小学英语作文指导课件.doc

小学英语作文写作指导

班级___________ 姓名____________

一、写人篇

1. 写单个的人。在写作时，如无特别要求，可以从他（她）的年龄、长相、

性格、爱好、籍贯、上下班（学）的方式等方面去写。

例文1：以“My friend”为题写一篇小作文。例文如下：

My friend

I have a good friend. His name is Zhang Peng. He is tall and strong.

He is very active. He has big eyes and a big nose. He has short hair. He is

twelve years old. He likes riding a bike. He usually goes to school by

bike. He likes making kites, too. We often go to the park to fly kites together.

2. 写群体的人物。如班级内的某些同学，家庭中的所有人物等。在写作时，

可以分别从长相、职业、爱好、上下班的方式等方面对所要描述的人物进

行描写。

例文2：以“My family ”为题写一篇小作文，介绍一下自己的家人。

My family

I have a warm（温暖的）family. There are four people in my family.

My father, my mother, my sister and I. My father is a doctor. He is tall and

strong. He works in a hospital. He goes to work by car. My mother is a teacher.

She is beautiful. She works in a school. She goes to work by bike. I am a

student. I like collecting stamps. I usually goes to work by bus. I am three

years older than my sister. I love my family.

3. 其他常见写人物的题目。如：“My pen pal”，“My English teacher”，“My

favourite star(明星)”等。

二、写物篇

1. 写动态的物，如动物等。在写作时，可以从所要描写动物的外貌特征、喜

好及你对所写动物的感情等方面去展开描述。

例文3：请以My favourite animal 为题写一篇小作文。例文如下：

My favourite animal

I have a rabbit. It ’s my favourite animal. It ’s name is Sweet. It has long

ears. It ’s very small. It ’s white. It has a short tail. It has red eyes. It likes eating carrots. It likes jumping. It I li’k e s itl o v v ee ryly.mu ch. It ’s my best friend.

2. 写静态的物。如描写我的学校，我的家乡，我的房间等等。描写这类事物

时，可以用There be句型来描述。可以写一写这些事物所拥有的景物和物

品等。

例文4：请以My school 为题写一篇小作文。例文如下：

My School

I study at Hope Primary School(希望小学). My school is very big and

beautiful. There are three buildings and a playground. There are many trees

near

the buildings and the playground. There is a garden in front of our teaching

building(教学楼). There are many beautiful flowers in the garden. We often

read books in the garden .I love my school very much.

3. 其他常见的写物小作文题目：“My village ”，“My bedroom”“My little dog ”

“Our classroom”等。

三、写事篇

1. 写一写自己或他人在某一天或某个周末的常做的事。在这样的作文题目中，

我们要先通过作文题目来判定整篇文章的时态。再在这种时态的基础上去

写出自己或他人在某一天的日常活动。如：什么时间起床、什么时间上班、

怎样上班、什么时间吃饭、什么时间回家、什么时间睡觉以及在白天还做

了什么事情等。

例文5：下面是Uncle Bill 工作日中的部分生活场景活动剪影，请你依据图

片和汉语提示用几句话写一写他的一天。

参考词汇：subway, after lunch, newspaper

乘地铁上班教数学午饭后看报纸

下午5:30 回家晚上看电视10:00睡觉

写作分析：本篇小作文给我们做了要求和提示，依据要求我们可以判断

Uncle Bill 差不多每天都在做着这样的事，因此我们应该用一般现在时

来写这篇文章。在写作时我们只要把提示要点都写出来就可以了（当然

我们还可以依据提示要点的提示去写出与提示相关的句子）。同时还要

注意，这篇文章的主语都是Uncle Bill, 动词要记着用第三人称单数。

例文如下：

Uncle Bill ’s Day

Uncle Bill is a teacher. He teaches math. He works in a school. He usually goes to work by subway. He has two classesin the morning. He often read

newspaper after lunch. He goes home at 5:30 in the afternoon every day. He

watches TV in the evening. He goes to bed at 10:00. He is very busy every

day.

其它题目：“My day”“My mother’s da”y“Li Lei ’s weeke”n等d。

2. 介绍自己或他人在将来的某一天或周末、节假日等的计划。

例文6：儿童节（Children Day）就要到了，你打算怎样度过这个儿童节，

请写几句话来介绍一下你的打算。

写作分析：通过要求，我们判定这篇小作文应该用将来时。把我们的一些

打算和我们的心情写出来即可。例文如下：

Children Day ’s P计la划n( )

Children Day is coming. I ’mvery happy. I ’mgoing to have a happy Children ’Dsay. First，I ’mgoing to the bookstore. I ’mgoing to buy some

comic books. Then , I ’m going to my grandparents ’home. I ’m going to have a

big dinner with my grandparents. And I ’m going to watch TV with them, too.