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李清照声声慢数种英文译本

李清照声声慢数种英文译本

李清照声声慢数种英文译本(2011-04-27 10:05:41)转载分类:文学留声机标签:杂谈寻寻觅觅,冷冷清清,凄凄惨惨戚戚。

乍暖还寒时候,最难将息。

三杯两盏淡酒,怎敌他晚来风急!雁过也,正伤心,却是旧时相识。

满地黄花堆积,憔悴损,如今有谁堪摘?守着窗儿,独自怎生得黑!梧桐更兼细雨,到黄昏,点点滴滴。

这次第,怎一个愁字了得?1 任治稷、余正译Sheng Sheng ManRestless and lost,Cold and lonely,Wretched, miserable and anxious.Early warmth laced with chill,Hardest time for convalescing.Two or three cups of light wine,No antidote against the gusty evening wind.Wild geese just flying by,Heart-wrenching,Turned out to be old acquaintances.The yard piled up all over with yellow blossoms, Withered and ruined,Now none worth picking.Vigil by the window alone,What heavy time before dark!Wutong trees on top of fine drizzling,Until dark,Dripping and trickling,Things in this order,How gloomy can the "gloom" be?2龚景浩译Sheng Sheng Man(Song) Li Qing ZhaoI search and seek,I'm lonely and depressed,I'm sad, weepy, and feeling low.When 'tis suddenly warm but remains cold,That is the time really hard to cope.Two, three cups of light wine —How are they to resist the assault of evening gusts?A flock of wild geese flew past,It hurts to hear them cry, though we're old acquaintances. Chrysanthemums lie about in piles.They are now withered and which ones are worth picking? Alone by the casement,How am I to bear the darkness?Add to this, the parasol and a thin rain falling.By dusk time,The dipping became incessant.Steeped in a mood such as this,To say I am sad is woefully inadequate.3杨宪益、戴乃迭译Sheng Sheng ManLi QingzhaoSeeking, seeking,Chilly and quiet,Desolate, painful and miserable.Even when it's warmer there is still a chill, It is most difficult to keep well.Three or two cups of light wine,How can they ward off the strong morning wind? Wild geese fly past, while I'm broken-hearted; But I recognize they are my old friends. Fallen chrysanthemums piled up on the ground, So withered,Who would pluck them?Leaning on the window,How can I pass the time till night alone?The drizzle falls on the wutong trees,Rain-drops drip down at dusk.At a time like this,What immense sorrow I must bear!4徐忠杰译ShengshengmanI've a sense of something missing I must seek.Everything about me looks dismal and bleak.Nothing that gives me pleasure, I can find.Even the weather has proved most unkind.'Tis warm, but abruptly it turns cold again.An unbroken rest — most difficult to obtain.Three cups of thin wine would utterly fail —To cope with the rising evening gale.Myself, into woe, a flight of wild geese has thrown. But with them, very familiar I have grown.About the ground, chrysanthemums are bestrewn. Gathering into heaps — bruised — withering soon. With myself in utter misery and gloom,Who cares to save them from their approaching doom? Standing by the window — watching in anguish stark, Could I bear alone the sight until it is dark?Against the tung and plane trees, the wind rises high. The drizzle becomes trickles, as even draws nigh. How, in the word "Misearble," can one find —The total effects of all these on the mind!5卓振英译Beats Slowing DownFumbling and searching, at a loss I feel,At a loss in such lonely melancholyAnd plaintive solitude as seem unreal.Th' turn of cold and warmth is, incredibly,The most miserable time to endure,Of th' chill of morning winds how can I cureMyself with a few cups of wine impure?'Tis heart-rending to see th' wild geese in th' sky —My acquaintances of old — southward fly! Chrysanthemums now flourish here and there,But who would care to pluck them, feeling blue? Sitting alone at th' window in despair,Ere night falls I know not how to pull through.Now dripping and dropping incessantlyOn the Chinese parasols is the rain.Alas, much much more than anxiety,At such a time, is what one must sustain!本帖最后由 enjoyyjw 于 10-1-3 17:52 编辑寻寻觅觅,冷冷清清,凄凄惨惨戚戚。

