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国家级一等奖中考英语作文公开课课件
探索国家级一等奖中考英语作文公开课课件的奥秘As we delve into the mysteries of the nationally-acclaimed first-prize middle school English composition open class materials, we embark on a journey that not only enhances our understanding of effective teaching methods but also sheds light on the art of crafting impactful compositions. The materials, rich in content and innovative in approach, provide a comprehensive yet engaging platform for students to excel in their English writing skills.The slide deck is meticulously designed to cater to the needs of diverse learners, with a blend of basic grammar rules, advanced writing techniques, and real-life application scenarios. The opening slides introduce the importance of English writing in today's interconnected world, highlighting its role in communication, academic success, and career advancement.The focus then shifts to the nuts and bolts of essay writing, covering topics such as selecting an engaging topic, outlining the essay structure, and developing a strong thesis statement. The use of visual aids andinteractive examples makes these concepts easier to grasp and retain.The subsequent slides delve into the various stages of essay writing, including the introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion. Tips on how to write engaging introductions that capture the reader's attention, how to craft informative and coherent body paragraphs, and how to conclude on a strong note are discussed in detail. The emphasis is on clear and concise language, logical flow, and the effective use of transitional words and phrases.The slides also include samples of excellent essays, allowing students to gain insights into what makes a composition stand out. These samples are followed by exercises and activities that encourage students to apply what they have learned to their own writing.The nationally-acclaimed first-prize middle school English composition open class materials are not just a collection of slides; they are a comprehensive toolbox for enhancing writing skills. The materials are designed to inspire students to think critically, express themselves creatively, and communicate effectively in English. Byleveraging the strategies and techniques presented in these materials, students can take their writing to the nextlevel and achieve academic and personal success.**探索国家级一等奖中考英语作文公开课课件的奥秘** 当我们深入探索国家级一等奖中考英语作文公开课课件的奥秘时，我们踏上了一段旅程，这段旅程不仅增强了我们对有效教学方法的理解，还揭示了撰写有影响力的作文的艺术。
九年级中考英语总复习--作文讲评课件(共15张PPT)
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第二档（4-6分） 只能写出少部分内容要点，文中有许多语 法错误，只有个别句子可读。
第一档（0-3分）
只能写出语所要求内容有关的一些单词或 1-2个要点。正确抄写全部参考词汇给1分； 写出相关要点的词组给2-3分。
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英语作文
2018年九年级模拟考试英语作文
书面表达：近来，天津市正在创建全国文明城市，这一话题在我校引起了热
烈讨论。作为一名中学生，请根据下面提示信息给学校英语专栏写一篇短文，
呼吁大家如何为创建文明城市贡献力量。
1.见面跟人打招呼
2.与同学友好相处
提示词：
3.保持教室及社区环境卫生
评分标准： 第五档（ 13-15分）能写明全部要点，文
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中考英语作文优秀指导课件(共38张PPT)
Enjoy an article
Group learning 1:
Read the article and find out: 1 What’s the main idea of each paragraph? （每一段的主要内容是什么？） 2 What’s the writer’s opinion? What are the reasons?（作者的观点是什么？理由？） 3 Is the experience typical for the topic? （作者的亲身经历对于观点来说典型吗？） 4 Are there any good phrases or sentences? Underline them!（有好词好句吗？请划住。）
正方： Last year, I got into trouble learning math. I got poor grades on math and I was really worried. However, I believed that I could deal with it by
me much time, my eyesight became
worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some
personal information, I often got many unwanted calls.
自己的亲身经历
All in all, as middle school students, we should be far away from the mobile phones, and pay much attention to our study.
Group learning 2:
中考英语作文公开课PPT(37张)
problems 2. 迷恋网吧，打电脑游戏
Main body
3. ------
opinions ------
suggestions 1. 合理安排时间
2. 参加兴趣小组
Conclusion
3. ------
中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执 教课件 【推荐 】
中考英语作文教学PPT-(37页)-PPT执 教课件 【推荐 】
中考专题复习课
Writing
书面表达: 是中考英语中的必考
题，占卷面总分的12.5%，分 值为15 分 。
分析文章的形成过程
文章的形成过程：
单词 句子
短语，结构 +符号
段落
文章
如何把这些组织一篇文章？
首先，我们必须在头脑中构成一幅mind map. 在map的帮助下，我们就能有效的到达我们的 目的地。
How to give this writing an end?
Let’s make better use of our free time and make our life rich and colorful!
Why not put our free time to better use ? It is a good way to have a more colorful future.
