2019高考:名师谈新高考英语应用文写作审题答题要领与例文
2019年高考英语全国卷Ⅲ试题解析及备考建议
2019年高考英语全国卷III 试题解析及备考建议◎李买琼2019年高考III卷基本沿用了2018年的出题模式,不仅考查学生对语言知识掌握的水平,还考查学生在特定预言环境中对语言知识的综合运用能力。
同时,也在试题中体现了对新时代背景下英语学科核心素养在语言能力、思维品质、文化品格和学习能力四个维度的考查。
总体看来,这份试题可以归纳为“注重基础、贴近生活、彰显文化、引导思辨”。
下面,笔者就从各部分试题的出题特征来阐述这四个方面的内容。
1.第一部分,阅读理解该部分五篇文章选材都是贴近生活、真实鲜活的语言材料,易于学生理解还凸显了树人思想。
比如A篇是戏剧文学类的生活信息,设题简单的同时在第二题考查重点词汇“direct”及“director”的转化,可谓是“重视基础,贴近生活”。
再如七选五的语篇,选用网上教学中学生与教授的关系处理“do’s and don’ts”这一话题,引导学生正确处理师生关系,也体现了“贴近生活”,便于学生理解的出题思路。
而且在考查方式上仍然选用小标题的方式进行考查,考验学生的篇章结构把握能力。
B篇文章选用时尚话题,介绍中国设计师在国际时尚界越来越具有国际影响力,凸显新时代大国优势的同时也意在增强咱们的文化自信。
文中第一段“For Western designers,China and its rich culture have long been an inspiration for Western creative.”也是全文的中心句,从语言知识角度体现了基础词汇“inspiration”对全文理解的重要性。
而最后一段中“If you talk about fashion today,you are talking about China—its influences, its directions,its breathtaking clothes,and how young de-signers and models are finally acknowledging that in many ways.”一句再次体现考纲重点词“acknowledge”对文章主要内容的复现作用。
(完整版)2019年高考英语真题写作解析
2019年高考英语真题写作解析一、假定你是李华,暑期在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。
请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:1.写信目的;2.个人优势;3.能做的事情。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.结束语已为你写好。
【写作指导】申请信类型很多,包括求职信,报考申请信,留学申请信等;写申请信应注意语言言简意赅,语气诚恳礼貌,避免夸张。
申请信一般包括:申请原因、具备条件、恳请申请单位考虑自己的申请,表示谢意,期盼回复。
具体为:第一段引入事件,说明写信目的。
第二段介绍关于自己的一些具体内容。
第三段提出请求,表示感谢盼复。
【好词好句】1. 好词集锦:confident 自信的suitable 合适的extremely 非常;极度pleased 高兴的grateful 感激的especially 特别;尤其;格外opportunity 机会position 职位apply for 申请be good at 擅长take...into consideration 考虑2. 说明应聘原因常用语(1) I learned from sb/the newspaper that your company wanted to...(2) I was told that...(3) I have just read in the newspaper that your company needs a...(4) I am writing to inqure the opportunity for ...(5) I am writing to you to inqure if there would be any position available for me to work as a...(6) I am writing to apply for the job.(7) I have learned from your advertisement that a ...is wanted in your company. 3. 介绍个人优势常用语(1) Now I would like to introduce myself to you.(2) My name is Tom aged 16/who is a 16-year-old boy.(3) I graduated from...in 2012.(4) I like / am fond of swimming singing and dancing in my spare time.(5) I work hard and I can get along /on well with others.(6) I am good at English and especially my spoken English is fairly good.(7) I can talk to foreigners in English freely.(8) I am currently studying ...4. 表示感谢及请求常用语(1) Thank you for your consideration of my application.(2) If you agree with me I\\'ll work hard and try to be a...(3) I am looking forward to hearing from you.(4) If you agree with me please write to me or phone me. My telephone number is...(5) I am writing to you in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to ....(6) I would like to apply the position that your company offers to me.(7) Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to your early reply.(8) I would be very grateful if you could consider my application.【优秀范文】Dear Sir or MadamBeing a student from China I\\'m writing this letter to apply for the voluntary position in the coming exhibition of Chinese paintings. And I\\'m really willing to expect you can consider me into this position.Given that I can speak both English and fluent Chinese and I am outgoing sociable and responsible I do believe I am competent for this job. In addition through this I can not only improve my oral English but also introduce Chinese painting and calligraphy culture to visitors from all over the world. I would also like to seize this opportunity to deepen visitors\\' understanding of China and itspainting and calligraphy culture. I hope it is possible to be accepted as a volunteer of this exhibition.Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to your early reply.YoursLi Hua二、假定你是李华,你校将举办音乐节。
(word完整版)2019高考英语概要写作技巧讲解(2)
2019高考英语概要写作技巧讲解一、考点分析(一)考查内容:1、考查读懂文章内容的能力2、考查识别作者写作目的的能力3、考查归纳总结的能力4、考查组织文章的能力(二)评分要点•1)字数50左右•2)理解准确,涵盖全部要点•3)准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇•4)完全使用自己的语言•5)有效使用语句间的连接成分,结构紧凑二、专题详解定义:It is a brief, thorough and objective restatement of the main idea and key points of a longer composition.读者在正确理解文章的基础上, 在不改变原文中心思想、体裁和结构的前提下,用简明、精练的语句高度浓缩文章的主要内容和观点。
(三)写作方法Step 1. 确定体裁,明确主题Step 2. 明确文章结构(总-分,总-分-总,分-总,并列)Step 3. 划主题句与关键信息Step 4. 写纲要,打草稿Step 5. 润色成文1) 找准体裁,提炼要点按体裁 2) 语言:同义词① 同义转换:近义词、同义词和词组的替换,尽量用单词替换短语(例 improve=promote, of great importance = greatly important )②) ③ 句子重构:调整词类(名词、动词、形容词转换)、时态、语态(主动变被动)等3) 衔接(替换;省略;增加):表逻辑关系的连接词替换:并列关系and, moreover, furthermore, in addition,转折关系 but, instead, however, on the other hand省略:并列观点有时可省略连接词;记叙文可省略衔接词。
增加:按逻辑关系,补充连接词firstly…, secondly…, finally…;and…, moreover…, furthermore…; but, instead, however,例(一)_____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____Summary:Chris, whose job is exciting and dangerous, works for MFS. Chris and other MFS’s doctors need to be ready to go almost anywhere in the world and might be sent on an emergency task. Christ thinks his job is meaningful/helpful and he gains a lot. (同义词转换)_____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____Summary :People from countryside generally live longer than city people because they enjoy many advantages such as close with nature, physical work, being free from urban pressure, more free walk, quiet and peaceful environment, fresh food, etc. (句式改变)_____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____Keys:Windbreak, which is formed by trees and other plants, is used by farmers to protect their land from damage by farming and the forces of the nature. Windbreak can protect the crops and help improve grain production. However, windbreak should be planted properly to work its best.练习实战练习(一)One hot night last August, I tried everything I could think of—a warm bottle, songs, etc. to make him fall into sleep, but he just couldn’t do it. Since I believed that a long night was waiting for me ahead, I had no choice but to bring a TV into his room to kill off the hours until dawn. I was surprised that the moment I turned on the TV, the baby became quiet right away and fixed his little eyes brightly on the screen. Not willing to waste an opportunity for sleep, I then tiptoed(用脚失走)out of the room, leaving him to watch the boring TV programs.I heard no more of the baby’s crying that night and the next morning when I went into his room, I found him still watching TV by himself. I found there was a metaphor (暗喻) in my baby’s behavior for the new generation. When I gave my boy some books to go over, he only spit upon them; when I read to him, he did not feel comfortable. So is it in the schools with my students. I find that our students don’t read and they look down upon reading and make light of those of us who teach it. All they want to do is to watch TV. After this experience with the baby, however, I have drawn a conclusion: “Let them watch it!” If television is much more attractive to children than books, why should we fight against it? Let them watch what they want!