2017届浦东区高三二模作文及范文

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2017上海高三二模作文范文(一)

2017上海高三二模作文范文(一)

2017上海高三二模作文范文(一)“霍金热”的冷思考65一年前,霍金在新浪开通微博,并对中国人发布了问候之语,不到一天的时间,他就成了网红.“网红"顾名思义就是在网络上倍受关注的人,那么霍金为什么会有这么大的吸引力呢?首先是因为我国对霍金事例的普及吧.各中小学的语文教材里想必总有提及霍金的地方,高中教材中不还有篇《邂逅霍金》吗?先不论这些文章中是否有神化霍金之嫌,单从提高其“知名度”功用来看,如此庞大的粉丝量就显得理所当然了。

其次,抛开可能在霍金头上的光环,人们关注霍金,是否也体现了在这个科技高速发展的时代,人们对科学,对科技更为重视了呢?这应是件值得欣慰的事。

科技带给我们生活的影响是巨大的,我们也逐渐意识到了它的巨大影响力。

对于“未知"我们选择探索,而非像从前那般“闭关锁国",这应是我们的一种进步。

我想,之所以在语文教材中提及霍金,也是想让大家重视科学,当然,还要注重科学背后的那份严谨和冷静。

最后,将目光聚焦于霍金本身,或许他成为“网红”是人们出于欣赏他的意志品质的缘由。

至少大多数人眼中的霍金,大概就是教材中那样的,坚强、执着.他的那种不畏艰难的、勇往直前的精神,是很少有人能做到的,所以许多人景仰他,所以关注他。

然而,即使有无数多的原因使霍金成为网红,但似乎也仅此而已了.到了今年,霍金的粉丝数依然可观,可谁知道其中有多少“僵尸粉”呢?仅仅关注而已,就再没了后文,或许更甚者,都已经忘了自己关注过这个人了.那么这样的“热”,是否名存实亡呢?况且,随着这“冷",我们也不免开始思考之前的“热”是否真的是“热”.先前提及国人对科学的关注有所提高,然而若只是关注一下便没了后文,这提高似乎又有些苍白无力了。

说句玩笑话,这或许还要怪罪到霍金没有发一些浅显易懂的传播科学的文字上.但玩笑过后,更多的“罪罚”还应加诸于大众身上.关注但不去了解,那这关注又算是什么呢?盲目追捧紧跟“潮流"?还是说关注一个霍金会使自己显得很有学识?思想很有深度?既然这样,不如再动动手指,去了解《时间简史》《果壳中的宇宙》黑洞理论等相关知识,了解课本之外的霍金,也了解一下我国的宇宙科学的发展状况,将这种种冲动关注变为开阔眼界,似乎也是一件不错的事呢!去年,霍金成了网红,今年或者明年后年等,霍金能否成为人们心中真正的“网红”呢?科学能否渗透进千家万户,飞入寻常百姓家?拭目以待吧。

浦东区二模作文有我在

浦东区二模作文有我在

浦东区二模作文有我在在繁华喧嚣的都市中,在车水马龙的街道旁,有一个小小的角落,那里承载着我的梦想与坚持,见证着我的成长与担当。

这个角落,就是我生活的浦东区。

记得那是一个阳光炽热的夏日午后,我走在浦东新区的一条老街上。

街道两旁的梧桐树郁郁葱葱,阳光透过树叶的缝隙洒下斑驳的光影。

街边的小店传来阵阵吆喝声,充满了生活的烟火气。

我正悠然自得地走着,突然听到前方传来一阵嘈杂声。

走近一看,原来是一家水果店门口,老板和一位顾客正在争执。

顾客手里拿着一个看起来有些腐烂的西瓜,生气地指责老板卖给他不新鲜的水果。

老板则一脸无奈,不停地解释说这是运输过程中的问题,不是他的过错。

看到这一幕,我心里想:“哎呀,这可不好,得有人来解决一下。

”于是,我毫不犹豫地走上前去,笑着对他们说:“别吵啦,别吵啦,大家都消消气。

”顾客看了我一眼,没好气地说:“你谁啊?这事儿跟你有啥关系!”我连忙说道:“大哥,别这么大火气嘛。

大热天的,生气多伤身体。

我就是路过,看到大家这么不愉快,想着帮忙调解调解。

”老板也附和着说:“是啊,这位小姑娘也是好心。

”我拿起那个西瓜,仔细看了看,对老板说:“老板,这西瓜确实不太新鲜了,要不您给大哥换一个,或者退点钱,大家各让一步,怎么样?”老板犹豫了一下,点了点头:“行,那就给您退一半的钱,您看成不?”顾客还是不太满意,嘟囔着:“这大热天的,我买个西瓜容易吗?”我赶忙拉着顾客说:“大哥,您看老板也不容易,这么热的天守着店。

咱互相理解一下,退一半钱您再去别的店挑个好的,也不耽误您吃西瓜解暑,您说是不是?”顾客听了,脸色稍微缓和了一些:“行吧,算我倒霉,这次就这么着。

”一场纠纷就这样在我的调解下化解了。

老板感激地看着我,连连道谢。

我摆摆手说:“没事儿,大家都在这一片生活,和和气气的多好。

”继续往前走,我的心情格外舒畅。

原来,在别人需要的时候挺身而出,能够给自己带来这么大的满足感。

走着走着,我来到了一个社区活动中心。

2017上海高三二模作文-视吾家之所寡有

2017上海高三二模作文-视吾家之所寡有

2017上海高三二模作文-视吾家之所寡有多年前,一句“视吾家之所寡有”,震荡了历史烟尘,令人心动,接着便是焚券市义的美谈不胫而走,似乎冥冥之间道出了不证自明的真理,即我们尚未拥有之物决定了个体生命的富有程度。

“富有”一词,在现代语境下往往被滥用,被曲解,被化为炫耀的工具手段,人们固执地将富有的定义局囿于金钱名利等已得之物,殊不知古典理性的告诫。

何谓之富有?顾名思义,富有指向丰盈与饱满。

所得之物,固然带来了物质上的富足,但沉静沉淀之后,心灵却只落得空虚寂寞,那叮叮当当的黄金声,嬉笑喧闹的歌声,仿佛印证了莎士比亚的话,充满了声音与狂热,里面却空无一物,得之物终究是过眼云烟。

过度执迷沉溺反而让我们一无所有。

真正使心灵富有的是吾家之寡有者,它启迪我们缺少什么?应该求索追寻什么?不同人目力所及,所思所想的“吾家之所寡有”断然不同,某种程度上像面镜子映射了你的生命形态。

登高而望,志士仁人痛拍栏杆,思国之未复,中原之未收;而多情女郎望极春愁,思佳人之未回,天伦难叙。

当然,每一种生活形态都无可厚非,但我以为热血方刚的我们,理应把生命交给更高的存在,思道之未复,天地之心未得,仁义之未行,生民之命为立,诸如此类。

我们不该将自己束缚在物质享受的果壳中,而应追求我们所尚未拥有的金刚本性,自性恒常。

我们要成为赫尔曼黑塞笔下对生命有更高要求的一群人,对自己的粗野与鄙陋不甘心。

当我们认清了我们尚未拥有之物,并将其化为意志不断追求时,那些尚未拥有之物反过来深化了我们的生命形态。

海子一生都在追求至纯至真至善,他用诗寻找隐在社会中的太阳,最后他经历了一次美妙的变幻,死于太阳,并进入了太阳。

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2017年上海高三二模语文汇编7:作文

2017年上海高三二模语文汇编7:作文

2017年上海高三二模语文汇编7:作文2017年高三二模汇编7:作文宝山(青浦、长宁、金山)区27.作文2016年4月12日,物理学家“大牛”史蒂芬·霍金在新浪网开通微博,并发布了对中国人的第一句问候语。

