(完整版)2017年11月浙江省高考英语读后续写试题分析及范例点评
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2017年11月浙江省高考英语读后续写试题分析及范例点评
2017年11月浙江省高考英语科目写作第二节依然是读后续写,要求考生阅读一篇短文,根据所给情节续写,使短文与续写部分合成一个完整的故事。自2016年10月实行新高考以来,三次英语考试写作第二节均为读后续写,之所以如此,其中一个原因可能是,相比于其他类型考题而言,读后续写对测试学生的实际写作水平具有较高的有效性。这一点,从本次考试的试题与答题情况也可看出。
一、题型分析
与上两次考试一样,本次读后续写题依然是结合了对考生输入(input)与输出(output)两种语言能力的考查(关于这两者能力的考查和读后续写文体特征等,请参见笔者发表于本刊2017年第3期的《浙江省高考英语读后续写试题分析及范例点评》一文)。但是,虽然同属记叙文,本次考试所给短文的故事线索与逻辑复杂程度明显高于上两次,主要表现为次要信息较多,对考生把握情节主线有较强的干扰(具体见本文“试题要点分析”和“答题建议”)。从这一点来看,本次考试对考生的输入考查要求远高于上两次。另外,从所给段落开头语来看,第二段的开放性很强,考生可以有多种情节接续的可能,甚至可以有体裁的转换。结合这两点,
可以说,本次读后续写交际任务是否能很好地完成,基本上取决于对所给短文阅读理解任务完成的情况。这给我们的启示是,读后续写教学要见成效,阅读教学上所花的功夫绝对不能少。
二、题目要求
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
A Vacation with My Mother
I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprises and amusements,all because of my mother―loving,sweet,and yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.
My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota,and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached,David,my eight-year-old brother,and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if we’d ever see them again?Finally,the moment of our departure arrived,and we loaded suitcases,books,games,camping equipment,and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get the purse and traveler’
s checks Mom had forgotten.
David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept:“You stand outside the door and play lookout (放哨)while I go,and I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.”
I had terrible pictures in my mind:“Honey,where are the kids?”“What?!Oh,Gosh…I thought they were being awfully quiet.”We were never actually left behind in a strange city,but we weren’t about to take any chances.
On the fourth or fifth night,we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time,Mom suddenly got a great idea:Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there?David and I became nervous. To our great relief,Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections (反?Γ?. If a strange family showed up on her front doorsteps,Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town. 注意:
1.所?m写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;