第三步：抓住要点，列关键词
1.List some keywords about problems. Phrases: ______________________________ _______________________________
2. List some keywords about opinions. Phrases: ______________________________ _______________________________
中考英语作文讲评课(精品)PPT课件
The following points are for your reference: (所给
提示仅供参考)
1. What are the ways to make you happy?
2. Which way do you think is the best one to make
you happy?
内容（7分）+语言（8分）+文采（3分） 一、认真审题，结构合理
*写什么 (题目，参考问题）
Write at least 60 words about the topic "The best way to make me happy".
The following points are for your reference: (所给 提示仅供参考) 1. What are the ways to make you happy? 2. Which way do you think is the best one to make you happy? 3. Why do you feel happy in this way? (give at least two reasons)
3. Why do you feel happy in this way? (give at
least two reasons)
内容不全
The best way to make me happy is achieving good marks. I think this way is the best one to make me happy because it is the easiest ways and it can improve my ability so I think it is the best way. In this way, I can get some prizes, so I will feel happy, what’s more it can also make my parents happy.
2023年中考英语写作讲评课件(24张PPT)
• 严以律己，自尊自立 be strict with yourself, be a confident and independent person
• 勤于思考，勇于实践 use my head as often as possible≈think in a creative way, take action for my dream
you, mom, i love you.”
02
河南开封2021一模书面表达
人设，矛盾，影响
my mother and i my mother was a doctor. she was always busy in my memory. when i was little, she sometimes brought me to her office. while she was wor , i played by myself. busy as she was, she always spared as much time as she could to be with me. i was happy then. however, the situation that she was busy seemed unchanged as i entered junior high school. i met some problems at school. but most of the time, she wasn’t there when i wanted to talk with her about my problems. one day, i yelled at her because i thought she didn’t care about me enough. she had a long talk with me. i understood her more and felt so sorry about yelling at her. i knew she loved me deeply. soon, i will graduate from junior high school. as i look back, i can pick up all pieces of memories of her love for me. i want to say, “thank
• 勤于思考，勇于实践 use my head as often as possible≈think in a creative way, take action for my dream
you, mom, i love you.”
02
河南开封2021一模书面表达
人设，矛盾，影响
my mother and i my mother was a doctor. she was always busy in my memory. when i was little, she sometimes brought me to her office. while she was wor , i played by myself. busy as she was, she always spared as much time as she could to be with me. i was happy then. however, the situation that she was busy seemed unchanged as i entered junior high school. i met some problems at school. but most of the time, she wasn’t there when i wanted to talk with her about my problems. one day, i yelled at her because i thought she didn’t care about me enough. she had a long talk with me. i understood her more and felt so sorry about yelling at her. i knew she loved me deeply. soon, i will graduate from junior high school. as i look back, i can pick up all pieces of memories of her love for me. i want to say, “thank
初中英语作文讲评课件(PPT18张)
injured. When we do sports, do not get ourselves injured. 3. School hallways is always not wide, so don't crowded
when you up and down stairs. School hallways are always not wide enough, so don't
In short, follow what you learnt at school. You can be safe and you can also help save others.
书面表达
Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is very important to us students.
1.When we do sports, don't get ourselves injured. 2.School hallways are too narrow, so don't crowd
when we go upstairs or downstairs. 3.Don't quarrel or fight with classmates. 4.Keep clear of fires and don't play with fire. 5.Don't eat junk food.
____________________________________________________人____称______：____第____一______人____称____w____e__，______I________
when you up and down stairs. School hallways are always not wide enough, so don't
In short, follow what you learnt at school. You can be safe and you can also help save others.
书面表达
Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is very important to us students.
1.When we do sports, don't get ourselves injured. 2.School hallways are too narrow, so don't crowd
when we go upstairs or downstairs. 3.Don't quarrel or fight with classmates. 4.Keep clear of fires and don't play with fire. 5.Don't eat junk food.
____________________________________________________人____称______：____第____一______人____称____w____e__，______I________
中考英语作文省名师优质课赛课获奖课件市赛课一等奖课件
书面体现练习
因为社会旳发展，人们旳生活水平有了很大旳提升，但随之也出现了许多
问题。目前学校举行征文活动，请大家简介我们旳家乡，并为更加好地建
设家乡出筹划策。 要点如下： 1. 我们家乡过去是个小镇，……，如今……。(合适扩充) 2. 游玩旳最佳时节：春天。天气……景色…… 3. 存在问题：某些人不遵守交通规则； 污染严重，…… 4. 措施：自己……，希望政府…… 详细要求： 1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，笔迹工整； 2. 必须包括全部有关信息，并 作合适发挥。 3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数, 100词左右。
书面体现练习 目前越来越多旳学生使用和带手机进入校园，中学生是否应该带手机进入校园， 为此学生们展开了讨论。 赞成意见：1.目前是信息社会，手机是最快旳信息交流旳工具之一； 2.应充分利用好手机。如偶遇突发事故，可立即拨打手机求援； 3.可在每天学习之余利用手机游戏放松一下自己。 反对意见：1.学校已提供了公共电话，所以手机并不能带来更多旳以便，而且花费 较多； 2.若课堂接听手机会影响上课； 3.学生玩手机游戏或接发短信，将无法集中精力学习； 4.我们要拒绝成为低头族。 stop phubbing 不做低头族
But Jack didn’t wait for his thanks and went to school quickly. But he was still late for class.
