高中英语书面表达(一)
高中英语：书面表达
高考英语书信作文套用句式及范文一、投诉信开头段:自我介绍+写作背景+写作目的1.I’m Li Hua, a customer who bought…from your website several days ago. I’m writing to express my dissatisfaction about/with….2. I’d like to / I wish to make a complaint about…/ I wish to express my dissatisfactionwith/at/about…3.I have been content/satisfied with your service for years but I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about…中间段：投诉内容/ 反映问题（要点）4. The problems are as follows. Firstly, … Secondly,… What’s worse, …. (What’s worse=Worse still=To make the matter worse)5. I am completely disappointed to find…当我发现…我彻底失望了。
6.I can hardly put up with it any more. (put up with=stand=bear=tolerate)结尾段：期待对方改进+盼望回复7. I sincerely hope that/It is my sincere hope that you will look into/investigate the matter/incident seriously and proper measures should be taken to prevent such an incident happening again. 我真诚地希望你能认真调查这件事情，以及采取恰当的措施防止类似事件再次发生。
高中英语书面表达范文30篇
1. Dear Tom,It’s great to receive your email. Now I’d like to tell you something that took place in my school yesterday. In the afternoon we held a growing-up ceremony for our coming 18-year-old birthday. At first we made an oath that as grown-ups we should have a sense of duty for our society form now on. Then we showed our thanks to our parents who had gone through hardships to bring us up and teachers who have been educating us patiently. And our teachers also gave us cards expressing their good wishes to us. Finally, we put on wonderful performances, singing and dancing. We learned a lot from the activity. I think it’s very important for us. I will remember the day in my life.Yours,Li Hua2. Monday May 18, 2002 FineT his morning our teacher told us something about the Hope Project in class. She said, “Now in the countryside many children still can’t go to school because of poverty. Can you help them?”After school, I went home. When I entered my room, I saw the little box in which I keep my pocket money. Though I wanted to buy a pocket recorder, I decided to send my money to the children who are eager to go to school. I began to write a letter to them at once. After finishing writing it, I went to the post office and posted all my pocket money with the letter together.I felt very happy today because I’ve done a good deed.3.Last Sunday my classmates, Lin Tao, and I went to the bookstore. At a counter we noticed a foreigner was asking a man for help, but the man didn’t know a word of English. So we went up to him and offered help. After knowing what he really wanted, we took him to the counter where tapes and disks of Chinese folk music are sold and gave him some advice on which to choose. With our help, the foreign guest got some music tapes. He gave his hearty thanks to us and left. Though it took us some time to help him, we were happy anyway.4. Yesterday I paid a visit to a model high school, together with my friend. It’s very big witha beautiful fountain in the center of the schoolyard.We started our visit from the main building. First we went to the lab building where some students were doing experiments. Then we entered the lecture hall behind the lab building and saw many students listening to a lecture given by a professor. Opposite to the lecture hall was the art center. There we watched groups of students playing musical instruments. Finally we arrived at the playground at the far back of the school. Some boys were having a football game, which was so excitin g that we couldn’t help cheering for them.It was really an impressive visit.5. An AnnouncementBoys and girls,May I have (take) your attention, please. There will be a lecture at half past three on Friday afternoon. It’s about “Information and English Study”. And it will be given by Mr Li Ping who is a famous teacher from the English Department. There’s sure to be something instructive and interesting. We can get more information from it, I think. And it will improve our English studies to a new stage. Anyone who wants to attend it can come to Room 206. Take notes and have a discussion after it. Please come here on time.That’s all.6. May I have your attention, please?As you know, our class will have a talk show on environment protection with Class One on May4th. Before it takes place, we will invite Dr. Lil from Qinghua University to give us a talk on the environment problem and he will also tell us about the improvement in environment protection in recent years in Beijing.The report will begin at 2：00 pm on Wednesday, April 30th in the auditorium on the third floor in the classroom building. I’m sure we can get enough information from his talk to make good preparations for the coming talk show. Everyone should be there on time, then listen to the report and make full notes at the same time.By the way, we will have a discussion after the report.That’s all. Thank you.7. In my opinion, you are never too young to do things. For example, Tara Lipinski, the American ice skater, won an Olympic gold metal when she was