雅思写作7.5分高分心得分享(邓徽老师学生自己辛苦整理的写作资料)

雅思写作7.5分高分心得分享（里面有自己辛苦整理的写作资料）更多资料地址：请在百度搜索：华兹华斯-小邓的博客/s/articlelist_1702027932_2_1.html请大家重点关注“博文目录”以下板块：1. 雅思写作（内含大量雅思写作快速提分学员心得以及题目为“整理这些短语我掉了一把头发”雅思写作提分短语-每一个短语均出自剑桥雅思官方指南1-8里面阅读单项当中所有可以用到写作当中的短语）。

目前雅思界第一个整理八本雅思指定辅导书的牛人。

2. 高级写作提升（内含每天更新经济学人优秀词汇以及短语—记住是每天更新！不是每月也不是每年也不是一辈子！）3. 雅思托福词汇大作文的写作最重要，但是小作文也很重要，不能一直放的小作文不看，因为小作文如果写的不流畅，老是思考，不能在20分钟内写完，就会严重影响大作文的质量。

写作文一定要知道换说法，一个意思同样的说法最好不要出现第二遍，这当然需要积累不同的句型和短语，比如文章后面给的写好处的句子要记得换着用哦~~~邓老师说大作文要得高分，倒装句、插入语、强调句、复合句和同位语至少各用一次！！一开始，我每篇作文都五种句型刻意出现一遍，到后来就用的比较熟。

1把《雅思写作机经题源大全》看了三遍，主要是记了上面的论据。

上面的文章按类型分类，可以总结一下某一方面常用的搭配和句型。

2 我的写作邓老师让我把新概念3的文章背背，但我背了两篇就放弃了。

不过我把新3上的文章都看了一遍，把觉得好的句子总结在了一个本上，然后背，尤其是快考试那几天每天背一遍，弄得很熟，所以用起来也很熟。

大家一定要看啊！！！3 关于模板：我觉得模板还是很有用的，但不是已有书上的模板，大家都知道的那些模板和句型最好少用。

因为雅思作文一共五大类，我一般练得都是两边倒的作文，自己有准备一个模板，除了问原因解决类的作文外都可以用同一个模板，所以要练得比较熟，一般写作文都要用自己的模板。

不过我考试时候还是碰上了问原因类的作文，所以最好是总结两个模板就万无一失啦~~。

4 当时邓老师让我基本上一天看一篇《经济学人》的文章，总结不会的单词、短语和句型，因为上面的文章都是老外写的，所以文章非常地道，好句子很多~~~5 上强化课前看过一遍十天突破雅思写作，觉得还是很不错的，对雅思写作有了比较全面的了解。

但是上面的句型和模板最好不要用了~~6 关于写作文：我一共写了十篇左右的大作文，小作文要每种至少练一篇吧，快考试前一个星期我用专门的雅思考试写作纸卡时间，大小作文一起一起写，写了4套。

我觉得大作文不在于要练的很多，但是要刻意的改进。

写完一篇文章后要自己改一遍，把看的出来的语法和单词错误改了，还要看论据合不合理，再把看过的好的句型刻意套进去，然后如果有条件找给邓老师给改改。

第一篇作文我写了一个半小时才写完，当时真是把所有能用的上的好句子和词组都尽量往里套。

邓老师说第一篇要是半小时之内写完就是混的没好好写。

尽快把能用的上的写作资料背熟，这样写作时间自然会减少，小作文必须20分钟搞定，如果你的模板和句子用的熟，大作文也会很流畅。

我的雅思考试作文写了满满的2页考试纸后，又要了一张写了一半，还把小作文检查了一遍（真的检查出一个错~哈）。

7 除此之外，我还总结了四种句型，开头句型，写好处的句型，写坏处的句型和解决问题类句型。

因为所有的雅思议论文题目基本上都是要讨论一个问题的好的方面和坏的方面，所以这样的句式要准备几个（不用太多），而且确定自己背的很熟，最好是每篇文章都换的多用，达到用的灵活自如。