此后不到一天时间,他的粉丝数量突破了200万,评论,转发和点赞达数百万,由此,霍金也成了“网红”。

“霍金也‘网红’”,引发了你怎样的思考?请自拟题目,写一篇不少于800字的文章。

崇明区27.当今社会有一种现象,人们往往习惯首先用怀疑的眼光看待他人,而不是首先思考需不需要怀疑。

请写一篇文章,谈谈你对这一现象的思考。

要求:(1)自拟题目,自选角度;(2)不少于800字。

奉贤区29.不只在数学里,人生也处处在做加减法,有人为之所累,有人为之所乐,有人甚至尝到了别样的味道……对“人生中的加减法”你有怎样的认识和思考,请自拟题目,写一篇不少于800字的文章。

虹口区根据以下材料,自选角度,自拟题目,写一篇不少于800字的文章(不要写成诗歌)。

锤子的打击造就了宝剑的锋芒,而溪水的欢歌却使鹅卵石臻于完美。

黄浦区27.随着国门打开,经济发展和文化交流的不断增强,现代生活方式层出不穷;传统生活方式面临种种挑战,人们处于难以抉择的境地。

对“传统生活方式面临种种挑战”的现象谈谈你的看法。

要求:(1)自拟题目;(2)不少于800字。

嘉定区26.作文。

有人说,中国人之间几乎没有辩论,只有争吵。

这是因为“中国式辩论”忽略了辩论的两个最基本要素:事实和逻辑,而专注于姿态与声势。

“中国式辩论”中的常见问题如:偏离论点、情绪激动、攻击对方人品、滥用比喻、使用嘲笑和反问句等等。

对此,你有怎样的思考?请自拟题目,写一篇不少于800宇的文章。

静安区27.作文阅读下面的文字,请自拟题目,写一篇不少于800字的文章(不要写成诗歌)。

一位先哲说,人的一生应努力追求这样的境界:为人如山,处事若水。

闵行区28.阅读下面材料,根据要求作文。

2017年上海市浦东新区高考语文二模试卷

2017年上海市浦东新区高考语文二模试卷

5.(15分)阅读下文,完成下列各题。

临海春色彭学明①去临海的一路上满山遍野的桔黄都跟时间兑换了绿绸绿缎,在风中起伏摇曳。

老绿透着淡淡的黑,新绿染着淡淡的黄,黑的老绿和黄的新绿交融在一起时,一点一点、一团一团、一滩一滩、一片一片地绿出了参差美和斑斓美。

其实老的绿不老,只不过是被岁月上了点老成的妆,它一点点一步步地撤退,不是惧怕时光和岁月,而是在给新绿让贤,你看,昨天那老绿还紧紧地绿着,今天就全是新绿的嫩鲜了!你若走近掐一片新绿,那绿就流出汁来,把你的指尖和心尖都染得绿绿的,又亮又鲜。

太阳的金币从天空中落下来,轻轻地栖息在树叶和草尖,闪着针尖麦芒一样的光。

风吹起时,那光就放射状地刺出去,跳出去,飞出去,银白的,鲜亮。

②我一进临海,就我喜欢上了。

虽然临海于我是那么的陌生,但再陌生,也不会不熟悉春色。

一个人,如果连春色都不熟悉,那就白活在世界上了。

一个人连春色都不喜欢,那也不要活在这个世界上了。

③其实,好看的还在后头。

④在桃江十三渚,当我看见几座山像花瓣一样散落在水边,看见一弯一弯的水围着山势峰回路转,看见一望无际的油菜花开在水上时,我还是惊呆了!那一弯弯春水引路一样引出一坝一坝辽阔的油菜花时,我的心也被那一弯春水引走了!这南方和家乡常见的油菜花,怎么就会跟着水路走?怎么就会开在水面上?怎么就会立在水中央?怎么、怎么就会这样浩瀚辽阔、这样高调出格呢?应该都开在田间地头,开在坡上陇上的啊!那水,蛇一样扭起个身子在油菜花里钻来钻去,把一片金黄钻成一块块圆的、方的,一块块椭圆的、菱形的,还有一块块其它什么形状的。

如棋盘。

如布袋。

如手掌。

如纺锤。

如一幅幅五颜六色的布贴画。

⑤那穿行在油菜花丛中的千江春水,像春天张开的十根指头按的手模或手印,指缝间的印泥,就是油菜花开的田园。

田坎、菜花、山峰和田坎上整齐的行道树都倒映在水里时,清清的水下,又被春天的手指按出一个如画的世界!⑥别以为,临海的春色只在山上、水上、乡村、田园,临海的古城、古墙和古街上,也有春天的姑娘和小伙、春天的步履和声色。

2017上海浦东区高三二模作文题与优秀作文

2017上海浦东区高三二模作文题与优秀作文

【作文题目】阅读下边的资料,依据要求写一篇许多于800 字的文章。

《诗经》有言:“文王有声,遹骏有声。

”这实在是在点醒人:人是闻名誉的。

一个好名誉,抬你一辈子;一个坏名誉,砸你一辈子。

一辈子都完不了呢,周文王的好名誉流传了几千年了。

名誉两个字,真叫人一则以喜,一则以惧。

要求:综合资料内容及含意,选好角度,明确文体,自拟标题;不要套作,不得剽窃。

【思路点拨】通览整则资料,我们能够把它分为三个层面来理解和剖析:一是人是闻名誉的,如《诗经》所言;二是名誉对人的作用,可抬你,亦可砸你;三是名誉给人的感觉,或喜或惧。

无疑,资猜中的重点词是“名誉”,写作时应环绕着这个重点词而睁开,既能够谈好名誉对人的正面影响,也能够谈坏名誉对人的负面影响;既能够谈人关于“名誉”的态度,也能够谈面对“名誉”不一样人的不一样做法。

思想逻辑:(1)名誉的内涵(是什么)。

名誉,顾名思义指名誉名誉,一般指在社会上流传的评论。

脚扎实地的以一颗坚定的心,去提高自己的涵养,是获取一个好名誉内在的源泉;而浮名属于比较空洞一时的“美誉”,不拥有长远的生命力。

(2)名誉的作用(为何)。

名誉实为重要,它如人生标签一般紧伴我们左右。

好名誉似顺航行的风,助推我们的风帆渐行渐远,引导着我们走向前面的光明;坏名誉似逆航行的浪,阻挡我们的人际交往,让我们坠入黑暗的深渊。

(3)名誉的本源(怎么做)。

名誉记录着一个人一世的功过,标记着一个人生命的价值。

名誉需要行动,少说空话,多做实事。

以自己勤劳的汗水,一点一滴地打造出自己的一番天地,干出一番事业,好名誉随之而来,瓜熟蒂落。

美誉成就不朽崔雯《诗经》有言:“文王有声,遹骏有声。

”可见一个好名誉能够万古长青,被人仰慕。

在漫长的一世中,我们应当用美誉来成就不朽,而好名誉的换取,则需我们投入浑身心的精力。

何谓名誉?从大方面说来,是我们所做之事带来的名誉与名誉;而从渺小处说起,则是我们平时生活中每个人所表现出的人格特质与涵养,在别人谈实时能够表现一个人的评论。

上海市各区2017年高考二模语文试卷分类汇编_现代文阅读二

上海市各区2017年高考二模语文试卷分类汇编_现代文阅读二

上海市各区2017年高考二模语文试卷分类汇编_现代文阅读二上海市各区2017年高考二模语文试卷分类汇编:现代文阅读二宝山(青浦)区(二)阅读下文,完成第9-12题。

(15分)野草的呼吸迟子建①去年三月,雪花还未从北方收脚,寒流仍环绕冰城、不识相地穿街走巷时,盼春心切的我,一头扎进哈尔滨城郊的室内花卉市场,在姹紫嫣红的花中,选购了几盆色彩艳丽的四季海棠,抱回家中。

