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As everyone knows, no one can deny that…
2．际的数字来说明。
According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.
lastly ×
5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally √
6）to start with, next, in addition, finally
√
7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least √
四） 短语优先原则 1）用短语会使文章增加亮点 2）关键时刻思维短路，凑字数
三、评分标准
1. 本题满分为15分
2. 阅卷标准共分五等：2分，5分，8 分，11分及14分。
14分——切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺， 连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个 别小错。
11分——切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯， 但有少量语言错误。
Now more and more museums are free without charge to the public. Does that make any sence?
A proverb says, “ You cannot burn the candle at both ends.（鱼与熊掌不能兼得）”
---适用于自编名言 It goes without saying that（毋庸置疑，不言而喻） we have to make a choice because we cannot have things both ways.
The first, because of free admissions of Museums were attracted a large numbers of people who interested in all around the world. And those who take part in effected the traffic crowed around the museums, even though affected people who live in next to the museum life…
2) 结尾万能公式：
1． 结尾万能公式一：作结论
Obviously, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
To sum up, … In conclusion, … In brief,… On account of this,… Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?
According to a recent survey, about 98% of people agreed to work fives days a week.
更多句型：
A recent statistics shows that …
Free admission to musuems helps us save money, but it also encourages us to go to museums to learn something else and get more knowledge. This contributes to improve the living level of the public. It can certainly let us know more about our country and the world, which has a good effect on our development.
But some people argue that it make some trouble for free for people. The reason is the economy of the museums would be worse than before. Worst of all, it may take a mess for more people come to the museums.
二） 主 题 句原则: 要写一个主题句，放在文章的开头 或者结尾，让人一目了然， 比较保险。
To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam. Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.
大学英语四级考试作文评分原则和评分标准
一、大学英语四级教学大纲对写作的要求
共1题，考试时间30分钟。要求 考生写出不少于120词的短文，试 卷上可能给出题目，或规定情景， 或要求看图作文，或给出段首句要 求续写；或给出关键词要求写成短 文。
要求能够正确表达思想，意义连贯， 无重大语法错误。写作的内容包括 日常生活和一般常识。短文写作部分的 目的是测试学生运用英语书面表达 思想的初步能力。
试卷构成 1. 听力理解 35% 对话和短文25%，复合式听写10% 2. 阅读理解 35% 仔细阅读25%，快速阅读10% 3. 完形填空 10% 4. 写作和翻译 20% 写作15%，翻译5%
总分710，425，550
各部分的分值分布计算（百分制）
1. 听力理解
长短对话和短文 共25题，每题1分
According to a recent survey, about 86% of the people preferred to ride a bicycle when they take a short-distance trip.
Youth
According to a recent survey, about 70% of the spare time of students are spend on entertainment in a certain university in the south.
2分——条理不清，思路紊乱， 语言支离破碎。
Nowdays, Social appeared more more free Admissions to museums. it’s in order to people wasted money. In adition, rich in people’s life and increase more knowldeges
I cannot bear it. ==I cannot put up with it. I want it. ==I am looking forward to it.
9:00发答题卡1和答题卡2（答题卡1用于作文和快速 阅读，答题卡2用于其他题型。 9：10正式考试 9：10—9：40 写作 （ 9：35发试题册） 9：40—9：55 快速阅读 9：55—10：00 收答题卡1 10：00—10：35 Listening Comprehesion 10：35—11：00 Reading in Depth 11：00—11：15 Cloze 11：15—11：20 Translation 11：20 收答题卡2，考试结束
5分——基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性
差。大部分句子均有错误，切多数为严重错
误。
In order to enrich the culture of people, more and more musuems were provided free admissions. Somebody thought it would take some problems like that.
0分-----白卷；作文与题目毫不相关；内容太少， 无法评判；所写内容无法看清
四. 作文得分技巧：
1、 卷面整洁，书写清楚 2、 构思简单，少犯错误 3、 中心突出，层次分明 4、 固定经典，名言注目 5、 重在变化，宁简勿滥
五. 写作模版
1）开头万能公式：
1． 开头万能公式一：名人名言 ---适用于已记住的名言
二、评分原则
1. 检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的 教学要求，对作文的评判应以此要求为准则
2. 作文题采用总体 (Global Scoring)评分方法。 阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分(Reward Scores)，而不是按语言点的错误数量扣分。
3. 从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。 作文应表达题目所规定的内容。评分要考虑文章 是否切题，是否清楚而合适地表达思想，语言错 误是否造成理解障碍
下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造
Honesty According to a recent survey, about 78% of the reasons for leave that the college students asked for are feigned.
Travel by Bike
六. 写作的“七项基本原则”
一） 长短句原则 :在文章第一段（开头）用一长一短， 且先长后短
As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.
三） 一 二 三原则
考官们看文章必然要通过关键性的“标签”来判定 你的文章是否结构清楚，条理自然。
1）first, second, third, last
×
×
2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally × 3）the first, the second, the third, the last 4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place,
2． 结尾万能公式二：建议
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem. Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.
Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.
听写单词
共8题，每题0.5分，听写句子共3题，
每题2 分。
2.阅读理解
快速阅读 共10题，每题1分
仔细阅读 Section A词汇阅读共10题，每题0.5分。
Section B篇章阅读共10题，每题2分。
3. 完形填空 共10题，每题0.5分
4. 写作 15分
翻译 共5题，没题1分
考试时间及流程
9:00-11:20 (考试时间125分钟，其余15分钟用于收 发答题卡，听力试音
8分—基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚， 文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中一些是 严重错误。
There is a interesting and instractive picture which goes like this: More and more museums are free for people. They want more people go to museums.
