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The reading passage focuses on the issue of ………… The professor’s lecture deals with the same issue. However, he/she makes the point that ………… which contradicts what the reading passage states.

First, even though the reading passage suggests that ………… the professor argues in the lecture that ………... This is because …………, which means ………… obviously, the professor’s argument disproves its counterpart in the reading.

Second, another important pointshowed in the lecture is that ………… But the reading presents aconflicting idea that……………

Finally, the professor claims that ………… which challenges the standpoint made by the author of the reading passage. The passage says…………

In general, the professordiscusses the problem of the reading passage viewed in an opposing angle.

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综合写作：

The reading passage focuses on the issue that whether the government should own the Amtrak, a railway company. The professor's lecture deals with the same topic. However, he makes the point that public transportation should not be canceled or owned by the private, which contradicts what the reading passage states.

First, even when the reading passage suggests that the public transport cannot make profit and even lose money, the professor argues in the lecture that government funding railway lines was not supposed to make profit but to provide services for the people of remote and unpopulated area. This is because people living in remote area also have the right to take the public transport. Obviously, the professor’s argument disproves its counterpart in the reading.

Second, the passage says it's unfair to the private transportation company, because the government didn't support those companies so that they have no advantages in the price. Nevertheless, the professor claimed that government have already given much funding to the airline company, such as paying bills from the air traffic control towers, training aviators and weather forecasting organizations.

Third, another point showed in the passage is that trains are not so popular in America. Most of the people travel by cars instead of trains. So the government should no longer funding the railway. But in the lecture, the professor argues that the reason why people don't take trains is not because trains was not popular but because of the low speed and efficiency. If the government keeps funding the train system to improve the service and make it more affordable and faster, people will enjoy taking trains.

In conclusion, the professor states the ideawhich is in an opposing angle to the reading passage that government should provide more funding for the railway system instead of cancel it.

独立写作：

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