②这一簇簇的海棠花儿,在窗前,在桌畔,就像迎春的爆竹,等待点燃。

而悄无声息燃响它们的,就是阳光了。

在最初的一周,它们在日光中心思透明地大炫姿容,开得火爆。

粉色的比朝霞还要明媚,鹅黄的娇嫩得赛过柳芽,橘色的仿佛通身流着蜜,火红的透着葡萄酒般的醇香,让人有啜饮的欲望。

③居室春意盈盈,叫人愉悦。

每日晨起,我都做早课似的,先赏花儿。

我喝一杯凉白开,也给它们灌上一点生水。

也许是浇水频繁的缘故吧,十多天后,我发现粉色的四季海棠首先烂了根,花儿做了噩梦似的,花瓣边缘浮现出黑边,像是生了黑眼圈。

鹅黄的四季海棠叶片萎靡,花朵也蔫了。

我以为它们缺乏营养,于是又浇花卉营养液。

可不管我怎样挽留,四季海棠去意已定,没有一盆不烂根的了,花茎接二连三倒伏,那一团团花朵,自绝于青春似的,香销玉殒。

我只得清理了残花败叶,沮丧地将花盆摞起,扔在阳台一角。

④时隔多日,暮春时分,一个午后,我去阳台晒衣服,无意间低头,发现这摞花盆的最上一盆,有银线似的东西在闪光。

我凑近一看,原来是一棵细若游丝的草,从干硬的土里飞.出来了!它已生长了一段时日了吧,有半根筷子长了。

因为是在板结如水泥般的土里顽强钻出来的,缺光少水,它看上去病恹恹的,单细不说,草色也极为黯淡。

⑤我想一棵草再折腾,也开不出花儿来,所以感慨一番,浇了点水,算是善待了它,由它去了。

⑥那期间我忙于装修新居,忙于外出开会,在家时虽也去阳台舀米取面,晾衣晒被,但哪会顾及一棵草的命运呢。

它就在无人的角落中,挣扎着活。

直到七月下旬我参加香港书展归来,打扫阳台时,才发现它已成了气候。

2017届上海16个区县高三二模范文最全汇总

2017届上海16个区县高三二模范文最全汇总

2017届上海16个区县高三二模范文最全汇总2017届静安区高三二模考作文【作文题目】一位先哲说,人的一生应努力追求这样的境界:为人如山,处事若水。

要求:(1)自拟题目;(2)不少800字;(3)不要写成诗歌。

【高分作文】如山若水,成就圆融之美一位先哲说,人的一生应努力追求这样的境界:为人如山,处事若水。

山仁,水智;山静,水动。

山,非山,而是一种沉稳厚重,坚毅不拔的人格态度与心灵的安静;水,非水,而是一种忍耐包容,圆润柔和的处事方式与变化的灵巧多端。

为人如山,处世若水,岂不善哉?你可曾记得山涛?曾是竹林七贤之一的他,并没有像其他诸君一样,在与权贵的斗争中,在与世俗的纠缠中被现实磕得头破血流。

他选择了妥协。

他选择如水一般在新的现实中继续他兼济苍生的人生理想,匡扶黎民。

他又用他山一般的意志,使自己的心不受权贵的侵扰。

虽然其余几位竹林“六贤”的精神也值得我们佩服,但我们不禁扼腕叹息:世间再无嵇康的《广陵散》了……其实:山涛进一步便是嵇康,嵇康退一步便是山涛。

老子《道德经》云:上善若水,水善利万物而不争,处众人之所恶……说的不正是山涛?他既有水的圆融又有山的坚毅,成就了圆融之美。

“名乎利乎道路奔波休碌碌,来者往者溪山清静且停停。

”这是清代著名学者李渔为“且停亭”拟就的亭联。

李渔经历宦海沉浮之后,晚年在山中专心于修复花木,烹茶煮酒,获得了内心的平静。

事实上,每个人都会经历起起落落。

奋斗与挫折,如山一般沉静,如水一般保持心的灵动。

且行,且停,才能找到自己的平衡点。

《论语》有云:小不忍则乱大谋。

南怀瑾先生在他的书中曾这样解释:忍,对人,是包容;对事,是果断。

从中,我不免得到很多启示,我将其引申为:对人,我们要像山一样,行“仁”,包容;对事,我们要如水一样拥有果敢的行动力,一往无前,这样,以圆融之力,方能取得成功。

苏轼曾云:人生如逆旅,我本亦是行人。

人生的漫漫长路上,时而引吭高歌,时而辗转低迷,这些都是人生的常态。

2017上海高三二模作文范文(二)

2017上海高三二模作文范文(二)

2017上海高三二模作文范文(二)成长(60分)一棵树的繁茂,一个人的成长,乃至于每一个生命的奇迹,都是风霜雨雪和阳光雨露共同作用的结果。

正如锤子的打击造就了宝剑的锋芒,而溪水的欢歌却使鹅卵石臻于完美。

我们原是茫茫人海中最平凡的一块铁石,一路走来,沿途的荆棘那些艰难的挑战,那不曾断绝过的挫折,无一不是锤子的打击;而路旁的风景,那些细致琐碎的爱与关怀,那不曾消逝过的善意与温柔,又何尝不是溪水的欢歌。

正如童年时代的川端康成,亲人的相继离世,邻里的恶语相向,日复一日地如铁锤般打击着他的心灵,让他日渐强大,日渐成熟。

彼时的他,却又对别人给予他的细微善意充满感恩,服务生的一个微笑,湖畔少女的温柔回眸,无一不是溪水的欢歌,润泽着他坚硬的心房,也正是这样多重的经历与情感,这种严酷与温柔地交织,让他的作品保持着一种典雅婉约的力量,让《伊豆的舞女》成为旷世经典。

人们总是习惯于那句“宝剑锋从磨砺出,梅花香自苦寒来”,诚然,璞玉不经打磨永远无法闪耀出最夺目的光辉,崎岖与坎坷的道路是实现自己、完善自我的必然代价。

但假使一块璞玉只是经过了打磨,而未曾有人将它捧在手心里养护、关怀,那么它的价值,也就止于此。

溪水的欢歌不仅只是一时的点缀,或是锦上添花,它,又何尝不是一种打磨?铁锤的敲打,打出了百折不挠,打出了铮铮铁骨,打出了所向披靡,但锋芒过甚,一如竹过刚易折,未尝不会扎伤了别人,碰伤了自己。

