好地开展大学英语写作教学。

关键词:作文自动评价反馈;大学英语;词汇修改;批改网【中图分类号】G40-057 【文献标识码】A 【论文编号】1009—8097(2018)07—0071—08 【DOI 】10.3969/j.issn.1009-8097.2018.07.011在当前国内的英语写作教学中,教师批改作文的工作量大,无法提供及时有效的反馈[1]。

杨永林等[2]提到英语教师批改作文的三项基本功是“准确判断、精准修改、合理建议”,而要满足这三项标准需要3~5年的严格训练,因此“有必要借助智能化的文章批改利器,来缓解这个问题”。

相较于传统的教师反馈,人工智能(Artificial Intelligence ,AI )辅助批改作文和计算机辅助语言测试具有既省时又省力的经济价值[3],因而在当代英语教学中得以迅速推广。

随着AI 的不断开发利用,尤其是利用计算机技术对作文进行评估和记分[4]的AWE 的研发和应用,使计算机辅助英语教学和测试的局限性得以逐渐突破,说和写的潜力(即输出性能力)得以深入挖掘和利用。

在线自动评价系统在大学英语写作中的应用——以批改网为例

在线自动评价系统在大学英语写作中的应用——以批改网为例

302020年42期总第534期ENGLISH ON CAMPUS在线自动评价系统在大学英语写作中的应用——以批改网为例文/罗 莉 胡 丹引言写作自动评价系统起源于20世纪60年代,国外对其的研究主要集中在三方面:一是研究机器评分与教师评分是否一致,即对系统本身效度的研究;二是研究自动评价系统对写作水平影响,由系统开发公司进行, 多采用成绩对比的量化研究方法,得出的结论都比较积极,即系统有利于提高学生的成绩;三是该系统在课堂教学中的应用研究。

国内学者唐锦兰(2011)对写作自动评价系统的应用研究做了述评;蒋学清(2011)认为,写作自动评价系统 WritingRoadmap 2 .0(由美国麦格劳-希尔教育测评中心研发)在发展非母语英语学习者的写作能力方面能发挥积极作用;何旭良(2013)阐述了我国研发的自动作文评价系统——句酷批改网的工作原理及评分信度;石晓玲(2012)探讨了批改网的利与弊,研究了该系统对学生英语写作能力发展的积极影响;杨晓琼、戴运财(2015)认为自动评价系统弥补了传统写作教学的不足。

在线自动评价系统在英语教学中得到了广泛应用,它能给师生提供方便,有必要做进一步探究,以更好地将该系统应用于英语写作教学。

一、研究设计1. 研究问题。

本研究以批改网为例,旨在探讨在线自动评价系统对非英语专业学生写作能力的影响,具体分析讨论以下问题:第一,该校学生对自己写作能力的自我认同度如何;第二,学生对批改网的认同度如何;第三,基于批改网的自我修改与同伴反馈对学生作文分数的提高是否有促进作用?2. 研究对象。

本研究抽取了武汉某高校经济学院二年级一个班级共33人,开展为期一个学期的作文训练研究。

学生每两周在网上提交一篇作文,并利用批改网的自动反馈功能自主修改,然后通过老师设置的同伴互评模式相互评阅作文。

八篇作文训练题目均来自历年的四六级考试真题,主题都与学生的学习、生活息息相关。

在写作前,老师对针对写作任务,创设课堂情境,帮助激活学生相关知识;作文完成后,老师在课堂上作点评与讲解。

极智批改网-中国领先的外教作文与口语批改平台

极智批改网-中国领先的外教作文与口语批改平台

极智批改网-中国领先的外教作文与口语批改平台极智批改网()是中国领先的在线学习与移动学习机构北京创新伙伴教育科技有限公司精心打造,以批改口语和作文为核心业务的智能批改平台。

极智批改网作为中国领先与行业独创的智能批改平台,由中国顶级出国考试专家、专属外教团队与英语学习教授为学员及机构提供专业高效的智能批改服务。

•业务范围:
-国外考试中的作文和口语的批改,即托福,GRE,GMAT,SAT和雅思。

-国内考试的作文和口语的批改,具体为四六级,专四专八,考研等。

-留学文书的代写和深度润色。

-毕业论文的打磨及深度润色。

-求职简历的润色。

-求职口语指导以及留学签证口语辅导。

•服务对象
-有备考需要的考生,包括托福,GRE,GMAT,SAT和雅思等国外考试以及考研,四六级,专四专八等国内考试。

-各大高校英语学习同学与教学教研团队。

-各大企事业单位英文信函文书工作者。

-其他想提高自己英语作文和口语能力的英语爱好者。

批改网求职信英语作文

批改网求职信英语作文

Dear Hiring Manager,I am writing to express my interest in the [position/role] at your esteemed organization, as advertised on the Patchwork website. I am confident that my skills, experience, and passion for [relevantfield/industry] make me a strong candidate for this opportunity.I have always been fascinated by the world of [relevant field/industry], and I am eager to contribute to the growth and success of a dynamic company like yours. After reviewing the job description, I amparticularly excited about the opportunity to [mention specific tasks or responsibilities that align with your skills and experience].As a [mention your current or most recent position], I have gained valuable experience in [mention specific skills or tasks relevant to the job]. My strong work ethic, attention to detail, and ability tomultitask have enabled me to consistently deliver high-quality results in a fast-paced environment. Additionally, I am proficient in using various software programs, such as [mention specific programs relevant to the job].In addition to my professional experience, I have also pursued further education and training to enhance my knowledge and skills in [relevant field/industry]. I hold a [mention your degree or certification], and I have participated in [mention any relevant courses, workshops, or seminars]. These experiences have not only deepened my understanding of [relevant field/industry] but also equipped me with the necessary tools to excel in a professional setting.I am particularly drawn to your company because of its reputation for [mention specific aspects of the company that align with your values or interests]. Whether it's [mention specific values, mission, or culture], I am excited about the opportunity to be part of a team that shares my passion for [relevant field/industry].I believe that my combination of skills, experience, and enthusiasm make me an ideal candidate for the [position/role] at your company. I amconfident that I can contribute to the ongoing success of your team and help achieve the company's goals.Thank you for considering my application. I would welcome the opportunity to discuss how my skills and experience align with the requirements of the [position/role] in more detail. Please find attached my resume for your review. I look forward to the possibility of meeting with you to further discuss my qualifications.Yours sincerely,[Your Name]。

