高考英语写作——段落的写作技巧(共72张PPT)
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英语段落写作方法与技巧 PPT
third 第三
the most important 再者;更重要得就是 what’s more 再者;更重要得就是
that is,…
即;
也就就是说
there are many reasons why… ……得原因有许多
thirdly 第三
truly 事实上;其实就是
what’s more important 再者;更重要得就是
first 首先;第一
first of all 首先
generally speaking 一般说来
in the first place 首先
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Chapter One: The Structure of a Paragraph
1、 “启”即开启,开始,引出主题句或引导第一个扩展句
it is clear that… 显然
特别就 in the same way
事实上 另外;此外 结果;因此
例如
从此 此外 事实上 换言之 同样地
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Chapter One: The Structure of a Paragraph
moreover 此外;而且
more than that 再者;更重要得就是
no doubt 无疑
namely 也就就是说
性(The Coherence of a Paragraph) 。
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Chapter One: The Structure of a Paragraph
在一个段落中,即使所有得句子意思都清楚,并且逻辑顺序 排列正确,但就是如果缺乏句与句之间得恰当得过渡,整个段 落得连贯性仍会受到影响。一般使用合适得过渡词语来加强 句与句之间得衔接或连贯。一个段落通常由“启”、“承”、 “转”、“合”这样得一些环节构成,也就就是说要正确使用 启、承、转、合得词或词组,这样得段落才会既有统一性、完 整性,又有连贯性。下面就是一些常用得“启、承、转、合” 过渡词语:
the most important 再者;更重要得就是 what’s more 再者;更重要得就是
that is,…
即;
也就就是说
there are many reasons why… ……得原因有许多
thirdly 第三
truly 事实上;其实就是
what’s more important 再者;更重要得就是
first 首先;第一
first of all 首先
generally speaking 一般说来
in the first place 首先
Back
Chapter One: The Structure of a Paragraph
1、 “启”即开启,开始,引出主题句或引导第一个扩展句
it is clear that… 显然
特别就 in the same way
事实上 另外;此外 结果;因此
例如
从此 此外 事实上 换言之 同样地
Back
Chapter One: The Structure of a Paragraph
moreover 此外;而且
more than that 再者;更重要得就是
no doubt 无疑
namely 也就就是说
性(The Coherence of a Paragraph) 。
Back
Chapter One: The Structure of a Paragraph
在一个段落中,即使所有得句子意思都清楚,并且逻辑顺序 排列正确,但就是如果缺乏句与句之间得恰当得过渡,整个段 落得连贯性仍会受到影响。一般使用合适得过渡词语来加强 句与句之间得衔接或连贯。一个段落通常由“启”、“承”、 “转”、“合”这样得一些环节构成,也就就是说要正确使用 启、承、转、合得词或词组,这样得段落才会既有统一性、完 整性,又有连贯性。下面就是一些常用得“启、承、转、合” 过渡词语:
高考英语作文写作技法PPT教学课件
2、句子的结构：一般来说，高考书面表达的篇幅大约 是10句，其中多数是简单句，少数复合句。建议使用十 句作文法训练。
3、意义的表达：主要指用词妥当、句型正确和具有一 定的变通技巧。当同时可以用多种句型来表达一个意思 是，考生应当选择自己熟悉的、有把握的句型。
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写好英语作文至少要注意以下五个方面：
f 5. have a tendency to do sth. f. be likely to / tend to do
k 6. drop out
g. give sth. away to a charity
b 7. a shortage of
h. to stretch over a large area
j 8. result in
i. classes where students of
i 9. mixed-grade classes
different grades at taught in one
h 10. spread out
classroom
c 11. compulsory
j. lead to
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高三学生学习紧张，考试压力大，因此，做 一些户外运动时很有必要的。请你以“Health and Sports”为题完成一篇短文。可以围绕主题 适当展开，词数100~120。
Health and Sports
Some students say that taking sports is just a waste of time. At school, there are so many subjects to learn and so much homework to do that time is precious to them. To us senior three students, every minute counts. As a consequence, there is no time available, especially for students to take outside sports.
