书面表达 申请信写作技巧

would be pleased to be an assistant teacher.
only...but also
Thank you for considering my application and I am
looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
结尾（询问+客套话）：
1. I’m looking forward to your early reply. 2. I would appreciate it if you could give me a chance… 3. I will try my best to do my job well and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Dear Mr. Smith,
文章结构?
I’ve read your advertisement for an 1. 几个段落？
assistant teacher. I am so interested in this position that I am writing to apply for the
a 14-year-old teenager 14岁青少年 come from…/study in… 来自…学校
work as 从事，担任 have experience in 有…方面的工作经验 be suitable/fit/qualified for 适合/胜任
know a lot about... 对...了解很多
3.Language:(6points) vocabulary, sentence patterns, grammar
4.Handwriting:(2points) neat, tidy, nice
Total:15
apply to be 申请成为 apply for sth 申请 application 申请 position/post 职位
中间（介绍个人情况）：
• I’m very especially interested in … I’m rather keen on ......
• I am outgoing and I can speak fluent English. • I know a lot about .../I am familiar with... • I am experienced in operating computers. • I have one-year experience working as a volunteer …
working with children and I am always an good helper to
my teachers. And most importantly, I can not only speak
fluent English but also get on well with students. So佳I句：not
译。 • 注意： • 1. 词数80左右； • 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； • 3. 开头已为你写好。 • Dear Sir or Madam, • How are you doing? I am Li Hua, a 14-year-old teenager from
China. Recently, I learned in your official website that ...
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书面 表达
What makes a good composition?
I.Keeping to the point
切题不偏题
II.Precise language
语言准确
III.Various sentence patterns
句型多样
IV.Advanced vocabulary & expressions 高级表达
am so interested in this position that I am writing to apply
for the job.
佳句：so…that
Now I would like to introduce myself to you. I am
outgoing, energetic, and responsible; Besides, I love
be good/skilled at 擅长
meet your ability requirements符合你的能力要求
have a good command of 精通/掌握 communicate with 与…交流
ability of communication 交流能力 be in good condition 身体健康 warm-hearted and patient热情和耐心的 teamwork spirit 团队精神 make every effort to do sth 努力做某事 spare no effort to do sth 不遗余力做某事 have an advantage over sb in sth 比某人有优势
开头
job.
中间
Now I would like to introduce myself to you. I am outgoing, energetic, and
结尾
responsible; Besides, I love working with
children and I am always an good helper to my teachers. And most importantly, I can 2.人称、时态？
I like/am fond of … 我喜欢
I am familiar with sth
我非常熟悉…
4.Thank you for …and I am looking forward to…
5.I would be grateful if you could…
请按刚才的思路审题（2mins）
• 假定你是李华，暑期在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展 览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：
V.Proper linking words
善用衔接
VI.Handsome handwriting
书写整洁
What makes a good composition?
Four Aspects
Detailed Evaluation
1.Content:(6 points) completeness
2.Structure:(3 points) paragraphs, linking words
书信类型
申请信
篇
段 落
章结
结构
构 人称
时态
开头： 1-2句表达写信目的 中间： 3－4个介绍个人优势 结尾： 1-2句表达请求和盼复
第一人称
一般现在时、 一般将来时
过渡词
besides, so, most importantly
Dear Mr. Smith,
模板 大声朗读
I’ve read your advertisement for an assistant teacher. I
背诵下列常用句型：(2mins)
1.I read /learned from the newspaper that
2.I am writing to apply for the job.
3.I would like to introduce myself
I have a good commandห้องสมุดไป่ตู้of… 我精通….
• 1. 写信目的；要申请当志愿者。 • 2. 个人优势；从小学国画，对中国国画了解很多。英语流利，性格
外向好沟通。有做志愿者的经验。 • 3. 能做的事情。可以当解说员，介绍中国国画给英国人。可以当翻
译。 • 注意： • 1. 词数80左右； • 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； • 3. 开头已为你写好。 • Dear Sir or Madam, • How are you doing? I am Li Hua, a 14-year-old teenager from
China. Recently, I learned in your official website that ...
Self-evaluation
大家共同评价学生习作…
1.there will have 改成there will be; 2.I am easy to communicate with/it is easy for you to communicate with me. 3.英国人 the British 4.I have confidence /I am confident that ...
•申请信一般包括以下要点：
•1、 自我介绍+写信目的 •2、 申请理由+具备的条件 •3、 恳请考虑自己的申请+表达谢意 及期盼期盼回复的心情
Useful expressions:
开头（申请缘由或动机）： 1.I wish to apply for the job / position / post of… 2.I learned from...that you are looking for...and I am very interested in the job. 3.I’m writing in hope that you will be able to offer me a summer job.
请按刚才的思路审题（2mins）
• 假定你是李华，暑期在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展 览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：
• 1. 写信目的；要申请当志愿者。 • 2. 个人优势；从小学国画，对中国国画了解很多。英语流利，性格
外向好沟通。有做志愿者的经验。 • 3. 能做的事情。可以当解说员，介绍中国国画给英国人。可以当翻
not only speak fluent English but also get on well with students. So I would be
3.过渡词？
pleased to be an assistant teacher.
Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to your early reply.