高考英语书面表达写作指导课件
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“Tom!” she cried. “Help!” No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him. Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落) somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake. As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
高考英语书面表达ppt课件
④ Personally, / In. my opinion/ I think,22…
① 现在越来越多的人购买小汽车，请
你根据下列表格所给信息给报社编辑 写一封信发表观点。
②
③
④
.
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① Nowadays in our city, more and more
people own cars.
② I think there are good reasons for owning
food offered by the homestay family. And the cost of living is higher. What’s worse, there will be some limits to their life.
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Para. 4
Opinions or advice
（注意时态、人称等）
.
3
尽量避免下列书面表达常犯错误
一、审题不够仔细，遗漏要点;
二、语言基础知识薄弱，语法和拼写错误较多;
1．句子结构错误
①双谓语现象 ②句子结构混乱
2．动词使用错误
①时态错误 ②语态错误 ③滥用be动词
3．名词单复数错误
4. 不规则动词及常用词拼写错误
5. 汉语式英语 三、词义模糊，用词不够准;
总结语:
Above all, In conclusion, In short, In a word, In
my opinion, Personally, .
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半开放式书面表达结尾常用句型
➢In my opinion, … ➢Personally,（only in this way can we …）
① 现在越来越多的人购买小汽车，请
你根据下列表格所给信息给报社编辑 写一封信发表观点。
②
③
④
.
23
① Nowadays in our city, more and more
people own cars.
② I think there are good reasons for owning
food offered by the homestay family. And the cost of living is higher. What’s worse, there will be some limits to their life.
.
19
Para. 4
Opinions or advice
（注意时态、人称等）
.
3
尽量避免下列书面表达常犯错误
一、审题不够仔细，遗漏要点;
二、语言基础知识薄弱，语法和拼写错误较多;
1．句子结构错误
①双谓语现象 ②句子结构混乱
2．动词使用错误
①时态错误 ②语态错误 ③滥用be动词
3．名词单复数错误
4. 不规则动词及常用词拼写错误
5. 汉语式英语 三、词义模糊，用词不够准;
总结语:
Above all, In conclusion, In short, In a word, In
my opinion, Personally, .
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半开放式书面表达结尾常用句型
➢In my opinion, … ➢Personally,（only in this way can we …）
高考英语名师指导课件—书面表达模块第一讲 提纲作文(31张ppt)
4．At present，there is a widespread concern that... 目前，人们普遍担心…… 5．Every coin has two sides.任何事都有两面性。 6．It is often said that...人们常说，……
二、衔接常用句式 1．First of all，/To begin with，/At first， 2．Besides，/What's more，/In addition， 首先 而且
注 意 事 项
3.美化信息 巧妙衔接过渡，追求多种表达；行文条理清晰，力避 一段到底；书写清晰规范，卷面漂亮美观。
一、开头常用句式 1．I'm glad to receive your letter asking for... 很高兴收到你的来信，询问…… 2．We had Байду номын сангаас heated discussion about... 关于……我们进行了激烈的讨论 3．With the development of... 随着……的发展
[第五部分 书面表达]
权威师论 QUANWEISHILUN 1.试题趋向分析 书面表达题具有一定的开放性，给考生留有一定的自由发挥 空间，选材更加贴近学生的生活实际，具有时代特色。
2.提醒2014届考生 写作的训练要循序渐进。写作前要合理谋篇布局，在词、 短语、句子的选择上要斟酌、推敲，尽量使用高级词汇、复杂 句式。在文中既要体现自己的语言运用能力，又要展示个性特 点。
第一讲
提纲作文
博学
明考点·析考情·方法在握
1.命题常以短文提示、要点提示或表格提示三种 形式呈现。 2.写作内容被以提纲的形式分割成独立的信息 命题特点 块，所给的提纲既是一个个独立的要点，又体 现了文章的层次，是全文写作的思路。 3.考查形式以电子邮件、通知、日记等为主，内 容贴近学生的生活实际。
高考英语书面表达写作指导[课件]
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Teaching procedures:(教学过程 教学过程) 教学过程
Step 1 Checking and lead-in (热身）(5 min.）
1. Check the homework.
Now look at the charts with the percentage and the requirements of writing in the 2008 NMET.