_____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____Summary:The writer tried everything to make her baby fall asleep but failed. Surprisingly, when she turned on the TV, the baby kept quiet himself. Then she found that her students liked watching TV as much as her baby. So the writer suggested that we should let children watch what they want.实战练习(二)More and more people like bicycling and it is no surprise. It is fun, healthy and good for the environment. Maybe that’s why there are 1.4 billion bicycles and only 400 million cars on roads worldwide today.Bikes can take you almost anywhere, and there is no oil cost! Get on a bicycle and ride around your neighbourhood. You may discover something new all around you. Stopping and getting off a bike is easier than stopping and getting out of your car. You can bike to work and benefit from the enjoyable exercise without polluting the environment. You don’t even have to ride all the way.Folding bikes work well for people who take the train. Just fold the bike and take it with you. You can do the same on an airplane. A folding bike can be packed in a suitcase. You can also take a common bike with you when you fly. But be sure to look for information by getting on airline websites. Not all airlines are bicycle-friendly to travelers.Health Benefits of Bicycling: It helps to prevent heart diseases. Bicycling helps to control your weight. A 15-minute bike ride to and from work three times a week bums off five kilos of fat in a year. Bicycling can improve your mood. Exercise like bicycling has been shown to make people feel better, more relaxed and self-confident. Bicycling is healthier than driving._____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____Summary:Many people like bicycling because it’s fun, heathy and good for environment and it’s easy to stop and get off. Sometimes folding bikes can be taken with you on an airplane or a train. Most importantly, bicycling has a lot of health benefits.强化练习练习(一)Understanding body language is important to success, whether in the business world or in our personal lives. However, some of our ideas about body language are wrong, according to modern communication research.There is a belief that people with shifty(变化的) eyes are probably lying. As Paul Ekman says, “When we asked people how they could tell if someone was lying, too much blinking(眨眼) and shifty eyes were the answers.” Ekman goes on to argue against such a wrong belief. Although this kind of body language is probably an expression of nervousness, it is not always because the person is lying. Shyness can, for example, make people shift their eyes. To understand what someone’s behavior means, you have to watch them carefully.There is also a belief that when meeting someone, the more eye contact, the better. As a result people would like to make initial (开始的) contact in formal situations, like a job interview, by staring fixedly at the other human. Yet Ekman points out that most of us are comfortable with eye contact lasting a few seconds,but any eye contact that is longer than that cm make us nervous.In short, you must carefully consider the speaker and the speaking environment. Experts suggest that unless you know about someone’s basic communication style, you will have little hope in understanding their true feelings through body language. In other words, body language carries important but not always true messages._____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____Summary:The passage argues two wrong ideas about body language. One is that people believe shifty eyes means that person is lying. The other is that people believe the more eye contact, the better during communication. Finally, the writer gives us a suggestion that we should be careful when we judge somebody body language.练习(二)Linda Evans was my best friend—like the sister I never had. We did everything together: having piano lessons, going to movies, swimming, and horseback riding.When I was 13, my family moved away. Linda and I kept in touch through letters, and we saw each other on special time—like my wedding and Linda’s. Soon we were busy with children and moving to new homes, and we wrote less often. One day a card that I sent came back, stamped “Address Unknown.” I had no idea how to find Linda.Over the years, I missed Linda very much. I wanted to share happiness of my children and then grandchildren. And I needed to share my sadness when my brother and then mother died. There was an empty place in my heart that only a friend like Linda could fill.One day I was reading a newspaper when I noticed a photo of a young woman who looked very much like Linda and whose last name was Wagman — Linda's married name. “There must be thousands of Wagmans,” I thought, but I still wrote to her.She called as soon as she got my letter. “Mrs. Tobin!’’ she said excitedly, “Linda Evans Wagman is my mother.Minutes later I heard a voice that I knew very much, even after 40 years, laughed and cried and caught up on each other’s lives. Now the empty place in my heart is filled. And there’s one thing that Linda and I know for sure: We won’t lose each other again!_____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____Summary:Linda Evans and the writer are best friends. After the writer’s family moved away, they kept in touch through letters. Then, they were all busy and wrote letters often. Finally, they lost in touch with each other and the writer felt empty. After 40 years, the writer found Linda and they won’t lose each other again.1.他利用她人好心软,三番五次向她借钱。
2019年高考英语书面表达技巧及范文汇总
2019年高考英语书面表达技巧及范文汇总一、文体概述问题解决型作文要求考生对生活中的某个问题简要描述并提出解决方法。
其常见形式是:一、目前存在某个问题;二、这种问题的危害或产生原因;三、给出解决方法。
此类作文的重点在于如何解决问题,占文章的1/3至1/2的篇幅。
二、必备短语1. with the rapid development of ... 随着……的快速发展2. it is of great importance for us to... 我们十分必要去做某事3. take some measures to solve this problem采取措施解决问题4. more problems are brought to our attention 我们关注到很多问题5. spare no effort to solve this problem 不遗余力解决这个问题6. cope with the situation 处理这个局面7. take one’s advice听取某人的建议8. it is high time that we did sth 是我们做某事的时候了9. take sth. into consideration 将某事纳入考虑10. there is still a long way for us to do sth.要做到某事,我们还有很长的路走三、套用句式1. Recently, environmental pollution has been brought into public attention. 最近环境污染已经成为人们关注的焦点。
2. Nowadays, more and more people are concerned about the problem of cheating. 现在越来越多的人开始关注作弊问题。
3. There are many reasons accounting for this phenomenon. 有很多原因导致这个现象发生。
2019浙江新高考备考英语应用文写作
Yours Yehua & Baiqian
Eventually, I would appreciate it if you can give me suggestions on what to prepare before setting off.
