学生作文易犯错误
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5) Women now have risen highly in socialstatus.
6) There are many reasons for the changes in people’s diet. First, people can now afford expensive but nutritiousfood.
3) Television providing us with a vivid, colorful world, which enables us to enjoy lifethoroughly.
2．修饰方面
1) To keeຫໍສະໝຸດ Baidu the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to thecountryside.
6) The area thrives on competition since the same kind of shops are all grouped together. An example of this being the three big department stores, which are within a mile of eachother.
3) There are many ways to improve city traffic. For example widening the streets, building subways and soon.
4) By comparison, nuclear power has some distinct advantages. Such as it is clean andcheap.
4) The opportunity to be promoted in a joint venture will be smaller if one cannot speakEnglish.
5) In recent one and two years, people who take TOEFL havedecreased.
5) Smoking is harmful to health. On the one hand, it can cause lung cancer. On the other hand, it can increase the chances of having a miscarriage if a woman ispregnant.
3．一致方面
1) Whether one enjoys or resents advertisements, we are actually bombarded with it every hour of theday.
2) Now fruit and vegetables can be seen everywhere when it is inseason.
2) Without television, people can’t get information which comes from other parts of the worldimmediately.
3) At the age of six, my father began to give me Englishlessons.
7) Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me of the difficulty of the course and how long itlasted.
8) Making cities greener has a lot of advantages, such as its improvement of our environment, its contribution to our industry and its making our citiesbeautiful.
学生作文易犯错误
学生在写作中会出各种各样的错误，现将以往试卷中，学生常犯的错误归纳为以下九个方面（请予以改正）：
1．指代方面
1) Sometimes teachers will inform students of the heavy burden they have tobear.
2) People have been fighting against the influence of TV commercials, but it often provesuseless.
3) The eating habit of Chinese people have changed dramatically in the pastdecade.
4) One serious problem human beings are faced with are how to use our natural resourceseconomically.
2) In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not affordit.
3) We students should study / learn as much as knowledge as possible so that we can be fully prepared for thefuture.
4) Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people’s living standard has greatlyimproved.
5) To improve one’s writing skill, regular practice isessential.
6) Some college graduates couldn’t find a better job, so they decided to continue their highereducation.
7．搭配方面
1) However the speed of a car is much faster than that of abicycle.
5) People now pay much attention to nutrition, so they chose to eat meat and drinkmilk.
6) There are so many countries using English that it had been regarded as an internationallanguage.
6．连词方面
1) One should improve his English, one should overcome difficulties instudies.
2) The city is seriously polluted, people have no fresh air to breathenow.
3) But it may occur some newproblems.
4) Opportunities are only belonged to those who workhard.
B.
1) The pace of our modern life is getting more faster andfaster.
2) Electricity is the most important power in our daily life than other kinds ofpower.
3) Thus our city will be greatly beautiful than it isnow.
6) In the past few years, grain has decreased by nearly20%.
8．误用问题
1) With the industrious development, there is a great need for different kinds ofenergy.
5) Apart from ability, a person who is most likely to be employed in a big company should have three good personality traits. A good sense of humor, sensitivity to others’ needs and skill in socialrelations.
5．断句方面
1) TV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live withoutit.
2) We must protect our environment. Since the earth is the only place human beings can livein.
5) But other people argue that everyone has a certain opportunity and a wise man will never lose it whenever itarises.
6) Participating in sports is good for our physical health, and through it we can also train ourcharacter.
3) When people try to attain high speed by using cars and buses, and this creates newproblems.
4) One is watching TV and he will always see one or two advertisements betweenprograms.
7) TV commercials have a profound influence on our every daylife.
9．语法方面
A.
1) Narrow streets easily cause to happen many trafficaccidents.
2) A great change has been taken place sincethen.
2) Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which effect our dailylife.
3) First we should use our natural resources in an economicway.
4) We must make continualefforts.
2) People not only want to eat enough food, but also want to eatbetter.
3) The price of milk isn’t higher thangrain.
4) The energy problem is currently of great concern to a nation, the world, and humanbeings.
7) Study hard now so that we can cope with the change and challenge of the twenty-firstcentury.
4．平行方面
1) While we reduce the number of vehicles, the speed of traffic can beincreased.