而溪水的欢歌,却足够温和,足够圆润,足以在年复一年的滋养与冲刷中,抚平刺人的棱角,抚平积蓄的戾气,让宝剑的光芒更加耀目,只剩刚强,不见粗粝。

所谓外柔而内刚,亦是如此。

恰如《血战钢锯岭》的男主埃德蒙斯,战场之上的他英勇无畏,作为军医,“救一个,再让我多救一个”,这是他不变的宗旨。

他用坚毅与顽强拯救了数十伤兵的生命,那奇迹背后的人性光辉,是他的信仰与所爱,经久不衰地滋养的结果。

打磨的方式有很多种,锤子的打击是,溪水的欢歌亦是。

不要忽视生命里那些看似平淡的微笑与温柔,柔的力量润物细无声,亦是以柔克刚。

2017上海二模英语作文

2017上海二模英语作文

2017上海二模英语作文With the rapid development of technology, its influence on various aspects of our lives has become increasingly profound. In the field of education, technological advancements have brought about significant changes, transforming the way we learn and teach. This essay will explore the impact of technology on education, focusing on both its advantages and potential drawbacks.Firstly, one of the most notable benefits of technology in education is the accessibility it provides to a vast array of information. Students can now access a wealth of knowledge through the internet, which was unimaginable a few decades ago. Online resources such as educational websites, e-books, and digital libraries have become invaluable tools for research and learning.Secondly, technology has also facilitated more interactiveand personalized learning experiences. With the help of educational software and applications, students can engage in self-paced learning that caters to their individual needs.This personalized approach can help students to better understand complex concepts and improve their learning outcomes.Moreover, technology has made collaboration easier and more efficient. Students and teachers can now communicate andshare ideas through various digital platforms, which canenhance the learning process. For instance, online discussion forums and collaborative projects can foster a sense of community and encourage peer-to-peer learning.However, despite these advantages, there are also concerns about the over-reliance on technology in education. One of the primary issues is the potential distraction it can cause. The constant presence of smartphones and social media can divert students' attention from their studies, leading to a decrease in concentration and focus.Additionally, there is a risk that technology may widen the gap between students who have access to advanced technological resources and those who do not. This digital divide can lead to disparities in educational opportunities and outcomes, which is a pressing issue that needs to be addressed.In conclusion, technology has undoubtedly revolutionized the field of education, offering numerous benefits such as increased accessibility to information, personalized learning experiences, and enhanced collaboration. However, it is crucial to be mindful of the potential drawbacks, including distractions and the digital divide. As educators and students, we must strive to harness the power of technologyin a balanced and responsible manner to ensure that it serves as a tool for enhancing, rather than hindering, the educational experience.。

2017高考二卷英语作文

2017高考二卷英语作文

2017高考二卷英语作文As an AI, I can't access past exam papers or their exact content, but I can certainly help you draft an essay that could fit the style and requirements of a typical high school English composition exam in China. Here's an example of an essay that could be suitable for a 2017 high school English exam:In recent years, the issue of environmental protection has become a focal point of public concern. With the rapid development of industry and the ever-increasing population, our environment is facing unprecedented challenges. It is imperative that we take immediate action to protect our planet.Firstly, environmental protection is crucial for the sustainability of our ecosystems. Pollution, deforestation, and the extinction of species are just a few of the consequences of neglecting our environment. By taking steps to protect our natural habitats, we can ensure that future generations will have the opportunity to enjoy the beauty and diversity of nature.Secondly, environmental protection plays a significant role in maintaining public health. Air and water pollution aremajor contributors to respiratory diseases and other health problems. By reducing pollution and promoting clean energy, we can improve the quality of life for millions of people.Moreover, environmental protection is essential for economic development. A clean and healthy environment attracts investment and tourism, which in turn can lead to job creation and economic growth. Investing in renewable energy sources and sustainable practices can also provide new business opportunities and stimulate innovation.To achieve effective environmental protection, it is necessary for governments, businesses, and individuals to work together. Governments can enact and enforce laws to regulate pollution and promote sustainable practices. Businesses can adopt green technologies and reduce their carbon footprint. Individuals can make lifestyle changes, such as recycling and conserving energy, to contribute to the cause.In conclusion, environmental protection is a collective responsibility that requires the commitment of everyone. By taking proactive measures, we can safeguard our planet and ensure a prosperous and healthy future for all.This essay touches on the importance of environmental protection, its impact on ecosystems, public health, and economic development, and suggests ways in which different stakeholders can contribute to this cause. It is structuredwith an introduction, body paragraphs with supporting points, and a conclusion, which is typical of an English composition exam essay.。

2017上海高三英语二模完型 - 浦东

2017上海高三英语二模完型 - 浦东

2017上海高三英语二模完型-浦东Have we reached Peak Trade?Globalization is usually defined as the free movement of people, goods and capital. It’s been the most important __41__ force of modernity. Until the financial crisis of 2008, global trade grew twice as fast as the global economy itself. __42__, thanks to both economies and politics, globalization as we have known it is developing fast.The question is: Have we reached peak trade? If you think of it in terms of the flow of digital data and ideas, no ----it’s actually __43__. ” Indeed, the cross-border flow of digital data ----e-commerce, web searches, online video, machine-to-machine interactions ---- has grown 45 times larger since 2005 and is __44__ to grow much faster than the global economy over the next few years.There’s no doubt globalization has increased wealth at both global and national levels. But free trade can also widen the __45__ gap within countries, in part by created concentrated groups of economic losers. Free trade has made goods and services cheaper for Americans ---- think of all the inexpensive Chinese-made goods at Walmart ----but it hasn’t always __46__ their job prospects. From 1990 to 2008, the areas most __47__ to foreign competitions saw almost no net jobs created. That’s one reason the new generation of Americans is on track to be __48__ than their parents.The gains of free trade do not always __49__ the losses. This realization that the tide of __50__ doesn’t raise all boats has fed into the anti-free trade movement. And companies themselves are __51__ globalization.Nevertheless, there is one reason to be __52__ about the future of globalization ---- at least, the new information-based kind. McKinsey dada estimate that the companies responsible for the jump in flows of digital goods, services and information will include a much higher proportion of small businesses than in the past. An estimated 86% of tech-based startups surveyed by Mckinsey now do some cross-border business ----__53__ before the arrival of the Internet, when globalization was dominated by super powers. That means that more of the wealth generated by globalization could flow down to the 80% of the population that hasn’t __54__ as much as it should have.If those individuals feel they are being empowered by open borders and free trade, it could help swing the political pendulum (钟摆)back toward globalization in some form. Despite its laws, it has been an economic force that has lifted more people out of __ 55__ than anything else the world has ever known.41. A. political B. cultural C. economic D. natural42. A. Otherwise B. hence C. Moreover D. Yet43. A. depressing B. increasing C. approving D. operating44. A. projected B. tracked C. signaled D. needed45. A. prince B. welfare C. pension D. wealth46. A. ruined B. helped C. foreseen D. reversed47. A. resistant B. suited C. exposed D. inaccessible48. A. happier B. healthier C. wealthier D. poorer49. A. outweigh B. balance C. suffer D. substitute50. A. materialism B. modernization C. globalization D. consumption51. A. withdrawing from B. counting on C. profiting from D. insisting on52. A. confused B. concerned C. optimistic D. curious53. A. adaptable B. accessible C. affordable D. impossible54. A. striven B. consumed C. benefitted D. digested55. A. fear B. poverty C. frustration D. embarrassment。

上海2017二模英语作文

上海2017二模英语作文

上海2017二模英语作文In the modern era, technology has become an integral part of our lives. It has transformed the way we communicate, work, learn, and even entertain ourselves. This essay will explore the various ways in which technology has impacted our daily lives, focusing on its benefits and potential drawbacks.Firstly, technology has revolutionized communication. Withthe advent of smartphones and social media platforms, we can now stay connected with friends and family across the globe instantly. This has made it easier to share experiences, ideas, and information, fostering a sense of global community.Secondly, technology has transformed the workplace.Automation and artificial intelligence have made many tasks more efficient, allowing businesses to operate more smoothly and employees to focus on more complex and creative tasks.This has also led to the rise of remote work, giving peoplethe flexibility to work from anywhere.In education, technology has opened up new avenues for learning. Online courses and digital resources have made knowledge more accessible than ever before. Students canlearn at their own pace, and educators can use technology to personalize learning experiences.However, the pervasiveness of technology also comes with its challenges. There is a growing concern about the impact ofscreen time on mental health, particularly among young people. Additionally, the reliance on technology can lead to a lossof interpersonal skills and a disconnection from the natural world.In conclusion, technology has undoubtedly made our lives more convenient and efficient. However, it is crucial to find a balance between embracing technological advancements and preserving the essential aspects of human interaction andwell-being. As we continue to integrate technology into our lives, we must also be mindful of its potential negative effects and strive to use it responsibly.。

142017届上海市浦东区高三英语二模试卷(作文有范文)

142017届上海市浦东区高三英语二模试卷(作文有范文)