fifteen. Pele, the great Brazilian soccer player, became a professional soccer star the same age as Tara Lipinski. And Mei Lanfang, a famous Chinese opera singer, first performed Beijing Opera when he was ten. Another example is Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart, who started writing music at four. There are still more examples. Shirley Temple was a movie star at the age of three and Tiger Woods starts golfing when he was only ten months old!8. Advertisements appear everywhere in the modern society. When we walk along the street. We can see large advertisement boards with pretty girls smiling at you. In newspapers, we often see half of the pages covered with advertisements. We turn on the TV set and we see advertisements again. Whether we like it or not, they are getting their way into our life. Advertisements help us choose what we need and then we spend our money on it. They also guide us in finding suitable jobs. However, too many advertisements annoy us. And quite often, they give us false information.9. April 13, Sunday FineSpring has come. Early in the morning, I went to Xiangshan Park for sightseeing with my parents. While walking around the park, we couldn’t help admiring the beauty of nature. Of course we took a lot of pictures.However, I was quite disappointed to find some bad behaviour. Some people littered anywhere asthey liked. Some even climbed up the trees and picked flowers. Although there were some signs warning people not to touch the lawn, still some people enjoyed themselves there.I hope that such bad behaviour will soon be got rid of and everybody will protect the environment.10. Dear Mary,I’m glad to receive your letter again. You want to know something abou t what is going on in our school. In short, great changes have taken place since our school began to carry out the research-based learning.In the past, the teachers almost took up all the period, writing on the blackboard, explaining the points, and answering the questions raised by themselves. We students are the slaves of study. But now, we’ve taken up most of the period, discussing the questions raised by the teachers or ourselves, exchanging our ideas, or solving the problems. We are now the masters of study.After class, we enjoy different kinds of activities instead of doing endless homework. We go to the library to read books, have sports on the playground and surf the Internet for various kinds of information.How happy we are now. Welcome to our school.Best wishes.Yours truly,Wang Ping11. Nowadays, it is usual for students to find part-time jobs. This winter vacation, I worked asa waiter at a McDonald’s. It was the first time that I had earned money by m yself. With the money I could buy something I needed. I was quite excited about it.Now, as a result of a part-time job, I needn’t ask my parents for money as before. I think it’s helpful for a student to know about the outside world and I also think that will help me to make preparations for the future job. I not only understand the value of money, but also know how to get along with others. In a word, I had a fruitful vacation.12. Dear Editor,I’m writing to tell you about our discussion we had on the af ternoon of last Wednesday about the good and bad sides of setting off firecrackers during the Spring Festival. 20 boy and 20 girl students attended the discussion. As a result, 40% of them believe that setting off firecrackers certainly adds pleasure and joy to the festival. Therefore, it is a wonderful tradition. But another 40% of the students think that setting off firecrackers causes air and noise pollution, and what’s more, it sometimes causes terrible accidents to us and to our property. The other 20 % have never thought about it or don’t care a bit. In my opinion, ……Yours truly,Li Hua13. PollutionA chemical factory lies near my home. The manager was criticized by the government because thepollution had harmed people’s health, but he paid no attention. Then the factory was forced to stop production and the manager said angrily, “ Is there any fact that we have harmed people’s health? In fact, we haven’t.” Just then, a doctor came, with the result of the medical exam of t he manager, saying the manager was suffering a lung cancer. It is very clear that the population has harmed not only to people’s health but also the manager himself. He was realized the importance of keeping air clean.14. Fire causesFire, one of the most terrible killers in out modern society, is mainly caused by smokers, as can be seen from the graph.In 2002, thousands of fires happened in China. About 50% of them were caused by smokers who left cigarette-ends everywhere. 