英语作文篇章连词批改网

英语作文篇章连词批改网

英语作文篇章连词批改网的重要性与应用 In the realm of English writing, the utilization of proper transitional words and phrases is paramount for the creation of coherent and engaging essays. Transitional words and phrases, also known as discourse markers, play a vital role in bridging ideas, clarifying relationships, and enhancing the readability of written texts. As such, the emergence of English essay transitional words correction websites has become increasingly significant in aiding students and writers in refining their writing skills.One such platform that has garnered widespreadattention is the English Essay Transitional Words Correction Website. This website offers a comprehensive suite of tools designed specifically to identify and improve the usage of transitional words and phrases in English essays. By leveraging cutting-edge technology and a vast repository of linguistic data, it provides users with personalized feedback and suggestions to enhance the flow and coherence of their writing.The functionality of this website is straightforward yet effective. Users simply upload their English essays tothe platform, and the system's intelligent algorithms analyze the text, focusing on the utilization oftransitional words and phrases. It then highlightspotential issues, such as overused or inappropriate transitions, and suggests alternatives that can improve the overall clarity and coherence of the essay.Moreover, the website offers a wealth of educational resources that complement its correction tools. These resources include guides on how to effectively use transitional words and phrases, as well as examples ofwell-written essays that demonstrate the proper application of these linguistic devices. These resources are invaluable for students and writers who are striving to improve their English writing skills.The benefits of using the English Essay Transitional Words Correction Website are numerous. Firstly, it saves time and effort by automating the process of identifying and correcting transitional words and phrases. This allows users to focus on the content and creativity of their writing rather than worrying about minor linguistic issues. Secondly, the personalized feedback provided by the websitehelps users to understand their writing strengths and weaknesses, enabling them to target areas for improvement. Finally, the educational resources available on the website provide a valuable learning tool that can be utilized both during the correction process and beyond.However, it is worth noting that while the English Essay Transitional Words Correction Website is a useful tool, it should not be relied upon as a substitute for careful revision and critical thinking. Users should still take the time to review their essays carefully, considering the suggestions provided by the website but ultimately making their own decisions about what changes to implement. In conclusion, the English Essay Transitional Words Correction Website is a valuable asset for anyone striving to improve their English writing skills. By providing personalized feedback, educational resources, and a convenient platform for correcting transitional words and phrases, it helps users to create more coherent and engaging essays. While it should not be the sole reliance for revision, it can certainly serve as a useful companion in the writing process.**英语作文篇章连词批改网的重要性与应用**在英语写作领域,正确使用篇章连词对于构建连贯且引人入胜的文章至关重要。

英语写作智能评阅系统对比研究——以iWrite和批改网为例

英语写作智能评阅系统对比研究——以iWrite和批改网为例

692020年40期总第532期ENGLISH ON CAMPUS英语写作智能评阅系统对比研究——以iWrite 和批改网为例文/吴艳华【摘要】本文介绍了英语写作研究的趋势,概述了国内外英语写作智能评阅系统的现状,客观分析了国内高校使用率较高的iWrite和句酷批改网的相似点与不同之处,以期助力广大英语写作教师的教学和研究,提高学生的英语写作能力。

【关键词】英语写作;iWrite;批改网【作者简介】吴艳华(1982-),女,陕西渭南人,渭南师范学院外国语学院副教授,英语语言文学专业硕士,研究方向为英语教学、跨文化交际。

【基金项目】本论文为校级横向课题阶段性成果,项目编号:20HX083。

纪90年代,美国教育考试服务中心(Educational Testing Service, 简称ETS)的Jill Burstein博士等人开发了E-rater,最初被用于管理学研究生入学考试(GMAT)“Analytical Writing Assessment”部分的评分,在2002年申请并在2006年获得专利,是第一个被应用于大规模社会化考试的AES系统。

该系统不仅擅长将学生使用的语言与数据库中不同分数段文章的语言进行比对,关注学生的用词和语法,还可以审核学生的文章组织和语言风格,并通过匹配主题关键词来检测文章发展是否跑题。

然而,自2006年起,ETS不再承办GMAT。

因此,E-rater已由Vantage Learning研发的IntelliMetricTM取代,应用于GMAT的评分。

该系统吸取了人工智能(AI)、自然语言处理(NLP)和统计技术的优势,不仅能够模拟人工从句法、语义和篇章三个层面给出准确评分,还支持日语、法语等多语言文本的评价。

国内关于写作自动评阅系统的研究起步较晚。

北京外国语大学梁茂成教授是我国英语作文评分的开拓者,一直专注于该领域的研究。

其开发的“大规模考试英语作文自动评分系统”于2005年申请了国家专利,得到了众多业界专家的肯定。

批改网:英语作文智能批改

批改网:英语作文智能批改

77一、英语写作现状在很多英语考试中,英语作文裸考现象很普遍。

尤其是中学学生,由于学习科目较多,时间和精力有限,而写一篇作文耗时耗力,写完后又得不到老师及时细致的批改反馈,严重挫伤了学生练习写作的积极性。

学生通常都是在考前练习几篇写作题目,或者背诵范文。

目前,英语师生人数比例失衡严重,学生多,英语老师少,再加上老师的教务、科研等工作,英语作文经常面临老师布置习题,但难以有效大量批改的问题。

进一步导致学生英语写作水平较差,作文均分不及格。

近几年实施的新高考英语改革提升了英语作文分数,增加了作文篇数,强调对学生应用能力的培养,作文分值由原来的15-25分提升到35-40分。

在大部分高校,写作是公共英语课程主要考核方式之一。

北京市海淀区英语教研员刘晓波曾说过,“得作文者得天下”。

英语写作在英语教学和考试中越来越重要,提升英语写作水平对提升学生英语综合能力的重要性不言而喻。

二、批改网是什么批改网是一款能够提供即时反馈的英语作文智能批改系统批改网是一款智能批改英语作文的在线服务系统,能够有效提高教师的批改工作效率,提高学生的英语写作能力。

