奥巴马演讲2010
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美国总统奥巴马制造的作文模板(第1期)
Barack Hussein Obama 注定是一位传奇的美国总统,在他的任期之内,战争继续,但是却获得了诺贝尔和平奖。
在他的任期之内美国经济从重创之中恢复,但是美国人们依旧群情激奋。
应该这一切都与Barack Hussein Obama非凡的演讲天赋有着无穷的联系,但是人总是喜欢浅尝辄止,我们总喜欢仰望伟人,但是从来没有想到为人身上其实也有很多我们可以学习与借鉴的。
从今天开始,无老师就带着每一位考友探寻奥巴马演讲深处的秘密。
奥巴马的演讲逻辑清晰,排比句众多,用词准确,绝对是我们每一个人作文模仿之佳品。
无老师就本着尊重原文本身含义,尽量减少个人对其句意的修饰,同时最大程度上方便每一位考友使用为目的,尽最大努力,对奥巴马的众多演讲稿开刀,直接取出热腾腾的第一手华丽句子,来给我们每一位考友做成模板,直接使用。
今天是第1期,无老师会继续做下去,对于写作的追求是无穷无尽的,因为总有令人感动的句子出现,让我们欲罢不能。
文章编辑方式为第一段是原文,第二段是制造完成的模板。
为了保证考友们不会把模板理解错误,以及保证句意的理解,无老师把原文也放在了这里,而且力劝每一位考友首先研究原文的含义,然后再使用模板,绝对是事半功倍的选择!
If there is anyone out there who still doubts that America is a place where all things are possible, who still wonders if the dream of our Founders is alive in our time, who still questions the power of our democracy, tonight is your answer.
If there is anyone out there who still doubts that XXXXX(论点一) is a XXXXX where all things are possible, who still wonders if the dream of our XXXXX(论点二) is XXXXX in our time, who still questions the power of our XXXXX(论点三), this essay is my answer.用于最后一段结尾,进行总结
It’s the answer spoken by young and old, rich and poor, Democrat and Republican, black, white, Hispanic, Asian, Native American, gay, straight, disabled and not disabled —(cheers) — Americans who sent a message to the world that we have never been just a collection of individuals or a collection of red states and blue states; we are and always will be the United States of America. (Cheers, applause.)
It’s the answer spoken by young and old, rich and poor, Democrat and Republican, black, white, Hispanic, Asian, Native American, gay, straight, disabled and not disabled, the people who sent a message to the questionnaire conducted by the XXXXX team of Stanford university; all of these concluded the same result that XXXXX(观点).用于举例
It’s the answer that —that led those who’ve been told for so long by so many to be cynical and fearful and doubtful about what we can achieve to put their hands on the arc of history and bend it once more toward the hope of a better day. It’s been a long time coming, but tonight, because of what we did on this day, in this election, at this defining moment, change has come to America. (Cheers, applause.)
It’s the answer that —that led those who’ve been told for so lo ng by so many to be cynical and fearful and doubtful about XXXXX(正面观点) to put their hands on the arc of history and bend it once more toward the hope of a better day. It’s been a long time coming, at this defining moment, change has come to our cultural.
最后一段,正面观点(段落开始结尾均可)
I want to thank my partner in this journey, a man who campaigned from his heart and spoke for the men and women he grew up with on the streets of Scranton, and rode with on the train home to Delaware, the vice president-elect of the United States, Joe Biden. (Cheers, applause.)
People want to thank XXXXX(某人) in their XXXXX(做了什么), a man/woman who campaigned from his heart and spoke for the men and women he grew up with on the streets, and rode with on the train home to tiny village to XXXXX(做了什么辛苦工作).
具体例子
And to my campaign manager, David Plouffe — (cheers, applause) — the unsung hero
of this campaign who built the best — (cheers) — the best political campaign I think in
the history of the United States of America — (cheers, applause) — to my chief strategist, David Axelrod — (cheers, applause) — who has been a partner with me every step of the way, to the best campaign team ever assembled in the history of politics — (cheers) —you made this happen, and I am forever grateful for what you’ve sacrificed to get it done. (Cheers, applause.)
And to my XXXXX, XXXXX(某人) who has been a partner with me every step of XXXXX某个过程, to the best XXXXX(职位,比如说领队啊) ever assembled in the history of XXXXX(某事) who made this happen, and XXXXX(某人)will be forever grateful for what XXXXX have sacrificed to get it done.
描述某特定人或者人群的具体例子
I was never the likeliest candidate for this office. We didn’t start with much money or
many endorsements. Our campaign was not hatched in the halls of Washington; it began in the backyards of Des Moines and the living rooms of Concord and the front porches of Charleston. It was built by working men and women who dug into what little savings they had to give $5 and $10 and $20 to the cause. (Cheers, applause.) It grew strength from the young people who rejected the myth of their generation’s ap athy — (cheers) — who left their homes and their families for jobs that offered little pay and less sleep. It drew strength from the not-so-young people who braved the bitter cold and scorching heat to knock on the doors of perfect strangers, and from the millions of Americans who volunteered and organized, and proved that more than two centuries later a government of the people, by the people and for the people has not perished from the Earth. This is your victory. (Cheers, applause.)
XXXXX(某事) was built by working men and women who dug into what little savings they had to give $5 and $10 and $20 to the cause.
具体例子
XXXXX(某事) grew strength from the young people who rejected the myth of their generation’s apathy who left their homes and their families for job s that offered little pay and less sleep.
具体例子
XXXXX(某事) drew strength from the not-so-young people who braved the bitter cold and scorching heat to knock on the doors of perfect strangers, and from the millions of XXXXX(某人) who volunteered and organized, and proved that more than two centuries later a government of the people, by the people and for the people has not perished from the Earth.
具体例子
以上的三个例子,一定要单独使用,千万不要放在一段之内使用。
Now, I know you didn’t do this just to win an election, and I know you didn’t do it for me. You did it because you understand the enormity of the task that lies ahead. For even as we celebrate tonight, we know the challenges that tomorrow will bring are the greatest of our lifetime: two wars, a planet in peril, the worst financial crisis in a century. Even as we stand here tonight, we know there are brave Americans waking up in the deserts of Iraq and the mountains of Afghanistan to risk their lives for us. There are mothers and fathers who will lie awake after their children fall aslee p and wonder how they’ll make the mortgage or pay their doctors’ bills or save enough for their child’s college education.
For even as all reasons listed, we know the challenges that opponents will bring are the greatest of our front.
最后一段开头
There’s new en ergy to harness, new jobs to be created, new schools to build, and threats to meet, alliances to repair.
If XXXXX, there’s new energy to harness, new jobs to be created, new schools to build, and threats to meet, alliances to repair.
用于新建XXXXX将为我们带来的好处。
MR. OBAMA: There will be setbacks and false starts. There are many who won’t agree with every decision or policy I make as president, and we know the government can’t solve every problem. But I will always be honest with you about the challenges we face. I will listen to you, especially when we disagree. And above all, I will ask you to join in the work of remaking this nation the only way it’s been done in America for 221 years — block by block, brick by brick, calloused hand by calloused hand.
There will be setbacks and defect. There are many who won’t agree with every decision in this essay, and, of course, the XXXXX(某人)can’t solve every problem. But XXXXX(某人) will always be honest with you about the challenges you face.
结尾段的开头。