在这里与大家做一下分享。

好句总结：1 多用such替换the ,a . 例：Admittedly, such issue ,to some extent,has given rise to a bunch of familiar questions.（模板的第3段开头）2 开头句型：（放在文章中间也很好的句子）1 As a result of constant media attention , A(A指题目话题) , once largely ignored,has come to be seen as especially valuable/significant.2 (The right of the media to do this )is rarely disputed, but (the way in which it does this )often comes under withering critism. (括号里可以换)3 As our lives are saturated with the flood of (advertisements) ,no one can avoid being influenced by ads.(ads 错的，不能用简写哦~)4 (Bad traffic and increasing pollution) are thorny issues challenging every major city in the globe.（in the globe全世界）5 The issue of A is a com plex and sensitive one . What lies behind …..? (问原因类)6 After years in the wilderness , the term “ A ” seems posied to make a comeback.(和第一句意思比较像)3好处句型！！1 Nothing can be compared with sb/sth ~~(新3的哦，推荐)2 A exert a positive impact on ….3 A can an effective way to (help)……(简单但好用)4 Few things can be more （impressive）than ….that… (新3的哦，推荐)5 play a pivotal role in …6 benefit from ../ profit from…一般7 promot the development of ..8 A is the cornerstone of …9 remove the barrier for ..10 raise one’s awareness of …常用11 enable sb to do …12 sb is the ultimate beneficiary （sb是。

的最终受益者，社会问题类说人们应该自己也承担责任用）13 consolidates its status as the ..14 get a clear perspective of ..15 give a boost to ..16 A is an indispensable part of B17 A is irreplaceable tp B18 The signigicant of A to B can never be ingored19 A is the key ingredient to B~~20 A made it possibe for sb to…21 A exert a peculiar fascination on a great many people . (新3的哦，推荐)find it impossible to resist the temptation to do ….22 N eedless to say / Indeed ,……（可以放在任一句开头，很好用哦~）23 develop an unshakable faith in …24 have a reputation of ..25 Nothing can catch them for …26 make a contribution to (也可作写坏处的句子the city make its own contribution to noise)27 build bridges between28 特别的Improve one’s physical and psychological wellbeing /soundness 身体心理健康optimise people’s living standards 提高人们生活水平eradicate poverty 消除贫困It’s not A that are important ,but BSatisfy basic (human) needs 满足要求Ease the tension and conflicts between alleviate the problem of 消除冲突和紧张Be fully aware of the consequencesThe impact of （sporting activities）goes far beyond the bounds of (leisure and recreation.) 3坏处的句型1 drive up the crime rate ..2 widen the gap between A3 pose a (direct) threat to …4 stifle creativity5 diminish individual’s leisure time…6 spin out of control7 cause(creat) tension and conflicts between…8 exert(have) detrimental/negative/adverse influence（impact）upon/on9 is markly incompatible with…与。

不协调10 be afflic ted with …11 deprive one of sth12 sth is the root cause of …13 be saturated with sth14 at the expense of ….15 be confronted with sth16 run contrary to …17 erode the national identity18 pose a dilemma for19 is an vicious circle20 hamper (scientific) progress21 there is a yawning gap between22 pose a devastating problem23 the reputation is ruined24 A is a complete failure25 Things can go wrong on a big scale26 sth is always faced with a difficult task /problem27 It is impossible to28 have (little) difficulties in doing29pay the price for (fame)30 (pollution) is the price we pay for( overpopulated ,over industrialized planet )31 people seem to fail to take into account the fact that ….好句！！32 lead to some unfavorable results33 sacrifice ….for …34 There is a major concern over t he world about ….35 give rise to a bunch of familiar questions36This is compounded by the fact that …37 the problem of ( information overloaded ) exacerbated by (the growth …)38 The problem , however , i s complicated by the existence of dozens of ..and by the fact that….. 4解决问题类小模板：1Evidence suggests that a key step is to develop a policy on ….,saying clearly (that..).2Other policies (such as。