对于学生而言,批改网能够在1秒内对作文给出分数、批改网:英语作文智能批改□文/张跃北京语言智能研究院执行院长、批改网创始人。

硕士毕业于东北大学,曾任职于微软亚洲研究院和奇虎360公司,从事自然语言处理和搜索相关技术研究。

目前专注于英语作文的智能批改相关研究,其团队开发的批改网已累计批改作文超过5.3亿篇,已被6000多所学校、2000多万名学生所使用。

张 跃随着人工智能的介入,传统的教育模式正在发生巨大的变化,深度学习、自然语言处理等技术让固有的教与学方式产生了新的变革,智能化的教学方式为个性化教学提供了新的可能性。

本文以批改网的英语作文智能批改系统为例,阐述智能化教育是如何突破传统教育模式在时间与空间上的限制,为学生提供更为公平、有趣、个性化的教育的。

76图1:英语作文在批改网批改后的反馈评语和按句点评的反馈。

批改网操作指南

批改网操作指南

操作指南(V2.0版)北京词网科技有限公司版权所有(2011)目录最后更新时间:2011年8月17日1 快速体验 (4)2 教师流程 (6)2.1 教师注册 (6)2.2 布置作文 (7)2.2.1 布置新作文 (7)2.2.2 布置新摘要 (9)2.2.3 修改或删除作文题目 (9)2.3 查看学生作文 (10)2.3.1 学生作文列表 (10)2.4批改作文 (11)2.4.1批改作文 (11)2.4.2共性错误点评 (12)2.4.3作文列表页功能介绍 (14)2.5学期总评 (15)2.6修改资料 (15)2.6.1修改个人信息 (16)2.6.2上传头像 (16)2.6.3修改密码 (17)2.7退出账户 (17)3 学生流程 (18)3.1 学生注册 (18)3.2提交作文 (19)3.2.1提交作文 (19)3.2.2修改作文 (20)3.3查看批改结果 (20)3.4导出作文 (21)3.5修改资料 (21)3.5.1修改个人信息 (21)3.5.2上传头像 (22)3.5.3修改密码 (23)3.6退出账户 (23)4 常见问题 (24)4.1教师使用常见问题 (24)4.2学生使用常见问题 (25)1快速体验批改网是辅助教师批改英语作文的在线服务系统,能够有效提高教师批改英语作文的工作效率,提高学生的英语写作能力。

在正式使用批改网之前,我们可以先做个快速体验。

1.在网址栏输入,访问批改网首页:2.直接点【提交作文】或者在输入框中提交你的自己的作文。

3.查看批改结果2教师流程批改网的教师使用流程如下:2.1教师注册1.在网址栏输入,访问批改网首页;2.点击【教师注册】按钮进入教师注册页面;3.按要求输入邮箱、密码及个人信息,然后输入验证码,点击【同意以上协议并注册】即可完成注册。

注册后系统会自动给邮箱发送一封激活邮件,教师可以登陆邮箱进行邮箱验证。

2.2布置作文2.2.1布置新作文教师布置作文步骤如下:1.登录教师页面;2.点击【布置新作文】进入作文布置页面;3.选择【新版作文】,根据页面内容填写作文题目,要求,设置作文题目,然后点击【布置作文】即可布置一篇简单的作文题目。

英语作文批改网登录

英语作文批改网登录

英语作文批改网登录As an AI, I don't have the capability to log in to websitesor access personal accounts. However, I can guide you through the general process of logging into an English essaycorrection website. Here's a step-by-step guide:1. Open a Web Browser: The first step is to open yourpreferred web browser. This could be Google Chrome, Firefox, Safari, or any other browser you commonly use.2. Navigate to the Website: Type the URL of the English essay correction website into the address bar of your browser and press enter. If you don't know the URL, you can search forthe website's name in a search engine.3. Locate the Login Page: Once the website has loaded, lookfor the login option. This is typically found at the topright corner of the website, but the location can vary depending on the website's design.4. Enter Your Credentials: You will be prompted to enter your username and password. These are the credentials you created when you registered on the website. Be sure to enter them accurately.5. Check for a Captcha: Some websites use a Captcha to ensure that the login attempt is not automated. If there's a Captcha, solve it to prove that you're not a bot.6. Click 'Login': After entering your credentials and solving the Captcha (if applicable), click the 'Login' button to access your account.7. Account Access: If your login details are correct, you should be taken to your account dashboard where you can access the features of the website, including the English essay correction tool.8. Troubleshooting: If you encounter any issues, such as a'wrong password' message or an account lockout, use the'Forgot Password' feature to reset your password or contact the website's customer support for assistance.Remember, it's important to keep your login details secure and not to share them with anyone. If you're using a public computer, avoid checking the 'Remember me' box to prevent unauthorized access to your account.。

批改网英语作文练习

批改网英语作文练习

Title: Embracing the Challenges of EnglishEssay Practice on In the age of digitalization and globalization, the proficiency in English has become a prerequisite forsuccess in various fields. , as an online platform dedicated to English essay practice and feedback, has emerged as a popular choice for students and learners alike. This article delves into the challenges encountered during the essay practice on and explores the benefitsit offers in enhancing English writing skills.Firstly, the primary challenge faced by many users on is the need to adapt to the automated feedback system. Unlike traditional essay grading, where a teacheror evaluator provides personalized comments, relies on algorithms to analyze and grade essays. This can be initially daunting, as the feedback may seem impersonalor even ambiguous at times. However, with practice and patience, users can learn to interpret the feedback effectively and use it to improve their writing.Secondly, presents a challenge in terms of essay diversity and complexity. The platform offers a rangeof essay topics and genres, which requires users to demonstrate flexibility and adaptability in their writing. Additionally, the essays are graded based on variouscriteria such as grammar, vocabulary, and coherence, which demands a high level of proficiency in English. This can be challenging for beginners or intermediate learners, but it also provides an excellent opportunity for growth and improvement.Despite these challenges, offers numerous benefits that justify its popularity. One of the most significant advantages is the convenience it provides. Users can access the platform anytime, anywhere, and submit their essays for instant feedback. This flexibility allows them to practice writing regularly and track their progress over time.Moreover, 's automated feedback system is comprehensive and detailed. It provides insights into various aspects of writing, including grammar errors, vocabulary usage, and sentence structure. This feedback, coupled with suggestions for improvement, helps users identify their weaknesses and work on them systematically.Furthermore, encourages users to engage in peer review, which is another valuable aspect of the platform. Through peer review, users can read and evaluate others' essays, gaining insights into different writing styles and perspectives. This experience not only broadens their horizons but also helps them develop critical thinking skills.In conclusion, , despite posing some initial challenges, is a powerful tool for enhancing English writing skills. Its automated feedback system, diverse essay topics, and peer review features provide a comprehensive learning experience that benefits users in the long run. By embracing these challenges and leveraging the platform's benefits, users can significantly improve their English writing proficiency and prepare themselves for success in the global arena.**拥抱批改网英语作文练习的挑战**在数字化和全球化的时代,英语熟练程度已成为各个领域成功的先决条件。