30% were caused by defective insulation and 20% by children playing with matches. No matter what type of the fire was, there was one thing in common: carelessness.We should warn children of the dangers of playing with matches. Workers should know the importance of good insulation to pe ople’s lives. Smoking should not be in public places.15.Hi, Jason,You asked me about Yao Ming. Here is something I got when I searched the websites at home. Yao Ming, who is now 2.26 metres tall and 134kg in weight, was born in Shanghai on the 12th of September,1980. It is said he likes meat most and his favourite colour is blue. The man he respects most is late Premier Zhou Enlai and the one he believes in most is himself.He joined Shanghai basketball team in 1997 and became a member of China national team Shanghai won the champion of CBA and he was among the top players in the team. In the same year he went to the US and became Number One Overall in the NBA draft, which helped him join Houston Rockets. After many matches as well as struggles he now feels a little tired. Up to now he says he still hasn’t got any further definite plan.16. Dear Mr. Headmaster,I am writing this letter to tell you something about our canteen.There are many kinds of food in our canteen, and generally they are cheap. Some food is delicious. The dining environment has been improved, with the walls painted and some pictures posted up. The students are satisfied with the new look.But students are not given a proper helping of every dish. Also, as the number of the students continues to increase, there is not enough space for us to have meals there. As a result, many of us go out to have meals.All in all, there is still much room for improvement in food quality and service.Best regards,Sincerely yours,Li Ming17. Students Like Optional CoursesThis term our school had offered more than 10 optional courses, from which students can choose. The courses are given from 3:30 to 5:00 every Tuesday afternoon.Students take great interest in the optional courses. Their favourites are computer, spoken English, arts and so on. They say they have got a great deal of practice and they have learned a lot that is not taught in textbooks. However, students hope more optional courses will be offered while their homework should be reduced. They suggest more trips and visits should be organized so that they can learn more about what is going on outside school.18.About the discussion we’ve had about whether China should devote major efforts to developing car industry, opinions are divided on the question.60% of the students think China should fully develop car industry. They believe this will speed up the development of the national economy. More workers will be employed. With cars the people’s life quality will be raised. They will save time and be more convenient in their life and work.On the other hand, 40% of them think China should control its car industry development. Otherwise, the city traffic will be even heavier and more traffic accidents will take place. At the same time, more land will be used for the new roads. What is more, air and noise pollution will become more serious.19.Attention, please! I’m going to give you a summary of today’s discussion about whether we would go online in our spare time.Most students think they (we) can go online as much as possible in our spare time because we are free then. Through the Internet, they can gain plenty of the newest knowledge and the latest news at home and abroad. What’s more, network offers them(us) a convenient way to communicate with each other. The Internet makes their lives outside class colourful and various.On the other hand, a few students partly agree to this idea. Going online is part of our daily life. They suggest a time limit. They’ve found that more student s are playing computer games instead of studying their lessons. There’re few students who are often absent from school for days.20. Dear Tom,I felt terribly sorry to learn that both your parents had been killed in the September 11th Incident. In this incident the World Trade Centre, which used to be one of the tallest buildings in the world, was completely destroyed and thousands of people lost their lives. I’m very angry about the terrorist activities.We are against all forms of terrorist activities and support the war against the terrorism.Don’t be too sad. Don’t lose heart. After all, the majority of the people in the world love peace. Ihope you can recover from the sadness as soon as possible. Be sure to take good care of yourself. Best wishes.Yours,Xiao Fang21. Ladies and gentlemen,Yesterday our teacher of English asked me to say something about pollution. Now, I give you my views on this vital question.As a matter of fact, the effects of industrial pollution are well known to everyone --- polluted air, polluted water and polluted earth. Though a great deal is already being done to control these effects, the problem of pollution is still serious. Continued population increase, smog and chemical waste produced by factories and cars, not only threatens to exhaust our resources, but also pollutes our environment. We do need clean air, safe water and our children’s health.In my opinion, to solve the problem of pollution, everyone must refrain from