Surely, there’re some problems. For example, some people don’t obey the traffic rules. That causes traffic accidents easily. And pollution is also another biggest problem. In many places, rubbish is thrown into lakes and rivers. So many of them are polluted. Because of this, I think the government should make stricter laws to protect the environment. As a teenager, I sho uld plant more trees around my neighborhood and help the police watch the traffic in my free time. I hope that everyone can do something to make a difference.
中考英语写作指导优秀课件(共22张PPT)
2017年河西一模作文
Stage 1: 审 体裁________________ 时态________________ 人称________________
Jim 是你的一位同学。请结合下面的提示写一篇短文， 把他介绍给大家，并说出你对他这些做法的看法。 （1）Jim的父母有钱，给他很多零花钱。 （2）Jim理解父母的不容易，不多花钱，想办法省钱； 他喜欢读书，在网上买书，有时去图书馆借书；别人 买饮料喝他却带水上学；从不花钱买零食。 （3）有人认为他的做法很怪异，但……。 参考词汇：零食 snacks 要求：（1）词数：80 ~ 100个。 （2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Jim’s parents work very hard and his family has become very rich.___________________________________________
• Homework : • 1. Correct the composition on the handout. • 2. Finish the composition according to the mind map.
Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.
假如你所在中学的校刊近期开辟英文专栏，征集发生 在大家身边的感人故事。请根据以下提示，为该专栏 投稿。 （1）在一个寒冷的早晨，你买早餐时看到前面的女 孩买了面包和牛奶。 （2）女孩要离开时，发现树下有一个老年乞丐，他 看上去又冷又饿。 （3）女孩走到乞丐身旁，把食物递给了他。 （4）乞丐向女孩道谢，女孩微笑着离开。 （5）你很感动…… 参考词汇：乞丐 beggar 感动 be moved 要求：（1）词数：80 ~ 100个。 （2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 On a cold morning, while I was…
中考英语写作公开课版省公开课一等奖全国示范课微课金奖PPT课件
She got home late and she was very tired.
2. He waited for, but they didn’t reach until the next day. He waited, but they didn’t arrived until the next day.
4/14
Correct the following sentences
1.He usually finishehsishihsohmoemweowrkorbkebfoerfeore his parents come back home from work.
2. We heard him wgoenutpustpasitrasi.rs. 3. This umbrella is much emxopreenesxivpeenthsaivne tthhaatn
3. Didn’t go home at once, he went into the book-shop. Instead of going home at once, he went into the book-shop.
7/14
Put the following sentences into English
2.. TThheeyyflayirnegfklyitiensginkittheespianrkthneowp.ark now.
3. They seem very happiylytotdodaya.y. 44.. HHee wwaass rreeaalllysosrorryryfofrorththata.t.
姓名
Tom
• 年纪
15
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
2. He waited for, but they didn’t reach until the next day. He waited, but they didn’t arrived until the next day.
4/14
Correct the following sentences
1.He usually finishehsishihsohmoemweowrkorbkebfoerfeore his parents come back home from work.
2. We heard him wgoenutpustpasitrasi.rs. 3. This umbrella is much emxopreenesxivpeenthsaivne tthhaatn
3. Didn’t go home at once, he went into the book-shop. Instead of going home at once, he went into the book-shop.
7/14
Put the following sentences into English
2.. TThheeyyflayirnegfklyitiensginkittheespianrkthneowp.ark now.
3. They seem very happiylytotdodaya.y. 44.. HHee wwaass rreeaalllysosrorryryfofrorththata.t.
姓名
Tom
• 年纪
15
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
2024年中考英语作文讲解课件
Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of (支持A的理由一).What is more, (理由二).Moreover,
(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly, (支持B的理由一)- Secondly (Besides)，
阐述缺点并论证
我的看法)Therefore,I would like to
(理由).because
总结自己的观点及理由
三、经典句式
1、It is obvious/apparent that...plays a vital part/role in...很显 然，……在……中有着/扮演着很重要的作用/角色。 2、has/have both favorable and unfavorable aspects,……既有优 点也有缺点。 3、Their opinions of...vary from person to person.关于……的观 点不一。 4、From my point ofview,every coin has two sides.在我看来，任 何事物都有两面性。 5、In spite of...,the advantages greatly outweighthe disadvantages. 尽管……,好处远远超过不好之处。
(理由二) . Thirdly (Finally),
(理由三).
