高考写作提升-提高英语书面表达的方法和技巧

【例句】
1. On one side of the road there is a new classroom building.On the other side,where the playground used to be now stands another new building—our library.
4. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型)
It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.
增强书面表达效果的技巧
1. 使用较高级的 词汇
词汇反映你知识贮存量 的多少，也是衡量英语 水平的一个重要标志。
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运用得当的句子结构可以给
2. 使用较丰富的 文章增色不少，从而使整篇
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句式
文章因此而生辉 。
3. 使用恰当的连 接词
使用恰当连接词，对写一 篇有“英语味”的文章很 重要，能使文章上下衔接 自然、紧凑。
【例句】
1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.
Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.
2.We all think he is a great man. We all think highly of him .
【例句】
1 When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使 用V-ing形式）.
On his arriving, please give me an e-mail.
2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句）
常见错误举例分析（续）
【结构错误】 1.He wrote about 300 stories, some of them had been translated into Chinese. 2.Each year many people die and are hurt on road accidents. 3.We should teach children don’t play and ride bikes on the road.
5. You can find my house easily.
You’ll have no trouble finding my house.
利用以下各招可给句子润色, 让句式丰 富起来。
1. 使用并列句 2. 使用强调句 3. 使用倒装句 3. 恰当使用被动句 4. 使用with的复合结构 5. 使用各类从句 6. 使用非谓语动词
2)变化：过去很穷，78年后变 化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。 现已旧貌换新颜。
3)教育：原来的学校很小，现 已经过改建。新建的教学楼有4层， 是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄 儿童在此免费就读。
注意：1）要点齐全，前后连贯。
2）词数：100词左右。
Ladies and gentlemen,
3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. A good idea occurred to me. A good idea suddenly struck me.
4.The students there needn’t pay for their books. Books are free for the students there.
What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.
3. Though I’m weak, I’ll make the effort. (使用倒装 句) Weak as I am, I’ll make the effort.
和词汇 词汇,句型 （高级）和
语法多样化（较复杂）
连 接 词
－有效地使用了语句间的 连接成分，使全文结构紧 凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。
任务：润色下面的一篇书面表达。
联合国教科文组织某考察团正 在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是 接待人员,请根据下列提示以发言稿 的形式简要介绍这个村的情况：
1)大小：近100户人家，约 500口人。
2.As far as I know, everyone is happy about this new arrangement of things.
3.What’s more, I can go to bed earlier.
要 如何算是一篇好文章？
点 全
－覆盖了所有的要点 －应用了较多的语法结构
沐彬中学高三英语备课组
英语书面表达的解题要求
1. 切中题意、覆盖所有的语言要点 2. 语言准确、得当 3． 条理清楚、行文连贯 4. 高分(21-25分)要求:
较多地使用较复杂的结构或较高级词汇 具备较强的语言运用能力
常见错误举例分析
【动词错误】 1.There were hundreds of students couldn’t go to school because they were poor. 2.He wouldn’t able to work out the problem. 3.He managed to swim across the river, but failed.
常见错误举例分析(续)
【中式英语】 1.He cost five yuan to buy a new dictionary. 2.Recently our village has taken place great changes. 3.I was very difficult to refuse and had to receive her invitation.