请根据以下材料，写一篇介绍刘翔的文章
[写作 要求]
1必须使 用5 个句 子介 绍全 部内 容； 2．将5 个句 子组 织连 贯的 文章
姓名 性别 籍贯 生日 身高 体重 项目 刘翔 男 上海 1983．07．13 1．88米 74公斤 田径（110米栏） 1．2000年8月入选国家青年田径队 2．2002年获亚运会及亚锦标赛冠军 3．2003年在英国世界室内田径锦标赛中获60米跨 栏第三。 4．2004年8月27日获雅典奥运会冠军，成绩是12 秒91，追平世界纪录，打破奥运会记录
Do you know the name of this man?
Step 2 Presentation (呈现） (4min).
Look at the chart of him winning the goad medal at the Athens Olympics. Can you give as much information as you can？
总 计
• 评分标准
• 语Leabharlann 言7-8分: 具有很好的语言运用能力；语法和句子结构准确性高，词汇方面
使用较好，只有少许错误。
5-6分: 具有较好的语言运用能力；语法和句子结构准确性较好，有一些
高考英语书面表达ppt课件
请你根据下列表格所给信息给报社编 辑写一封信发表观点。
.
11
☆ 人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见.
请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友 的短文,介绍人们的观点,并表达自己的 看法. (2005年江西高考)
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12
☆ 假如你是李华,是某农村中学的学生.
你校打算在教室里安装空调,让学生讨论.请 根据下表中讨论的结果,给校英语报刊投稿, 并表明你的观点.
➢All things considered,. …
8Hale Waihona Puke 高考英语书面表达之 话题训练
.
9
☆ 很多初到国外的中国学生都选择了家
庭寄宿。对此，不同的人持有不同的看 法。请根据下面表格提示，以Homestay Service 为题写一篇短文，并发表你自 己的观点。
.
10
☆ 现在越来越多的人购买小汽车，
Some people think that students
should study abroad if possible.
To start with, it is good for their
English improvement, especially
Tips
四、行文清晰，句子与句. 子间缺乏衔接. 4
Tips 英语作文如何得高分？
1. 卷面整洁, 书写漂亮 ； 2. 用词造句，扬长避短；
3. 要点写全, 亮点突出； 4. 结构完整，脉络清晰
作文阅卷时间紧，且采用global scoring（整体 评分）方法，因此阅卷老师不可能慢悠悠地欣赏你 的大作。首先文章结构要完整合理。句与句、段与 段之间运用恰当的过渡词。因此，应适当运用关键 词组、套句，以吸引阅卷老师的“眼球”。
.
11
☆ 人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见.
请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友 的短文,介绍人们的观点,并表达自己的 看法. (2005年江西高考)
.
12
☆ 假如你是李华,是某农村中学的学生.
你校打算在教室里安装空调,让学生讨论.请 根据下表中讨论的结果,给校英语报刊投稿, 并表明你的观点.
➢All things considered,. …
8Hale Waihona Puke 高考英语书面表达之 话题训练
.
9
☆ 很多初到国外的中国学生都选择了家
庭寄宿。对此，不同的人持有不同的看 法。请根据下面表格提示，以Homestay Service 为题写一篇短文，并发表你自 己的观点。
.
10
☆ 现在越来越多的人购买小汽车，
Some people think that students
should study abroad if possible.
To start with, it is good for their
English improvement, especially
Tips
四、行文清晰，句子与句. 子间缺乏衔接. 4
Tips 英语作文如何得高分？
1. 卷面整洁, 书写漂亮 ； 2. 用词造句，扬长避短；
3. 要点写全, 亮点突出； 4. 结构完整，脉络清晰
作文阅卷时间紧，且采用global scoring（整体 评分）方法，因此阅卷老师不可能慢悠悠地欣赏你 的大作。首先文章结构要完整合理。句与句、段与 段之间运用恰当的过渡词。因此，应适当运用关键 词组、套句，以吸引阅卷老师的“眼球”。
高考英语书面表达指导课件
making audience impatient and some of them even annoyed.
2、附加成分作解释说明
方法——添加与所给信息有关的前因后果及条件，目的等内 容
例三：安全出口（exit）标志不明， 存在安全隐患(potential hazard）。 拓展：万一遇到危险， 观众难以逃脱。 The exit is not clear, so there will be potential hazard. In case of danger, it is difficult for the audience to escape. 例四：对中学生假期通讯方式进行了一项调查 We did a survey about how our high school students communicate with each other during the holiday 拓展：为了了解对中学生假期通讯方式 目的 条件
1. 利用模板
When it comes to the issue of…, the majority of people seem to get accustomed to the idea that … However, attitudes towards…vary from person to person. some people firmly believe that…, there are some factors contributing to this attitude as follows, in the first place,… in the second place,... On top of that,… As a matter of fact, it is not often the case. Others have a preference of…, there are several remarkable reasons. For one thing…, for another… On my part,...