Thirsty for your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
中等作文怎样升格 --- 范例三
Dear Lynn,
My name is Li Hua. I am a exchange student who will go to a junior high school to study. Therefore, I need to live in your home during next term.I will go to Canada by plane and may arrive around 6 o'clock. You can go to the airport on Feb. 2 nd and pick me up. Besides, I'd like to send you some gifts which comes from China and I hope you like them.
还有一些细节应该注意,应用文是交际文本,注重实用性,例如字数要求,忌 “为表现文采而写作的应用文”。
【案例】 应用文写作
假定你是李华。下学期你将作为交换生(exchange student)去加拿大一所 高中学习,住在Lynn家里。请给Lynn写一封邮件,内容包括: 1.介绍自己; 2.告知到达时间; 3.询问应做何准备。 注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
2019年高考英语作文写作思路与技巧(推荐)
下面的一幅漫画描写了当前社会的教育状况,请结合自己的感受谈谈你对这种状况的看法。你的作文必须包括:
漫画所反映的社会教育状况。
你对这种现状的观点和看法。
参考范文:
In the picture, a boy who is bound by a lot of after-school lessons looks very upset. This image indicates a common phenomenon in a funny way that students today are forced to take too many lessons after school.
On one hand, the expense of learning abroad is beyond what an average family can afford. Many parents will probably be overburdened cover all the expense. Worse still, many students cannot discipline themselves without their parents around. Chances are that faced with temptations, they may pick up some bad habits and return eventually fruitless.
To sum up, taking lessons after school is a way to help students study better, but it shouldn’t be a burden. What really works is not those lessons but your own efforts. (235 words)
2019高考:名师谈新高考英语应用文
2019高考:名师谈新高考英语xx写作审题答题要领及例文新高考中,英语一考两用,既作为学考也作为高考。
11月初,考试就要展开了。
各位考生复习时,不妨从审题入手,结合范文分析,找准答题方向。
应用文是人类在长期的社会实践活动中形成的一种文体,是人们在生活、学习、工作中为处理实际事务而写的文章。
英语应用文写作的基本要求是主旨明确、内容要素完备、格式规范、语言得体。
下面以2017年6月高考英语应用文题为例,谈谈如何实行英语应用文写作。
假定你是李华,计划组织一次郊游,请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。
内容包括:1、参加者;2、时间、地点;3、活动:登山、野餐等。
应用文的种类繁多,按其性质可分为一般性应用文和公务文书。
一般性应用文包括书信、便条、请帖、聘书、海报、启事、证明、电报、便函等;公务文书包括布告、通告、指示、命令、请示等。
本试题创设了一个语言情境,让考生以李华的身份给英国朋友Chris写一封电子邮件,邀请他参加郊游。
也就是说,试题要求考生写一封邀请信,这属于一般性应用文中最常见的类型:书信。
2、确定格式不同类型的应用文其格式和结构是不同的。
本试题的格式是书信,要求写明写信的对象(即称呼)和写信人(即署名),正文前可适当添加问候语,如“How are you doing?”或“Long time no see。
”等。
考生必须熟知书信类应用文的格式,准确写出称呼语、标点、结尾语和署名,以符合英语的写作习惯。
3、理清要点邀请信中需要包括三个要点:告知参加者、郊游的时间和地点、活动内容——登山和野餐。
当然考生可适当增加细节,如组织郊游的目的、登山中能够做什么、除登山和野餐外是否有其他的活动、参加郊游的意义等等。
在整理要点时,考生应该特别注意以下3点:写作对象决定了考生该使用的语言和语气、写信人和收信人之间的关系、书信用语的正式度和委婉水准等。
本试题中,考生的身份是学生,写作的对象是考生的外籍朋友。
(完整word)2019高考英语概要写作技巧讲解
2019高考英语概要写作技巧讲解一、考点分析(一)考查内容:1、考查读懂文章内容的能力2、考查识别作者写作目的的能力3、考查归纳总结的能力4、考查组织文章的能力(二)评分要点•1)字数50左右•2)理解准确,涵盖全部要点•3)准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇•4)完全使用自己的语言•5)有效使用语句间的连接成分,结构紧凑二、专题详解定义:It is a brief, thorough and objective restatement of the main idea and key points of a longer composition.读者在正确理解文章的基础上, 在不改变原文中心思想、体裁和结构的前提下,用简明、精练的语句高度浓缩文章的主要内容和观点。
(三)写作方法Step 1. 确定体裁,明确主题Step 2. 明确文章结构(总-分,总-分-总,分-总,并列)Step 3. 划主题句与关键信息Step 4. 写纲要,打草稿Step 5. 润色成文1) 找准体裁,提炼要点按体裁 2) 语言:同义词① 同义转换:近义词、同义词和词组的替换,尽量用单词替换短语(例 improve=promote, of great importance = greatly important )②) ③ 句子重构:调整词类(名词、动词、形容词转换)、时态、语态(主动变被动)等3) 衔接(替换;省略;增加):表逻辑关系的连接词替换:并列关系and, moreover, furthermore, in addition,转折关系 but, instead, however, on the other hand省略:并列观点有时可省略连接词;记叙文可省略衔接词。
增加:按逻辑关系,补充连接词firstly…, secondly…, finally…;and…, moreover…, furthermore…; but, instead, however,例(一)_____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____Summary:Chris, whose job is exciting and dangerous, works for MFS. Chris and other MFS’s doctors need to be ready to go almost anywhere in the world and might be sent on an emergency task. Christ thinks his job is meaningful/helpful and he gains a lot. (同义词转换)_____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____Summary :People from countryside generally live longer than city people because they enjoy many advantages such as close with nature, physical work, being free from urban pressure, more free walk, quiet and peaceful environment, fresh food, etc. (句式改变)_____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____Keys:Windbreak, which is formed by trees and other plants, is used by farmers to protect their land from damage by farming and the forces of the nature. Windbreak can protect the crops and help improve grain production. However, windbreak should be planted properly to work its best.