polluting our environment. We should know that this is the duty of every individual, not that the government alone.22.Last week, we did research into how laid-off workers get their new jobs. We had a discussion in three groups and then began our research separately.Group One surfed on the Internet and learned that most of the laid-off workers had already got their new jobs. In the vocational training center, the students in Group Two were told that there were five training courses for laid-off workers. After training, they began working as repairers, cooks, typists, household workers and salespersons. The other students interviewed some laid-off workers who had got new jobs. A woman said, “With the help of the city government, I’ve found my job. …”What a great dea l we’ve learned through the research.23. The Way to Keep HealthyIt’s very important for us to keep healthy in our everyday life. But how? Here is some advice for you to follow.First you should have a healthy diet. It’s a necessary to eat enough fresh fr uit and vegetables, because they contain all kinds of vitamin that you need every day. But do not eat too much fat, such as cheese, butter or anything too fatty. Too many sweets can do harm to your teeth. So you had better not eat too many sweets or chocolates and keep off coffee.Good habits can help you keep fit. Doing regular exercise is certainly a good way to ensure your body is healthy. After a day’s work, an eight-hour sleep is needed. And avoid working too hard. Remember smoking can damage your health, so never smoke.24. In today’s society, competition and cooperation are equally important. People are cooperators in their life. They share information, natural resources, human resources and manyother things. Cooperation is the way to a happy life. At the same time they are competitors. In competition, they learn from their opponents, gain courage and confidence. Without competition, science and technology would not have been developed so rapidly. And without cooperation, the world would be quite different. Cooperation and competition are like two sides of a person. They can’t be separated.26.Dear Smith,How nice to hear from you again. You want to know something about the Listening Part in our English Paper for the Entrance Examination of Colleges. I’d like to give you a brief introduction about it here. There are two sections in this part.The first one includes 5 short dialogues. We can hear each for once and then choose one out of the three answers to a question about the dialogue. The question and possible answers are on the paper. In Section 2 there are 5 long conversations or monologues, each of which may be heard twice with 2 to 4 questions raised about it.The whole part, which mainly tests our understanding of spoken English, lasts about 20 minutes. We tick the answers on the paper first and then copy them on the answer sheet by blackening the small brackets with A, B, or C with a 2B pencil.Best wishes.Li Hua27.One day, a little girl fell down onto the ground. At this time, the boy went over and wanted to help her up, but his mother stopped him and said, “ Don’t do that , otherwise others will think it was you who knocked her down.”Another day the mother was surprised to see that her son just let the fallen oil bottle be. And the son said to his mother. “ If I had straightened up the bottle, you would have thought you did it.”I disagree with what the mother did in the picture. I think that parents should let children know it is a pleasure to help others who are in trouble. We live28.How to Get Rid of the Pollution of the RiverOur school has formed a group of “How to get rid of the pollution of the river”. Now I would like to give our suggestions of dealing with the subject.First, we should make some investigation, turn to our teachers for help and consult some experts. We may as well go to the Internet to collect some information.Second, we should hand in a report on the river pollution and express our opinions to the public. Third, we should, in groups, clean up the waste things on the river during the holidays, try to plant some young trees along the river and set up some bulletion boards to warn people of protecting thesurroundings.With these done, I think the pollution of the river will be reduced. Meanwhile, we can benefit a lot from these activities.29.Xiao Mao is a primary school student and he enjoys drawing very much.One day he went to the small woods not far from town to draw from nature, carrying a drawing board. He was glad to find a tree living alt hough the rest had been cut down. “ Let me start work at once.” He thought and began to set up his board.Just then a strong young man came with a big axe and got down to cutting the tree. Soon he cut it down and pulled it away.When Xiao Mao got ready and turned back to draw, he found the tree had disappeared.“Dear me! Where on earth is the tree?” Xiao Mao wondered, very disappointedly.30. The United States of America is one of the most developed countries in the world. It lies between two great oceans, the Atlantic to the east and the Pacific to the west. Its neighbor countries are Canada on the north and Mexico on the south.Washington is its capital while the east coast city---- New York is its biggest city, which is also known as the “Big Apple”, where the United Nations’ building stands.The United States is made up of 50 states, which covers over nine million three hundred and sixty thousand square kilometers and has a population of about two hundred and thirty millions, most of which are workers.The earliest inhabitants in the United States are Indians. As the United States of America is a immigrant country, people often call it a “ Melting Pot”。