批改网网页登录入口

批改网网页登录入口

批改网网页登录入口教师使用流程注册与登陆在浏览器地址栏中输入网址/,访问批改网首页。

点击“老师注册”按钮进入老师注册页面,填写相关信息,完成注册。

2布置新作文进入平台后,点击“布置新作文”进入布置页面。

在这里,老师可以布置作文、摘要、论文、书信等等。

根据页面内容填写题目、要求(可以添加图片、视频、链接等)。

如果教师对布置的作文或论文呢有更详细的要求,可以点击“附加选项”进行更详细的设置。

【打分公式】选择适合本次作文题目的打分公式,比如四级、六级等;【期望分】设置作文的期望分,期望分会对学生整体分数进行调整;如果是以鼓励学生为主,可以将期望分设置的高一些,这样学生作文得分也相对高一些,反之则会低一些;【批改方式】设置学生作文提交次数,教师的批改不受限制。

系统默认为“系统多次性批改+ 教师一次性批改”,即允许学生在作文时间截止前多次修改作文,如果教师改过了学生的作文,那么学生就不能再对作文进行改动了(系统多次性批改+教师多次性批改:教师改过学生的作文后,学生还可以继续更改作文,改过之后,教师的批改内容会被覆盖,无法保存);【百宝箱】老师启用百宝箱,学生在写作文时系统会提供给其一个练习工具,学生可以用其查找相关知识点。

设置好后,点击确认布置,系统会生成一个作文号,将此作文号告知学生,学生就可以通过此作文号或教师姓名搜索作文题目并提交作文。

3查看和批改学生作文点击“浏览作文”进入下图所示页面,“答题人数”列显示该作文目前提交的人数。

点击答题人数列中的数字,即可进入该题目的学生提交作文列表页面。

点击对应的标题,则可进入教师批改页面。

教师可以修改分数,进行总体的快速点评,同时还可以对词句进行点评,系统自动提供了多种点评建议,教师可进行选择,也可手动输入。

除此之外,教师还可导出学生的作业;对学生的作业进行群批;查看所有同学所提交作文的总体诊断分析报告;并指定作文互评人员等。

4学期总评教师可以查看学生整个学期过程中作文的完成情况。

句酷批改网

句酷批改网
句酷批改网

句酷批改网(www. pigai. org ) 是一款基于语 料库和云计算技术的英语作文自动在线批 改服务,能够有效提高教师批改英语作文 的工作效率,提高学生的英语写作能力。

在网址栏输入www. pigai. org, 访问批改网首 页。 点击【学生注册】按钮进入学生注册页面, 填写相关信息注册。按要求输入邮箱,密 码及个人信息,然后输入验证码,再点击 【同意以上协议并注册】即可完成注册。
注意作文写作期限,按时提交。 本次写作期限为一周: 2015.3.19,2:00—2015.3.25,23:00


提交作文后,系统会自动对作文进行分析 并给出批改结果。 完成此篇作文以外,也可以通过学生页面 的“题库”进行其它写作练习。

登录学生账号 在答题列表中找到要修改的作文




其中“您所在班级”一项,从以下三个班 级名称中选择一个填写,名称保持一致:
电气工程21班 化学22班 材料控制27班

登录学生账号 输入教师告知的作文ID号,找到教师布置 的作文题目,在【查找作文号】对话框中 填入此号。 本次作文的ID号是:413247

在答题框中输入或粘贴作文内容再点击 【提交作文】,即可成功将作文提交。
点击【修改】即可进入答题页面,对作文 重新进行修改 超过截止时间不能修改作文

登录学生账号 找到作文列表中的题目 点击【查看】即可看到作文批改结果。

登录学生账号 点击作文列表中的【导出到Excel】按钮, 即可将作文导出。

批改网操作指南

批改网操作指南

操作指南(V2.0版)北京词网科技有限公司版权所有(2011)目录最后更新时间:2011年8月17日1 快速体验 (4)2 教师流程 (6)2.1 教师注册 (6)2.2 布置作文 (7)2.2.1 布置新作文 (7)2.2.2 布置新摘要 (9)2.2.3 修改或删除作文题目 (9)2.3 查看学生作文 (10)2.3.1 学生作文列表 (10)2.4批改作文 (11)2.4.1批改作文 (11)2.4.2共性错误点评 (12)2.4.3作文列表页功能介绍 (14)2.5学期总评 (15)2.6修改资料 (15)2.6.1修改个人信息 (16)2.6.2上传头像 (16)2.6.3修改密码 (17)2.7退出账户 (17)3 学生流程 (18)3.1 学生注册 (18)3.2提交作文 (19)3.2.1提交作文 (19)3.2.2修改作文 (20)3.3查看批改结果 (20)3.4导出作文 (21)3.5修改资料 (21)3.5.1修改个人信息 (21)3.5.2上传头像 (22)3.5.3修改密码 (23)3.6退出账户 (23)4 常见问题 (24)4.1教师使用常见问题 (24)4.2学生使用常见问题 (25)1快速体验批改网是辅助教师批改英语作文的在线服务系统,能够有效提高教师批改英语作文的工作效率,提高学生的英语写作能力。

在正式使用批改网之前,我们可以先做个快速体验。

1.在网址栏输入,访问批改网首页:2.直接点【提交作文】或者在输入框中提交你的自己的作文。

3.查看批改结果2教师流程批改网的教师使用流程如下:2.1教师注册1.在网址栏输入,访问批改网首页;2.点击【教师注册】按钮进入教师注册页面;3.按要求输入邮箱、密码及个人信息,然后输入验证码,点击【同意以上协议并注册】即可完成注册。