(完整版)英文版《声声慢》许渊冲译

(完整版)英文版《声声慢》许渊冲译

声声慢Tune:"Slow, Slow Tune"[许渊冲译]寻寻觅觅冷冷清清I look for what I miss;I know not what it is.凄凄惨惨戚戚I feel so sad, so drear,So lonely, without cheer.乍暖还寒时候最难将息How hard is itTo keep me fitIn this lingering cold!三杯两盏淡酒怎敌他晚来风急Hardly warmed upBy cup on cupOf wine so dry,Oh, how could IEndure at dusk the driftOf wind so swift?雁过也正伤心却是旧时相识It breaks my heart, alas!To see the wild geese pass,For they are my acquaintances of old.*****************************满地黄花堆积憔悴损而今有谁堪摘The ground is covered with yellow flowers Faded and fallen in showers.Who will pick them up now?守着窗儿独自怎生得黑Sitting alonw at the window, howCould I but quickenThe pace of darkness which won't thicken?梧桐更兼细雨到黄昏点点滴滴这次第怎一个愁字了得On parasol-trees leaves a fine rain drizzles As twilight grizzles.Oh! what can I do with a griefBeyond belief?。

李清照 声声慢英文翻译教学文案

李清照 声声慢英文翻译教学文案

Tune:"Slow, Slow Tune"[许渊冲译]寻寻觅觅冷冷清清I look for what I miss;I know not what it is.凄凄惨惨戚戚I feel so sad, so drear,So lonely, without cheer.乍暖还寒时候最难将息How hard is itTo keep me fitIn this lingering cold!三杯两盏淡酒怎敌他晚来风急Hardly warmed upBy cup on cupOf wine so dry,Oh, how could IEndure at dusk the driftOf wind so swift?雁过也正伤心却是旧时相识It breaks my heart, alas! To see the wild geese pass,For they are my acquaintances of old.满地黄花堆积憔悴损而今有谁堪摘The ground is covered with yellow flowersFaded and fallen in showers.Who will pick them up now?守着窗儿独自怎生得黑Sitting alonw at the window, howCould I but quickenThe pace of darkness which won't thicken?梧桐更兼细雨到黄昏点点滴滴这次第怎一个愁字了得On parasol-trees leaves a fine rain drizzlesAs twilightgrizzles.Oh! what can I do with a griefBeyond belief? 英译版本二:林语堂译So dim, so dark,So dense, so dull,So damp, so dank,So dead!The weather, now warm, now cold,Makes it harderThan ever to forget!How can a few cups of thin wineBring warmth againstThe chilly winds of sunset?I recognize the geese flying overhead:My old friends,Bring not the old memories back!Let Fallen flowers lie where they fall.To what purposeAnd for whom should I decorate ?By the window shut,Guarding it along,To see the sky has turned so black!And the dizzle on the kola nutKeeps on droning:Pit-a-pat, pit-a-pat!Is this the kind of mood and momentTo be expressedBy one word "sad?"英译版本<三>龚景浩译A Rhyming Song — Long Form(Song)Li Qing zhaoI search and seek ,I’m lonely and depressed ,I’m sad , weepy , and feeling low . When’tis suddenly warm but remains cold ,That is the time really hard to cope .Two , three cups of light wine—How are they to resist the assault of evening gusts ?A flock of wild geese flew past ,In hurts to hear them cry , though we’re old acquaintances . Chrysanthemums lie about in piles .They are now withered and which ones are worth picking ? Alone by the casemeng ,How am I to bear the darkness ?Add to this , the parasol trees and a thin rain falling .By dusk time ,The dripping became incessant . Steeped in a mood such as this,To say I am sad is woefully inadequate .。