高考英语书面表达高分写作技巧公开课教学课件(共25张PPT)
二、忌次序混乱，连接词单一或缺乏
审完题后，不少考生虽已知道了要写的内容，却不能合 理地组织所给的材料，东一句、西一句，写得支离破碎， 文理不通，让人不知所云。考生最好能迅速地列出要点， 在这个过程中，要考虑一下先写什么，后写什么，句与句 之间，不得逐字或逐条翻译。 段与段之间最好能使用一些能清晰表达逻辑结构的连 接词或句子，如first of all , above all , secondly , next , in fact,besides, in a word , at last , the most important point is that…等等，使文章过渡自然、流畅，做到前后连贯、 层次分明、有条不紊。
注意：不能不 用，且不能少 用，但也不能 滥用。
一、怎样使用较高级的词汇
1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable. 2.We all think he is a great man. We all think highly of him . 3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea suddenly struck me.
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六、忌充分自信、不回查
写出来的东西，很可能有不正确、不恰当的 地方，因此，在答完卷时，至少应从以下几个方 面认真检查：（1）对照题目要求，看全部要点是 否都已包括进去，有无遗漏或误解；（2）文体格 式是否正确规范；（3）词语使用是否合适、正确， 有无语法与用词上的错误， 表达是否符合英语表 达习惯；（4）单词拼写、字母大小写有无错误， 标点符号有无遗漏或用错等等。 一句话，对书面表达应尽量做到：不跑题，不 漏点，语言精简合习惯，灵活表达要规范，书法 整齐词有限。
高考英语写作指导课课件(69张PPT)
They even threw rubbish into the lake, totally ignoring the noticeable sign "No _____________ littering" nearby.
Adopt a variety of sentence patterns
使用较丰富的句式
have studied
written
English very well.
is
10.There are some advice in teaching English.
Adopt a variety of sentence patterns
使用较丰富的句式
1. They even threw rubbish into the lake. They totally ignored the noticeable sign "No littering" nearby. (使用V-ing形式)
6.My English level is common and I can't speak very ∧ well.
average along it
7.I believe we can get alone well with each other.
8.Besides, I think speaking English is as important as writing English. spoken 9.I study English for 12 years so I think I know
be attractive, beautiful,completed in a limited time!
高三英语高考作文分析指导写作中小学PPT教学课件
• 2.该产品已售完,无法更换
The model has been sold out . They can’t change a new one for me.
• 3.型号新,无配件,法维修
It is a new model in China. It is impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.
no spare parts; repair/fix/maintain • Point 4：require/request sb. to do sth 或demand of sb. to do sth.
3.连词成句
• 1.手机不响铃,不能发短信
It doesn’t ring . It doesn’t send short messages.
3.型号新,无配件,无法维修 整合前： It is a new model in
China. It is impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. 整合后：
a.Since it’s a new model and there’re no spare parts,I can’t get it repaired .（原因状语从句）
c. All that I request of your company is that you should get my phone changed as soon as possible.(定语从句 和表语从句）
d. I hope that my requirement that you should change a new phone of the same model for me can be satisfied as soon as possible. (宾语从 句、同位语从句、虚拟语气及被 动语态)
The model has been sold out . They can’t change a new one for me.
• 3.型号新,无配件,法维修
It is a new model in China. It is impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.
no spare parts; repair/fix/maintain • Point 4：require/request sb. to do sth 或demand of sb. to do sth.
3.连词成句
• 1.手机不响铃,不能发短信
It doesn’t ring . It doesn’t send short messages.
3.型号新,无配件,无法维修 整合前： It is a new model in
China. It is impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. 整合后：
a.Since it’s a new model and there’re no spare parts,I can’t get it repaired .（原因状语从句）
c. All that I request of your company is that you should get my phone changed as soon as possible.(定语从句 和表语从句）
d. I hope that my requirement that you should change a new phone of the same model for me can be satisfied as soon as possible. (宾语从 句、同位语从句、虚拟语气及被 动语态)
高中英语高考书面表达指导课件
2. Splash water here and there/ flow around on the ground
1.Pass by /walk by / go past(Xiao Nong) 2. Make him wet by splashing / splash him with water
Some Topics
1.禽流感(bird
flu)和非典(SARS) 2.伊拉克战争(Iraqi War, terrorism) 3.为什么上大学（go to university) 4.早恋(puppy love)
BYE - BYE !