高一英语书面表达范文
高一英语书面表达范文
英文回答：
I think the most important thing in life is to be happy. For me, happiness means being able to spend time with my loved ones, pursuing my passions, and feeling fulfilled in what I do. For example, I feel happiest when I'm spending time with my family and friends, laughing and making memories together. I also feel happy when I'm doing something I love, like playing music or painting. These activities bring me joy and a sense of fulfillment.
中文回答：
我认为生活中最重要的事情就是快乐。
对我来说，快乐意味着
能够和我所爱的人在一起，追求自己的激情，并且在我所做的事情
上感到满足。
例如，当我和家人朋友在一起，一起笑着创造回忆时，我感到最快乐。
当我做我喜欢的事情，比如弹奏音乐或者绘画时，
我也感到快乐。
这些活动给我带来了快乐和满足感。
【作文真题及满分范文】2010-2017年全国卷高考英语书面表达真题及范文汇总
高考英语书面表达真题及范文汇总（全国卷·2010-2017）2017-10-20假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。
请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。
内容包括：1、时间和地点;2、内容：学习唐诗;3、课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。
注意：1、词数100左右;2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Leslie,How are you? Glad to see you have made some progress in Chinese learning and I’m writing to tell you something about our next lesson. The lesson will be given from 3 pm to 5 pm on the afternoon of next Tuesday in the classroom 502. In the class, you will mainly learn Tang Poetry, which reflects traditional Chinese culture and is deeply loved by Chinese. You can feel the beauty of Chinese by learning Tang Poetry. You’d better make full preparations before class and have a brief understanding of the history of Tang Dynasty, which makes it easy for you to go through the class.If there is anything that I can help you, please don’t hesitate to tell me. Looking forward to meeting you.Yours sincerely,译文：亲爱的Leslie,你好吗?很高兴看到你在汉语学习方面取得进步，我写信是为了告诉你我们下一节汉语课的安排。
高中英语书面表达应用文(一)书信
应用文(一)书信应用文是用文字来互通有无、反映情况、传达信息、联系工作的文体，是人们在生活、学习、工作和公务活动中经常使用的多种写作形式。
与一般的文体相比，应用文有两大特点：一是应用文非常重视格式，书信有书信的格式，通知有通知的格式等等各不相同。
二是应用文写作中有大量的惯用词句。
书信中怎样表示感谢，怎样表示道歉，怎样表示祝贺等以及口头通知的开头与结尾都有常见的模式及框架。
英语应用文的范围很广，其中包括：书信、日记、通知、便条、启事、海报、广告等。
应用文受其内容特点和表达方式的制约，要求格式规范，结构严谨，语言简洁朴实，以达到准确表达意思、交流思想和传递信息的效果。
(一)书信写作指导英文书信格式包括信封格式和信的格式。
1. 信封的写法(1)收信人的姓名和地址应写在信封的中央位置上，先写姓名，后写地址。
(2)发信人的姓名和地址写在信封的左上角或信封背面的门盖上，也是先写姓名，后写地址。
示例：2. 信的写法。
信的格式通常包括以下六个部分：(1)信头(Heading)。
指发信人的地址和发信日期，写在信纸的右上角。
顺序是先写地址，后写日期，地址和日期的写法都要符合英语的习惯。
写地址应由小到大。
日期有两种写法：月、日、年(如June 8，2004)；或日、月、年(如8th June，2004)。
私人信件，因为是亲密或熟识的亲友间的信件来往，只写发信的日期即可。
(2)信内地址(Inside Address)。
指收信人的姓名和地址，写在信纸的左上角，低于信头。
在私人信件中往往省略。
(3)称呼(Salutation)。
对收信人的称呼写在信内地址下面。
一般用Dear…或My dear…开头，给亲属写信时在Dear或My dear后面加上亲属关系的词即可，如Dear Dad，My dear Grandma等；写信给小辈或平辈可直呼其名，如Dear Xiao Jun，Dear Mary等；写信给不太熟悉的人常在Dear或My dear 后加上“某先生”或“某太太”等，例如：Dear Mr. Jackson，Dear Mrs Smith。
专题06 2020年全国高考试题(I、II、III)书面表达(解析版)
2020年全国高考试题（I、II、III）试题及经典模拟题分类汇编之书面表达2020年全国高考试题（I、II、III）1.【2020·全国新课标I】你校正在组织英语作文比赛。
请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括:1. 人物简介；2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意:1. 词数100左右；2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。
____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】The person I respectWe have a lot of respectable people around us. They may be our teachers, parents or one of our elders. As for me, my father is the person I respect most. My father is a teacher who loves his work and his students very much. He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work.When I come across the problems of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely. He achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students. So, in my mind my father is the person I respect most and I love him deeply.【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。
2023年高考英语总复习：书面表达(附答案解析)
2023年高考英语总复习：书面表达一．书面表达（共15小题）1．（2021春•工农区校级期末）假定你是高中生李华，你所在的班级将要举办一次主题为"What Can We Do for Our Community？"的英语演讲比赛。
请写一篇英语演讲稿，要求从以下四方面中任选一至二个进行阐述。
1.关心、帮助他人；2.保护、美化环境；3.爱护社区设施；4.营造良好的人居氛围。
注意：1.不要出现学校校名和本人真实姓名，2.词数：100左右；3.开头和结尾已经写好，且不计入总词数。
What Can We Do for Our Community？Hello，everyone.It's nice to speak about what we can do for our community，and I think each of us can do something.________Thank you for listening!2．（2018秋•唐山期末）假定你叫李华．一直喜欢唱歌，最近组建了自己的音乐俱乐部．你的笔友David很想了解一下有关情况，请给他回一邮件．内容包括：1．俱乐部情况（名称、组建时间、活动频率等）；2．俱乐部带来的好处（交友、放松、积极面对人生等）；注意：1．词数80左右；2．开头和结尾均已给出（不计入总词数）；3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．Dear David，I am pleased to share with you some information about my music club．Looking forward to your reply．_______Yours，Li Hua 3．（2018秋•红塔区校级期末）假设你是星光中学的李华，将参加主题为"Let's Ride Bicycles"的英语演讲比赛．请写一篇演讲稿，主要内容包括：第1页（共29页）。