李清照 声声慢英文翻译教案资料

李清照 声声慢英文翻译教案资料

李清照声声慢英文翻译Tune:"Slow, Slow Tune"[许渊冲译]寻寻觅觅冷冷清清I look for what I miss;I know not what it is.凄凄惨惨戚戚I feel so sad, so drear,So lonely, without cheer.乍暖还寒时候最难将息 How hard is itTo keep me fitIn this lingering cold!三杯两盏淡酒怎敌他晚来风急Hardly warmed upBy cup on cupOf wine so dry,Oh, how could IEndure at dusk the driftOf wind so swift?雁过也正伤心却是旧时相识It breaks my heart, alas! To see the wild geese pass,For they are my acquaintances of old.满地黄花堆积憔悴损而今有谁堪摘The ground is covered with yellow flowersFaded and fallen in showers.Who will pick them up now?守着窗儿独自怎生得黑Sitting alonw at the window, howCould I but quickenThe pace of darkness which won't thicken?梧桐更兼细雨到黄昏点点滴滴这次第怎一个愁字了得 On parasol-trees leaves a fine rain drizzlesAs twilight grizzles.Oh! what can I do with a griefBeyond belief?英译版本二:林语堂译So dim, so dark,So dense, so dull,So damp, so dank,So dead!The weather, now warm, now cold, Makes it harderThan ever to forget!How can a few cups of thin wine Bring warmth againstThe chilly winds of sunset?I recognize the geese flying overhead: My old friends,Bring not the old memories back!Let Fallen flowers lie where they fall. To what purposeAnd for whom should I decorate ?By the window shut,Guarding it along,To see the sky has turned so black! And the dizzle on the kola nutKeeps on droning:Pit-a-pat, pit-a-pat!Is this the kind of mood and momentTo be expressedBy one word "sad?"英译版本<三>龚景浩译A Rhyming Song — Long Form(Song) Li Qing zhaoI search and seek ,I’m lonely and depressed ,I’m sad , weepy , and feeling low .When’tis suddenly warm but remains cold ,That is the time really hard to cope .Two , three cups of light wine—How are they to resist the assault of evening gusts ?A flock of wild geese flew past ,In hurts to hear them cry , though we’re old acquaintances . Chrysanthemums lie about in piles .They are now withered and which ones are worth picking ? Alone by the casemeng ,How am I to bear the darkness ?Add to this , the parasol trees and a thin rain falling . By dusk time ,The dripping became incessant .Steeped in a mood such as this,To say I am sad is woefully inadequate .。

李清照《声声慢》(寻寻觅觅,冷冷清清)三种版本英译

李清照《声声慢》(寻寻觅觅,冷冷清清)三种版本英译

李清照《声声慢》(寻寻觅觅,冷冷清清)三种版本英译【原词】声声慢李清照寻寻觅觅,冷冷清清,凄凄惨惨戚戚。

乍暖还寒时候,最难将息。

三杯两盏淡酒,怎敌他、晚来(晓来)风急?雁过也,正伤心,却是旧时相识。

满地黄花堆积,憔悴损,如今有谁堪摘?守著窗儿独自,怎生得黑!(守着窗儿,独自怎生得黑?)梧桐更兼细雨,到黄昏、点点滴滴。

这次第,怎一个愁字了得!(?)英译一(许渊冲译文):Slow,Slow TuneLi QingzhaoI look for what I miss;I miss not what it is.I feel so sad,so drear,So lonely,without cheer.How hard is itTo keep me fitIn this lingering cold!Hardly warmed upBy cup on cupOf wine so dry,O how could IEndure at dusk the driftOf wind so swift?It breaks my heart,alas!To see the wild geese pass,For they are my acquaintances of old.The ground is covered with yellow flowers,Faded and fallen in showers.Who will pick them up now?Sitting alone at the window,howCould I but quickenThe pace of darkness that won’t thicken?On plane’s broad leaves a fine rain drizzlesAs twilight grizzles.O what can I do with a griefBeyond belief?———摘自《宋词三百首鉴赏》(汉英对照),P682。

《声声慢》英译赏析(译)

《声声慢》英译赏析(译)