3、意义的表达：主要指用词妥当、句型正确和具有一 定的变通技巧。当同时可以用多种句型来表达一个意思 是，考生应当选择自己熟悉的、有把握的句型。
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写好英语作文至少要注意以下五个方面：
f 5. have a tendency to do sth. f. be likely to / tend to do
k 6. drop out
g. give sth. away to a charity
b 7. a shortage of
h. to stretch over a large area
j 8. result in
i. classes where students of
i 9. mixed-grade classes
different grades at taught in one
h 10. spread out
classroom
c 11. compulsory
j. lead to
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（范例）
高三学生学习紧张，考试压力大，因此，做 一些户外运动时很有必要的。请你以“Health and Sports”为题完成一篇短文。可以围绕主题 适当展开，词数100~120。
Health and Sports
Some students say that taking sports is just a waste of time. At school, there are so many subjects to learn and so much homework to do that time is precious to them. To us senior three students, every minute counts. As a consequence, there is no time available, especially for students to take outside sports.
高考英语写作技巧(63张PPT)
有效地使 用了语句 间的连接 成分
上下文的连贯； 语言的得体性
语言地道， 规范
3、拼写和标点是语言 准确性的一个方面， 评分时，应视其对交 际的影响程度予以考 虑。
4、词数少于100和多于 140的，从总分中减去2 分。
5、如书写较差，以至影 响交际，将分数降低一 个档次。
Which composition feels more attractive, why?
4.The students there needn’t pay for their books. Books are free for the students there.
5. As a result the plan was a failure. The plan turned out to be a failure.
6、 定语从句 In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place
where we can find much useful information.
Let’s come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library.
2.We all think he is a great man. We all think highly of him .
3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea suddenly struck me.
7、 各种名词性从句 That’s what I should do. We should do a favor to whoever needs help
英语作文写作技巧PPT课件
A Brief Introduction We had a wonderful vacation! (1) We visited my grand parents’ home for the holiday. (2) There we met all my cousins, aunts, and uncles. (3) We ate good food and played a lot. (4) We went shopping and sightseeing. (5) I didn’t feel like coming back! (6) Sentence (1) is a topic sentence. The controlling idea is “wonderful”. Therefore, in sentences (2), (3), (4) and (5), the author develops this controlling idea by means of providing details. In sentence (2) he uses “visited my grand
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Coherence — One of writing principles referring to the fact that the sentences should be organized in a logical manner and should follow a definite plan of development.
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Coherence — One of writing principles referring to the fact that the sentences should be organized in a logical manner and should follow a definite plan of development.
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高考英语作文书面表达必备万能公式及写作绝招课件演示文稿
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3）因果（so, so, so） 昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩，然后我主动搭 讪，然后我们去咖啡厅，然后我们认识了，然 后我们成为了朋友…可见，讲故事的时候我们 总要追求先后顺序，先什么，后什么，所以然 后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的 是先后或因果关系！ The snow began to fall, so we went home. 更多短语： then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that
3）the first, the second, the third, the last（不推荐，原因：俗） 4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place,
lastly（不推荐，原因：俗）
5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（强烈推荐） 6）to start with, next, in addition, finally（强烈推荐） 7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least（强烈推荐） 8）most important of all, moreover, finally 9）on the one hand, on the other hand（适用于两点的情况） 10）for one thing, for another thing（适用于两点的情况）
一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如： 走出房间，general的词是：walk out of the room 但是小偷走出房间应该说：slip out of the room 小姐走出房间应该说：sail out of the room 小孩走出房间应该说：dance out of the room 老人走出房间应该说：stagger out of the room
3）因果（so, so, so） 昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩，然后我主动搭 讪，然后我们去咖啡厅，然后我们认识了，然 后我们成为了朋友…可见，讲故事的时候我们 总要追求先后顺序，先什么，后什么，所以然 后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的 是先后或因果关系！ The snow began to fall, so we went home. 更多短语： then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that
3）the first, the second, the third, the last（不推荐，原因：俗） 4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place,
lastly（不推荐，原因：俗）
5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（强烈推荐） 6）to start with, next, in addition, finally（强烈推荐） 7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least（强烈推荐） 8）most important of all, moreover, finally 9）on the one hand, on the other hand（适用于两点的情况） 10）for one thing, for another thing（适用于两点的情况）
一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如： 走出房间，general的词是：walk out of the room 但是小偷走出房间应该说：slip out of the room 小姐走出房间应该说：sail out of the room 小孩走出房间应该说：dance out of the room 老人走出房间应该说：stagger out of the room
高考英语写作技巧(精编课件).ppt
般) On his arriving/ arrival, please give….