高考英语书面表达练习
高考英语书面表达练习Writing 1假如你是晨光中学的李津。
你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家,他母亲Nancy 通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业,并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。
请你用英语回复,内容包括:(1)表示感谢并问候;(2)计划与家人一起做的事情;(3)你决定选择哪个专业,为学好该专业做何准备。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Nancy,Yours,Li Jin 答案写作提示1.本文为回信,也是一封告知信,要注意书信格式及告知信特点;2.主要采用第一人称,时态以一般现在时为主;3.首段感谢对方来信问候,引出正文内容;第二段描述自己的假期计划;第三段告知对方自己大学专业的选择及准备。
参考范文Dear Nancy,I'm glad to hear from you. And thank you very much for asking about my vacation arrangements and future plans.Since this summer vacation is my last one in high school, my family and I have already made a travel plan. We are going to take a trip to Tibet. Tibet lies on the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau of the southwest border of China, which is a place I have been longing for. This time I finally have a chance to realize my dream.After graduating from high school, I will be faced with the choice of university and university major. You know I have always been interested in languages, so I plan to major in languages, preferably English, if possible. I also plan to improve my oral English by studying online during the vacation.I hope to visit you again if the COVID-19 situation gets better.Best wishes!Yours,Li Jin 评析1.范文内容完整,要点齐全,比例合适。
高中英语书面表达（4篇）
高中英语书面表达(4篇)以下是网友分享的关于高中英语书面表达的资料4篇，希望对您有所帮助，就爱阅读感谢您的支持。
高中英语书面表达篇一现在很多的高中生会说英语作文难写，但是比起汉语作文来，英语作文就好写多了。
为什么这么说呢？就字数而言，英语作文是汉语作文的1／8，即写一篇汉语作文相当于写了8篇英语作文，而分值却是汉语作文的1／2。
一、先让我们了解一下高考中对书面表达的评分标准1.句子好，信息全，错误少。
（25-30）语言通顺流畅，句型富于变化，句子之间有适当的连接，词汇运用准确，绝大部分信息点出现，达到写作的目的。
如果没有语言错误（可容忍个别拼写错误），信息全，给满分。
2.句子对，信息多，错误少。
（19-24）语言通顺，句子意思清楚明了，但句子结构比较死板，句型变化少。
词汇使用基本正确。
语法错误较多，但不影响对句子的理解，有次要信息疏漏，但基本达到写作目的3.用句子，有信息，错误多。
（13-18）内容基本覆盖重要信息。
基本用句子书写，但句型死板，句子之间缺乏连接，词汇贫乏，有较多的拼写和语法错误，影响到对句子的理解。
4.语病多，信息少，难理解。
（7-12）文章支离破碎，时常出现语言错误和残缺句子，影响对句子意思的理解。
点到了重要信息，但有较多疏漏。
信息未能清楚地转达给读者。
5.没句子，信息少，不理解。
（1-6）仅用单词或短语列出了几个信息点，没有完整句子，或全篇只写了一两个短句子。
6.不给分的情况：没有写作，或仅有无关信息或抄来的优美文章。
（0）二、根据以上评分标准，笔者制定出以下应对书面表达的技巧第一，注重对文章的整体把握，合理布局，可分成三个自然段，避免写成一整段，那样会显得拖沓冗长。
开头部分（opening）引出文章要叙述的中心问题，也就是只用一两句话“重写题目”。
正文部分（body）围绕主题展开叙述或讨论，须直接或间接地反映出题目要求中的各个要点。
可以适当地增加细节，这样就可以避免逐条翻译的嫌疑。
高中英语书面表达范文
书面表达范文建议信Sample writing(课本P19)：10September2018Dear Xu Ting,You wrote that you always feel lonely after school because your parents work in another city.I understand how you feel.It is common for teenagers to feel lonely when they live away from their parents.I think you can try joining a volunteer group that helps other people.This will give you a chance to meet and be around others.It will also help you realize that you are not alone in having problems and that many other people have problems,too. Helping other people also makes us feel better.You can also connect with your parents online.Just because your parents are far away,it does not mean you can not talk to them.I am sure that you will make new friends and get a chance to speak to your parents more often.This will help drive away your loneliness.Best wishes,Yours,Susan Luo第一单元标准试卷应用文假如你是李华，最近收到了美国朋友John的来信。
高中英语应用文写作及书面表达专练
应用文写作1（满分20分）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter沉溺于网络游戏不能自拔，甚至不听父母劝阻想要离家出走。
请根据以下要点提示，写信劝他放弃这个想法。
(100个词以上)1. 网瘾的危害2. 要尊重父母并道歉3. 建议他管理好自己的时间Dear Peter,I’m sorry to hear that you have decided to leave home because of your conflict with your parents.__________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua Dear Peter,I’m sorry to hear that you have decided to leave home because of your conflict with your parents.I think it’s unwise to make such a decision. Addicted to playing online games, you are not only wasting your valuable time but also hurting the feelings of your parents. Judging from your last letter, your parents are living a simple life to save every penny for your future. Therefore, wouldn’t it be reasonable for you to respect them, have a talk with them and apologize? Meanwhile, you should manage your time more wisely and find some meaningful ways to spend your free time, such as playing sports with your friends, learning a new language, etc.I’ m looking forward to your reply. Yours,Li Hua应用文写作2（满分15分）假定你是李华，准备在暑假赴美国进行短期旅行，请你用英语给美国网友Tom写一封邮件。
高一英语书面表达试题答案及解析
高一英语书面表达试题答案及解析1.你是一名高一学生，经常为看电视的事跟妈妈闹意见，今天你跟妈妈达成一致。
请根据以下表格的内容，适当补充内容，以 An Argument 为题写一篇100字左右的英语短文。
母亲儿子高中生学习任务重，看电视浪费时间学习一天很疲劳，看电视可以放松一下儿子自制力差，看电视会影响视力看电视也可以增长知识，了解国际国内大事，紧跟时代平时不准我看电视，但在周末允许我看新闻、文艺、体育或科普类节目注意：1、短文的开头已给出，不记入总词数。
2、不要表格中的内容，但不要逐翻译。
3、可以适当增添合乎情理的过渡性语言。