徐中杰译本: I've a sense of something missing I must seek. Everything about me looks dismal and bleak. Nothing that gives me pleasure, I can find. Even the weather has proved most unkind. It is warm, but abruptly it turns cold again. An unbroken rest most difficult to. obtain. Three cups of thin wine would utterly fail. To cope with the rising evening gale. Myself, into woe, a flight of wild geese has thrown. But with them, very familiar I have grown. About the ground, cluysandiernums are bestrewn. Gathering into heaps——bruised——withering soon. With myself in utter misery and gloom, Who cares to save them from their approaching doom? Standing by the window-watching in anguish stark, Could I bear alone the sight until it is dark? Against the tung and plane trees, the wind rises high. The drizzle becomes trickles, as even draws nigh. How, in the word "Miserable", can one find- The total effects of all these on the mind! 林语堂译本: So dim, so dark, So dense, so dull, So damp, sodank, So dead! The weather, now warm, now cold, Makes it harder .Than ever to forget! How can a few cups of thin wine/Bring warmth against .The chilly winds of sunset? I recognize the geese flying overhead: My old friends, Bring not the old memories back! Let fallen flowers lie where they fall. To what purpose .And for whom should 1 decorate? By the window shut, Guarding it alone, To see the sky has turned so black! And the drizzle on the kola nut. Keeps on droning: Pit-a-pat, pit-a-pat! Is this the kind of mood and moment. To be expressed By one word "sad"? 杨宪益夫妇译本: Seeking, seeking, Chilly and quiet, Desolate, painful and miserable. Even when it's warmer there is still a chill It is most difficult to keep well. Three or two cups of light wine, How can they ward off the strong? Wild geese fly past, while I'm broken-hearted; ButI recoze they are my old friends. Fallen chrysanthemums piled up on the ground,So withered,Who would pluck them up now? Leaning on the window, How can I pass the time till night alone? The drizzle falls on the wutong trees, Raindrops drip down at dusk. At a time like this, What immense sorrow I must bear! 许渊冲译本: I look for what I miss; I know not what it is. I feel so sad, so drear, So lonely, without cheer. How hard is it To keep me fit In this lingering cold! By cup on cup Of wine so dry Oh, how could I Endure at dusk the drift Of wind so swift? It breaks my heart, alas, To see the wild geese pass, For they are my acquaintances of old. The ground is covered with yellow flowers, Fadedand fallen in showers. Who will pick them up now? Sitting alone at the window, how Could I but quicken The pace of darkness that won't thicken? On plane's broad leaves a fine rain drizzles As twilight grizzles. Oh, what can I do with a grief Beyond belief!。

声声慢-诗歌翻译

声声慢-诗歌翻译

这次第,怎一个愁字了得!
许渊冲译:Oh, what can I do with a grief Beyond belief! 林语堂译:Is this the kind of mood and moment. To be expressed By one word "sad"?
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下面运用许渊冲所提诗词“ 翻译三美论”对《声声慢》两种英译文进行欣赏.
词牌名《声声慢》 许渊冲译:Slow,slow song 林语堂译:Forlorn
寻寻觅觅,冷冷清清,凄凄惨惨戚戚。 许渊冲译:I look for what I miss; I know not what it is. I feel so sad, so dread, So lonely, without cheer. 林语堂译:So dim, so dark, So dense, so dull, So damp, so dank, So dead!
许渊冲译:By cup on cup Of wine so dry Oh, how could I Endure at dusk the drift Of wind so swift?
林语堂译:How can a few cups of thin wine/Bring warmth against .The chilly winds of sunset?
英汉诗歌不同的音韵节奏规律使得翻译中难以实现原文诗歌韵律的复制或再现 , 要使读者实现对音的审美和感悟, 就要求译者把文本转化为读者能理解的方式来 表达。
三美(beautiful in sense , in sound, and in form)---许渊冲
二、形美 英汉互译时一般采取短句对短句, 长句对长句, 问句对问句, 与原词形式上达到相 近的效果 三、意美 意境是诗歌的灵魂, 把握诗歌的意境是翻译的关键所在。而诗歌的意境往往寓于 其音韵节奏和形式之中, 读者对意美的感受往往来自于他对音美和形美的理解。 三美之中, 意美最重要。试想, 如果翻译诗歌连诗歌要表达的意境都没有呈现出来, 要音美和形美还有何意义呢?