142017届上海市浦东区⾼三英语⼆模试卷(作⽂有范⽂)浦东新区2016学年度第⼆学期教学质量检测⾼三英语试卷2017.4说明:(1)本场考试时间为120分钟,总分140分;(2)请认真答卷,并⽤规范⽂字书写。

I. Listening Comprehension (25%)Section ADirections: In Section A, you will hear ten short conversations between two speakers. At the end of each conversation, a question will be asked about what was said. The conversations and the questions will be spoken only once. After you hear a conversation and the question about it, read the four possible answers on your paper, and decide which one is the best answer to the question you have heard.1. A. In a supermarket. B. In a drug store.C. In a department store.D. In a car repair shop.2. A. 20 minutes. B. 45 minutes.C. 25 minutes.D. 65 minutes.3. A. Professor and student. B. Director and actor.C. Writer and advertiser.D. Hostess and guest.4. A. She picked up the book from the bus stop.B. She can help the man out.C. She’s also in need of a chemistry textbook.D. She will help the man to find the right person.5. A. Take the test in three weeks.B. Call to make inquiries about the test results.C. Be patient and wait for the test results.D. Inquire about the date when the results will be released.6. A. He set fire to the building.B. He parked his car beside the building.C. He was trying to clear the road with the help of some other people.D. He found out what was going on.7. A. He’s going to the theatre. B. He’s just returned from a job interview.C. He’s just visited his tailor.D. He’s dr essed up to have his photo taken.8. A. Registering for courses. B. Studying engineering and art history.C. Buying literature books.D. Going to the registry office.9. A. The Jenkins made a wise investment.B. It is not sensible to make such an investment.C. The Jenkins should buy the stocks later.D. It is essential that the Jenkins should move out.10. A. It is not a good timing to build it. B. It should have been built earlier.C. She is curious about this plan.D. She doubts how long the plan will take.Section BDirections: In Section B, you will hear two short passages and one longer conversation, and you will be asked several questions on each of the passages and the conversation. The passages and the conversation will be read twice, but the questions will be spoken only once. When you hear a question, read the four possible answers on your paper and decide which one is the best answer to the question you have heard.Questions 11 through 13 are based on the following passage.11. A. South Korean Women. B. American citizens.C. People in industrialized countries.D. People with economic improvements.12. A. High premature deaths.B. Overweight citizens.C. A lack of public health care.D. A shortage in new medical technologies.13. A. More facilities should be established.B. Additional pressure should be put on pensions.C. People should retire at an earlier age.D. People should be provided with more payments.Questions 14 through 16 are based on the following passage.14. A. Because of the security of the job.B. For a promotion to the Executive Director.C. To inspire the folks in the community.D. To enrich others and her own lives.15. A. The speaker graduated in law and used to earn generous salaries.B. Spelman is a non-profit institute which turns out social workers.C. The audiences are regarded as beautiful because they all belong to Spelman.D. Public service is rewarding both in a spiritual and material sense.16. A. Urging classmates to get involved in public service.B. Expressing gratitude to the audience for their volunteer work.C. Delivering a speech to the graduates from Spelman College.D. Illustrating how to help others as one climbs his career ladder.Questions 17 through 18 are based on the following conversation.17. A. May 19th. B. May 20th. C. May 23rd. D. May 16th.18. A. Three meals a day. B. Train fare.C. Competition entrance fee.D. Floor space.19. A. The entrance fee is 16 euros this year.B. College basket teams abroad can enter for the game by phone.C. It is the 80th anniversary of the Tampere Student Game.D. The game will end with a ceremony in the last evening.20. A. Students can enjoy a reduced rate during that period.B. All the basketball teams live in that hotel.C. It will provide three meals to the players living there.D. It is close to where all the matches are held.II. Grammar and Vocabulary (20%)Section ADirections: After reading the passage below, fill in the blanks to make the passage coherent and grammatically correct. For the blanks with a given word, fill in each blank with the proper form of the given word; for the other blanks, use one word that best fits each blank.Over the past sixteen years of my life, I have grown to be a very independent person. This can be both good and bad in the sense that I am able to do things (21)______ my own, yet at times struggle with taking advice from others. Sometimes, hearing what other people have to say can be one of the hardest things to do. However, getting advice from (22)______ cares about you can impact your life in great ways. Because of this, I began realizing that my mom’s guidance throughout my life has never steered me wrong. This is why I believe you (23)______ always listen to your mother.This belief has not been easy (24)______(realize). It has taken endless amounts of time in which I decided to go against what my mom had to say, and later discovered that she was right. I think we can all agree that (25)______ (admit) your mom was right is always a hard thing to do. But what else are you supposed to say (26)______ you are standing outside in the freezing cold, shaking because you did not wear that extra jacket you (27)______ (tell) to wear?When I was twelve years old, I had the experience of a lifetime. However, I would have missed out if it hadn’t been for my mom. She had been planning a trip to Turkey for work, (28)______ (offer) to bring my sister and me along with her. When I first heard about this opportunity, I was terrified. Never had I been out of the country before. I thought to (29)______, “Is she crazy?” My mom then began to say, “(30)______ is known to all, one needs to step out of his comfort zone and try something new in order to encounter larger-than-life ideas.” After going back and forth with my own thoughts, I decided to go on the trip. And boy, she was right. Going to Turkey will forever be one of my greatest memories and I am thankful I got to visit that amazing country.Section BThe New York Times has changed a lot in the past 10 years, embracing digital subscriptions and growing into online videoand specialty areas like cooking. It has not been enough to prepare the company for the future, according to the paper’s own 2020 report __31__ on Tuesday.“While the past two years have been a time of significant innovation, the pace must speed up,” the authors wrote in the opening of the report. “Too often, d igital progress has been accomplished through workarounds; now we must tear apart the barriers. We must __32__ between mission and tradition: what we do because it’s essential to our values and what we do because we’ve always done it.”The report indicates how far the paper has come in __33__ itself to the digital age while also pointing out what needs to be done.The areas that need __34__ are focused on the newsroom, particularly in the tools and internal structures that journalists must deal with to produce their work.Many of the report’s recommendations are __35__ to anyone who closely follows the Times or newspapers in general: A(n) __36__ away from print’s outsized importance on the newsroom’s operations, better ways to include multimedia in stories and a renewed effort at creating a more diverse newsroom with a variety of skills.The paper has an ongoing goal that started in 2016 of doubling digital revenue to $800 million by 2020. “To__37__ our future, we need to expand considerably our number of subscribers by 2020.”The report also calls into question the formats on which the Times —and most other newspapers —rely, namely a mix of news stories and features that are text heavy. “Too much of our daily report remains __38__ by long texts.” the rep ort states. The report stresses that the Times should do more to educate readers. “Our readers are __39__ for advice from The Times. Too often, we don’t offer it, or offer it only in print-centric forms.” the report states. Perhaps the most interesting par t of the report comes at the very bottom in the form of comments from the paper’s own journalists. Reporters said they would like to see __40__ in choice of how to tell certain stories, and some disagreement about what kind of tone the Times should embrace going forward.III. Reading Comprehension (45%)Section ADirections: For each blank in the following passage there are four words or phrases marked A, B, C and D. Fill in each blank with the word or phrase that best fits the context.Have We Reached Peak Trade?Globalization is usually defined as the free movement of people, goods and capital. It’s been the most important ___41___ force of modernity. Until the financial crisis of 2008, global trade grew twice as fast as the global economy itself. ___42___, thanks to both economics and politics, globalization as we have known it is developing fast.The question is: Have we reached peak trade? If you think of it in terms of the flow of digital data and ideas, no —it’s actually ___43___.” Indeed, the cros s-border flow of digital data — e-commerce, web searches, online video, machine-to-machine interactions — has grown 45 times larger since 2005 and is ___44___ to grow much faster than the global economy over the next few years.There’s no doubt globalizati on has increased wealth at both global and national levels. But free trade can also widen the___45___ gap within countries, in part by creating concentrated groups of economic losers. Free trade has made goods and services cheaper for Americans —think of all the inexpensive Chinese-made goods at Walmart —but it hasn’t always___46___ their job prospects. From1990 to 2008, the areas most ___47___ to foreign competition saw almost no net new jobs created. That’s one reason the new generation of Americans i s on track to be ___48___ than their parents.The gains of free trade do not always ___49___ the losses. This realization that the tide of ___50___ doesn’t raise all boats has fed into the anti-free trade movement. And companies themselves are ___51___ globalization.Nevertheless, there is one reason to be ___52___ about the future of globalization —at least, the new information-based kind. McKinsey data estimate that the companies responsible for the jump in flows of digital goods, services and information will include a much higher proportion of small businesses than in the past. An estimated 86% of tech-based startups surveyed by McKinsey now do some cross-border business — ___53___ before the arrival of the Internet, when globalization was dominated by super powers. That means that more of the wealth generated by globalization could flow down to the 80% of the population that hasn’t ___54___ as much as it should have.If those individuals feel they are being empowered by open borders and freer trade, it could help swing the political pendulum(钟摆)back toward globalization in some form. Despite its laws, it has been an economic force that has lifted morepeople out of ___55___ than anything else the world has ever known.41.A. political B. cultural C. economic D. natural42.A. Otherwise B. Hence C. Moreover D. Yet43.A. depressing B. increasing C. approving D. operating44.A. projected B. tracked C. signaled D. needed45.A. price B. welfare C. pension D. wealth46.A. ruined B. helped C. foreseen D. reversed47.A. resistant B. suited C. exposed D. inaccessible48.A. happier B. healthier C. wealthier D. poorer49.A. outweigh B. balance C. suffer D. substitute50.A. materialism B. modernization C. globalization D. consumption51.A. withdrawing from B. counting on C. profiting from D. insisting on52.A. confused B. concerned C. optimistic D. curious53.A. adaptable B. accessible C. affordable D. impossible54.A. striven B. consumed C. benefited D. digested55.A. fear B. poverty C. frustration D. embarrassmentSection BDirections: Read the following three passages. Each passage is followed by several questions or unfinished statements. For each of them there are four choices marked A, B, C and D. Choose the one that fits best according to the information given in the passage you have just read.