不良现象作文

不良现象
• spit and little anywhere at their will • talk loudly in public places even in such places as libraries. • cross the roads at a red light • scribble in public places • say dirty words at each other • Smoke in public places without caring about others’ health.
Nowadays, with an increasing concern about manners, more and more people begin to attach great importance to their behavior, yet there are still some people who don’t pay attention to their manners in public. For instance, some tourists throw litter everywhere when they enjoy beautiful landscape; some citizens talk loudly during the movie……Besides these example in our daily life, bad manners also exist in our school. I’m sure that have such experience: youby are doing your What annoys me you most is that some students pass a quiet classroom talking and laughing, without realizing that will students disturb others’ study. homework in a quiet classroom, but some talk and laugh when they pass by the classroom. From my point of view, this bad behavior has a negative impact on our study. As a student, we need a quiet environment to study. So everyone walking in the teaching building should improve their sense of responsibility. I hope that everyone can care more about others and behave well in public to make a more harmonious society.
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• • • • • • • 审题 1. 社会公共场合存在的不良现象 2. 挑一种现象分析 导入不够简明扼要 层次不够分明，结构不够清晰 文章不够简练，有的字数太多 CHINGLIS现象严重(your education is low)
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• • • • With结构和as引导从句没分清楚 With the development of economy,…. As the society develop rapidly,… In spite of the rapid development of economy, there is no improvement in public manners. • With the rapid progress in social development, there still exist many bad manners in public, though.