戏曲声声慢元宵英文版

戏曲声声慢元宵英文版

戏曲声声慢元宵英文版摘要:一、戏曲声声慢元宵的背景与意义1.元宵节简介2.戏曲声声慢的起源与特点二、戏曲声声慢元宵的活动内容1.猜灯谜2.看花灯3.戏曲表演三、戏曲声声慢元宵的英文介绍1.元宵节的英文表述2.戏曲声声慢的英文翻译3.活动内容的英文描述四、结论正文:【一、戏曲声声慢元宵的背景与意义】元宵节,又称上元节,是我国传统的节日之一,正月十五日为元宵节,又称“灯节”,因为在这一天,各地会举行丰富多彩的灯会活动。

戏曲声声慢是一种起源于我国北方的传统戏曲剧种,以其优美动人的唱腔和丰富多彩的表演形式深受人们喜爱。

在元宵这个喜庆的节日里,戏曲声声慢的演出为人们带来了一场视听盛宴。

【二、戏曲声声慢元宵的活动内容】在戏曲声声慢元宵活动中,猜灯谜、看花灯和戏曲表演是不可或缺的环节。

猜灯谜是人们在元宵节期间喜闻乐见的一项活动,既能丰富民间文化生活,又能增进亲朋好友间的感情。

看花灯则是元宵节最具特色的景象之一,各地都会举办盛大的花灯展览,吸引无数游客前来观赏。

在戏曲声声慢元宵活动中,精彩的戏曲表演无疑是最引人入胜的,演员们通过精湛的技艺,将各种角色表现得栩栩如生,令人如痴如醉。

【三、戏曲声声慢元宵的英文介绍】元宵节的英文表述为“Lantern Festival”,它起源于汉代,盛行于隋唐,已有两千多年的历史。

戏曲声声慢的英文翻译为“Slow Sound of Opera”,这一剧种具有鲜明的地方特色,以其优美动人的唱腔和丰富多彩的表演形式在国内外享有盛誉。

关于戏曲声声慢元宵的活动内容,英文描述可以为:“In the Lantern Festival, people can enjoy various activities such as 猜灯谜(riddles on lanterns), watching colorful lanterns, and performances of the Slow Sound of Opera, making it a perfect blend of traditional Chinese culture and entertainment.”【四、结论】戏曲声声慢元宵将传统戏曲艺术与元宵佳节相结合,为人们提供了一个了解和欣赏传统文化的平台。

声声慢林语堂翻译

声声慢林语堂翻译

李清照原词】声声慢寻寻觅觅,冷冷清清,凄凄惨惨戚戚。

乍暖还寒时候,最难将息。

三杯两盏淡酒,怎敌他晓来风急?雁过也,正伤心,却是旧时相识。

满地黄花堆积,憔悴损,如今有谁堪摘?守著窗儿独自,怎生得黑!梧桐更兼细雨,到黄昏、点点滴滴。

这次第,怎一个愁字了得!【林语堂译作】Slow slow tune (Li Qingzhao )So dim, so dark,So dense, so dull,So damp, so dank,So dead!The weather, now warm, now cold, Makes it harder than ever to forget! How can thin wine and breadServe as protectionAgainst the piercing wind of sunset! Wild geese pass over headThat they are familiarLets it more lamentable yet!The ground is strewn with staidAnd withered petalsFor whom now should they be vase set? By the window shut,Guarding it along,To see the sky has turned so black! And on the colanutTo hear the drizzle drownAt dust: Pit-a-pat, pit-a-pat!Is this a mood and momentOnly to be called “sad”?。