(高级)
If the weather permits, I’ll come tomorrow. (一
般) Weather permitting, I’ll come tomorrow. (高级)
Now our school has three teachers. They teach 48 pupils. (一般)
The subjects I studied at school included Chinese, maths, English…. (高级精)品课件
9. 使用虚拟语气
The ship didn’t sink because there were the efforts of the captain. (一 B般ut)for the efforts of the captain, the ship would
词汇和语法的数量和准确性；
有用效了地语使句上语言下文的的得连体贯性；
间的连接 成分
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语言地道， 规范
3、拼写和标点是语言 准确性的一个方面， 评分时，应视其对交 际的影响程度予以考 虑。
精品课件
4、词数少于100和多于 140的，从总分中减去2 分。
5、如书写较差，以至影 响交际，将分数降低一 个档次。
8. 使用定语从句
The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. (一般)
The girl whose composition was well written was spoken highly of. (高级)
高考英语书面表达高分写作技巧公开课教学课件(共25张PPT)
二、忌次序混乱，连接词单一或缺乏
审完题后，不少考生虽已知道了要写的内容，却不能合 理地组织所给的材料，东一句、西一句，写得支离破碎， 文理不通，让人不知所云。考生最好能迅速地列出要点， 在这个过程中，要考虑一下先写什么，后写什么，句与句 之间，不得逐字或逐条翻译。 段与段之间最好能使用一些能清晰表达逻辑结构的连 接词或句子，如first of all , above all , secondly , next , in fact,besides, in a word , at last , the most important point is that…等等，使文章过渡自然、流畅，做到前后连贯、 层次分明、有条不紊。
注意：不能不 用，且不能少 用，但也不能 滥用。
一、怎样使用较高级的词汇
1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable. 2.We all think he is a great man. We all think highly of him . 3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea suddenly struck me.
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六、忌充分自信、不回查
写出来的东西，很可能有不正确、不恰当的 地方，因此，在答完卷时，至少应从以下几个方 面认真检查：（1）对照题目要求，看全部要点是 否都已包括进去，有无遗漏或误解；（2）文体格 式是否正确规范；（3）词语使用是否合适、正确， 有无语法与用词上的错误， 表达是否符合英语表 达习惯；（4）单词拼写、字母大小写有无错误， 标点符号有无遗漏或用错等等。 一句话，对书面表达应尽量做到：不跑题，不 漏点，语言精简合习惯，灵活表达要规范，书法 整齐词有限。
高中英语作文段落写作技巧PPT课件
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一、主题句
主题句是概括段落中心思想，反映作者 写作意图的一个概括性的句子，是段落 的核心所在 1.段落主题句的位置及其作用 主题句通常由主题和作者的观点两部分 组成，作为段落传递信息的出发点，简 明扼要地告诉读者段落的线索和范围。
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位置： 段首 、段中、段尾 段首主题句开门见山，直接点明段落主题，有 助于确定段落的主线，使各个发展句围绕段落 主题自然展开； 段尾主题句具有结论作用，是对前面句子的归 纳总结
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二、扩展句
用来支持或说明主题句的，是段落主题句 的延伸和发展，起着辅助主题句、推展 段落中心的作用
对主题句表达的中心思想或举例说明、或 细致描写、或详细解释阐述和论证，使 读者能够清晰地理解和信服地接受作者 所表达的意思。
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特点
（1）清晰、详实，有较强的说服力，能 清楚地表达思想；
（2）条理分明，脉络清晰。上一句要为 下一句铺平道路，下一句是上一句的自 然延伸，一步一步地论述或叙述主题。
不能涉及面太窄：如果限定范围太窄又不 利于段落的发展。段落主题句所限定的 内容必须符合段落写作的目的，有助于 段落的铺开和抒发
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1、Television is very important. 太泛，没有表达一个清楚的主题思想 Television plays an educational role in our daily life.