Thank you!
1.
Play with water (Xiao Ming)
One possible version:
Dear editor I don’t think it is good to send teenagers abroad to study. Compared with China’s education, foreign education has many problems. Some foreign schools are not as good as those of our country in teaching quality. In those schools, students can’t learn more, and waste a lot of money, which is a heavy burden to their families. Teenagers are too young to take care of themselves either in their study life or in their daily life. As they often don’t have the ability to tell right from wrong, and lack necessary help and guidance, some lose their interest in studies and even learn something bad. Yours Li Hua
高考英语作文写作指导 PPT课件(共17张)
书面表达五步法
• Step1：审题 • Step2.抓要点 • step3.写草稿 • Step4.修改、整合 • Step5.抄写
• 第二节 写作（满分25分） • 假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国 朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假 里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。 请根据以下要点给他回封邮件： • 1.未及时回信的原因； • 2.你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志 愿者等）。 • 注意：1. 词数120-150；2. 可适当增加 细节，以使行文连贯。
• • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • •、聪明的人有长的耳朵和短的舌头。 ——弗莱格 2、重复是学习之母。 ——狄慈根 3、当你还不能对自己说今天学到了什么东西时，你就不要去睡觉。 ——利希顿堡 4、人天天都学到一点东西，而往往所学到的是发现昨日学到的是错的。 ——B.V 5、学到很多东西的诀窍，就是一下子不要学很多。 ——洛 克 6、学问是异常珍贵的东西，从任何源泉吸收都不可耻。 ——阿卜· 日· 法拉兹 7、学习是劳动，是充满思想的劳动。 ——乌申斯基 8、聪明出于勤奋，天才在于积累 －－华罗庚 9、好学而不勤问非真好学者。 10、书山有路勤为径，学海无涯苦作舟。 11、人的大脑和肢体一样，多用则灵，不用则废 －茅以升 12、你想成为幸福的人吗？但愿你首先学会吃得起苦 －－屠格涅夫 13、成功＝艰苦劳动＋正确方法＋少说空话 －－爱因斯坦 14、不经历风雨，怎能见彩虹 －《真心英雄》 15、只有登上山顶，才能看到那边的风光。 16只会幻想而不行动的人，永远也体会不到收获果实时的喜悦。 17、勤奋是你生命的密码，能译出你一部壮丽的史诗。 18．暗自伤心，不如立即行动． 19．挫折时，要像大树一样，被砍了，还能再长；也要像杂草一样，虽让人践踏，但还能勇敢地活下去． 20．随随便便浪费的时间，再也不能赢回来． 21．成功是优点的发挥，失败，是缺点的积累．
高考英语北师大版高三《写作指导》 课件 (共23张PPT)
Yours,
Li Hua
(提高篇)
基础好点的同学在用词上，尽可能的选用高级词汇，特 殊句式等，增加亮点，可适当增加细节。
A Chinese Summer Camp which is intended for the foreign
students will be held in our school.I have always learned that you are crazy about chinese culture. I'am writing to invite you to join the Camp.The Camp is scheduled to last 11 days, from July 18 to July 28. It covers a wide variety of cultural activities, ranging from studying Chinese daily expressions to attending some lectures on Chinese history and traditional culture. You will be admitted to be part of it if you enroll yourself at our school website .Please be sure to sign up for it before 10th July. (101w)
可直接写在问卷上面
第三步，分析罗列要点及支点的用词
1. 名词：Chinese Summer Camp，foreign students，school ，summer
vacation，Chinese culture，daily Chinese,history , traditional culture, museums, deadline
高考英语 书面表达英语话题写作 语言学习 课件(共26张PPT)
Wish you success. Yours sincerely, Li Hua
第五步，仔细检查，工整书写。
四、课外作业
假定你是高一新生李华，在学习英语过程中 遇到了困难。请用英语给English Weekly 的 编辑写一封邮件，主要内容如下： 1.自我介绍； 2.遇到的困难； 3.希望得到建议和帮助
• 结构4. v-ing 作主语
• 掌握英语意味着我们可以通过一个新的窗 口看世界。
• Mastering English means that we can see the world through a new window.
