关于大学生爱情英语作文

college students have different concern in love

According to the pie chart, we can see clearly that CCNU college students have different concern in love .About 31% of students think that personality is very pivotal. In contrast, only 27% of CCNU students are concern about abilities. The students think that common interest and goals is the most important concern occupies 17% of the total. Appearance and economic status have the similar percentage,one is 14%,and the other is 11%.

There are several factors leading to this phenomenon, first of all ,college student is very knowledgeably,there face love with an attitude of reason and equality.Of course ,there are also some student are very st but not the least,compared with terms of material things some student would rather purse moral or spiritual thing

In my opinion. Although love is wonderful, study should be taken the first priority. Because what we learn now can be beneficial in the future,So we should relate love to study effectively.

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According to the pie chart, we can see clearly that CCNU college students have different concerns in love .

∙[教师点评][标点错误] 标点与其前面的单词之间不应该有空格，请检查

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∙[搭配统计] 动名搭配have...concern在教材中出现过4906次

SeeAlso: have business3760,have fear1813,have worry717,have headache653,take concern384,accept concern6,have care3

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∙[学习提示] 易混词汇: agree, accord, coincide, conform, correspond 均含“符合，一致”

之意。

agree: 侧重指经过比较后的所有主要部分均和谐一致，无冲突和矛盾。

accord: 着重指性格、精神、语气或质量等方面的完全一致。

coincide: 多用于指观点、判断、愿望、利益或兴趣的一致或相符。偶尔用于人，强调意见或观点完全相同。

conform: 强调在形状、性格以及主要特点等方面的相似或一致。

correspond: 指在进行比较时，两个事物在某一个重要方面或细节上互相匹配、一致。

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∙[批改提示] according to在做“根据”讲时，近义表达有in accordance with。

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∙[批改提示] 查看clearly与clear的区别。

clean和clearly都可以作副词，但是clearly是“干净利落地”，clean是“完全地”。

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About 31% of students think that personality is very pivotal.

∙[教师点评][学习提示] 易混词汇: temper, character, nature, personality, disposition, complexion 均有“性格，气质，性情，习性”之意。

temper: 指从感情方面体现出来，决定处理问题或应付形势的方式的性格或性情，这种性情可以是暂时的也可以长久的。

character: 指对个性或人格所作出的客观评价，常常与道德有关。

nature: 指天生的、不可改变性格。

personality: 主要指一个人稳定的心理特征。

disposition: 书面用词，指人的主要爱好或思想、精神方面的重要习性、气质。也可指短暂的情绪。complexion: 指由思维方式、态度和情绪所决定的本质特征。

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∙[批改提示] personality表示“性格，个性”。注意与character的区别。详情点击

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∙[批改提示] 此句型用的太过频繁，建议改为sb. suppose/claim+从句.

此句型用的太过频繁，建议改为sb. suppose+从句或sb. claim +从句或sb. agree +从句或第一人称时替换为As far as I am concerned.

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∙[批改提示] very的近义表达有extremely, exceedingly, remarkably, intensely。Improperly implemented, dials can be extremely difficult to manipulate.

如果设计不当，刻度盘将会非常难于操作。

Between 1890 and 1930 the woman suffrage movement became exceedingly militant.

一八九○年到一九三○年间妇女争取选举权运动变得非常激烈。

The surface of Mars is remarkably diverse.

火星的表面参差不齐。

He was so informed and intensely forceful.

他是那么见多识广，极了不起。

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