2020届浙江省新高考英语作文概要写作Summary Writing课件

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Topic Sentence: “During the Renaissance, new ideas and values gradually replaced …” Idea 1: “People began to concentrate less on religious themes and adopt a more humanistic attitude to life.” Idea 2: “At the same time painters returned to classical … people and nature as they really were.” Example: “Rich people wanted to …”
•a 60-word summary •use your own words •in the third person •with a brief sentence •connection between sentences(句子衔接)
03 Steps of Summary Writing
Step 1. Determine the type of writing and identify the topic as well as the author’s purpose
Step 2. Divide the passage & summarize the main idea of each part
Step 3. Highlight the key information of each part
Step 4. Make an outline of the passage Step 5. Write the first draft Step 6. Revise the summary
• During the Renaissance, new ideas and values gradually replaced those held in the Middle Ages. People began to concentrate less on religious themes and adopt a more humanistic attitude to life. At the same time painters returned to classical Roman and Greek ideas about art. They tried to paint people and nature as they really were. Rich people wanted to possess their own paintings, so they could decorate their superb palaces and great houses. They paid famous artists to paint pictures of themselves, their houses and possessions, as well as their activities and achievements.
明确文章结构
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√Para Para 12
Para 2
Step 3. Highlight the key information of each part
划主题句与关键信息
The Renaissance (15th to 16th century)
• During the Renaissance, new ideas and values gradually replaced those held in the Middle Ages. People began to concentrate less on religious themes and adopt a more humanistic attitude to life. At the same time painters returned to classical Roman and Greek ideas about art. They tried to paint people and nature as they really were. Rich people wanted to possess their own paintings, so they could decorate their superb palaces and great houses. They paid famous artists to paint pictures of themselves, their houses and possessions, as well as their activities and achievements.
Put forward: Masaccio; 1428 Content: “…looking through a hole in a wall at a real scene.” Assistance: “By coincidence, oil paints were also developed …”
In the Renaissance, new viewpoints were in place of those hundreds years ago.
The Renaissance (15th to 16th century)
• One of the most important discoveries during this period was how to draw things in perspective. This technique was first used by Masaccio in 1428. When people first saw his paintings, they were convinced that they were looking through a hole in the wall at a real scene. If the rules of perspective had not been discovered, no one would have been able to paint such realistic pictures. By coincidence, oil paints were also developed at this time, which made the colours used in paintings look richer and deeper. Without the new paints and the new technique, we would not be able to see the many great masterpieces for which this period is famous.
Summary writing
2017高考新作文概况
PART I 应用文写作：80 ±20词 共15分 PART II 读后续写：原文350词左右
续写150±20词 PART III 概要写作：原文350词左右
概要60±20
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What is a summary?
A summary is a short statement that gives only the main points of sth, not the details 《牛津高阶英汉双解词典》
Step 1. Determine the type of writing and identify the topic as well as the author’s
purpose
• 确定体裁，明确主题
• 体裁： 记叙文
• 主题： 文艺复兴时期的艺术
Step 2. Divide the passage & summarize the main idea of each part
04 Skills of Summary Writing
要点
提炼 整合
删除细节 删除具体例子（引用一两个说明问题即可） 避免重复
同义转换: 近义词、同义词等替换
语言
句子重构: 调整词类、时态、语态等
逻辑：衔接（照应、替代、省略、连接和词汇衔接 ）
The Renaissance (15th to 16th century)
Para 2
Topic Sentence: “One of the most important discoveries during this period was how to draw things in perspective.” Information about perspective:
•Mary is a beautiful girl who always smiles to others.
√ •Mary is a girl.
•Contain the main idea •Ignore the unnecessary details
02 Requests of Summary Writing
• One of the most important discoveries during this period was how to draw things in perspective. This technique was first used by Masaccio in 1428. When people first saw his paintings, they were convinced that they were looking through a hole in the wall at a real scene. If the rules of perspective had not been discovered, no one would have been able to paint such realistic pictures. By coincidence, oil paints were also developed at this time, which made the colours used in paintings look richer and deeper. Without the new paints and the new technique, we would not be able to see the many great masterpieces for which this period is famous.