古诗词名句英文翻译欣赏及背诵

古诗词名句英文翻译欣赏及背诵

A lonely stranger in a strange land I am cast,
I miss my family all the more on every festive day.
大江东去,浪淘尽,千古风流人物。[苏轼《念奴娇·赤壁怀古》]
The endless river eastward flows; with its huge waves are gone all those gallant heroes of bygone years.
I sigh, learning that no man's happiness in complete;
Even a pair thought well-matched
May find disappointment.
枉费了,意悬悬半世心,好一似,荡悠悠三更梦。忽喇喇似大厦倾,昏惨惨似灯将尽。呀!一场欢喜忽悲辛。叹人世,终难定![曹雪芹《红楼梦》]
In vain her anxious thought for half a lifetime,
For like a disturbing dream at dead of night,
Like the thunderous collapse of a great mansion,
在天愿做比翼鸟,在地愿为连理枝。[白居易《长恨歌》]
In heaven let us be two birds flying ever together, and on earth two trees with branches interlocked forever.
叹人间,美中不足今方信。纵然是齐眉举案,到底意难平。[曹雪芹《红楼梦》]

英文版《声声慢》许渊冲译

英文版《声声慢》许渊冲译

声声慢 Tune:"Slow, Slow Tune"[许渊冲译]寻寻觅觅冷冷清清I look for what I miss;I know not what it is.凄凄惨惨戚戚I feel so sad, so drear,So lonely, without cheer.乍暖还寒时候最难将息How hard is itTo keep me fitIn this lingering cold!三杯两盏淡酒怎敌他晚来风急Hardly warmed upBy cup on cupOf wine so dry,Oh, how could IEndure at dusk the driftOf wind so swift雁过也正伤心却是旧时相识It breaks my heart, alas!To see the wild geese pass,For they are my acquaintances of old.*****************************满地黄花堆积憔悴损而今有谁堪摘The ground is covered with yellow flowers Faded and fallen in showers.Who will pick them up now守着窗儿独自怎生得黑Sitting alonw at the window, howCould I but quickenThe pace of darkness which won't thicken梧桐更兼细雨到黄昏点点滴滴这次第怎一个愁字了得On parasol-trees leaves a fine rain drizzles As twilight grizzles.Oh! what can I do with a griefBeyond belief。

李清照 声声慢英文翻译

李清照 声声慢英文翻译

Tune:"Slow, Slow Tune"[许渊冲译]寻寻觅觅冷冷清清I look for what I miss;I know not what it is.凄凄惨惨戚戚I feel so sad, so drear,So lonely, without cheer.乍暖还寒时候最难将息How hard is itTo keep me fitIn this lingering cold!三杯两盏淡酒怎敌他晚来风急Hardly warmed upBy cup on cupOf wine so dry,Oh, how could IEndure at dusk the driftOf wind so swift?雁过也正伤心却是旧时相识It breaks my heart, alas! To see the wild geese pass,For they are my acquaintances of old.满地黄花堆积憔悴损而今有谁堪摘The ground is covered with yellow flowersFaded and fallen in showers.Who will pick them up now?守着窗儿独自怎生得黑Sitting alonw at the window, howCould I but quickenThe pace of darkness which won't thicken?梧桐更兼细雨到黄昏点点滴滴这次第怎一个愁字了得On parasol-trees leaves a fine rain drizzlesAs twilightgrizzles.Oh! what can I do with a griefBeyond belief? 英译版本二:林语堂译So dim, so dark,So dense, so dull,So damp, so dank,So dead!The weather, now warm, now cold,Makes it harderThan ever to forget!How can a few cups of thin wineBring warmth againstThe chilly winds of sunset?I recognize the geese flying overhead:My old friends,Bring not the old memories back!Let Fallen flowers lie where they fall.To what purposeAnd for whom should I decorate ?By the window shut,Guarding it along,To see the sky has turned so black!And the dizzle on the kola nutKeeps on droning:Pit-a-pat, pit-a-pat!Is this the kind of mood and momentTo be expressedBy one word "sad?"英译版本<三>龚景浩译A Rhyming Song — Long Form(Song)Li Qing zhaoI search and seek ,I’m lonely and depressed ,I’m sad , weepy , and feeling low .When’tis suddenly warm but remains cold ,That is the time really hard to cope .Two , three cups of light wine—How are they to resist the assault of evening gusts ?A flock of wild geese flew past ,In hurts to hear them cry , though we’re old acquaintances . Chrysanthemums lie about in piles .They are now withered and which ones are worth picking ? Alone by the casemeng ,How am I to bear the darkness ?Add to this , the parasol trees and a thin rain falling . By dusk time ,The dripping became incessant .Steeped in a mood such as this,To say I am sad is woefully inadequate .。