练习实战练习(一)One hot night last August, I tried everything I could think of—a warm bottle, songs, etc. to make him fall into sleep, but he just couldn’t do it. Since I believed that a long night was waiting for me ahead, I had no choice but to bring a TV into his room to kill off the hours until dawn. I was surprised that the moment I turned on the TV, the baby became quiet right away and fixed his little eyes brightly on the screen. Not willing to waste an opportunity for sleep, I then tiptoed(用脚失走)out of the room, leaving him to watch the boring TV programs.I heard no more of the baby’s crying that night and the next morning when I went into his room, I found him still watching TV by himself. I found there was a metaphor (暗喻) in my baby’s behavior for the new generation. When I gave my boy some books to go over, he only spit upon them; when I read to him, he did not feel comfortable. So is it in the schools with my students. I find that our students don’t read and they look down upon reading and make light of those of us who teach it. All they want to do is to watch TV. After this experience with the baby, however, I have drawn a conclusion: “Let them watch it!” If television is much more attractive to children than books, why should we fight against it? Let them watch what they want!_____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____Summary:The writer tried everything to make her baby fall asleep but failed. Surprisingly, when she turned on the TV, the baby kept quiet himself. Then she found that her students liked watching TV as much as her baby. So the writer suggested that we should let children watch what they want.实战练习(二)More and more people like bicycling and it is no surprise. It is fun, healthy and good for the environment. Maybe that’s why there are 1.4 billion bicycles and only 400 million cars on roads worldwide today.Bikes can take you almost anywhere, and there is no oil cost! Get on a bicycle and ride around your neighbourhood. You may discover something new all around you. Stopping and getting off a bike is easier than stopping and getting out of your car. You can bike to work and benefit from the enjoyable exercise without polluting the environment. You don’t even have to ride all the way.Folding bikes work well for people who take the train. Just fold the bike and take it with you. You can do the same on an airplane. A folding bike can be packed in a suitcase. You can also take a common bike with you when you fly. But be sure to look for information by getting on airline websites. Not all airlines are bicycle-friendly to travelers.Health Benefits of Bicycling: It helps to prevent heart diseases. Bicycling helps to control your weight. A 15-minute bike ride to and from work three times a week bums off five kilos of fat in a year. Bicycling can improve your mood. Exercise like bicycling has been shown to make people feel better, more relaxed and self-confident. Bicycling is healthier than driving._____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____Summary:Many people like bicycling because it’s fun, heathy and good for environment and it’s easy to stop and get off. Sometimes folding bikes can be taken with you on an airplane or a train. Most importantly, bicycling has a lot of health benefits.强化练习练习(一)Understanding body language is important to success, whether in the business world or in our personal lives. However, some of our ideas about body language are wrong, according to modern communication research.There is a belief that people with shifty(变化的) eyes are probably lying. As Paul Ekman says, “When we asked people how they could tell if someone was lying, too much blinking(眨眼) and shifty eyes were the answers.” Ekman goes on to argue against such a wrong belief. Although this kind of body language is probably an expression of nervousness, it is not always because the person is lying. Shyness can, for example, make people shift their eyes. To understand what someone’s behavior means, you have to watch them carefully.There is also a belief that when meeting someone, the more eye contact, the better. As a result people would like to make initial (开始的) contact in formal situations, like a job interview, by staring fixedly at the other human. Yet Ekman points out that most of us are comfortable with eye contact lasting a few seconds,but any eye contact that is