雅思写作-议论文部分满分范文分析

雅思写作-议论文写作部分满分范文分析

利用好剑桥系列中的范文，对提高写作的巨大帮助不言而喻。

议论文部分包含两种题型：（1）Discussion/Report（2）Argumentation

Disccusion/Report:通常是对某一现象的原因，某一问题的解决方案及其影响的分析讨论。这类题目要求考生结合自己的已有知识，生活经验及对社会问题的见解展开充分的理由阐述。题目所占比例不及辩论类题目多。

基本布局：

Introduction-----介绍问题产生的背景(background)

阐述问题的原因（causes/reasons）

Body----------- 提出解决方案(solutions)

Conclusion------ 总结body部分

There are many problems with students’ behavior in many countries. What are the causes and what are your solutions?

para 1Poor student behavior seems to be an increasingly widespread problem and I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this.

话题+概括原因

para 2In many countries, the birth rate is decreasing so that families are smaller with fewer children. These children are often spoilt, not in terms of love and attention because working parents do not have the time for this, but in more material ways. They are allowed to have whatever they want, regardless of price, and to behave as they please. This means that the children grow up without consideration for others and without any understanding of where their standard of living comes from.

本段写家庭方面的原因。In terms of 和regardless of 两个很棒的连接词，学会使用

para 3When they get to school age they have not learnt any self control or discipline. They have less respect for their teachers and refuse to obey school rules in the way that their parents did. 似乎可以合并到上一段

para 4Teachers continually complain about this problem and measures should be taken to combat the situation. But I think the solution to the problem lies with the families, who need to be more aware of the future consequences of spoiling their children. If they could

raise them to be considerate of others and to be social, responsible individuals, the whole community would benefit.

本段提出解决方案，依靠家庭教育。最后一句使用了虚拟语气。

para 5Perhaps parenting classes are needed to help them to do this, and high quality nursery schools could be established that would support families more in terms of raising the next generation. The government should fund this kind of parental support, because this is no longer a problem for individual families, but for society as a whole.

结尾段给出建议，办家长培训班，并且政府也要予以支持。提建议时，同样使用了虚拟语气。

Argumentation:通常以do you agree or disagree/discuss both views and give your own opinion.通览剑桥教材给出的范文，采用四段折中式的布局比较讨巧。一方面，从两个方面展开论述，可以有话可说；另一方面，字数也比较容易写够。此外，考官给出的一段评语，也足以可以看出“折中法”很受考官的青睐。

“It is suggested to introduc e the topic, examine both sides of the argument and express a clear position. Points should be well-argued and supported with examples.”

不建议考生轻易尝试“一边倒”的布局，风险太大。

基本布局：Introduction-------------------背景话题的引出

自己更倾向的一方观点（1）

Body---------自己不太倾向的一方观点（2）

Conclusion----重申（1）+（2）（借用paraphrase的方法）+可行建议

下面是一篇考官撰写的满分作文，让我们膜拜一下。连接词的使用精准到位，复杂句写的很熟练.学习的目标啊。

剑5-test2-writing task2

In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.

Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

Para 1It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school.(背景介绍) The trend is not restricted to rich students who have the money to travel, but is also evident among poorer