李清照《声声慢》英译赏析(一)

李清照《声声慢》英译赏析(一)

李清照《声声慢》英译赏析(一)例1、寻寻觅觅,冷冷清清,凄凄惨惨戚戚。

林译:So dim, so dark,/ So dense, so dull,/ So damp, so dank,/ So dead! 杨译:Seeking, seeking,/ Chilly and quiet,/ Desolate, painful and miserable.徐译:Ive a sense of something missing I must seek./ Everything about me looks dismal and bleak. / Nothing that gives me pleasure, I can find.许译:I look for what I miss;/ I know not what it is./ I feel so sad, so drear,/ So lonely, without cheer.解析:1)林译全部选用单音节词,押头韵,且词语的选用层层递进,可谓独具匠心。

dim和dark表明天色已晚, dense和dull展现了浓重不化,寻觅不得的忧愁和失落,继而damp和dank渲染阴冷凄苦的氛围,最后dead推向高潮,体现了词人绝望无助,凄凉痛苦的内心。

译文言语简练,内涵丰富。

2)杨译用七个形容词对应七对叠字,生动形象地展现了词人情感的变化,由表及里,层层深入。

3)徐译,相较而言,不免显得不够简短。

译者另辟蹊径,将词诗歌化,但由于句子偏长,翻译得过于明白,失去了原词的意境。

4)许译增加了主语,点明了寻觅之物是what I miss,似乎过于直白,少了原词的委婉朦胧之感。

译者韵脚的选择十分用心,miss与汉语觅音似,cheer与戚相似。

例2、乍暖还寒时候,最难将息。

林译:The weather, now warm, now cold,/ Makes it harder/ Than ever to forget!杨译:Even when its warmer there is still a chill, / It is most difficult to keep well.徐译:Even the weather has proved most unkind. / It is warm, but abruptly it turns cold again. / An unbroken rest-most difficult to obtain.许译:How hard is it / To keep me fit / In this lingering cold!解析:这两句说明天气突然转暖,却仍然寒意未消。

《声声慢》歌词英译

《声声慢》歌词英译

《声声慢》歌词英译填词:崔开潮寻寻觅觅冷冷清清月落乌啼月牙落孤井零零碎碎点点滴滴梦里有花梦里青草地长发引涟漪白布展石矶河童撑杆摆长舟渡古稀屋檐洒雨滴炊烟袅袅起蹉跎辗转宛然的你在哪里寻寻觅觅冷冷清清月落乌啼月牙落孤井零零碎碎点点滴滴梦里有花梦里青草地青砖伴瓦漆白马踏新泥山花蕉叶暮色丛染红巾屋檐洒雨滴炊烟袅袅起蹉跎辗转宛然的你在哪里Translation by SamuelBlack bricks are covered with tile varnish.The white horsetreads on the new earth.Bathed in the twilight are wild flowers and plantain leaves.Raindrops fall slowly off the eaves.Smoke curls up from the kitchen chimney.Time flies, especially when I’ve no clue where we can meet.I look for what I miss;I know not what it is.The crows caw when the moon sleeps in a well.Moments after moments;Little by little.I have blossoms and grass in my dreams.Your long hair ripples my heart.Flowing water clothes the rocks.The young boatman takes the aged across the river. Raindrops fall off the eaves.Smoke curls up from the kitchen chimney.Time flies, especially when I’ve no clue where we can meet.I look for what I miss;I know not what it is.The crows caw when the moon goes down into a well.Moments after moments;Little by little.I have blossoms and grass in my dreams.Black bricks are covered with tile varnish.The white horse treads on the new earth.Bathed in the twilight are wild flowers and plantain leaves.Raindrops fall slowly off the eaves.Smoke curls up from the kitchen chimney.Time flies, especially when I’ve no clue where we can meet.。