注册后系统会自动给邮箱发送一封激活邮件,教师可以登陆邮箱进行邮箱验证。

2.2布置作文2.2.1布置新作文教师布置作文步骤如下:1.登录教师页面;2.点击【布置新作文】进入作文布置页面;3.选择【新版作文】,根据页面内容填写作文题目,要求,设置作文题目,然后点击【布置作文】即可布置一篇简单的作文题目。

批改网学生互评英语作文

批改网学生互评英语作文

批改网学生互评英语作文The sun peeks through the curtains, signaling the startof a new day. I stretch and yawn, feeling the warmth of the morning light on my face.After a quick breakfast, I grab my backpack and head tothe school bus stop. The chatter of friends is a familiar soundtrack to my day, filled with laughter and shared stories.In class, the lessons are engaging and thought-provoking. Each subject offers a new world to explore, from themysteries of science to the elegance of literature.Lunchtime is a break from the academic hustle. Thecafeteria buzzes with energy as students enjoy their meal and discuss the day's events.After school, I join the soccer team for practice. Thefield is alive with the sound of cleats on grass and the cheers of teammates. It's a perfect blend of teamwork and competition.Homework time is a quiet, focused period. The hum of the refrigerator in the background is the only distraction as I delve into math problems and history essays.Dinner with my family is a cherished part of my day. We share our highs and lows, strengthening the bond that onlyfamily can provide.As night falls, I wind down with a good book or a favorite TV show. It's a peaceful end to a day filled with learning, growth, and connection.Before sleep, I reflect on the day's experiences, grateful for the moments and the people who make my life so rich and full. Tomorrow is another opportunity to create new memories.。

英语批改网大学优秀作文

英语批改网大学优秀作文

英语批改网大学优秀作文The pursuit of higher education is a transformative journey that not only equips individuals with the knowledge and skills necessary for their future careers but also shapes their personal growth and development. As an integral part of this journey, the college application process serves as a critical gateway, allowing aspiring students to showcase their unique talents, experiences, and aspirations through the medium of written essays. The essays featured on the EssayEdge platform exemplify the exceptional quality and creativity that can emerge from this process, inspiring and guiding future applicants in their own academic endeavors.One particularly compelling essay from the EssayEdge collection is titled "Beating the Odds." This piece tells the story of a student who overcame significant adversity to achieve academic success. The author's vivid and emotive writing style immediately captivates the reader, drawing them into a narrative of resilience and determination. The essay masterfully weaves together personal anecdotes, reflections on the challenges faced, and a clear articulation of the lessons learned, creating a powerful and inspiring narrative thatresonates with the reader on a deeply personal level.What sets this essay apart is the author's ability to strike a delicate balance between vulnerability and strength. Rather than simply recounting a series of obstacles, the writer skillfully navigates the emotional terrain of their experiences, inviting the reader to empathize and connect with their journey. The essay's structure is well-crafted, with a clear progression that leads the reader through the key events and transformations, culminating in a powerful message of perseverance and self-discovery.Another standout essay from the EssayEdge collection is "The Power of Perspective." This piece explores the transformative impact of a student's experience volunteering in a developing country. The writer's vivid descriptions and keen observations transport the reader to the heart of the community, allowing them to witness the challenges and triumphs that unfold. What makes this essay particularly compelling is the author's ability to weave together personal reflections, cultural insights, and a deep sense of empathy, creating a narrative that challenges the reader's preconceptions and encourages a broader, more nuanced understanding of the world.The essay's strength lies in its ability to seamlessly blend the personal and the universal. The author's individual experiences serve as a gateway to larger themes of global interconnectedness, socialjustice, and the power of cross-cultural exchange. The essay's structure is well-paced, with a natural flow that guides the reader through the various stages of the author's transformative journey, culminating in a powerful conclusion that resonates long after the last word has been read.A third outstanding essay from the EssayEdge collection is "The Transformative Power of Music." This piece delves into the profound impact that music has had on the author's life, weaving together personal anecdotes, insights into the creative process, and a deeper exploration of the universal human experience. What sets this essay apart is the writer's ability to capture the emotive and introspective nature of their relationship with music, inviting the reader to share in their journey of self-discovery and artistic expression.The essay's strength lies in its lyrical and evocative language, which transports the reader into the author's world and allows them to viscerally experience the transformative power of music. The writer skillfully navigates the interplay between the personal and the universal, drawing connections between their individual experiences and the broader human experience of creativity, emotion, and the pursuit of meaning. The essay's structure is well-crafted, with a natural flow that guides the reader through the various facets of the author's musical journey, culminating in a poignant and resonant conclusion.The essays featured on the EssayEdge platform represent the pinnacle of academic writing, showcasing the exceptional talent and creativity of aspiring students. These works not only demonstrate a mastery of the written word but also a deep understanding of the human experience, inviting the reader to engage on a profoundly personal level. Whether it's the story of overcoming adversity, the transformative power of cross-cultural exchange, or the emotive and introspective nature of artistic expression, these essays captivate, inspire, and challenge the reader, leaving a lasting impact that extends far beyond the confines of the page.。

批改网:英语作文智能批改

批改网:英语作文智能批改

77一、英语写作现状在很多英语考试中,英语作文裸考现象很普遍。

尤其是中学学生,由于学习科目较多,时间和精力有限,而写一篇作文耗时耗力,写完后又得不到老师及时细致的批改反馈,严重挫伤了学生练习写作的积极性。

学生通常都是在考前练习几篇写作题目,或者背诵范文。

目前,英语师生人数比例失衡严重,学生多,英语老师少,再加上老师的教务、科研等工作,英语作文经常面临老师布置习题,但难以有效大量批改的问题。

进一步导致学生英语写作水平较差,作文均分不及格。

近几年实施的新高考英语改革提升了英语作文分数,增加了作文篇数,强调对学生应用能力的培养,作文分值由原来的15-25分提升到35-40分。

在大部分高校,写作是公共英语课程主要考核方式之一。

北京市海淀区英语教研员刘晓波曾说过,“得作文者得天下”。

英语写作在英语教学和考试中越来越重要,提升英语写作水平对提升学生英语综合能力的重要性不言而喻。

二、批改网是什么批改网是一款能够提供即时反馈的英语作文智能批改系统批改网是一款智能批改英语作文的在线服务系统,能够有效提高教师的批改工作效率,提高学生的英语写作能力。