longer than that cm make us nervous.In short, you must carefully consider the speaker and the speaking environment. Experts suggest that unless you know about someone’s basic communication style, you will have little hope in understanding their true feelings through body language. In other words, body language carries important but not always true messages._____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____Summary:The passage argues two wrong ideas about body language. One is that people believe shifty eyes means that person is lying. The other is that people believe the more eye contact, the better during communication. Finally, the writer gives us a suggestion that we should be careful when we judge somebody body language.练习(二)Linda Evans was my best friend—like the sister I never had. We did everything together: having piano lessons, going to movies, swimming, and horseback riding.When I was 13, my family moved away. Linda and I kept in touch through letters, and we saw each other on special time—like my wedding and Linda’s. Soon we were busy with children and moving to new homes, and we wrote less often. One day a card that I sent came back, stamped “Address Unknown.” I had no idea how to find Linda.Over the years, I missed Linda very much. I wanted to share happiness of my children and then grandchildren. And I needed to share my sadness when my brother and then mother died. There was an empty place in my heart that only a friend like Linda could fill.One day I was reading a newspaper when I noticed a photo of a young woman who looked very much like Linda and whose last name was Wagman — Linda's married name. “There must be thousands of Wagmans,” I thought, but I still wrote to her.She called as soon as she got my letter. “Mrs. Tobin!’’ she said excitedly, “Linda Evans Wagman is my mother.Minutes later I heard a voice that I knew very much, even after 40 years, laughed and cried and caught up on each other’s lives. Now the empty place in my heart is filled. And there’s one thing that Linda and I know for sure: We won’t lose each other again!_____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ __________ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____Summary:Linda Evans and the writer are best friends. After the writer’s family moved away, they kept in touch through letters. Then, they were all busy and wrote letters often. Finally, they lost in touch with each other and the writer felt empty. After 40 years, the writer found Linda and they won’t lose each other again.1.他利用她人好心软,三番五次向她借钱。
2019届高考英语写作指导
写作要有得分亮点:能熟练应用非谓语、定语从句(高中重点),另外,倒装句、强调句等一些固定搭配,词组,连词和短语不可或缺。
第一篇:应用文写作应用文的类型:书信作文格式例文:[书信作文写作模版1]1.保持书信格式---地址,日期,称谓,落款2.根据内容确定文体----建议,劝说,说明,申请,投诉,介绍;商榷/讨论;描绘/叙述;致谢,致歉…3.牢记常用模版和句式重点句式:Give my best regards to sb ! I’m looking forward to hearing from you instantly. sincerely/ faithfully…A Letter of Application for a JobMay 25, 2017Dear Sirs,I am looking for a position in an engineering department in which I may use my training in computer science to solve engineering problems. I would be interested in exploring the possibility of obtaining such a position within your firm.I expect to receive a Bachelor of Science degree in mechanical engineering from Tangshan Institute of Technology in June. Since September 2013 I have been participating, through my institute, in the Professional Training Program as Programmer Trainee and have gained a great deal of experience in computer applications. Details of the academic courses I have taken are contained in the enclosed resume.May I have an appointment for an interview with you to discuss my qualifications in detail? Please write to me at my home or telephone me at 221701 any weekday.Sincerely,Zhang LinA Speech on Tele-educationLadies and Gentlemen,With the rapid development of science and technology, tele-education has sped up in our country. While many people speak highly of its advantages, others see more disadvantages deriving from it.The advocates of tele-education give their arguments as follows. For one thing, tele-education makes it possible for people in remote areas to learn the subjects they are interested in. For another, people have a wider range of choices as to teachers and lessons through tele-education, because they can listen to the best lessons by the best teachers in the country, or even in the world.Just as “Every advantage has its disadvantages”, the opponents believe that not all the people have access to tele-education because many are poor. In addition, the students cannot contact teachers, but interpersonal relations are important to their study.As far as I am concerned, we should develop tele-education more rapidly to benefit more students. Meanwhile, we can design some programs to help teachers and students to contact each other.Thank you for being with me. Good-bye.第二篇:读后续写写作一、评分原则:1. 本题总分为25 分,按5 个档次给分。
