表达文采飞扬,怎样使用较高级词汇

7. Suddenly I thought out a good idea. A good idea occurred to me.
A good idea suddenly struck me.
2. 丰富的语法结构
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05高考英语书面表达评分原则4：
评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要 点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确 性及上下文的连贯性。
第5档（20——25分）：
② 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 ③ 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为 尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致； 具备较强的语言运用能力
运用多种语法结构，句式灵活多变，可 以使文章增色不少。
丰富的语法结构(Exercises 1)
1. When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用Ving形式）. On his arriving , please giห้องสมุดไป่ตู้e me an e-mail. 2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. （使用名词性从句） What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things. 3. He came in and there was a baby in his arms. (用 with结构) He came in , with a baby in his arms.
让书 面 表 达
文 飞 采
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语意要合情合理，过渡自然
语句要有简有繁，随“意”而安
语法要结构正确，无懈可击
语言要地道流畅，书写规范
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Making Every Day Earth Day
As can be seen from the brief dialogue, the earth suffers a lot from man’s behaviour at present. There are many problems. For instance, we human beings are destroying too many trees, which leads to air pollution. Besides, polluted water is sent into rivers directly without being dealt with. Further more, few people are aware of such problems while most of us take them for granted.
较高级词汇(Exercises 3)
5. You can find my house easily. You’ll have no trouble finding my house. 6. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.
Last Sunday, two Young Pioneers were on their way to the Children’s Palace when they saw a box fall off a passing truck. Without delay, they shouted “stop” to the driver at the top of their voice.
较高级词汇(Exercises2) 1.We all think he is a great man. We all Think highly of him . 2. As a result the plan was a failure. The plan turned out to be afailure. 3. She went there in order to study music. She went there forthe purpose of studying music. 4. In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms. Our school is made up of twenty–six classrooms.
1. 较高级词汇
1. 多实少虚 : 2. 短语优先： I cannot bear it. I want it. nice
generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital
I cannot put up with it. I am looking forward to it.
But that is far from enough. I strongly call on everyone to treat every day as the Earth Day and take care of the earth every day. Only in this way can we hope for a better home to live in.
2. All the school-age children can study here. They enjoy free education in it.
All the school-age children can study here. What’s more, they enjoy free education in it.
Tom likes singing songs, so does Mary.
丰富的语法结构(Exercises3)
7. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去分词) Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab. 8. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.（使 用句型结构）
3. Yesterday， there was a policeman in the street. He stopped a car. The car was at the corner. It looked like a Honda. There was a boy on the sidewalk. He was riding his bicycle. The bicycle was a two-wheeler. The car nearly knocked down the boy. Yesterday， a policeman stopped a car－Honda at the corner of the street， because it nearly knocked down a boy who was riding a two-wheel bicycle on the sidewalk.
The more he spoke, the more
excited he felt.
9. Because the weather is fine, many people went to climb the Western hill. （使用独立主格结构）
The weather being fine , a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.
Last Sunday, two Young Pioneers were on their way to the Children’s Palace . They saw a box fall off a passing truck. They shouted “stop” to the driver at the top of their voice.
1. This village is very small. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978 .
This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. However, it has changed a lot since 1978 .
丰富的语法结构(Exercises2)
4.(由于不知道他的电话，他没法跟Mary联系)(用 非谓语） Not knowing his telephone number ，he can’t get in touch with Tom 5. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型) It was not until he had read the news in the he knew what had使用倒装） happened. newspaper that like 6. Tom and Mary singing songs.(
3. 恰当的连接词
一篇好的书面表达，还应该行文连贯流畅， 具有“逻辑美”。使用恰当连接词，能使文章 上下衔接自然、紧凑，使文章更为地道，更具 “英语味”。记得使用恰当的连接词，如: soon, immediately, suddenly, in front of, next to, on one hand, on the other hand, however, though, otherwise, thanks to, as a result (of), so long as, on condition that, even if/though, what’s more, besides, to make the matter worse, I’m afraid, you know, As we all know…
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However, on the Earth Day, some measures are taken to care for the earth. Not only do people spread the idea of protecting the earth, but also something will be done, such as dealing with rubbish, recycling used battery and so on.
３弃旧取新: Ｗe all possess have the same opportunity chance. There exist are more opponents.
较高级词汇(Exercises 1)
学生过街在车辆中穿行危险。 1. It’s very dangerous for the students to go through the traffic. 2. Students are risking their lives when threading their way among cars. 社会应加强对学生的交通安全教育。 1. The students should be taught more about the traffic safety. 2. And also it is of great use to strengthen the safety education over the students.