对于学生而言,批改网能够在1秒内对作文给出分数、批改网:英语作文智能批改□文/张跃北京语言智能研究院执行院长、批改网创始人。

硕士毕业于东北大学,曾任职于微软亚洲研究院和奇虎360公司,从事自然语言处理和搜索相关技术研究。

目前专注于英语作文的智能批改相关研究,其团队开发的批改网已累计批改作文超过5.3亿篇,已被6000多所学校、2000多万名学生所使用。

张 跃随着人工智能的介入,传统的教育模式正在发生巨大的变化,深度学习、自然语言处理等技术让固有的教与学方式产生了新的变革,智能化的教学方式为个性化教学提供了新的可能性。

本文以批改网的英语作文智能批改系统为例,阐述智能化教育是如何突破传统教育模式在时间与空间上的限制,为学生提供更为公平、有趣、个性化的教育的。

76图1:英语作文在批改网批改后的反馈评语和按句点评的反馈。

批改网人工智能对生活的影响作文英语

批改网人工智能对生活的影响作文英语

批改网人工智能对生活的影响作文英语全文共10篇示例,供读者参考篇1Wow, have you heard about the AI technology from the online correction website? It's like having a super smart robot that can help us with our homework and writing! Let me tell you how it's changing our lives.First of all, this AI technology can help us learn better. Whenever we make a mistake in our writing, the AI can point it out and explain why it's wrong. It's like having a personal teacher with us all the time! This way, we can improve our English skills and become better writers.Secondly, the AI can save us a lot of time. Instead of waiting for our teachers to correct our assignments, we can just use the online correction website and get instant feedback. This means we can finish our homework faster and have more time to play and have fun.Moreover, the AI technology is also making our lives easier. We don't have to worry about making spelling or grammarmistakes anymore because the AI can catch them for us. It's like having a built-in spell checker that never misses a mistake!In conclusion, the AI technology from the online correction website is truly amazing. It's helping us learn better, saving us time, and making our lives easier. I can't wait to see what other cool things AI technology will bring in the future!篇2Oh my goodness, let me tell you about how cool this new thing called the Correction Website AI is and how it's changing our lives! So, like, this AI thingy helps you correct your writing, like if you make a mistake in English or something. It's like having a super smart teacher right in your computer!First of all, this AI helps us learn English better. Like, when we write something and it shows us the right way to say it, we can remember it for next time. It's like having a tutor but without all the boring stuff.Also, this AI makes our homework way easier. Instead of asking our parents or teachers for help, we can just type it into the computer and get instant feedback. No more waiting around for someone to check our work – the AI does it in, like, seconds!Another rad thing about this AI is that it can help us improve our writing skills. Like, if we keep making the same mistakes, it will show us how to fix them. It's like having a personal writing coach always there to help us get better.And, like, the best part is that this AI is always available. We can use it anytime, anywhere, as long as we have a computer or a phone. It's like having a super smart friend who never gets tired of helping us out.So yeah, the Correction Website AI is totally changing the game for us. It's making learning English easier, homework less stressful, and our writing skills way better. We're so lucky to have this awesome technology in our lives!篇3Okay! Here's my essay:The Impact of Correction Website Artificial Intelligence on LifeHey everyone, today I want to talk about how this super cool thing called correction website artificial intelligence is affecting our lives. It's like having a super smart robot buddy who helps us write better and improve our English skills.First of all, this AI technology is making it so much easier for us to write essays and do our homework. When we make mistakes, the AI shows us where we went wrong and helps us fix it. It's like having a teacher right there with us all the time!Another awesome thing about correction website AI is that it's helping us learn new words and grammar rules. Whenever we use a word incorrectly, the AI suggests a better one to use. And it even explains why it's better, so we can learn from our mistakes.But wait, there's more! This AI technology is also making it easier for us to communicate with people from different countries. It helps us translate our words and correct our grammar so we can talk to them more clearly. How cool is that?In conclusion, correction website artificial intelligence is making a big impact on our lives. It's helping us write better, learn new things, and communicate with people from all over the world. So let's give a big round of applause to this amazing technology! Thank you, correction website AI, for making our lives easier and more fun.篇4Title: How Artificial Intelligence Affects Our LivesHey everyone! Today, I want to talk about how this thing called Artificial Intelligence (AI) is changing our lives. You might have heard about AI before, but do you know how it actually affects us?First off, AI is like super smart computer software that can do things humans can do, but even faster and better sometimes. It's like having a super brain that can think and learn on its own. Cool, right?One way AI affects our lives is through our daily routines. Have you ever used a voice assistant like Siri or Alexa to help you with tasks? That's AI in action! It can set reminders, answer questions, and even play games with us. It's like having a digital friend to help us out.Another way AI is changing our lives is through automation. This means that AI can help with repetitive tasks like sorting emails, predicting traffic patterns, and even driving cars. It's making our lives easier and safer in so many ways.But, there are also some concerns about AI. Some people worry that AI will take over human jobs and make us lazy. Others are concerned about privacy and data security when usingAI-powered devices.In conclusion, AI is definitely making a big impact on our lives. It's important for us to learn more about AI and how it works so we can make the most of this technology while also being cautious about its potential risks.That's all for now, thanks for listening!篇5Do you know about the impact that artificial intelligence (AI) has on our daily lives? Well, let me tell you all about it!First of all, AI technology has made our lives so much easier and convenient. For example, we can use AI assistants like Siri or Alexa to help us with tasks such as setting reminders, answering questions, and even playing our favorite music. Isn't that cool?Moreover, AI has also improved many industries such as healthcare, education, and transportation. Doctors can use AI to help diagnose diseases more accurately, teachers can use AI to personalize learning for students, and self-driving cars use AI to make our roads safer. It's like having a super smart robot helper!But, not everything about AI is all rainbows and unicorns. Some people worry that AI might take over our jobs and make us lose our jobs. That's a valid concern, but we can also see AI as atool that can help us work more efficiently and focus on more important tasks.In conclusion, AI has definitely changed our lives in many ways, both positive and negative. It's important for us to keep learning about AI and how to use it responsibly. So, let's embrace the power of AI and make our world a better place together!