6) There are many reasons for the changes in people’s diet. First, people can now afford expensive but nutritiousfood.
3) Television providing us with a vivid, colorful world, which enables us to enjoy lifethoroughly.
2．修饰方面
1) To keeຫໍສະໝຸດ Baidu the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to thecountryside.
6) The area thrives on competition since the same kind of shops are all grouped together. An example of this being the three big department stores, which are within a mile of eachother.
3) There are many ways to improve city traffic. For example widening the streets, building subways and soon.
4) By comparison, nuclear power has some distinct advantages. Such as it is clean andcheap.
4) The opportunity to be promoted in a joint venture will be smaller if one cannot speakEnglish.
5) In recent one and two years, people who take TOEFL havedecreased.
5) Smoking is harmful to health. On the one hand, it can cause lung cancer. On the other hand, it can increase the chances of having a miscarriage if a woman ispregnant.
3．一致方面
1) Whether one enjoys or resents advertisements, we are actually bombarded with it every hour of theday.
2) Now fruit and vegetables can be seen everywhere when it is inseason.
2) Without television, people can’t get information which comes from other parts of the worldimmediately.
3) At the age of six, my father began to give me Englishlessons.
7) Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me of the difficulty of the course and how long itlasted.
8) Making cities greener has a lot of advantages, such as its improvement of our environment, its contribution to our industry and its making our citiesbeautiful.
学生作文易犯错误
学生在写作中会出各种各样的错误，现将以往试卷中，学生常犯的错误归纳为以下九个方面（请予以改正）：
1．指代方面
1) Sometimes teachers will inform students of the heavy burden they have tobear.
2) People have been fighting against the influence of TV commercials, but it often provesuseless.
3) The eating habit of Chinese people have changed dramatically in the pastdecade.
4) One serious problem human beings are faced with are how to use our natural resourceseconomically.
2) In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not affordit.
3) We students should study / learn as much as knowledge as possible so that we can be fully prepared for thefuture.
4) Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people’s living standard has greatlyimproved.
5) To improve one’s writing skill, regular practice isessential.
6) Some college graduates couldn’t find a better job, so they decided to continue their highereducation.
7．搭配方面
1) However the speed of a car is much faster than that of abicycle.
5) People now pay much attention to nutrition, so they chose to eat meat and drinkmilk.
6) There are so many countries using English that it had been regarded as an internationallanguage.
6．连词方面
1) One should improve his English, one should overcome difficulties instudies.
2) The city is seriously polluted, people have no fresh air to breathenow.
3) But it may occur some newproblems.
4) Opportunities are only belonged to those who workhard.
B.
1) The pace of our modern life is getting more faster andfaster.
2) Electricity is the most important power in our daily life than other kinds ofpower.
3) Thus our city will be greatly beautiful than it isnow.
6) In the past few years, grain has decreased by nearly20%.
8．误用问题
1) With the industrious development, there is a great need for different kinds ofenergy.
5) Apart from ability, a person who is most likely to be employed in a big company should have three good personality traits. A good sense of humor, sensitivity to others’ needs and skill in socialrelations.
5．断句方面
1) TV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live withoutit.
2) We must protect our environment. Since the earth is the only place human beings can livein.
5) But other people argue that everyone has a certain opportunity and a wise man will never lose it whenever itarises.
6) Participating in sports is good for our physical health, and through it we can also train ourcharacter.
3) When people try to attain high speed by using cars and buses, and this creates newproblems.
4) One is watching TV and he will always see one or two advertisements betweenprograms.
7) TV commercials have a profound influence on our every daylife.
9．语法方面
A.
1) Narrow streets easily cause to happen many trafficaccidents.
2) A great change has been taken place sincethen.
2) Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which effect our dailylife.
3) First we should use our natural resources in an economicway.
4) We must make continualefforts.
2) People not only want to eat enough food, but also want to eatbetter.
3) The price of milk isn’t higher thangrain.
4) The energy problem is currently of great concern to a nation, the world, and humanbeings.
7) Study hard now so that we can cope with the change and challenge of the twenty-firstcentury.
4．平行方面
1) While we reduce the number of vehicles, the speed of traffic can beincreased.