古诗翻译-声声慢

古诗翻译-声声慢

古诗翻译:声声慢
Sheng Sheng HamI search the seek,I’m lonely and depressed,I’m sad ,weepy , and feeling low .When it suddenly gets warm but shortly returns cold,That is the time really hard to cope.Two,three cups of light wine------How are they to resist the assault of evening gusts?A flock of wild geese flew past,It hurts to hear them cry,though we’re old acquaintances.Chrysanthemums lies about in piles.They are now withered and which ones are worth picking ?Alone by the casement,How am I to bear the darkness?Add to this , the parasol tree and a thin rain falling .By dusk time,The dripping became incessant ,Steeped in a mood such as this , To say I am sad is woefully inadequate.声声慢寻寻觅觅,冷冷清清,凄凄惨惨戚戚,最难将息,三杯两盏淡 酒,怎敌他,晚来风急!雁过也,正伤心,却是旧时相识。满地黄花堆积,憔悴损,如今 有谁堪摘!守得窗儿,独自怎生得黑!梧桐更兼细雨,到黄昏,点点滴滴。这次第,怎一 个愁字了得!

“三美原则”视角的《声声慢》英译本对比

“三美原则”视角的《声声慢》英译本对比

“三美原则”视角的《声声慢》英译本对比
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《声声慢》是唐代诗人李清照创作的一首词。

词以伤感的笔触,描述了词人在离别时惆怅无比的心情。

而“三美原则”是一种翻译手法,指的是对外文文学作品进行翻译时,应尽量保持原作的意境、韵味和语言特色。

下面是《声声慢》的中文原文:
寻寻觅觅,冷冷清清,凄凄惨惨戚戚。

乍暖还寒时候,最难将息。

三杯两盏淡酒,怎敌他、晚来风急?
雁过也,正伤心,却是旧时相识。

纵使他人推恨,不得我忘,也不关他。

斜风细雨,又何妨?搁浅鹧鸪天长雁远的青丝。

人面桃花相映红,人面不知何处去。

下面是这首词的英文翻译:
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李清照《声声慢》(寻寻觅觅,冷冷清清)三种版本英译

李清照《声声慢》(寻寻觅觅,冷冷清清)三种版本英译

李清照《声声慢》(寻寻觅觅,冷冷清清)三种版本英译【原词】声声慢李清照寻寻觅觅,冷冷清清,凄凄惨惨戚戚。

乍暖还寒时候,最难将息。

三杯两盏淡酒,怎敌他、晚来(晓来)风急?雁过也,正伤心,却是旧时相识。

满地黄花堆积,憔悴损,如今有谁堪摘?守著窗儿独自,怎生得黑!(守着窗儿,独自怎生得黑?)梧桐更兼细雨,到黄昏、点点滴滴。

这次第,怎一个愁字了得!(?)英译一(许渊冲译文):Slow,Slow TuneLi QingzhaoI look for what I miss;I miss not what it is.I feel so sad,so drear,So lonely,without cheer.How hard is itTo keep me fitIn this lingering cold!Hardly warmed upBy cup on cupOf wine so dry,O how could IEndure at dusk the driftOf wind so swift?It breaks my heart,alas!To see the wild geese pass,For they are my acquaintances of old.The ground is covered with yellow flowers,Faded and fallen in showers.Who will pick them up now?Sitting alone at the window,howCould I but quickenThe pace of darkness that won’t thicken?On plane’s broad leaves a fine rain drizzlesAs twilight grizzles.O what can I do with a griefBeyond belief?———摘自《宋词三百首鉴赏》(汉英对照),P682。

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