四六级英语作文评分标准和样文

四级作文评分原则、标准及样文

一、作文评分原则

1．CET-4作文题采用总体评分方法(Global Scoring)。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分(Reward Scores)，而不按语言点的错误数目扣分。

2．从内容和语言对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是个统一体。作文应表达作文题目所规定的内容，而内容通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，还要考虑是否用英语清楚地表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。

二、评分标准

1.本题满分为15分。

2.阅卷标准通常分为五等：2分、5分、8分、11分和14分。

3.阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数（如8分）相似，即定为该分数（即8分）；若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数，则可加一分（即9分）或减一分（即7分），但不得加减半分。

4.评分标准：

2分——条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。

5分——基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。

8分——基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。

11分——切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。

14分——切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。

注：白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给0分。

5.字数不够120个，应酌情扣分，具体标准：

累计字数在110～119之间，扣1分；

累计字数在100～109之间，扣2分；

累计字数在90～99之间，扣3分；

累计字数在80～89之间，扣4分；

累计字数在70～79之间，扣7分；

累计字数<69，扣9分。

注：如题目给出主题句，祈使句，结束句，均不得计入所写字数；

只写一段者：0－4分；只写两段者：0－9分（指规定三段的作文）。三、四级真题作文评分范文与错误范例

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists? You should write at Least 120 words following the outline given below:

1．名校校园正成为旅游新热点

2．校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同

3．我认为……

实例1:14分

Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?

In recent years, there is an ever-rising fever that many famous university campuses have become popular tourist attractions, especially such renowned universities as Tsing Hua University and Peking University. Many tourists prefer traveling around the university campus, consequently, thousands of people throng into campuses every year.

With respect to the present situation, our prime concern is: Should the university campus be open to tourist as scenic spots? Different people hold different opinions. Some people believe that we can benefit a lot from campus tour. The opening of campus will stimulate the tourist industry, so the university can make money from the campus tourism. Young tourists can also take a close look at the university which they are longing for and may have a better understanding of this university.

Others argue that the university campus shouldn’t be open to tourists since the easier access to campus will lead to some accidents or safety problems which will interfere in students’ life and ruin the academic atmosphere of the university.

In my point of view, I don’t think that the university campus should be open to tourists since after all it is a place mainly for education. In order to create a tranquil and safe atmosphere for university teachers and students, the university campus should be closed to tourist.

评语：这篇作文归为第一档，因为其符合“切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错”的标准。这篇范文紧扣提纲给出的要点进行写作。首先，在第一段当中，先简单描述了名校校园正成为旅游新热点的这一社会现象，然后引出对这一现象的思考，第二、三段则针对人们持有的两种截然不同的观点进行了阐述，并简单明了地分析了两种观点产生的原因。最后阐述自己对这一问题的看法。除了最后一段中“the university campus should be closed to tourist”这句中“tourist”应该改为复数“tourists”之外，总体上来看，其表达用词方面上几乎没有什么错误，而且相当不错了。

实例2：11分

Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists? Nowadays, while tourism developing at a great speed, university campuses are coming into people’s sight. More and more tourists pour into famous universities due to their beautiful scenery and academic atmosphere.

People hold different point of views about whether school campuses should be open to tourists. Some people think it should be. “Because universities are the property of everyone, and it’s good for us to walk around and enjoy the atmosphere of learning,”they may say. However, others hold a negative view about this phenomenon. They feel that tourists will disturb the daily life of he students and too many travelers somehow leads to disorder.