2019年高考英语全国II卷作文范文及解析
试题回顾:假定你是校排球队队长李华。
请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛,内容包括:1. 比赛信息;2. 赛前准备;3. 表达期待。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
题目分析:这是一篇带有邀请信特色的告知信,作为学校排球队队长的李华要告诉队员参加比赛,具体细节包括比赛内容、比赛前的准备等,并期盼他的到来。
事实上,“告知信”是近年高考英语作文的热点,因为在高考英语十大书信作文中,只有告知信对考生的“造句能力”要求更高,而其它书信往往都存在大量的套路和套话可以选用。
参考范文:Dear ChrisHow are you doing? Recently an important volleyball game will be held in our campus which willbe not only meaningful but also exciting. So as captain of the team I on behalf of all our team members am writing to invite you to join us in the battle!Here are some relevant details about it. To begin with it will be on the 3rdvolleyball court from 2:00 to 4:00 on the afternoon of July 1st. Besides we the Giants will confront the Eagles which is undoubtedly a tough rival. As a result adequate preparation is urgently needed including practice nutrition and a perfect plan.Hopefully you could make it to this wonderful event. We need you! Looking forward to your reply and your presence.YoursLi Hua试题点评:一篇高考英语作文可以分成两个部分,一部分是考前准备的套路套话,一部分是考场发挥的遣词造句。
—2019年高考英语全国卷作文题及优秀范文资料讲解
—2019年高考英语全国卷作文题及优秀范文资料讲解Ladies and gentlemen,Today, I stand here to share with you my thoughts on success. In my opinion, success is not merely defined by material wealth or fame, but rather by the ability to achieve personal goals, find happiness and make a positive impact on the world.Firstly, success is about setting and achieving personal goals. Each of us has our own dreams and aspirations, and true success lies in the ability to turn those dreams into reality. Whether it is becoming a doctor, a teacher, or an artist, success is measured by the progress we make towards our goals. It requires determination, hard work, and perseverance. Success is not an easy path, but it is a rewarding one. It is the feeling of accomplishment that comes from knowing that we have done our best and achieved what we set out to do.Secondly, success is about finding happiness. Many people mistakenly believe that money and fame will bring them happiness. However, true happiness comes from within and cannot be bought or achieved through external means. Success is about finding joy and contentment in what we do, and living a life that is meaningful to us. It is about pursuing our passions, doing what we love, and finding fulfillment in our work. When we are happy with what we do, success naturally follows.Lastly, success is about making a positive impact on the world. True success is not selfish, but rather it is about using our talents andabilities to make a difference in the lives of others. Whether it is through volunteer work, charity, or simply being kind and compassionate to those around us, success is about making the world a better place. Success is not just about personal gain, but it is about leaving alasting legacy and creating a positive change in the world.In conclusion, success is not defined by material wealth or fame,but rather by the ability to achieve personal goals, find happiness and make a positive impact on the world. It requires determination, hard work, and perseverance. It is about setting and achieving personal goals, finding joy and contentment in what we do, and using our talents to make a difference. So let us all strive for success, not only for ourselves but also for the betterment of society. Thank you.。
2019年高考英语全国2试题分析、思考以及备考建议
2019高考英语试题分析与思考2019年高考已经落下帷幕,为了更好地进行教学,我们高一英语备课组对今年的高考试题做了分析研究,并进行了认真思考。
现就2019年高考英语全国2卷,谈谈我们自己的看法,有不妥之处,敬请各位老师批评指正。
2019年高考英语命题立足全面发展育人目标,构建德智体美劳全面培养教育体系,落实以立德树人为教育根本任务。
全国II卷选材围绕人与自然、人与社会、人与自我三大主题全面考查英语综合运用能力,取材广泛、体裁多样、时代性强,在巩固德育、坚守智育的基础上,加强对健康意识、审美情趣和劳动精神的考查。
与此同时重视思维品质培养并倡导人际关系和谐。
一.试题分析1、听力:强调基础性、综合性和应用性。
主要从理解主旨与要义、获取事实性具体信息、对所听内容作出简单推断、理解谈话人的意图、观点和态度等角度进行考查。
