16英语一大作文【清华学姐】之终极模板1

英语一考研英语作文模板A（积极）

The topic reflected in the above scenario has triggered an avalanche of mixed reactions and debates not only in friend circles but in the blogosphere（博客容易让人眼前一亮）, which boils down to how valued it is to modern society. As is depicted in the illustration, ________（描述图画）in today’s Chinese society. Whoever, I believe, gains an insight into the connotation of the scenario will absolutely plunge into deep reverie.

This picture is thought-provoking in that it endeavors to convince its audience that ________（主旨）provides us with ballast for our daily life. There are profound objective reasons and subjective reasons in appearance of this kind of phenomena. As is generally known to all, in order to achieve greatness in a particular field--whether in arts, education, economy, science or politics ---any individual must contribute more energy to________（主旨）. Admittedly, whether we have the consciousness of________（主旨）or not also depends on a ton of objective factors, including our personality, schedule, circle of friends, living sphere, and financial situation etc.

If A equals completion of the valuable things, then the formula may be A equals X plus Y plus Z, with X being work, Y Leisure, and Z ________（主旨）.One example that immediately comes to our mind is the typical ----------（主旨）representative, ________ ( 具有代表性的人名，也可以写几个名人). If he hadn't done this, he would not achieve such brilliant achievements that the gazes of people are entirely attracted now. As the very significant foundation of human civilization advances, ________（主

旨）brings us a sense of enjoyment as well as spiritual enhancement, keeps us abreast of the time and even endows life and society with unique meanings----All of these serve to enrich the society. In the final analysis, to________（主旨）is to gain the capacity to elevate the self-realm to a certain height and replenish the society---and I would be hard-pressed to imagine a worthier destination.

这个月，上图所反映的话题无论是在朋友圈还是博客圈都引发了铺天盖地的争论和各种反应，归根到底，这显示出这个话题对于现代社会是多么有价值啊！来看这幅有象征意义的图画。像图中所描绘的一样，________（描述图画）。我相信，无论谁看到这幅内涵图，都会陷入深深的沉思。

这幅图引人深思的地方在于她在努力说服她的观众：________（主旨）为我们的日常生活提供了压舱物（也可以把：后面这句去掉重新写主旨句）。这种现象的出现有其深刻的客观原因和主观原因。众所周知，为了在特定领域塑造辉煌--不论是在艺术、科学抑或政治领域---任何人都必须耗费更多的精力在___________（主旨）上。诚然，我们是否有__________（主旨）意识，也是由一系列客观因素决定的，而这与我们的性格、计划、朋友圈、生活圈、经济状况（这些客观因素根据主旨变化）息息相关。

如果A等于完成有价值的事情，那么公式就是“A=X+Y+Z”,其中X是工作，Y是休闲，Z则是___________（主旨）。我们立刻能想到的例子就是（主旨的）的代表__________人名，有代表性的名人即可）。如果他没有做这件事情，也不会取得今天这样受人瞩目的辉煌成就。__________（主旨）作为人类文明进步的重要基础给我们带来愉悦感，使我们的精神得到升华，使我们紧跟时代潮流，她甚至赋予生命和社会以独特意义，而所有的这一切都有利于社会充实。总而言之，__________（主旨）是为了提升自我境界、充实社会---我很难想象一个比这个更有价值的目标了。