(A)Dear Cutie-Pie,Recently, your mother and I were searching for an answer on Google. Halfway through entering the question, Google returned a list of the most popular searches in the world. At the top of the list was “How to keep him interested.”It surprised me a lot. I scanned several of the countless articles about how to be sexy and sexual, when to bring him a beer versus a sandwich, and the ways to make him feel smart and superior.And I got angry.Little One, it is not, has never been, and never will be your job to “keep him interested.”Little One, your only task is to know deeply in your soul —in that unshakeable place that isn’t upset by rejection and loss —that you are worthy of interest.If you can trust your worth in this way, you will be attractive in the most important sense of the world: you will attract a boy who is both capable of interest and who wants to spend his one life investing all of his interest in you.Little One, I want to tell you about the boy who doesn’t need to be kept interested, becauseI don’t care if he can’t play a bit of golf with me —as long as he can play with the children you give him and revel in all the glorious and frustrating ways they are just like you. I don’t care if he doesn’t follow his wallet —as long as he follows his heart and it always leads him back to you. I don’t care if he is strong —as long as he gives you the space to exercise the strength that is in your heart. I couldn’t care less how he votes —as long as he wakes up every morning and daily elects you to a place of honor in your home and a place of respect in his heart. I don’t ca re about the color of his skin. I don’t care if he was raised in this religion or that religion or no religionLittle One, if you come across a man like that and he and I have nothing else in common, we will have the most importantthing in common: You.B ecause in the end, Little One, the only thing you should have to do to “keep him interested” is to be you. Your eternally interested guy,Daddy56. What shocked Daddy when he was surfing on the Internet?A. Girls’ knowing nothing about trusting themselves.B. Girls’ giving priority to finding ways to please boys.C. Girls’ bringing food s and drinks to boys from time to time.D. Girls’ being upset by being rejected constantly.57. Father thinks what is of primary importance to his daughter is to ______________________.A. keep the boy interestedB. know she deserves a boy’ interestC. attract a boy willing to invest all in herD. find a boy who can please her58. According to the passage, what does the underlined word “revel”mean?A. feel depressedB. become puzzledC. look aroundD. enjoy himself59. What’s the main purpose of this letter?A. To advise his daughter to trust her worth.B. To inform his daughter how to keep others interested.C. To show his daughter how to find her true love.D. To help his daughter find someone with common interests.(B)Self-driving CapabilitiesSensor and camera-equipped models fromAudi and V olkswagen, among others, don’tjust automatically brake to prevent minoraccidents; they can actually navigate(⾏驶)around highway traffic and into garageswithout a human at the wheel.Attractive DashboardsIn addition to Ford’s new Sync system, whichbetter understands voice commands, Apple andGoogle have partnered w8ith automakers tocreate interfaces(界⾯)as user-friendly as theones on your smartphone.Smarter HeadlightsAudi’s and BMW’s ultra-bright laserheadlights can detect oncoming cars anddim slightly to avoid disturbing theirdrivers. One problem: they’re not yet legalin the U.S.Self-parking SkillsThe new model of BMW’s all-electric i3 canfind its own spot in a parking lot, then sendsignals via a smart-watch app to contact itsdrivers.60. In terms of Self-driving Capabilities, what makes Audi and V olkswagen stand out?A. Braking when sensing red lightsB. Going into garages without a driverC. Stopping other cars on highwayD. Taking photos with a camera61. Which of the cars can adjust the headlights in order not to upset drivers in oncoming cars?A. Ford and V olkswagenB. Audi and BMWC. Audi and V olkswagenD. BMW and Ford62. In which section of a car magazine does the article most probably appear?A. First DriveB. Cars For RentC. Instrumental TestsD. Smart Tech.(C)On the occasional clear-frost autumn night, I was hiking through the dark forest with my GMO wolf. Yes, my best friend is a genetically modified organism(转基因⽣物); deliberate selection has produced the blunt-toothed, small-pawed wonder that walks by my side.Our world is changing rapidly. In the last five decades, global population has fully doubled, with 3.7 billion hungry mouths added to our planet. During this same time span, the amount of land suitable for agriculture has increased by only 5%. Miraculously, this did not result in the great global famine(饥荒) one might have predicted.How do scientists modify a plant so that it makes more food than its parents did? We could treat each harvest like a litter of wolf pups and select only plants bearing the fattest, richest seeds for the next season. This was the method our ancestors used to engineer rice, corn and wheat from the wild grasses they encountered.During my childhood, advances in genetic technologies allowed scientists to identify and clone the genes responsible for repressing stem growth, leading to shorter, stronger stalks that could bear more seed — the high-yield crops that feed us today. The 21st century has brought with it a marvelous new set of high-tech tools with which to further quicken the process of artificial selection. Plant geneticists can now directly edit out or edit in sections of DNA using molecular scissors. We can minimize a plant’s weaknesses while adding to its strengths, and we don’t have to wait for seasons to pass to test the result. It is the transformative potential of these techniques to quickly supply the next-generation crops required for upcoming climate change that has led me to believe in the safety and function of GMO plants in agricultural products. We need more GMO research to feed the world that we are creating.I love the quiet forest that stands between my lab and my home. But I know that as a scientist, I am responsible first to humanity. We must feed, shelter and nurture one another as our first priority, and to do so, we must take advantage of our best technologies, which have alwaysas we feed ourselves, and each year plant only the very best of what we have collectively engineered. I keep the faith of my ancestors each night when I walk through the forest to my lab, and my GMO wolf does the same when she guards my way home.63. Why does the author mention the wolf in the 1st paragraph?A. To advise people to keep wolves as petsB. To persuade readers to welcome the new technologyC. To change people’s attitude towards wolvesD. To introduce a technology used to human s’ advantage64. Which of the following statements is NOT TRUE according to the passage?A. GMO technology will help weatherproof future crops.B. With GMO technology, famine has been eliminated.C. Artificial selections make high-yield plants possible.D. The author believes technology should contribute to future generations.65. What can be learned about modifying a plant?A. It takes scientists seasons to know whether their selection is correct.B. One way for ancestors to change a plant was to clone some genes.C. Modern techniques help speed up the artificial selection by altering DNA.D. The general public show strong faith in GMO plants.66. Which of the following might be the best title of the passage?A. GMO Technology —Turning Wolves into the Best PetsB. Engineered Food —Feeding Future GenerationsC. Engineered Food —To Be or Not To BeD. GMO Technology —A Driving Force in World PeaceSection CDirections: Read the following passage. Fill in each blank with a proper sentence given in the box. Each sentence can be used only once. Note that there are two more sentences than you need.Charity —Humanity’s most kind and generous desire— is a timeless and borderless virtue, dating at least to the dawn of religious teaching. Philanthropy(慈善⾏为) as we understand it today, however, is a distinctly American phenomenon, inseparable from the nation that shaped it. From colonial leaders to modern billionaires like Buffett, Gates and Zuckerberg, the tradition of giving is woven into the national DNA.67. ________ Benjamin Franklin, an icon of individual industry and frugality(节俭) even in his own day, understood that with the privilege of doing well came the price of doing good. When he died in 1790, Franklin thought to future generations, leaving in trust two gifts of 1,000 lb. of sterling silver —one to the city of Boston, the other to Philadelphia. According to his instruction, a portion of the money could not be used for 200 years.While Franklin’s gifts lay in wait, the tradition he established evolved alongside the young nation. 68.________ Often far less famed men and women have played a critical role in philanthropy’s evolution. One of my personal heroes is Julius Rosenwald, who helped construct more than 5,300 schools across the segregated(种族隔离) South and opened classroom doors toa generation of African-American students.69. ________ The answer is not just to benefit others. Tax reduction, for one, encourages the rich people to give. And philanthropy has long helped improve the public image of everyone from immoral capitalists to the new tech elite. More troubling, however, are the foundational problems that make philanthropy so necessary. Just before his death, Dr. Martin Luther King Jr. wrote, “Philanthropy is praise-worthy, but it must not cause the philanthropist to overlook the circumstances of economic inj ustice which make philanthropy necessary.”Franklin’s gifts represent a broader principle. We are guardians of a public trust, even if our capital came from private enterprise, and our most important obligation is ensuring that the system works more equally and more justly for more people.70. ________ America’s greatest strength is not the fact of perfection, but rather the act of perfecting.IV. 71. Summary Writing (10%)Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.Every year, more and more parents complain to their children’s schools about PE. They believe that their children shouldn’t have to participate in physical activity if they don’t want to. Supporters of PE, however, believe that it is a crucial element of all-round schooling and our society’s well-being. They insist PE in schools remains one of the few places by which the youth can be forced to participate in aerobic exercise.Firstly, they believe that participation in sport promotes health. In fact physical education is a springboard for involvement in sport and physical activities throughout life. Government is, or should be, concerned with the health of its citizens. Encouraging physical activity in the youngexercise. This doesn’t have to be through traditional team sports; increasingly schools are able to offer exercise in the form of swimming, gymnastics, dance, etc.Besides, physical education helps to develop character and the mutual(相互的)respect required to succeed in an adult environment. Playing team sports builds character and encourages students to work with others, as they would be expected to do in most business or sporting environments. Sport teaches children how to win and lose with good grace and builds a strong school spirit through competition with other institutions. It is often the experience of playing on a team together that builds the strongest friendships at school, which endure for years afterwards.Finally, the pursuit for national sporting achievement begins in schools. If schools don’t have compulsory PE, it is much harder to pick out, develop and equip athletes to represent the country on a wider stage. However, it’s much easier to find suitable individuals with a full sports program in every school.V. Translation (15%)Directions:Translate the following sentences into English, using the words given in the brackets.72. 正巧这⼏天有空,去公园散步如何?(happen)73. ⼀副油画赠予了该美术馆,以纪念两个城市间的珍贵友谊。