• 结构5. (more…பைடு நூலகம்han…)
• 就学习英语而言，词汇，在某种程度上， 要比语法更加重要。
I would be grateful if I could get your reply. Best wishes,
Li Hua
Wish you success.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
［导练］ 第一步，认真审题，明确要求。 体裁：书信 人称：第一、二人称 时态：以一般现在时为主 要点：英语学习的意义、方法
第二步，列出要点，以免遗漏。 1.开头引入 (not good at English)
2.英语学习的意义(international language; important part in our life; learn it well)
have some difficulty in leaning English and hope you can give me some advice.
In English class, I find it very difficult to follow my teacher because of the poor listening. Also, I can’t remember the words clearly.
第五步，仔细检查，工整书写。
四、课外作业
假定你是高一新生李华，在学习英语过程中 遇到了困难。请用英语给English Weekly 的 编辑写一封邮件，主要内容如下： 1.自我介绍； 2.遇到的困难； 3.希望得到建议和帮助
• 结构4. v-ing 作主语
• 掌握英语意味着我们可以通过一个新的窗 口看世界。
• Mastering English means that we can see the world through a new window.
• 结构5. (more…பைடு நூலகம்han…)
• 就学习英语而言，词汇，在某种程度上， 要比语法更加重要。
I would be grateful if I could get your reply. Best wishes,
Li Hua
Wish you success.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
［导练］ 第一步，认真审题，明确要求。 体裁：书信 人称：第一、二人称 时态：以一般现在时为主 要点：英语学习的意义、方法
第二步，列出要点，以免遗漏。 1.开头引入 (not good at English)
2.英语学习的意义(international language; important part in our life; learn it well)
have some difficulty in leaning English and hope you can give me some advice.
In English class, I find it very difficult to follow my teacher because of the poor listening. Also, I can’t remember the words clearly.
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Task3: Let’s imitate more key sentences!
1 …Xiao Ming falls asleep with/ leaving TV on, which always annoys his mother.
模仿要点： with +n. +宾补
模仿1：Somebody is sleeping in the class now. His eyes are open.
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is a major cause, which, of course, leads to
such a bad habit. Secondly, there being no
To judge whether they can be used in the writing
With the development of science, our earth is
becoming dirtier than before,ilBlougt micaanly people have
模仿要点：主句 + 现在分词（作状语）
模仿1：The children watched the game and stood for an hour.
The children stood for an hour,________ the game.
watching
模仿2：
score a goal 进球
What is it that accounts for the above case? Firstly, ….Secondly,….
Therefore, if you intend to….
In short, / In a word, what we should
do is ……..
be
Every tiny action counts. valuable
not realized the problem now.
Hearing the sound of “ZZZ”, Xiaoming’s mother
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Somebody is sleeping in the class now, _w_i_t_h_h_i_s_e_y_e_s_o_p_e_n___.
模仿2：
The pig is standing here,w_i_th__su_n_g_l_a_ss_e_s__o.n
2 his mother entered, complaining him for forgetting to turn TV off。
off the TV.
Task2: Make a list of key sentences in the model writing.
As can be seen in the picture, …… The picture is trying to convince us of a fact thiaoming was just more “ZZZZZ….”
The picture is talking about mother and the son.
The son is sleeping and thetomootshiemr pisletrying to turn
strict laws to obey in society, the public will
easily forget their duty.
Para.3
environmentally
Therefore, if we intend to live an _________ friendly life, we should make it our habit to turn off electrical equipment. In a word, what we should do is to __p_ro_t_e_c_t ___our environment through small things in our daily life. Every tiny action counts.
The baby jumps into the air, __________score a goal.
Para.2
The picture is trying to convince us of a
fact that we are wasting electricity and ignore the importance of saving e_n__e_rg_y___ resources.
What is Firstly,
Logic（逻辑性）
Key sentences (信息句）
审题
Key words （信息词）
Genre(体裁）
Tense(时态）
Person(人称）
请仔细观看左边漫画，结合 自己的实际生活，写一篇 关于“节能环保”的英语短文
要求： 1 简要描述图中的现象； 2 分析产生这种现象的
原因（如：没有良好 的习惯等）； 3提出你的建议。
提示：图中在睡觉的是 小明，妇女是他的母亲
Task1:A model with some missing key words. Answers varies.
Para.1
As can be seen in the picture, Late at midnight, Xiao Ming_f_a_ll_s__asleep with TV _o_n___, which always annoys his mother. And his mother enters,c_o_m_p_la_i_n_in_g_ him for forgetting to turn TV off.