I am a Senior 1 student. I often quarrel with my mother___________________________________【答案】I am a Senior 1 student. I often quarrel with my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. My mother holds the view that students in Senior 1, heavily burdened with their studies, are too busy to spare any time to watch TV. It seems to her that once I am allowed to do that I will not be able to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks that it is bad for my eyes to watch TV too often. But I really can’t accept her ideas. I think it is relaxing to watch TV after a day’s hard work. Not only can it set my mind at rest, but it can broaden my horizons. Now we have at last reached an agreement that I can only watch TV at weekends, and the programs should be limited to news and programs of entertainment, sports or science.【解析】这是一篇正反观点类得文章，内容要点已经给出，学生写作的时候切入点容易找。
高中英语书面表达范文25篇
高中英语书面表达范文25篇第1篇:电子词典的优缺点One Major Advantage of Electronic Dictionaries电子词典的一个主要优势Electronic dictionaries are becoming more and more popular among students nowadays. As a result, they may eventually render printed dictionaries obsolete!Undeniably electronic dictionaries contain a number of merits in comparison to their printed counterparts and therefore,I would like to suggest one major advantage of electronic dictionaries.电子词典现在越来越受学生的欢迎。
结果,他们最终可能会使纸质词典过时了!不可否认的是，电子词典包含许多优点，与它们的纸质版本相比。
因此,我想提出电子词典一个重要的优点。
Perhaps the most pronounced advantage of electronic dictionaries is that all of them are portable and consequently easy to carry around, whether in a pocket or a bag.Students can put the dictionary in their pocket and look up new words whenever and wherever they are.This is a huge advantage over the traditional large paper bound dictionary because size really does matter.也许电子词典最明显的优点是他们都是可便携的,因此容易随身携带,可以放在口袋或包里。
高考英语书面表达万能模板-建议信
高考英语书面表达万能模板-建议信写作模板①Dear________,You have asked me for my advice with regard to_____ , and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here.In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ________ (建议的内容).I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.Good luck with your________ (祝愿).Yours Sincerely,Li Hua写作模板②Dear_______,I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _______ (引出对方需要建议的主题).Here are a few suggestion(引出作者的建议). First , It is important to ________ . Then, it also helps to ______ . Besides, it should be a good idea to ____ . You can also ________ .(可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议，如下)As to __________, I suggest _________ (需要具体到某一方面). In addition, _______ (其他的建议). I’m sure ________ (预测可能的结果，给对方以行为的信心和决心).I hope _______ (表达愿望)。
经典高考英语书面表达多篇必背范文
经典高考英语书面表达多篇必背范文经典高考英语书面表达12篇必背范文考生必背：经典高考英语书面表达12篇范文（一）辩论发言稿，你可任意选择正方或反方拟一篇发言稿，词数100左右。
(一)I'm for that China should make major efforts to develop its car industry and that every family should have one or more cars. With the development of car industry, I believe that this will speed up the development of the national economy. More workers will be employed. With cars, people's life quality will be raised. They will save time and make people more efficient in their life and work. With cars, people can live far from big cities or factories. They can go anywhere they like to. With cars going into every family, our country must be a real modernized country, I believe.(二)I'm against that China should make major efforts to develop its car industry and that every family should have one or more cars. With too many cars on roads, the traffic may be too heavyor even more traffic accidents may be seen. So they will not bring us convenience but trouble. Too much noise and air pollution may make people ill. Widen roads may take up too much land that should have been made use of to support food. A real modernized country will be a welldeveloped country not merely in cars but in every aspect, I believe.范文（二）众所周知，2022年年奥运会将在北京举行。
高中英语书面表达范例 高中英语书面表达
高中英语书面表达范例高中英语书面表达高中时期多看些书面表达，为以后的高考做准备。
下面是小编给大家整理的高中英语书面表达，供大家参阅!高中英语书面表达篇1假如你是李华，住在太原。
你的加拿大笔友Tom来信谈到他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家乡太原的情况。
请你用英语写一封回信。
回信须包括以下内容:1.基本情况：省会城市，位于山西中部，汾河流经之地，风景优美;2.发展情况：经济发展迅速，道路宽阔，高楼林立;3.旅游名胜：晋祠公园，蒙山大佛，双塔寺等吸引着国内外游客;4.诚邀来访。
注意: 1. 词数100左右。
信的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
2. 参考词汇:经济economy n. 蒙山大佛Mengshan Buddha双塔寺Twin-pagoda Temple06范文Tom,It‟s very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I‟d like to tell you something about my hometown Taiyuan.Taiyuan, the capital city, is located in the central part of Shanxi Province. It is a beautiful place with Fenhe River running through. Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. Wide streets and high-rise buildings can be seen all over the city. In addition, there are a great number of places of interest, such as Jinci Park, Mengshan Buddha, and Twin-pagoda Temple, which attract many tourists from home and abroad everyday. I am looking forward to your visit to my hometown some day.高中英语书面表达篇2外籍教师Richard 想了解一下你所在班级学生的到校方式。
高中英语写作书面表达
Because I speak English well and I like doing sports very much, I will be a good volunteer for the Games. I often do sports if I have time. I know the local conditions well. I think I will give the best service to everyone in the Games.
handbag in her hand.