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2017届浦东区高三二模作文及范文26.阅读下面的文字,按要求作文。

(70分)当今世界,“富有”成为成功的代名词。

有人说:“能决定我们是否富有的,不是我们已经得到的,而是我们尚未拥有的;关键在于你的眼光和态度。

”请写一篇文章,谈谈你的思考。

要求:(1)自拟题目;(2)不少于800字;(3)不要写成诗歌。

【优秀作文】视吾家之所寡有(一类卷 67分)多年前,一句“视吾家之所寡有”,震荡了历史烟尘,令人心动,接着便是焚券市义的美谈不胫而走,似乎冥冥之间道出了不证自明的真理,即我们尚未拥有之物决定了个体生命的富有程度。

“富有”一词,在现代语境下往往被滥用,被曲解,被化为炫耀的工具手段,人们固执地将富有的定义局囿于金钱名利等已得之物,殊不知古典理性的告诫。

何谓之富有?顾名思义,富有指向丰盈与饱满。

所得之物,固然带来了物质上的富足,但沉静沉淀之后,心灵却只落得空虚寂寞,那叮叮当当的黄金声,嬉笑喧闹的歌声,仿佛印证了莎士比亚的话,充满了声音与狂热,里面却空无一物,得之物终究是过眼云烟。

过度执迷沉溺反而让我们一无所有。

真正使心灵富有的是吾家之寡有者,它启迪我们缺少什么?应该求索追寻什么?不同人目力所及,所思所想的“吾家之所寡有”断然不同,某种程度上像面镜子映射了你的生命形态。

登高而望,志士仁人痛拍栏杆,思国之未复,中原之未收;而多情女郎望极春愁,思佳人之未回,天伦难叙。

当然,每一种生活形态都无可厚非,但我以为热血方刚的我们,理应把生命交给更高的存在,思道之未复,天地之心未得,仁义之未行,生民之命为立,诸如此类。

我们不该将自己束缚在物质享受的果壳中,而应追求我们所尚未拥有的金刚本性,自性恒常。

我们要成为赫尔曼黑塞笔下对生命有更高要求的一群人,对自己的粗野与鄙陋不甘心。

当我们认清了我们尚未拥有之物,并将其化为意志不断追求时,那些尚未拥有之物反过来深化了我们的生命形态。

海子一生都在追求至纯至真至善,他用诗寻找隐在社会中的太阳,最后他经历了一次美妙的变幻,死于太阳,并进入了太阳。

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在我们道阻且长却吾得上下求索之中,那未有之物的光辉已悄然进驻我们心间,泛出好看的光泽,我们的心灵也随之富足饱满。

“视吾家之所寡有”,是一面镜子,它反映了我们生命形态的深浅高下,同时又深化了我们,让我们在它的映射下,在对它的端详之中调整,再创造我们自己。

这样以后,我们方可达到真正的富有,胸次渊然而深,廓然而高,泠然而清,自有一段幽深朴茂不可到之处。

这样以后,也唯有这样以后——丰富的心灵触着每一秒光阴都成了黄金。

点评:这是一篇被判为67分的高分作文。

本文中心明确,立意新颖。

文章开篇即点名题意——“视吾家之寡有”道出了未有之物决定个体生命的富有程度,打破了大部分考生精神富有论的一般写作思路,立意新颖;接着先定义何为富有?富有指向丰盈与饱满。