2．际的数字来说明。
According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.
lastly ×
5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally √
6）to start with, next, in addition, finally
√
7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least √
四） 短语优先原则 1）用短语会使文章增加亮点 2）关键时刻思维短路，凑字数
三、评分标准
1. 本题满分为15分
2. 阅卷标准共分五等：2分，5分，8 分，11分及14分。
14分——切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺， 连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个 别小错。
11分——切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯， 但有少量语言错误。
Now more and more museums are free without charge to the public. Does that make any sence?
A proverb says, “ You cannot burn the candle at both ends.（鱼与熊掌不能兼得）”
---适用于自编名言 It goes without saying that（毋庸置疑，不言而喻） we have to make a choice because we cannot have things both ways.
The first, because of free admissions of Museums were attracted a large numbers of people who interested in all around the world. And those who take part in effected the traffic crowed around the museums, even though affected people who live in next to the museum life…
2) 结尾万能公式：
1． 结尾万能公式一：作结论
Obviously, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
To sum up, … In conclusion, … In brief,… On account of this,… Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?
According to a recent survey, about 98% of people agreed to work fives days a week.
更多句型：
A recent statistics shows that …
Free admission to musuems helps us save money, but it also encourages us to go to museums to learn something else and get more knowledge. This contributes to improve the living level of the public. It can certainly let us know more about our country and the world, which has a good effect on our development.
But some people argue that it make some trouble for free for people. The reason is the economy of the museums would be worse than before. Worst of all, it may take a mess for more people come to the museums.
二） 主 题 句原则: 要写一个主题句，放在文章的开头 或者结尾，让人一目了然， 比较保险。
To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam. Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.
大学英语四级考试作文评分原则和评分标准
一、大学英语四级教学大纲对写作的要求
共1题，考试时间30分钟。要求 考生写出不少于120词的短文，试 卷上可能给出题目，或规定情景， 或要求看图作文，或给出段首句要 求续写；或给出关键词要求写成短 文。
要求能够正确表达思想，意义连贯， 无重大语法错误。写作的内容包括 日常生活和一般常识。短文写作部分的 目的是测试学生运用英语书面表达 思想的初步能力。
试卷构成 1. 听力理解 35% 对话和短文25%，复合式听写10% 2. 阅读理解 35% 仔细阅读25%，快速阅读10% 3. 完形填空 10% 4. 写作和翻译 20% 写作15%，翻译5%
总分710，425，550
各部分的分值分布计算（百分制）
1. 听力理解
长短对话和短文 共25题，每题1分
According to a recent survey, about 86% of the people preferred to ride a bicycle when they take a short-distance trip.
Youth
According to a recent survey, about 70% of the spare time of students are spend on entertainment in a certain university in the south.
2分——条理不清，思路紊乱， 语言支离破碎。
Nowdays, Social appeared more more free Admissions to museums. it’s in order to people wasted money. In adition, rich in people’s life and increase more knowldeges
I cannot bear it. ==I cannot put up with it. I want it. ==I am looking forward to it.
9:00发答题卡1和答题卡2（答题卡1用于作文和快速 阅读，答题卡2用于其他题型。 9：10正式考试 9：10—9：40 写作 （ 9：35发试题册） 9：40—9：55 快速阅读 9：55—10：00 收答题卡1 10：00—10：35 Listening Comprehesion 10：35—11：00 Reading in Depth 11：00—11：15 Cloze 11：15—11：20 Translation 11：20 收答题卡2，考试结束
5分——基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性
差。大部分句子均有错误，切多数为严重错
误。
In order to enrich the culture of people, more and more musuems were provided free admissions. Somebody thought it would take some problems like that.
0分-----白卷；作文与题目毫不相关；内容太少， 无法评判；所写内容无法看清
四. 作文得分技巧：
1、 卷面整洁，书写清楚 2、 构思简单，少犯错误 3、 中心突出，层次分明 4、 固定经典，名言注目 5、 重在变化，宁简勿滥
五. 写作模版
1）开头万能公式：
1． 开头万能公式一：名人名言 ---适用于已记住的名言
二、评分原则
1. 检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的 教学要求，对作文的评判应以此要求为准则
2. 作文题采用总体 (Global Scoring)评分方法。 阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分(Reward Scores)，而不是按语言点的错误数量扣分。
3. 从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。 作文应表达题目所规定的内容。评分要考虑文章 是否切题，是否清楚而合适地表达思想，语言错 误是否造成理解障碍
下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造
Honesty According to a recent survey, about 78% of the reasons for leave that the college students asked for are feigned.
Travel by Bike
六. 写作的“七项基本原则”
一） 长短句原则 :在文章第一段（开头）用一长一短， 且先长后短
As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.
三） 一 二 三原则
考官们看文章必然要通过关键性的“标签”来判定 你的文章是否结构清楚，条理自然。
1）first, second, third, last
×
×
2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally × 3）the first, the second, the third, the last 4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place,
2． 结尾万能公式二：建议
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem. Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.
Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.
听写单词
共8题，每题0.5分，听写句子共3题，
每题2 分。
2.阅读理解
快速阅读 共10题，每题1分
仔细阅读 Section A词汇阅读共10题，每题0.5分。
Section B篇章阅读共10题，每题2分。
3. 完形填空 共10题，每题0.5分
4. 写作 15分
翻译 共5题，没题1分
考试时间及流程
9:00-11:20 (考试时间125分钟，其余15分钟用于收 发答题卡，听力试音
8分—基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚， 文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中一些是 严重错误。
There is a interesting and instractive picture which goes like this: More and more museums are free for people. They want more people go to museums.