篇6"Hey guys! Today I wanna talk about how this thing called the 'Pigai Wang' artificial intelligence is totally changing our lives. It's like having a super smart robot that can help us with all kinds of stuff.First off, Pigai Wang is like having a super cool teacher that can help us with our homework. It can check our work and tell us what mistakes we made, so we can learn from them and do better next time. It's like having a personal tutor right in our pocket!But Pigai Wang isn't just for homework – it can also help us with writing essays, learning new things, and even practicing our English skills. It's like having a friend who knows everything and can help us whenever we need it.And Pigai Wang is making life easier for adults too. It can help them with their work, research, and even with things like shopping and cooking. It's like having a personal assistant that's always there to lend a hand.But we also have to remember that Pigai Wang is just a tool – it can't replace real human connections or experiences. So while it's great to have technology to help us, we should still make time to talk to each other, play outside, and enjoy the world around us.In conclusion, Pigai Wang is a super cool tool that's changing our lives in all sorts of ways. But let's remember to use it wisely and not let it take over our lives completely. Let's keep having fun, making friends, and enjoying life – with a little help from our super smart robot friend, of course!"篇7Sure! Here is an essay written in a child-like voice about the impact of artificial intelligence on our lives:Artificial intelligence is like a super smart robot that can do lots of cool things to help make our lives easier and more fun. It's kind of like having a super smart friend who knows everything and can do anything!One way that artificial intelligence has changed our lives is through smart home devices. These gadgets can help us control our lights, thermostats, and even play our favorite songs with just the sound of our voice. It's like having a magic house that listens to us and does what we want!Another way that artificial intelligence is super helpful is in our schools. Some teachers use AI to help us learn in new and exciting ways, like personalized lessons that are just right for each student. It's like having a tutor who knows exactly what we need to learn and how to help us understand it better.But, even though artificial intelligence is super cool and helpful, we also need to be careful and make sure we use it in the right way. It's important to remember that AI is only as smart as the people who program it, so we need to make sure it is used for good things and not bad ones.In conclusion, artificial intelligence is like a super cool robot friend that can help us with lots of things in our lives. It's important to use AI in the right way and make sure it helps us do good things and make the world a better place. So let's keep being smart and using AI to help us learn, play, and live our best lives!篇8The Impact of the Correction Website Artificial Intelligence on LifeHi everyone, my name is Emily, and today I want to talk about how the correction website artificial intelligence has changed our lives.First of all, let me explain what artificial intelligence is. It's like when a computer can think and learn things on its own, without needing a human to tell it what to do. It's super smart!One way that artificial intelligence has changed our lives is by helping us with our writing. For example, when we write something on a website and there's a mistake, the artificial intelligence can help us fix it. It's like having a smart friend who knows all the answers!Another way that artificial intelligence is helpful is when we need to do research. Instead of spending hours looking up information in books, we can just ask the artificial intelligence, and it will give us the answers we need. It's so much faster and easier!Some people worry that artificial intelligence will take over the world and make humans obsolete. But I think that as long as we use it wisely and remember that we are the ones in charge, artificial intelligence can be a really good thing for us.So, in conclusion, the correction website artificial intelligence has had a big impact on our lives, making things easier and more convenient. And as long as we use it responsibly, it can continue to help us in the future. Thank you for listening!篇9How do you do, everyone! Today, I want to talk about how the Correcting Website Artificial Intelligence has changed our lives.Firstly, the Correcting Website AI is really helpful for us students. When we write essays or homework, we may make mistakes in spelling or grammar. The AI can help us correct them quickly, so we can learn from our mistakes and improve our writing skills. Isn't that cool?Secondly, the Correcting Website AI can also help us in our daily life. For example, when we send emails or messages to our friends and family, the AI can make sure our writing is clear and correct. It's like having a little teacher in our pocket!Furthermore, the Correcting Website AI can assist professionals in their work too. Doctors, engineers, and scientists can use the AI to check their reports and research papers for any errors. This saves them time and ensures the accuracy of their work.In conclusion, the Correcting Website AI has made a big impact on our lives. It helps us learn, communicate, and work more efficiently. I'm grateful for this amazing technology, and I can't wait to see what other innovations the future holds. Thank you for listening!篇10Okie dokie! Here goes my article about how the Correction Website's AI affects our life!Hey guys, have you ever heard about the Correction Website's AI? It's like a super smart machine that can help us correct our grammar mistakes and spelling errors. Isn't that cool? But you know what? This AI thingy is not just for showing off how smart it is, it actually helps us a lot in our daily life!First of all, the AI on Correction Website can make our writing look super professional. You know, sometimes we make silly mistakes like forgetting to put a comma or using the wrongverb tense. But with the help of AI, we can fix all those mistakes in no time! Our teachers will be so impressed with our perfect writing!Secondly, the AI on Correction Website can help us learn new things. When it corrects our mistakes, it also tells us why it's wrong and how to fix it. So, we can learn from our mistakes and become better at writing. How cool is that?And lastly, the AI on Correction Website saves us a lot of time. Instead of spending hours trying to find and fix our mistakes, we can just paste our writing into the website and let the AI do its magic. It's like having a personal writing assistant!In conclusion, the Correction Website's AI is like our writing superhero. It makes our writing look professional, helps us learn new things, and saves us time. So, next time you have a writing assignment, don't forget to use the AI on Correction Website. It will make your life so much easier!。

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英语作文自动批改系统一、拟采购软件的主要模块及每个模块的功能英语作文自动批改系统需具备下述主要模块及功能:(-)作文批阅系统1.批改方式:支持机器批改、人工批改两种批改模式,其中机器批改为全自动、实时化批改,1000单词以内的作文平均分析时间5秒钟,并支持本校5000 人并发提交,1000单词以上可支持异步提交。