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(1)The computer finds many applications in all fieldsg almost everything from diagnosing hospital patients to running nuclear power stations. (3)In any field where information is collected, processed, stored, and retrieved, computers are being used more and more. (4)Computers are also used as an aid to design planning. (5)For example, they can be used to predict faults in design as well as the cost of a design if one is planning to build a road. 句（1）是主题句，提出计算机在所有领域都有应用的 观点；句（2）、（3）和（4）是一级扩展句，都支 持和说明句（1），具体说明计算机都在哪些领域应用 ，而句（5）是二级扩展句，用来补充说明句（4）， 通过举例来说明计算机辅助设计的用途。
一、主题句
主题句是概括段落中心思想，反映作者 写作意图的一个概括性的句子，是段落 的核心所在 1.段落主题句的位置及其作用 主题句通常由主题和作者的观点两部分 组成，作为段落传递信息的出发点，简 明扼要地告诉读者段落的线索和范围。
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位置： 段首 、段中、段尾 段首主题句开门见山，直接点明段落主题，有 助于确定段落的主线，使各个发展句围绕段落 主题自然展开； 段尾主题句具有结论作用，是对前面句子的归 纳总结
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二、扩展句
用来支持或说明主题句的，是段落主题句 的延伸和发展，起着辅助主题句、推展 段落中心的作用
对主题句表达的中心思想或举例说明、或 细致描写、或详细解释阐述和论证，使 读者能够清晰地理解和信服地接受作者 所表达的意思。
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特点
（1）清晰、详实，有较强的说服力，能 清楚地表达思想；
（2）条理分明，脉络清晰。上一句要为 下一句铺平道路，下一句是上一句的自 然延伸，一步一步地论述或叙述主题。
不能涉及面太窄：如果限定范围太窄又不 利于段落的发展。段落主题句所限定的 内容必须符合段落写作的目的，有助于 段落的铺开和抒发
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1、Television is very important. 太泛，没有表达一个清楚的主题思想 Television plays an educational role in our daily life.
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(1)The computer finds many applications in all fieldsg almost everything from diagnosing hospital patients to running nuclear power stations. (3)In any field where information is collected, processed, stored, and retrieved, computers are being used more and more. (4)Computers are also used as an aid to design planning. (5)For example, they can be used to predict faults in design as well as the cost of a design if one is planning to build a road. 句（1）是主题句，提出计算机在所有领域都有应用的 观点；句（2）、（3）和（4）是一级扩展句，都支 持和说明句（1），具体说明计算机都在哪些领域应用 ，而句（5）是二级扩展句，用来补充说明句（4）， 通过举例来说明计算机辅助设计的用途。
高考英语作文写作技巧(共17张PPT)【优秀课件】
高考英语作文写作技巧（共17张PPT） 【优秀 课件】
• P1 Everyone needs some recreational activities to help them relax after a day's work or study. And there are many recreational activities available to us in today's society. For example, sports fans may choose to play basketball or football. Or one may take a break by watching TV or listening to music.
