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9月24日雅思写作考试范文超级汇总By Catherine

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9月24日雅思写作考试范文超级汇总 (1)

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0.真题作文题目 (3)

1.小站名师版 (4)

2.新东方版范文 (5)

3.panda 版范文 (6)

4.雅思哥版 (7)

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0.真题作文题目

Task：These days, people in many cities know little about their neighbors and do not have a sense of community. What do you think are the causes and what solutions can you suggest? 现在，许多城市的人对他们的邻居了解不多，而且没有社区意识。你认为是什么原因，你能提出什么样的解决方案?

社会类话题，原因建议类题型

1.小站名师版

参考范文：

Undeniably, indifference and ignorance find their way into neighborhoods. In the essay, the underlying reasons and the practical moves will be expounded.

The primary factor leading to the significant alienation among neighbors is the prosperity of economy. In the past, individuals heavily relied on the community to rear livestock or grow rice and vegetables while in the present, people depend on themselves to work in the office and have meals in the restaurant. More importantly, to ensure an advantageous position in the face of stiff competition, employees have to spend the majority of their time working in office or at home, so they cannot afford to spare time gossiping about weather, dogs and new babies with other occupants.

Another contributing element is the intrusion of a variety of entertainments brought by advancing technology. Previously, the single recreation form of television forces residents to watch one film together. Currently, portable devices such as I-Phone, I-Pad, Kindle enable inhabitants to live in the virtual communities created by social networking websites, so they distain to socialize with other dwellers in real life.

To reverse the tendency, the government and the community committee should stand out and shoulder their responsibilities correspondingly. For one thing, the government can invite advertising agencies to design public service advertisements to raise people's awareness of community. For another, the community committee should launch mini-games or sports activities regularly or on festivals or holidays, so as to engage more denizens in the neighborhood.

In a nutshell, a supportive community is gradually turned into a lonely island by a self-reliant and competitive economic pattern and diversified technological innovations, the status quo that can only be altered by the endeavors of both the authority and the community leaders.

(286 words)

2.新东方版范文

Unsurprisingly, a growing number of citizens are thoughtless and indifferent to their neighbors, contributing to undoubtedly. Lacking a sense of community. The essay aims to explore looming reasons and come up with effective measures to solve this problem.

Firstly, the situation of individuals knowing little about their neighbors is mainly attributed to the pace of modern life. Under great living pressure, many people have to go to work early and share little time with their neighbors, especially those who live far from their workplaces because of traffic congestion. Besides, more and more people are accustomed to having meals in restaurants such as fast food restaurants instead of going back home, not to mention exhaustion they get after working the whole day, resulting in lower possibility of meeting and communicating with neighbors.

On the other hand, an essay access to cutting-edge functions of mobile phones such as online shopping and looking through twitter and so on leads to ignoring communication with familiar person around them even sitting in front of the table and having a meal, let alone spending time with neighbors.

It is high time to take constructive measures to prevent the phenomenon from getting worse. First and foremost, the community committee is suggested to organize innovative activities in the community to attract more residents to attend and recognize with each other. In addition, the government and mass media are supposed to spread the significance of socializing with neighbors by various kinds of advertisements, such as TV commercials and bus posters, in order to strengthen individuals’ awareness of maintaining harmonious relationship with neighbors.

(263 words)