问题涉及多个方面,多个角度,采用where-, why-, how-, who-, what- 等多种特殊疑问句,都侧重于基本用法,没有偏、难、怪题。
2、阅读理解:1)选材主题明确,题材丰富。
所选文章体裁多样(应用文、记叙文、说明文等),贴近生活,内容丰富、时代性强,体现高考培养发展素质教育的功能。
内容分别是:A我最喜欢的读书; B做志愿者;C社会新现象---独自午餐; D现代科技与教育。
所有语篇和材料紧密围绕,人与社会、人与自我这两个主题,充分体现了”立德树人”的宗旨。
2)试题难度适中、稳中求变。
阅读理侧重考查考生英语语言知识的综合运用能力。
考察知识细致入微。
阅读材料的难度水平呈梯度分布。
问题设置仍然以事实细节题为主,考查学生获取信息的能力。
同时加大了对学生的信息推断能力,及概括总结能力的考查。
例如B篇中24题,26题,同一篇中两道题都考查了学生对段落大意的推断概括能力。
B篇25题词意猜测难度明显高于往年。
C篇31题和D35篇以不同的方式,考查对文章主旨大意的归纳总结能力。
除此之外,阅读理解在题目设问方式,及干扰项设置上产生了变化。
【高考英语】 应用文写作的解题技巧
【考前技能篇7】应用文写作的解题技巧应用文写作是新高考写作中的重要题型之一。
其考察形式以书信和电子邮件为主,话题贴近考生的生活实际。
要求学生运用所学的语言知识,在较短的时间内写出一篇80词左右的短文。
此题型是考察学生的语言运用能力和语言交际能力的有效题型。
一、题型分析1. 应用文考情分析英语应用文是考察学生语言综合运用能力最值接和最有效的形式。
它不仅考察学生词汇和语法的运用能力,也考察学生的总体分析能力、观察能力、逻辑思维能力、篇章结构的组织能力和表达能力等。
其话题覆盖范围广,涵盖了学校生活,社会生活,旅游,文化习俗,课外活动等方面,这些话题与学生生活密切相关,既符合学生的认知水平,也贴合学生的市级,让学生有内容可写。
从上面表格中我们能够看出,应用文写作通常是考察学生在真实语境中传递与沟通信息,再现生活经历和表达观点的能力。
话题涉及范围很广泛,命题形式以提纲型和半开放型为主。
大部分的题目设置给出简明的提示,不会禁锢学生的思维,让学生有一定的自由发挥空间。
这种命题形式体现了立足全面发展的育人目标,落实构建德智体美劳全面培养的教育体系。
以立德树人的根本教育任务。
考生只需根据提纲信息写出短文或者报告,语言连贯有逻辑,表述完整即可。
2. 应用文表达的评分标准1.本题总分为15分,按五个档次进行评分。
2.评分时,应主要从内容组织、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑,具体为:(1)对内容要点的覆盖情况以及表述的清楚程度和合理性。
(2)使用词汇和语法结构的准确性,恰当性和多样性。
(3)上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。
3.评分时,先根据作答的整体情况初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。
4.评分时还应注意:(1)词数少于60或多于100的,从总分中减去2分;(2)单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面,评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。
英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受:二、解读评分标准:(一)如何理解“覆盖所有内容要点”评分标准中对考生所要求的“覆盖所有内容要点” , 就是要求考生在写作时要认真审题,确保要点“全而不漏” , 要点全面是作文得高分的必要条件。
2019届高考英语解题技巧深度解读
2019 高考英语完形填空解题技巧一、开篇首句、不容忽略文之首如鸟之头,辩鸟,只要看鸟头即可了如指掌,阅读一篇生分的资料也同此理。
开篇首句是探察全文概略的“窗口”,从首句获取的信息是解题的指南。
经过它,能够大概认识全文的概貌和作者的立意。
它常常供给了全文的中心信息。
阅读资料的首句一般都是重点句,在谈论文中常常就是段落的主题句,在记述文中则是领起全文,睁开情节的“文眼”。
如将一篇生分的阅读资料比做字母的大海,那么通读全文无异于漂洋过海,首句启示作用好像茫茫夜雾中的灯塔,能够指导船只选定正确的航向,朝着理想的此岸起锚开航。
二、前怕狼后怕虎、逻辑推理近几年中考完形填空题已没有纯真的语法题,一定借助于上下文理解才能正确解题。
文章都是前后联贯,切合逻辑地向前发展延长的,短文中每个空白处的正确答案和其上下文在乎义上和构造上都有这样或那样的必定联系。
所以,一定注意上下文的参照,连接思虑。
在认识文章粗心的基础上,要按文章的先后次序,对每道题所给词语确实切含义进行剖析比较,并考虑到全文整体境界的影响,做到前怕狼后怕虎,上下文响应,运用逻辑思想,推理的方式来进行答题。
切不行自行断意,左支右绌或不知所措,逐渐填意,此外还注意试题有易有难,应临时绕开那些少量较疑难的问题,先做最有掌握、最熟习的短语,习用法动词形式和语言构造的题目。
三、先易后难,返回定论完形填空题的整体难度是较高的,但10 个空中,简单失分的也仅有二、三个题。
大部分是中档题和低档题。
所以,在解题中要注意解题速度,不行为一道难题冥思苦想,耗时太多。
应当绕道而行,先做下边简单的题目,将有掌握的空填上。
填上全部的简单题,也减小了思虑范围,同时又供给了更多的信息。
四、复查查对,决定弃取答题完成,仍不行孤立地检查每个所要求填的空处。
应按照由整体到部分,再由部分到整体的理解文章的规律,耐心地再次复读全文。
仔细检查所选答案放在原句中可否使该句意思通畅、与全文整体意思能否协调一致、构造能否正确完好、能否切合习惯表达和固定搭配、能否切合上下文语义。
高考阅卷老师教你备考2019英语写作
高考阅卷老师教你备考2019英语写作下半年学考选考越来越近了,本次英语科目考试既是学考也是高考,作为英语主观题的重头戏,读后续写和应用文写作有什么好的解题思路与技巧,怎样高效复习?不妨看看王璐老师和吴俊峰老师基于今年6月高考英语写作答题情况的分析和建议。
读后续写读后续写是一种将阅读与写作紧密结合的考查形式,是模仿与创造、学习与运用相结合的写作活动。
读后续写的题型特征是提供一段350词之内的语言材料,考生根据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写(150词左右),将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。
2018年6月浙江省高考英语卷中,读后续写题型再一次出现在写作第二节。
从阅卷反馈来看,2018届考生的读后续写能力较上一次高考有了明显的进步,学生的综合语言运用能力得到了一定的发展,说明该题型对高中英语教学产生正向反拨作用。
解题思路1。
基于叙事类文本特征,深度解读语篇解读语篇可以从三个方面展开。
解读语篇结构,搭建内容支架。
读后续写试题选择的文本通常是叙事结构的语篇,以事件发生的时间为序。
拉波夫(Labov,1927)关于叙事结构的分析模式指出完整的叙事包括点题、指向、进展、结局、回应、评议等六个部分。
一个完整的叙述的开始点是指向,接着是进展,然后是结局,最后是回应,评议渗透在进展和结局之中。
当然,并不是所有的叙事结构都包括完整的六个部分。
本次试题中的短文是一篇以旅行为话题的记叙文,全文共324词,以时间发展为序,讲述了作者与父亲来到美国西部荒野,体验农场生活过程中骑马历险的故事。
所给短文共四段,属于拉波夫叙事结构分析模式中的点题和指向部分。
从结构来看,考生需要续写的部分应该是叙事结构中的发展、结局、回应部分,并渗透作者的评议。
总的来说,在短文中作者写的所有经历和体验都是为了突出此次旅行是前所未有的,即原文第一段提到的 a vacation like never before 。
2019高考英语作文写作答题策略
作文高考英语作文满分为25分,占总分数的16%。
如果作文分数能达到20分以上,就能轻松将许多考生甩在后面。
英文作文的阅卷老师阅读速度很快,每篇作文以平均不到一分钟的速度审核,阅卷老师首先会大致读一下作文内容,并在心里给出作文得分的等级。
一等分数为20-25分;二等分数为15分-19分;三等分数为15分以下。
因此,整篇作文的第一印象很重要。
1.卷面清爽,减少修改卷面整洁的高考作文分数一般都不会太低,阅卷老师喜好阅读字迹工整的文章,让人看上去舒服的卷面,应尽量减少修改,如果字体优美的话就更占优势了。
2.杜绝错误拼写高考作文应杜绝拼写错误的单词,尤其是简单的词汇。
如果考生有拿不准的单词应尽量替换为熟悉的单词。
如果有拼写错误的单词不仅会因此扣分,还会影响整体作文分数的等级。
3.善用实词,替换常用词高考英语作文应多用实词,少用虚词。
比如在形容一个人很好的时候,不要总用nice这样太过简单空洞的词汇。
应尽量多使用一些诸如generous,humorous,interesting,smart,gentle,warm-hearted之类的形容词。
作文不能拿高分,很大的原因是,千篇一律。
所以,在写作时,用不一样的词来表达,这样能给你的作文增加不少的新鲜感与分数。
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2019高考:名师谈新高考英语应用文写作审题答题要领及例文新高考中,英语一考两用,既作为学考也作为高考。
11月初,考试就要展开了。
各位考生复习时,不妨从审题入手,结合范文分析,找准答题方向。
应用文是人类在长期的社会实践活动中形成的一种文体,是人们在生活、学习、工作中为处理实际事务而写的文章。
英语应用文写作的基本要求是主旨明确、内容要素完备、格式规范、语言得体。
下面以2017年6月高考英语应用文题为例,谈谈如何实行英语应用文写作。
假定你是李华,计划组织一次郊游,请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。