作文得分技巧
1、 卷面整洁，书写清楚 2、 构思简单，少犯错误 3、 中心突出，层次分明 4、 重在变化，宁简勿烂
议论文写作的基本模式
写作框架如下： 第一段：现象背景介绍+引出话题（公众观
点+大概理由）； 第二段：关于话题的相关因素（影响，作
用，好处，危害或原因等）； 第三段：陈述自己观点或预期未来。
辩论式议论文模版
People hold different views about X. Some people are of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观点2. As far as I am concerned, the
Model
Presently, one phenomenon calls for people’ s attention that ____.
In general, ______. For one thing, _____. (For example, _____.) For another, _____.
高考英语作文技巧PPT课件
3）To sum up , I would say that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
4) From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that… All in all , In conclusion, On the whole
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常用句子
• I take it for granted that they will support this idea. • It is true that we must make our greater efforts; otherwise, we cannot catch up with the developed countries. • We will be successful as long as we insist on working hard. • To be frank, whether you like it or not, you have no other choice. • As far as we know, it took him more than a year to write the book. • As we know, it was not until recently that the problem was solved.
表达个人观点的用语
• • • • • • I think I firmly believe that … In my opinion, Personally speaking,… As far as I am concerned, … From my point of view, ….
高考英语写作技巧方法.ppt
基础写作训练
一. 基础写作基本要求
I. 基础写作考我们什么能力? A. 信息处理或整理的能力;[如:信息之间 能否合并为逻辑关系或处理先后顺序等] B. 组词造句能力;[如内容和语言表达的准确 性和合适性] C. 连句成文能力;[信息内容的完整性和连贯性]
• A. 如何处理或整理信息?
• 1. 存在问题 (1) I am quite satisfied with the travel agency and the local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists， especially to the older people….
• 错误诊断： ‘‘一逗到底”的中式英语表达 导致信息表达出现问题，不能用多个简单句表 达多个不同类型的信息内容。
• I am quite satisfied with the travel agency. The local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and he could concern old men in our group.
中的老人。
• John, who was the travel leader, was get along with everybody and he was took good care of the older.
The local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists，especially to the older people.
• 5.建议应该多提供货真价实的购物场所。 • I suggest you can offer more and more
一. 基础写作基本要求
I. 基础写作考我们什么能力? A. 信息处理或整理的能力;[如:信息之间 能否合并为逻辑关系或处理先后顺序等] B. 组词造句能力;[如内容和语言表达的准确 性和合适性] C. 连句成文能力;[信息内容的完整性和连贯性]
• A. 如何处理或整理信息?
• 1. 存在问题 (1) I am quite satisfied with the travel agency and the local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists， especially to the older people….
• 错误诊断： ‘‘一逗到底”的中式英语表达 导致信息表达出现问题，不能用多个简单句表 达多个不同类型的信息内容。
• I am quite satisfied with the travel agency. The local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and he could concern old men in our group.
中的老人。
• John, who was the travel leader, was get along with everybody and he was took good care of the older.
The local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists，especially to the older people.
• 5.建议应该多提供货真价实的购物场所。 • I suggest you can offer more and more
高考英语写作技巧及常用句型[可修改版ppt]
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主语从句+表语从句
What surprised me most was that the teacher didn’t criticize him because he was late.
二、巧用精彩句式
例5. 直到他回来我才睡觉。 I didn’t go to bed until my father came back. 精彩句式:____________________________________.
强调句型
It was because of his perseverance that he made such a great achievement.
二、巧用精彩句式
例4.使我们感到奇怪的是老师没有因为他迟到而责备他。 To our surprise, the teacher didn’t criticize him because he was late 精彩句式:____________________________________.
1. 表示平行、对等或选择关系 and，both…and, as well as, together with,
neither…nor, also, not only…but also, either…or, as well. 2. 表示转折关系 but, yet, however, nevertheless (然而),
3) As a result the plan was a failure. 高级词汇：
Prove to be / turn out to be
The plan turned out to be a failure.