说明两方的观点及理由
From my point of view,I think
2025年中考英语写作复习课课件(共25张PPT)
Write your story about growth according to your story line.
__________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________
correctly. • I write my story in 3 parts.
Homework
1. Finish writing the composition. 2. Polish your writing according to the checklist.
中考英语写作指导优质课件(共38张PPT)
要求：1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 80词左右。
健康的身体和保持愉悦的心情就变得尤为重要。请
Bad sample（0-3分）
• Students healthy is important. Even though have a good hard. But haven't healthy is not good. • Have a good fit is very important.
I want to have a mountain bike There is no doubt that everyone dreams of having something. As for me, I want to have a mountain bike. The reasons can be as follows. First of all, a mountain bike can be very useful because riding it to school can save a lot of time. I needn’t worry about being late any more. Besides, it’s also helpful for me to take some exercise. I believe I will lead a healthier life. What’s more, when I go out with friends, it will be more convenient to ride a mountain bike than taking the bus.
3.转折关系 but, while 4.因果关系 for, so,
健康的身体和保持愉悦的心情就变得尤为重要。请
Bad sample（0-3分）
• Students healthy is important. Even though have a good hard. But haven't healthy is not good. • Have a good fit is very important.
I want to have a mountain bike There is no doubt that everyone dreams of having something. As for me, I want to have a mountain bike. The reasons can be as follows. First of all, a mountain bike can be very useful because riding it to school can save a lot of time. I needn’t worry about being late any more. Besides, it’s also helpful for me to take some exercise. I believe I will lead a healthier life. What’s more, when I go out with friends, it will be more convenient to ride a mountain bike than taking the bus.
3.转折关系 but, while 4.因果关系 for, so,
中考英语作文指导优秀课件(共27张PPT)
高级词汇替换 1．but替换very The film we saw last night was very interesting. The film we saw last night was nothing but interesting. The film we saw last night was anything but boring. 2．suppose 替换should He is supposed to ( should ) have driven more slowly.
我们应该保护环境。
A
B
We should protect the environment.
It’s our duty to prot词
• Dear Daddy, • It’s a gift for Father’s Day when you are reading it. • I still remember the day last summer when I climbed the At first mountain with you. _______ , it was sunny and warm. Unluckily ________, it began raining on the half way. I complained to so you about the bad weather. I felt _____ cold ______I wanted However to give that up. _______, you put your coat on me and told me not Finallyand to give up. _______, I reached the top of the mountain enjoyed the beauty of the nature there. • Now I want to say: I love you. Daddy. You raise me up! • Happy Father’s Day! • Yours, • Mike
九年级全册英语作文讲评课件28张
heading
body
五四档档
endin三g二档档
一档
Part 1 basic structure(基本结构安排)
1. Heading should be brief
整 点题；两三个句子；概括性
体 2. Body should be strong
三 部
中心记述部分；层次分明
分
5) The teacher praised me
参考词汇：used to do, try one’s best, as long as
Para 3.Ending 小结呼应主题
美(beautify)
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My B☺igge如st 何Cha发ng生e in Junior Middle School Tloitm._e__w_e_n_t _b_☺y_q_你u_i_c_k的l_y_. 感_In__t受h_e__p_a_st_f_o_u_r_y_e_a_r_s,_I_h_a_v_e__c_h_a_n_g_e_d_a_____
My Biggest Change in Junior Middle School
Time went by quickly. In the past four years, I have changed a ot._____________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________
What have you got today?
(精选幻灯片)中考英语作文讲评课(优秀课件)
a way to make me happy. Everyday we
have PE lesson. These are a lot of interests
in it. So I feel happy in this way.
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The following points are for your reference: (所给
3. Why do you feel happy in this way? (give at
least two reasons)
内容不全
there are a lot of ways to make me happy.
The best way to make me happy is to play
basketball. To play computer games is also
提示仅供参考)
1. What are the ways to make you happy?
2. Which way do you think is the best one to make
you happy?
3. Why do you feel happy in this way? (give at
3
内容（7分）+语言（8分）+文采（3分） 一、认真审题，结构合理
*写什么 (题目，参考问题）
4
Free talk
What should we write about? What shouldn’t we (only) write about?
1. My school life 2. My dream teacher 3. The thing I hate to do 4. My opinions of keeping pet dogs 5.The best way to make me happy