名词性 从句
noun clause
e.g. That’s what I should do. We should do a favour to
whoever needs help at present.
e.g. The moment we reached the
支持方
反对方
你的看法
的理由
的理由
及理由
1．可以促进 1．学生以学习为 对体育的重视；主，考试成绩决 (考生自行发 2．可以增强 定个人前途； 挥2—3点) 学生的体魄； 2．过高的要求学 3．更有利于 生难以达到； 提高学习效率。 3．长跑可能引起
感冒或伤害。
注意：1．任选内容写成一个段落，或是写整篇文章。 2．对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥。
5. If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. 6. I passed the physics exam because of your help. 7. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.
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书面表达（一）（一）今天早上，在中山路发生了一起交通事故，请你根据以下要点，写一篇新闻报道：时间：10月8日，上午10点；地点：中山路和人民路的十字路口；事故现场：一辆卡车和一辆小汽车相撞，发生侧翻，导致交通拥堵近一个半小时；伤亡情况：卡车司机当场死亡，汽车司机伤了头部；事故原因：卡车司机醉酒驾车。
注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________答案：At 10 am，October 8，a terrible traffic accident occurred at the crossing of the Zhongshan Road and the People's Road, which led to a big traffic jam. lasting almost one and a half hours.A car and a truck had collided, causing death and serious injuries.The truck driver was thrown out, fell heavily on the ground and died instantly.The driver of the car had head injuries and has been sent to hospital.Through investigation，the accident resulted from the breaking of the traffic rules.It turned out that the truck driver had been driving drunk.（二）假如你是李华，下面内容节选自你的美国朋友Jason的来信。
请给他写一封回信，回答他提出的问题，并就他的暑期计划提三个问题。
...At school we are doing projects on major environmental problems around the world.Could you help me？Please，tell me about the main environmental problem in your area.What does the government do in order to solve it？Are you personally involved in any environmental activities？What are they?As for me，I am planning to take part in voluntary work in summer.My friends and I are going to create footpaths in a national park.I'm sure it will beexciting！...注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．信的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear Jason，Thanks for your letter.I am happy to hear about your latest news！___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply.All the best，Li Hua 答案：Dear_Jason，Thanks_for_your__letter.I_am_happy_to_hear_about_your_latest_news!In your letter you asked me about environmental problems in my area.I guess the most serious problem is air pollution from industry and traffic.The city government is now trying to reduce air pollution.For example，they are planning to move all plants and factories to suburbs.As for me，I take part in all school environmental activities such as planting trees and collecting waste paper and glasses for recycling.I'm very interested in your voluntary work in summer.How long are you going to work？Where are you going to live？Is it difficult to create footpaths?Looking_forward_to_your_reply.All_the_best，Li_Hua（三）假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。
请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：1．栏目介绍；2．稿件内容；3．稿件长度：约400词；4．交稿日期：6月28日前。
注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头语已为你写好。
Dear Peter，I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school's English newspaper._____________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________范文：Dear_Peter，I'd_like_to_ask_you_to_write_an_article_for_our_school's_English_newspaper. The “Foreign Cultures”section in our newspaper is very popular among us students.It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States？And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals，and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as it's interesting and informative.400 words would be fine.Could we have your article before June 28?I'm looking forward to hearing from you.Yours，Li Hua（四）(2018·山西芮城中学第四次月考)网购已成为很多高中生青睐的一种现代购物方式。
请你以”Online Shopping” 为题,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈自己对网购的一些看法。
内容包括:1.越来越多的高中生喜欢在网上购买商品;2.网上购物可能存在的问题;3.你的建议。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:网店店主Internet shopping provider 假货fake goods___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________范文：Online ShoppingNowadays,shopping through the Internet has been becoming increasingly popular among senior school students and they prefer to buy almost everything they want online.Online shopping,however,can sometimes bring annoyance to students when they enjoy the convenience of it.Firstly,the quality of the products may not be as good as they are described and it is possible for the students to buy fake goods.In addition,some students find it very hard to make a change when they are not satisfied with the commodities bought online.I strongly hold the view that regulations and rules should be worked out to screen and check Internet shopping providers.If so,I believe a promising online shopping is just awaiting us.（五）(2018·山东济南期中检测)假如你是李华,下周是你的美国笔友Tom的生日,你给他寄了一盒中国茶叶作为礼物。