4) You can find my house easily. 高级词汇：
What surprised me most was that the teacher didn’t criticize him because he was late.
二、巧用精彩句式
例5. 直到他回来我才睡觉。 I didn’t go to bed until my father came back. 精彩句式:____________________________________.
强调句型
It was because of his perseverance that he made such a great achievement.
二、巧用精彩句式
例4.使我们感到奇怪的是老师没有因为他迟到而责备他。 To our surprise, the teacher didn’t criticize him because he was late 精彩句式:____________________________________.
1. 表示平行、对等或选择关系 and，both…and, as well as, together with,
neither…nor, also, not only…but also, either…or, as well. 2. 表示转折关系 but, yet, however, nevertheless (然而),
3) As a result the plan was a failure. 高级词汇：
Prove to be / turn out to be
The plan turned out to be a failure.
4) You can find my house easily. 高级词汇：
高考英语写作系列训练--如何写好一个段落 课件(共24张)
Task For You
Group A---------- Point 1
Group B Group C Group D
Point 2 （One reason is also Ok)
Teamwork:检查
1.时态，尤其是动词的三单现 2. 主谓一致 3.名词单复数 4.单词拼写 5.句子是否完整
Firstly, It is a time when the ground is carpeted with fallen leaves and corns bathed in soft sunshine grow golden. Scenery in autumn is so attractive that I can’t help but to love it.
3. 主题句的位置一般在段首或段末。本学期， 我们先练习将它写在段首。
如何写好扩展句
扩展句利用必要的细节对主题加以论
证说明（对主题的原因、结果、呈现
方式、方法等来阐述）
1. 举例法
常用表达 For example \ Take sth for
2. 因果法
example …,because… \ The reason
Your team should show us a better writing after your discussion.
Show time
The speaker of each team will be ready to show us your writing.
Welcome!
高考佳作欣赏
Every season has its own features. However my favorite season is spring. Spring is the symbol of hope and life and it represents the beginning a new year.
高考英语作文高分写作技法(24页PPT)
home. • D、关于
E、处理, Settle, solve, deal with, cope with, handle,
do…with, manage..with, encounter F、忍受 Stand, bear, tolerate, put up with, suffer, endure G、喜欢 Care for I don’t care for baseball. Be fond of She is fond of playing the piano. Be crazy about Many football fans are crazy about
• (3)修饰语错位
•
I believe I can do it well and I will better know the
world outside the campus.
3、时态误用
• 对各种时态的概念不清
• 时间立足点把握不准
• 母语干扰 汉语无时态变化，学生大脑中缺乏时态概念
• 考场时间不够，来不及顾及时态、语态
6、词性误用 （1）将不及物当成及物Come the city, return the place
(2)形容词用成及物动词Please present on time. (3)可数用成不可数A good news, many informations
(4)形容词副词混用In the recently years, study hardly (5)将介词用成动词The road through the city.
闪光句式，就是用一些比较出彩的句式，比如“Totally engaged in my study ,I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels”。这个句式中，运用到了非谓
E、处理, Settle, solve, deal with, cope with, handle,
do…with, manage..with, encounter F、忍受 Stand, bear, tolerate, put up with, suffer, endure G、喜欢 Care for I don’t care for baseball. Be fond of She is fond of playing the piano. Be crazy about Many football fans are crazy about
• (3)修饰语错位
•
I believe I can do it well and I will better know the
world outside the campus.
3、时态误用
• 对各种时态的概念不清
• 时间立足点把握不准
• 母语干扰 汉语无时态变化，学生大脑中缺乏时态概念
• 考场时间不够，来不及顾及时态、语态
6、词性误用 （1）将不及物当成及物Come the city, return the place
(2)形容词用成及物动词Please present on time. (3)可数用成不可数A good news, many informations
(4)形容词副词混用In the recently years, study hardly (5)将介词用成动词The road through the city.