2.支持按句点评:支持对拼写错误、语法错误的自动识别,自动给出易混词汇、高分短语、高分句型、搭配统计,能够自动识别中式英语,并提供语料库检索入口校正表达。

3.打分公式可自定义:支持四级、六级、专四、专八、雅思、考研等打分公式的选择使用。

同时可根据学校需要为学校调制个性化打分公式,机器人工评分拟合度达到92%以上,更加贴合本校教学实际。

4.支持自动评分:自动评分能够分词汇、句子、篇章、内容等多个维度进行打分。

细化打分维度多达192个,包含语言测试学全部测评维度。

5.可调整期望分:教师在不变化打分公式的情况下,根据具体教学策略,通过调整期望分(最低分、最高分、平均分)来控制学生整体得分水平。

6.批改方式多种组合:可通过不同批改方式的选择,支持教师将形成性评估和终结性评估进行结合,更加灵活控制教学过程。

“系统多次性+教师一次性批改”和“教师多次+系统多次性批改”,可应用于练习模式用形成性评估鼓励学生自主学习促进师生互动。

“系统一次性批改”和“系统一次性+教师一次性”(可应用于测验、考试过程)。

7.允许学生互评:教师可通过一键式选择,开放学生匿名互评,进行学生之间人工批改。

8.不同作文题型支持:目前支持作文、摘要、论文三种作业题型,其他英文写作题型会不断完善。

9.文本评语:支持系统自动生成文本评语,并允许教师直接修改编辑文本评语,或添加维护常用评语。

10.语音点评:支持教师教师可以直接在线录制语音点评,学生可以在线收听教师的点评。

11.教师添加人工批改操作:教师可以通过修改分数、修改评语、划词点评(点评句子中具体知识点)、句评、段评等多种方式进行人工批改。

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英语作文自动批改网篇一:英语作文批改网AIDS is the threat of entire societyWhat is AIDS?AIDS is a serious infectious disease that can cause people to death. The AIDS virus which is also call human immunodeficiency virus(HIV) invades the human body then destructs body's immune function. It can make people suffer from various incurable infections and tumors. The full name of AIDS is Acquired Immune Deficiency Syndrome. From its name we can know three specific definition, Acquired means the cause is acquired rather than innate; Immune Deficiency means in the aspects of pathogenesis, it is mainly caused by the body's immune system and lead to reduce the damage or loss of the protective function of the immune system; Syndrome means In the clinical symptoms, complex symptoms due to various system immunodeficiency caused by infection and tumor. The origin of AIDS is Africa and mainly comes from developing country. Transmission and pathogenesis of AIDSThe AIDS virus mainly exists in the various body fluids of the AIDS virus infection and has strong infectious. The main route of infectionof the AIDS virus are sexual transmission, blood transmission and mother to child transmission. From HIV infection to develop into AIDS patients has four stage: The first phase is acute stage, The second stage is the asymptomatic period, which is called the incubation period, too. The third stage is the pre AIDS. The fourth period is full period of AIDS or AIDS in the late, which is the most complex.The treatment and prevention of AIDSAIDS is a serious infectious disease with high fatality rate, there is still no cure for drugs and methods, but can be prevented. Drug therapy can be divided into three categories: Anti HIV drugs, immunomodulators and anti infective Drugs. AIDS is a threat to every person and every family, the prevention of AIDS is the responsibility of the whole society. Many daily behaviors cannot infect AIDS virus. To comply with sexual morality is the fundamental measures for the prevention of the sexual transmission of AIDS. Sharing syringes, drug taking is a major channel for the spread of AIDS, therefore, we should refuse drugs and cherish life.篇二:批改网高分作文批改网高分作文Who Are Teachers’Pets, Boys or Girls?1)Nowadays, a growing number of people tend to think about a question: who do teachers like more?Reading this table, we can get some information and analyse the result via the figures. Obviously, teachers favor girls over boys in primary school. As far as I concerned, the most indispensable reason is that girls are quiet, smart and well-behaved during that age. While in junior middle school, hat might seem to be no difference between boys and girls. In a word, there is no prejudice and gender discrimination at that time. Nevertheless things are getting change when coming to senior high school. The most reasonable explanation is that girls are superior to boys in math and physics up to the age of ten, fall behind from then on. under that circumstance, teachers is shown to call on male in class far more than female students. While in college, teachers seem to have no preference in student because of the less attention and unawareness2)It is obviously that the answer of such question changes frequently as students growing up and here is my analyze according to the chart.First of all, girls, in my opinion, are much more welcomed in primary school. Over two-thirds of students believe that femalestudents are teacher's pet in primary school. Second, however, conclusion in senior middle school is quite different because half of students hold the view that it was boys that are teacher's pet. Thirdly, the circumstance in junior middle school as well as In college is between two extremes which means neither boys nor girls have advantage to be pets of teachers.What conclusion can I draw is that the chart indicates us girls are more welcomed by teacher at low grades because they are not only quite gentle and quiet but also boys are naughty at the same time. As time goes by, though, such difference gradually disappear which lead tosuch result. Last but not least, I hold the view that there is no sex, including boys and girls, can hold teachers' love forever3)Rencently, a survey on"who are teachers' pets"has developed among students . According to the chart, we can easily find that the majority of pupil's answers are girls, the junior students said that all of them were favored, a lot of middle school students replied: "girls! ", while college students thought neither of them is teachers' pet.So, why did the phenomenon occurred? I suppose the following reasons can account for it. In primary school, girls are generallyobedient, while boys may be more naughty. Girls are good at reading and writing, but boys show nothing superior . Of course , teachers think more of girls. In junior school , boys perform as well as girls , so the teacher will think all of them are great. When go to the senior school , boys become more initiative and are more interested in mathematics, which can ignite teachers' enthusiasm of teaching. On the university , boys and girls have to rely on their own efforts to learn more, thus, the teachers can pay less attention. As far as I'm concerned, teachers shouldn't hold different attitudes to students'gender . Both girls and boys should be treated equally to have a better prospect.4)Reading this chart, we can discover that most of the primary school students think girls are teachers' pets. In contrast, most of the high school students think boys are teachers' pets. While in junior middle schools and in colleges, the numbers of students who think boys or girls are teacher's pets are almost equally, more that they think it depends on teachers' mind. For this, its reasons are obviously. First, primary school teachers have to pay more attention to girls. In that not only girls are timid, but also boys may bully them. Second, high school teachers believeboys have more advantage to pay off and more likely to be rolled in world-famous universities than girls meeting the challenge of college entrance examinations. Third, in junior middle schools and in colleges, teachers feel boys and girls have similar capabilities, alternatives and so on. Moreover, university teachers know seldom students, not to mention who are their pets. Nowadays, gender is not crucial. It is urgent to persuade teachers to care about gender in a reasonable way, especially elementary school teachers and high school teachers.篇三:批改网心得解美文美句的能力。

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