然后又分析指出:不同的“吾家之寡有”映射了不同的生命形态。

这样围绕一个中心,对“眼光与态度”“尚未拥有”等要点落脚明确,并且能够多角度展开论述。

结尾部分紧扣题意:未有之物使我们的心灵富足饱满。

靠着开头一句的领起,结尾句的总括,使全文首尾呼应,中心鲜明突出。

本文语言富有魅力。

有的语言严谨方正,老成大气,如“焚券市义的美谈不胫而走”,“将富有的定义囿于金钱名利等已得之物”;有的语言充满辨证哲理,如“所得之物,固然带来了物质上的富足,但沉静沉淀之后,心灵却只落得空虚寂寞”;有的激情荡漾,独抒性灵;有的委婉得体,合情合理。

虽然有时还有尚欠推敲之处,但那份灵动和才气,那份素养和悟性,让人为之折服。

另外题目是作文的眼睛,“视吾家之所寡有”,出自大家熟识的《战国策·冯谖客孟尝君》,以此妙用为题,既总领全文,又能引起阅卷老师的注意和兴趣。

(点评:郭良锋)少年莫惧岁月长(一类文62分)①何为富有,何为成功?在青年人的眼中,“富有”早已不仅仅指家财万贯,精神的富有,才是真正的成功。

而精神富有,在我看来,就是认定目标,执著追梦,莫惧岁月长。

②人很少能知足,总想着拥有更多,这有何错呢?人总该有个愿为其奋斗的目标,在向尚未拥有之事物前进时,眼光更放(加)高远了,态度也随之端正。

所谓眼光,就是一个人的目标和看待事物的方法;所谓态度,则是他的努力,为此付出的过程——眼光和态度决定了一个人的奋斗目标和追求方法,由此,人才能不懈追求,使精神富有。

③由此便不由得想起瓦尔登湖畔的梭罗了。

他丢下一切,独居瓦尔登湖,自己种地、造屋,在自然中收获自己在城市里不曾有过的体验。

有人将梭罗与陶渊明相类比,我以为不然。

陶公是循(遁)世的隐士,而梭罗不循(遁)世。

甚至,他在湖畔闲居时写下的文字中还能看到他对于精神目标和道德准则的思考。

他的眼光,在湖畔,在林中,在自然里获得提升。

看似闲居的他,仍然朝着自己内心的精神殿堂迈步。

所以这大概就是为什么清华大学将《瓦尔登湖》送给每一位新生作为入学礼物的原因吧——学习梭罗,明确目标,不断提升自己的眼光。

④在这之后,还需要有执着的态度。

屈子“路漫漫其修远兮,吾将上下而求索”的名言激励着古今无数学者们为自己定下的目标而努力着。

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相信在黑夜的孤灯下,九十岁的许老,内心依然是一个意气风发的少爷吧,不惧前路漫漫,不畏在那“幽暗昏惑无物以相之”的无人之境探索前进。

⑤梭罗富有么?以物质上的定义来说,连屋子都要自己动手盖的人,一定不是;许老富有么?或许那么多的翻译为他带来的钱财还不及某些当红小说家。

但他们和千千万万为梦想无懈努力着的人,都是富有的,因为他们“尚未拥有”的他们的目标远远高于钱财,他们的眼光和态度超乎常人,更是对社会产生了深远的影响。

少年莫惧岁月长,因为只要愿意为梦想努力,只要坚定自己追求的,精神的富有总能达到。

⑥鲁迅在《热风》中有这么一段:愿中国青年都能摆脱冷气,只向上走,能做事的做事,能发声的发声,即便在黑夜里,也要做那萤火。

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⑦彼此(时)当年少,莫惧岁月长。

点评:此文审题准确,立意深刻,结构严谨,语言晓畅,是一篇可模仿、可学习的优秀考场作文。

文题化用唐明皇李隆基的小令《好时光》中的句子“彼时当年少,莫负好时光”,贴切而富有书卷气。

文章开头概述材料,提出观点“精神富有,在我看来,就是认定目标,执著追梦,莫惧岁月长”。

只见单刀直入,未有半点含糊地切中总话题“富有”之肯綮。

第二段解释了材料中的关键词“眼光”和“态度”,并且简洁地阐释了他们与中心论点的关系。

第二段与后面的第三、四两段是总分关系。

第三段以“梭罗”为例,论证“明确目标,不断提升自己的眼光”,同时与陶渊明作对比、与清华大学赠书《瓦尔登湖》相勾连,强调人应该积极入世而不能消极遁世。

为后文更深刻、更隐性的主旨——青年应该承担社会责任做铺垫。

第四段引用屈子的名言和《朗读者》中许渊冲的例子,论证精神富有,除了需要“眼光”之外,还应该具备“执著”的态度。

第五段总结上两段,以有力的两个设问句,再次强化和丰富了材料中的主题词“富有”的内涵:“他们和千千万万为梦想无懈努力着的人,都是富有的,因为他们“尚未拥有”的他们的目标远远高于钱财,他们的眼光和态度超乎常人,更是对社会产生了深远的影响。

”同时,用心良苦地提及了材料中的另一对很难在同一篇文章内说清的矛盾概念——尚未拥有和已经拥有。

第六段,引用鲁迅先生的名言,递进一层,提出富有是个人的成功,更应该最终变成社会的成功,青年要肩负社会责任的深刻主旨,大气磅礴,摇曳多姿。

与前文相呼应,结构严谨。

最后点题。

又,该生书写墨色浓黑,笔力雄健,点画清晰,结构匀称,是一幅不可多得的行书作品,好!(点评:吴威)眼光成就富有(二类58分)托尔斯泰曾说:“世界的一切变化都是由光明和黑暗构成的。

”我们的眼光决定着我们看懂的变化是光明还是黑暗。

当今世界,“富有”成为成功的代名词。

人们趋向于用一个特定的标准来衡量自己所得到的的是否符合“富有”这一标准。

殊不知,能决定我们是否富有的,并非所得,而是尚未拥有;能成就富有的,并非标准,而是眼光。

眼光提供多元角度来看待富有。

有人把“富有”仅仅局限于物质,从而追求金钱上的满足,将金钱上的不断得到看作为富有,从而让利吞噬自己,精神匮乏地陷入泥沼。

这显然没有成就富有。

张爱玲作为名门闺秀,没有选择用金钱打扮自己,而是选择读书。

她不沉浸于自己生来就得到的物质生活,而是不断追求尚未拥有的文学素养。

她用多元眼光看待富有,从而跳出物质富有的泥沼,成就了精神富有。

若你生来贫困,那这世界上还有许多你尚未拥有的,在这点上,你便是富有的。

抛去既定标准,用多元眼光看待富有。

眼光让我们拥有高瞻远瞩的能力,从而成就富有。

有人因为自己所得许多而沾沾自喜,觉得自己足够富有,从而丧失了人生志向,便也不算的上是精神富有,而有人却将眼光放远,不断追求更高的理想在追求中成就了富有。

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他讲打车软件从不被看好到打入海内外市场,其中艰辛不言而喻。

如果不是他看到自己尚未拥有的眼光,他的人生价值也将随打车软件的空白而空白。

生命的价值不在于它的长度,而在于它的深度。

当你处在一个局促的格局中时,将眼光放远,专注于那许许多多尚未得到的,尽量撑大自己的格局,切莫做井底之蛙;当你已经达到某个“富有”的标准时,将眼光放远,想想自己还有什么未完成,还有什么要追求,从而不留遗憾。

感谢关注“沈姐的语文课堂”微信公众号!欢迎转发欢迎分享!这里有魔都最新的中高考语文资料!眼光让我们客观地看待所得和所失,“富有”不在于得到多少,在于你得到的是否满足了你最长远的眼光。

人生是一本只能翻阅一次的书,不应草草翻过,而要用眼光细细品味,研究出深远的价值,成就出它的富有。

点评:这是一篇比较规范的考场作文。

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