闪光句式，就是用一些比较出彩的句式，比如“Totally engaged in my study ,I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels”。这个句式中，运用到了非谓
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问题：该主题句中，表达主题思想的关键词是什么？ 答案： several complaints 所以在主题句后，应辅以细节来论证主题思想several complaints。有可能列出下列事实：
高考英语写作——段落的写作技巧(共 72张PP T)
高考英语写作——段落的写作技巧(共 72张PP T)
How to Write a Good Topic Sentence
Three essential points:
2.主题句由主题词和主题思想的表述两部分构成 主题词表明讨论的对象。主题思想的表述部分 限制或控制这个主题在一个段落中能够被论述 的具体方面。它应该是能够展述主题思想的一 个词或一个短语，即关键词。
➢例： 主题句Gold, a precious metal, is prized for two important characteristics.该句中gold 是主题词，two important characteristics 是表 达主题思想的关键词。
How to Write a Good Topic Sentence
1）It has created Ms., a title for women comparable to Mr. for men.
2)The Movement has changed the ending of several compound words from –man to –person.
Fragments： 高考英语写作——段落的写作技巧(共72张PPT)
•Driving on freeways. •How to register for college classes. •The benefits of television to children.
Revised sentences:
(1) Topic Seing / Developing Sentence 辅助句 / 支撑句 / 发展句
(3) Concluding Sentence 结尾句
Topic sentence 主题句
➢ 在段落中用于概括段落主旨大意的句子，叫做主 题句。一个好的主题句能够准确地表达作者的观 点或态度。关于主题的这个观点或态度成为主题 思想（controlling idea）。主题句限定了在一个 单独的段落中所允许讨论的内容。
Three essential points: 3个要点 1. 主题句必须是一个完整的句子，包括一个主语，一 个谓语动词，常常还带有其它修饰语。下面的例子中 虽然有的包括主题思想，但并不是完整的句子。
Fragments： • Driving on freeways. • How to register for college classes. • The benefits of television to children.
• Driving on freeways requires skill and alertness机敏.
• Registering for college classes can be a frustrating experience for new students.
• Television benefits young children in three major ways.
• 试分析下列的主题句：
高考英语写作——段落的写作技巧(共 72张PP T)
高考英语写作——段落的写作技巧(共 72张PP T)
例1 The Women’s Movement has had several effects on the English language. 在这个主题句中，表达主题思想的关键词是several effects，它规定了谈论的主题和内容。为了论证这个 主题思想，作者应提供具体细节或实例来回答这样的问 题：“What reasons did I have for saying several effects?” 有可能列出以下原因：
3) The Movement is responsible for some new terms.
高考英语写作——段落的写作技巧(共 72张PP T)
高考英语写作——段落的写作技巧(共 72张PP T)
例2 Students on this campus recently voiced several complaints.
高考英语写作——段落的写作技巧(共 72张PP T)
高考英语写作——段落的写作技巧(共 72张PP T)
Topic and controlling idea
• The topic sentence gives a paragraph direction and purpose. It tells what the paragraph is about (the topic), and how the writer will develop that topic (the controlling idea).
