写作教程第二版(邹申)-unit 3 Places- Development by Space

wood
stone benches pavilion
flower bed
lawns
path lawns gate
pond
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• We are going to build a small garden on campus.
• The straight northward path inside the gate leads to a conventional pavilion which in front of some delicate stone benches.
Puppies behind glass Unpleasant smell Chained birds Rows of cages Dirty tub containing turtles Stuff atmosphere Kittens in the window Sounds of caged animals Droppings and urine on newspaper
Unit 3 Development by Space
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Unit Objectives
1. Become familiar with feature and organizational pattern of ideas based on space or spatial relationships in paragraph writing;
Additional Work
1. Bath (bathtub) 2. Plug 3. Shower 4. Towel-rail 5. Bath-mat 6. Shower curtain 7. Wash-basin
8. Face-flannel towel 9. Nail-brush 10. Razor 11. Toilet (lavatory) 12. Cistern 13. Flushing handle 14. toilet-paper
2. Know how to develop description according to space arrangement;
3. Be able to construct a paragraph by arranging details with linking words of location and direction
Closet – to my right
Schedule – on the wall above the nightstand
Cap – on the shelf
Desk – the left wall
Bed – the far wall
Medals – on the shelves
Lamp - on the top of a nightstand to Window – next to the desk
岸相当于今天的黎巴嫩和叙利亚沿海一带，他们曾经建立过一个高度文明的古代国家。
公元前10世纪至公元前8世纪是腓尼基城邦的繁荣时期
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Summary – Sample 2
1. It is a description of “my grandfather’s barn”
2. Deplorable – specific words and arranges these descriptive details in a natural order of their physical layout: exterior to the interior of the barn.
placed in space • 3. With the use of specific space signals, we are led by the writer to
experience the room vividly from right to left, from larger to smaller ones as if we were actually “seeing” it.
• Sound: clawing; shuffling sound
• Smell: unpleasant mixture of strong chemical deodorizers; urinesoaked newspapers; musty sawdust
• Touch: lick the human hands
2. Asia Minor – Anatolia 小亚细亚
土耳其的亚洲部分被称为安纳托利亚，也称小亚细亚。安纳托利亚位于平均海拔高度１０ ００米的高原上，山脉环绕四周，夏季的高原到处都是种植的谷物。这里白昼炎热， 夜晚寒冷，即使在夏天也须穿御寒服。
3. Phoenicians –腓尼基人
腓尼基人是历史上一个古老的民族，自称为闪美特人，又称闪族人。生活在今天地中海东
The writer organizes the paragraph in a particular order. Readers will not get lost while the description proceeds.
Question 1
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Logical arrangement Transitional
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• sight, touch, hearing and smell.
• Through the rich perceptions the reader will gain a fuller and more vivid picture of the scene
south or west-east
5. Outside to inside
inside to outside
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Great Hall
Tian’anmen Square Golden Water Bridge
Monument
Memorial Hall
Museum
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Words & Phrases
where, in which, under, below, beneath, down, over, above, along, through, north(en), to the left, next to , on the opposite side, to the left (right), in back, nearby, beyond, in the foreground, in the background…
• 5.
• Sight: black-and-white kittens piled together; a line of large wooden perches; parrots flutter their clipped wings; stagnant-looking water; motionless turtles
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Keys for Sample 3 P26
1. An athlete’s room
2. Closet / dresser / according to the spatial order / the writer presents an orderly description just as his eye might move from right to the left around the room.
order?
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Tips
1. Important landmark, and describe other locations in relation to it.
2. Stress an boundaries of an area
3. Along the road
4. According to north
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Linking Devices P28
Spatial signals are often used to help organize details in descriptive paragraph.
E.G. inside, in the right-hand side, outside, in the opposite end, down the center, at the end of, the left-hand
3. outside – from top to the bottom
4. inside – from left to the right and to the overhead
5. The reader can visualize the scene very vividly and grasp the relationships of the objects.
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Development by Space
• Before we begin to describe a place, whether it is a large country or a small room, we have to decide on the order in which to name the different parts or details. For this case, we should find out the space relationships between them and arrange our description accordingly.
west to east, then you can enjoy luxuriantly green wood
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besides the pavilion at northwestern part and appreciate a
beautiful flower bed at northeast.
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• Verdant lawns are at the both sides of the path.
• There is a small pond inlays the lawn at southeast part.
• If you choose the other path goes across the garden from
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Development by Space
1. the Caspian Sea 里海
里海位于亚洲与欧洲交界，是世上最大及蓄水量最多之湖泊，面积37万1千平方公里 (143,000平方英里)，体积78,200立方公里，最深处1,025米，平均深度209米，湖面海 拔负28米，最深处湖床海拔负1,054米，也是内流湖、咸水湖、海迹湖。
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Group Work
What’s your overall impression of the university? Which building or location catches your attention first? Which place do you want to describe next? And then? What do you want to describe last? What order does your description follow? Why do you choose this
the left of the bed
Dresser – between the window and the left
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Summary – Sample 3
• 1. Display an artistic grouping of details in space • 2. Things are related to each other by the order in which they are