内容包括:1、参加者;2、时间、地点;3、活动:登山、野餐等。
注意:1、词数80左右;2、能够适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
审题要领写好应用文的第一步是准确审题。
审题并不但仅指读题,而是一个思维过程。
审题能够从以下几个方面入手:1、判断体裁应用文的种类繁多,按其性质可分为一般性应用文和公务文书。
一般性应用文包括书信、便条、请帖、聘书、海报、启事、证明、电报、便函等;公务文书包括布告、通告、指示、命令、请示等。
本试题创设了一个语言情境,让考生以李华的身份给英国朋友Chris写一封电子邮件,邀请他参加郊游。
也就是说,试题要求考生写一封邀请信,这属于一般性应用文中最常见的类型:书信。
2、确定格式不同类型的应用文其格式和结构是不同的。
本试题的格式是书信,要求写明写信的对象(即称呼)和写信人(即署名),正文前可适当添加问候语,如“How are you doing?”或“Long time no see。
”等。
考生必须熟知书信类应用文的格式,准确写出称呼语、标点、结尾语和署名,以符合英语的写作习惯。
3、理清要点邀请信中需要包括三个要点:告知参加者、郊游的时间和地点、活动内容——登山和野餐。
当然考生可适当增加细节,如组织郊游的目的、登山中能够做什么、除登山和野餐外是否有其他的活动、参加郊游的意义等等。
在整理要点时,考生应该特别注意以下3点:●这是一次郊游,而不是到外地或到国外去游玩的长途旅行。
●郊游的时间应该具体到某一天,不要笼统地说下周,告知几点钟集合出发。
●既要介绍郊游的地点,又要尽量避免透露考生信息。
例如:若考生写到Yandang Mountain表明该考生可能来自温州地区,若考生写到the West Lake表明该考生可能来自杭州地区。
那么怎样巧妙地避免这个问题呢?考生能够将地点模糊化,如使用Green Mountain,the Central Park等。
4、明确对象写作对象决定了考生该使用的语言和语气、写信人和收信人之间的关系、书信用语的正式度和委婉水准等。
本试题中,考生的身份是学生,写作的对象是考生的外籍朋友。
既然是朋友,两者是平辈的关系,就不适合使用过度的敬辞或谦辞,如“I would appreciate itif you could come。
”;朋友之间一般会用“Hope to see you there。
”或“Hope you can make it。
”。
既然是朋友,彼此应该熟知对方的email地址,看到寄信人的地址就应该知道是谁的来信,所以在邮件的开头根本没有必要介绍自己的身份。
如有些考生写道:“I’m Li Hua, your friend。
”明显就不符合逻辑和常识。
5、分析语言应用文作为一种实用性文体,是用来说明事实、解决实际问题的,侧重于“以事告人”。
所以语言要求自然得体、朴实无华、开门见山、清晰流畅。
本试题是邀请信,首先要掌握的是常用套语,例如在书信的开头常用:“I’m writing to invite you to …”信件的结尾常用:“Looking forward to your early reply。
”或“I reallyhope you can come。
”等。
其次,邀请信中的书面用语要符合朋友关系的身份设定,切忌使用过度的敬辞或谦辞。
时态应以一般现在时和一般将来时态为主。
作文范例范文一Dear Chris,I am writing to invite you to hike with us this Sunday。
There will be 20 people in total, including my friendsand classmates。
According to the schedule, we will meet at8 o’clock on the morning of this Sunday at the foot of Green Mountain。
Then, we will climb the mountain and have apicnic on the summit, from which we can enjoy the beautifulscenery of the whole city。
Should you join us, we will bemore than glad。
Looking forward to your earliest reply。
Yours,Li Hua〖点评〗该作文开门见山,直接表明写信的目的。
所写内容覆盖了所有要点,表达清楚,语言基本准确,且尝试应用高级语法结构。
如:现在分词作定语including my friends and classmates,定语从句wewill climb the mountain and have a picnic on the summit,from which we can enjoy the beautiful scenery of the wholecity。
(当然,该句中的定语从句引导词改为from where更为妥当。
)文章的结尾使用了倒装结构:Should you join us, we will bemore than glad。
再次委婉地表达了期望对方参加郊游的心情。
文中使用的According to the schedule和Then这两处衔接成分,有效地使全文结构紧凑。
不足之处在于第二段中时间的表达不够准确,应改成we willmeet at 8 o’clock this Sunday morning。
范文二Dear Chris,I’m writing to in vite you to participate in a hikingorganized by me, where some of our classmates will getinvolved。
As scheduled, we are to gather at the foot of Baiyunnear our school at 8:00 am this Saturday。
We’ll start with climbing the mountain, enjoying the fresh air andbreathtaking views along the way。
After we make it to thepeak, you can expect a picnic where home-made snacks willsatisfy your stomach。
If you’re available, please confirm it at yourearliest convenience。
Looking forward to your involvement!Yours,Li Hua〖点评〗首先,该作文使用的大量高级词汇体现了作者词汇的丰富性,如:participate in, get involved, schedule, breathtaking,home-made, satisfy, available, confirm, involvement等。
其次,作者没有使用任何关联词,却做到了行文连贯。
如:第二段的开头利用as scheduled这个短语引出郊游的时间和地点,接着通过谓语动词start with介绍了第一项登山活动,最后使用after引导的时间状语,过渡到野餐活动。
整篇文章衔接合乎逻辑,显得非常自然顺畅。
另外,文中多处使用了分词结构,如过去分词作定语organized和home-made,现在分词作状语enjoying the fresh air andbreathtaking views along the way。
改进的建议:最后一段“If you’re available, please confirm it at your earliest convenience。
”这句话中的confirm it用法不准确。
建议改成If you’re available, please confirmat your earliest convenience。
范文三Dear Chris,There is going to be a picnic for students at the CityPark this Saturday。
As a member of the students’ Union anda good friend of yours,I’m honored to invite you to comewith us。
In my opinion, it must be a great chance for youto know more about our city and make new friends。
According to our plan, we will climb the mountains, enjoying the beautiful scenery and our home-made delicious food。
I guarantee that you’ll have a wonderful an d unforgettable trip!Looking forward to your reply!Yours,Li Hua〖点评〗该篇作文与前两篇不同,信件的开头先介绍了活动的时间和地点,再发出邀请,而且文章中增加了其他内容,包括参加郊游的意义和对活动的评价:In my opinion, it must be a great chance for youto know more about our city and make new friends。
I guarantee that you’ll have a wonderful and unforgettabletrip!概言之,本文语言朴实,虽没有使用太多华丽辞藻和高级句式,但全文要点全面、条理清晰、结构紧凑、把事情说得清楚明白,完全达到了预期的写作目的,不失为一篇应用文佳作。