English Paragraph Writing 英语段落写作
段落写作
段落是文章内容中具有一个完整意义的外部表现形 态，是文章结构的基本单位。段落通常由若干个对 一个主要观点展开论述的相互关联的句子组成。但 段落并非是句子的随意堆砌，句子内容之间应该具 有连贯和逻辑性。段落表达的内容应该是单一的， 一个段落只能表达一个意思，而不能把意思上互不 相关的句子堆砌在一起，造成段落内容的庞杂错乱 ；段落表达的内容应该是完整的，一个意思应当尽 量集中在一个段落里陈述，最好不要分割成两段或 几段，而使段落内容支离破碎。
English Paragraph Writing
1 Paragraph Structure 段落的构成 2 Paragraph Unity 段落的整体性 3 Paragraph Coherence 段落的连贯性
1. Paragraph Structure 段落的构成
One English paragraph usually includes the following three parts:
高考英语写作——段落的写作技巧(共 72张PP T)
高考英语写作——段落的写作技巧(共 72张PP T)
How to Write a Good Topic Sentence
Three essential points:
2.主题句由主题词和主题思想的表述两部分构成 主题词表明讨论的对象。主题思想的表述部分 限制或控制这个主题在一个段落中能够被论述 的具体方面。它应该是能够展述主题思想的一 个词或一个短语，即关键词。
➢例： 主题句Gold, a precious metal, is prized for two important characteristics.该句中gold 是主题词，two important characteristics 是表 达主题思想的关键词。
How to Write a Good Topic Sentence
1）It has created Ms., a title for women comparable to Mr. for men.
2)The Movement has changed the ending of several compound words from –man to –person.
Fragments： 高考英语写作——段落的写作技巧(共72张PPT)
•Driving on freeways. •How to register for college classes. •The benefits of television to children.
Revised sentences:
(1) Topic Seing / Developing Sentence 辅助句 / 支撑句 / 发展句
(3) Concluding Sentence 结尾句
Topic sentence 主题句
➢ 在段落中用于概括段落主旨大意的句子，叫做主 题句。一个好的主题句能够准确地表达作者的观 点或态度。关于主题的这个观点或态度成为主题 思想（controlling idea）。主题句限定了在一个 单独的段落中所允许讨论的内容。
Three essential points: 3个要点 1. 主题句必须是一个完整的句子，包括一个主语，一 个谓语动词，常常还带有其它修饰语。下面的例子中 虽然有的包括主题思想，但并不是完整的句子。
Fragments： • Driving on freeways. • How to register for college classes. • The benefits of television to children.
• Driving on freeways requires skill and alertness机敏.
• Registering for college classes can be a frustrating experience for new students.
• Television benefits young children in three major ways.
• 试分析下列的主题句：
高考英语写作——段落的写作技巧(共 72张PP T)
高考英语写作——段落的写作技巧(共 72张PP T)
例1 The Women’s Movement has had several effects on the English language. 在这个主题句中，表达主题思想的关键词是several effects，它规定了谈论的主题和内容。为了论证这个 主题思想，作者应提供具体细节或实例来回答这样的问 题：“What reasons did I have for saying several effects?” 有可能列出以下原因：
3) The Movement is responsible for some new terms.
高考英语写作——段落的写作技巧(共 72张PP T)
高考英语写作——段落的写作技巧(共 72张PP T)
例2 Students on this campus recently voiced several complaints.
高考英语写作——段落的写作技巧(共 72张PP T)
高考英语写作——段落的写作技巧(共 72张PP T)
Topic and controlling idea
• The topic sentence gives a paragraph direction and purpose. It tells what the paragraph is about (the topic), and how the writer will develop that topic (the controlling idea).
English Paragraph Writing 英语段落写作
段落写作
段落是文章内容中具有一个完整意义的外部表现形 态，是文章结构的基本单位。段落通常由若干个对 一个主要观点展开论述的相互关联的句子组成。但 段落并非是句子的随意堆砌，句子内容之间应该具 有连贯和逻辑性。段落表达的内容应该是单一的， 一个段落只能表达一个意思，而不能把意思上互不 相关的句子堆砌在一起，造成段落内容的庞杂错乱 ；段落表达的内容应该是完整的，一个意思应当尽 量集中在一个段落里陈述，最好不要分割成两段或 几段，而使段落内容支离破碎。
English Paragraph Writing
1 Paragraph Structure 段落的构成 2 Paragraph Unity 段落的整体性 3 Paragraph Coherence 段落的连贯性
1. Paragraph Structure 段落的构成
One English paragraph usually includes the following three parts: