托福独立写作范文详解ppt课件
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TOEFL 写作课件4
NO1:
People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, and increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Academic syllabus:
Lay a solid foundation for having a better grasp of practical skills; Wisdom, theories accumulation inherited from our ancestors, Teach us to cope with a wide variety of difficulties individually, creatively… Deepen the thought/insight into problems… Do some contributions to promote the progress of society, such as engineering, science, medicine….
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Famous sayings:
All work and no play make Jack a dull boy. A rolling stone gathers no moss. Natural abilities are like natural plants that need pruning by studies. ----- Francisco Bacon Education is an ornament in prosperity and a refuge in adversity. ----- Aristotle He who opens a school door, closes a prison. ---Victor Hugo (French)
托福写作机经全分类229页PPT
举例的探讨
假设第三人称 Suppose one/ a student/ an individual--,
第三段
好处On the other hand, the specialization on one subject allows a student to develop a deep understanding of it, and therefore, apply the knowledge of it into practice.
反驳However, I cannot fully approve of their opinion.
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关键在于
多思考，多换位
机经分析篇
教育篇
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分类
学校
活动与 学习
教师
学生
选课
分数 学习 重点
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活动与学习
Universities should give the same amount of money to their students’ sports activities as they give to their university libraries.
定义
A University is an institution of higher learning providing facilities for studying and research and authorized to grant academic degrees.
一种观点 A notion that the distribution of school budget on libraries and sport activities should be balanced is advocated by some social critics.
TOEFL-WRITING-托福写作PPT课件
• Try :在过去的二十年中，花在食物上的钱逐渐减少了。
• In the last two decades ,there has been a gradual decrease
• in the amount of money that is spent on food.
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• e.g. Where there is a will ,there is a way.
• famous→ • renowned / noted / celebrated.
• e.g.He was soon one of the most celebrated young painter in
England.
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• clever → • intelligent / brilliant /ingenious(不仅聪明，还具有原创性）
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• notes:
• 高端词：significant / considerable / substantial
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increase : n. / decrease
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定从
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in the last decade(s)
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significant / gradual / slight
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number / amount (修饰不可数n）
• e.g. 2. 有其父，必有其子。
• 改为：有其师，必有其徒。 • 模仿作用：精确性、可读性。
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• e.g.1. Do you speak English?
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Do you speak Mandarin?
• e.g. 2. Prices have risen sharply in the last decade.
托福独立写作篇章结构126页PPT
(today和were became时态不搭) I am having to emphasize the importance of
doing exercise in the morning When Jack was five years old, he has
managed to recite more than 300 Chinese classic poems 注意动词的时态
classrooms Girls had better be bring up in a rich
environment (be brought up表被动) 动词要正确的使用
减少语法错误
3. Intelligent students should not be treated different by their teachers
独立写作题型分类
1.支持或反对 agree or disagree
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All students should be required to study art and music in secondary school. Use specific reasons to support your answer.
减少语法错误
2. Work at home can bring us a lot of benefits (Work改成working，动名词做主语) Many students are like studying AP history (are和like只能保留一个) The Internet can instead of teachers in many
doing exercise in the morning When Jack was five years old, he has
managed to recite more than 300 Chinese classic poems 注意动词的时态
classrooms Girls had better be bring up in a rich
environment (be brought up表被动) 动词要正确的使用
减少语法错误
3. Intelligent students should not be treated different by their teachers
独立写作题型分类
1.支持或反对 agree or disagree
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All students should be required to study art and music in secondary school. Use specific reasons to support your answer.
减少语法错误
2. Work at home can bring us a lot of benefits (Work改成working，动名词做主语) Many students are like studying AP history (are和like只能保留一个) The Internet can instead of teachers in many
《托福写作教程新》课件
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托福写作练习与提高
写作练习：独立写作
总结词
培养独立思考和表达能力
详细描述
独立写作部分要求考生在30分钟内完成一篇完整的议 论文，就某一话题表达自己的观点和论证。考生需要 通过大量的练习，提高自己的思维速度和表达能力， 培养独立思考和有逻辑地表达观点的能力。
写作练习：综合写作
要点一
总结词
培养阅读理解和信息整合能力
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托福写作技巧
写作技巧：结构与逻辑
总结词
结构清晰、逻辑严密是托福写作的重要技巧。
详细描述
在托福写作中，考生需要合理安排文章结构，包括开头、主体和结尾。开头部分应简洁明了，提出论点；主体部 分应分为2-3段，每段围绕一个分论点展开，并使用恰当的过渡词或短语保持逻辑连贯；结尾部分应对全文进行 总结，呼应开头。
监考要求
考生必须服从监考人员的指示，不得在考试期间离开考场或与他人交 流。如果需要离开，必须向监考人员报告并得到允许。
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写作技巧：论证方法
总结词
批判性思维在托福写作中至关重要。
详细描述
在托福写作中，考生应具备批判性思维能力，对题目进行分析、判断和评价的能力。考 生在写作过程中应注重分析问题、提出观点、进行评价和反思等环节，通过合理的推理 和判断来增强论证的说服力。同时，考生还应注重论点的独特性和创新性，尽可能从不
同的角度和层面来探讨问题，提出新的观点和见解。
模拟考试部分提供完整的托福写作考试流程，让考生体 验真实的考试环境和压力。通过模拟考试，考生可以更 好地了解自己的应试能力和不足之处，从而有针对性地 制定改进计划。同时，模拟考试的反馈可以帮助考生更 好地了解自己在各个部分的得分情况，为后续的复习和 提升提供指导。
新托福写作PPT课件
petitor=rival, opponent(especially in sports and politics) 12.blame=condemn(if you condemn something, you say it is very bad and unacceptable) 13.opinon=perspective, standpoint(means looking at an event or situation in a particular way) 14.fame=prestige(describe those who are admired), reputation 15.build=erect(you can erect something as buildings, FORMAL), establish 16.insult=humiliate(do something or say something which makes people feel ashamed or stupid) plain=grumble (complain something in a badtempered way) 18.primary=radical (very important and great in degree), fundamental 19.relieve=alleviate (alleviate means you make pain or sufferings less intense or severe) 20.force=coerces into(coerce means you make someone do something s/he does not want to),compel
二、新托福独立写作模板
托福独立写作真题及范文(共49张PPT)
1. Travel by bike or walk to destination
2. Reuse and recycle waste materials
3. Purchase local organic food.
A city wants to help teachers of its high school students (age1418)improve their teaching. It is considering two plans: •1. Choose a small group of excellent teachers; these teachers will attend a class led by an expert for additional training in how to teach effectively, and they will then come back to their schools and provide that training for other teachers in school.
•1、Students must take a course on the subject that has no direct connection to their majors of study ( For example, a student majoring in engineering may take course in fine arts or social science.)
• Do you agree or disagree: Nowadays it’s easier to maintain good health than it was in the past?
2. Reuse and recycle waste materials
3. Purchase local organic food.
A city wants to help teachers of its high school students (age1418)improve their teaching. It is considering two plans: •1. Choose a small group of excellent teachers; these teachers will attend a class led by an expert for additional training in how to teach effectively, and they will then come back to their schools and provide that training for other teachers in school.
•1、Students must take a course on the subject that has no direct connection to their majors of study ( For example, a student majoring in engineering may take course in fine arts or social science.)
• Do you agree or disagree: Nowadays it’s easier to maintain good health than it was in the past?
托福写作第2课(第四版)——独立写作PPT课件
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B段：对方理由段
• 第一，一个有着大量知识的老师将会从他 或她的学生那里赢得尊敬。
• 这是因为学生们，尤其是大学水平的学生 们，也许经常是如此聪明和智慧，以至于 只有当这个老师对这门课有着深入的理解 ，他们才能对老师的工作表现出尊重和兴 趣。
• 结果——原因型
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B段：对方理由段
• Firstly, a teacher who has a large amount of knowledge will win respect from his or her students.
段落
交锋式
A段
对方观点
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B段 对方理由（2个） 4句
C段 逐条反驳（2个） 6句
D段 己方理由（2个） 6句
E段
己方观点
1句
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真题演练一 • A teacher’s ability to relate
well with students is more important than the knowledge of the subject being
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• But we remember with far greater pain that we did not see that beauty when it flowered, that we failed to respond with love when it was tendered.
• This is because students, especially those who are at college level, may often be so smart and intelligent that only when the teacher has deep understanding of the subject can they show respect for and interest in the teacher’s work.
戴云托福写作PPT课件
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句子训练方法(三)
3. 对句式进行各种变化。
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句子的变化
• 句子的分类
• 五大句型
• 特殊句型（倒装句，强调句， 修辞问句，并列结构，各种从 句，插入语，同位语，等等）
• 句子的变化方式
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句子的分类
• 陈述句, 疑问句, 感叹句和祈使句 • 简单句, 复合句, 复杂句和复合复
杂句 • 主动句和被动句
• Repeated cheating on tests invites self-defeat.
• To cheat on tests repeatedly is to invite self-defeat.
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• The fact that you cheat on tests repeatedly invites self-defeat.
Listening: 2mins\230— 300words
• independent writing:30
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• Word range:
Integrated writing:150---225 words
independent writing:300 words 以上
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新旧托福分数对照表 •请看:
1. TOEFL和GRE，SAT， GMAT，
LSAT成绩
2. 学校各门功课的考试成绩
（GPA）和排名
3. 个人陈述，读书计划和三封推荐 信
4.
发表的文章和著作 .
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5.获得的奖励和荣誉(教学科目，体 育，文学，艺术等）
6.领导和参加的学术研究和社会实 践项目（发明和专利，论文）
托福独立写作开头段的写法课件
A paraphrase of something written or spoken is the same thing
expressed in a different way.——《柯林斯英汉双解大辞典》
托福独立写作disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
• Displays consistent facility in the use of language, demonstrating syntactic variety, appropriate word choice.
1.topic 一般就在题目中； 2.为体现句法的多样性和用词的准确性，不能照抄原题； 3.需要对原题进行恰当而准确地改述，即paraphrase. 4.What is paraphrase？
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形式与内容的对应
a) 词与词的替换（synonym）
133. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person's childhood years (the time from birth to twelve years of age) are the most important years of a
独立写作开头段的写 法
Adrian
托福独立写作开头段的写法
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Structure
expressed in a different way.——《柯林斯英汉双解大辞典》
托福独立写作disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
• Displays consistent facility in the use of language, demonstrating syntactic variety, appropriate word choice.
1.topic 一般就在题目中； 2.为体现句法的多样性和用词的准确性，不能照抄原题； 3.需要对原题进行恰当而准确地改述，即paraphrase. 4.What is paraphrase？
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形式与内容的对应
a) 词与词的替换（synonym）
133. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person's childhood years (the time from birth to twelve years of age) are the most important years of a
独立写作开头段的写 法
Adrian
托福独立写作开头段的写法
1
Structure
《托福写作教程》课件
Q1
托福写作的评分标准是什么？
A1
托福写作的评分标准主要包括内容、组织和语言三个方 面。内容方面要求观点明确、逻辑清晰；组织方面要求文 章结构合理、段落分明；语言方面要求语法准确、表达流 畅。
Q2
如何提高托福写作的语言表达能力？
A2
提高语言表达能力的有效方法是多读、多写、多听。多 读可以培养语感，熟悉常用表达方式；多写可以锻炼语言 组织能力，提高写作技巧；多听可以增强语感，熟悉英语 表达方式。
综合写作范文解析
总结词
综合写作范文解析部分主要介绍托福考 试中综合写作题型的答题技巧和范文示 例。
VS
详细描述
这部分内容将重点讲解如何进行有效的阅 读、听力和写作的整合，并提供一些综合 写作题型的答题技巧。同时，将提供一些 优秀的范文示例，帮助考生更好地理解综 合写作的评分标准和要求。
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CATALOGUE
《托福写作教程》ppt课 件
CATALOGUE
目 录
• 托福写作简介 • 托福写作技巧 • 托福写作题型解析 • 托福写作范文解析 • 托福写作模拟试题及答案 • 学生常见问题解答
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CATALOGUE
托福写作简介
托福写作考试目的
01
评估非英语母语者的英语写作能力
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确保考生具备足够的英语表达能力，以适应国外大 学的学习和生活
独立写作题型解析
总结词
独立写作要求考生在30分钟内完成一篇150-225词的作文，就某一话题阐述自己的观 点。
详细描述
独立写作题目通常涉及教育、文化、科技、社会等话题，要求考生在有限时间内清晰、 有条理地表达自己的观点，并使用具体例子和细节支持论点。
评分标准
独立写作的评分主要依据内容、语言、结构和例子四个方面，要求考生在文章中展现出 良好的语言表达能力和逻辑思维能力。
托福写作的评分标准是什么？
A1
托福写作的评分标准主要包括内容、组织和语言三个方 面。内容方面要求观点明确、逻辑清晰；组织方面要求文 章结构合理、段落分明；语言方面要求语法准确、表达流 畅。
Q2
如何提高托福写作的语言表达能力？
A2
提高语言表达能力的有效方法是多读、多写、多听。多 读可以培养语感，熟悉常用表达方式；多写可以锻炼语言 组织能力，提高写作技巧；多听可以增强语感，熟悉英语 表达方式。
综合写作范文解析
总结词
综合写作范文解析部分主要介绍托福考 试中综合写作题型的答题技巧和范文示 例。
VS
详细描述
这部分内容将重点讲解如何进行有效的阅 读、听力和写作的整合，并提供一些综合 写作题型的答题技巧。同时，将提供一些 优秀的范文示例，帮助考生更好地理解综 合写作的评分标准和要求。
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CATALOGUE
《托福写作教程》ppt课 件
CATALOGUE
目 录
• 托福写作简介 • 托福写作技巧 • 托福写作题型解析 • 托福写作范文解析 • 托福写作模拟试题及答案 • 学生常见问题解答
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CATALOGUE
托福写作简介
托福写作考试目的
01
评估非英语母语者的英语写作能力
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确保考生具备足够的英语表达能力，以适应国外大 学的学习和生活
独立写作题型解析
总结词
独立写作要求考生在30分钟内完成一篇150-225词的作文，就某一话题阐述自己的观 点。
详细描述
独立写作题目通常涉及教育、文化、科技、社会等话题，要求考生在有限时间内清晰、 有条理地表达自己的观点，并使用具体例子和细节支持论点。
评分标准
独立写作的评分主要依据内容、语言、结构和例子四个方面，要求考生在文章中展现出 良好的语言表达能力和逻辑思维能力。
托福独立写作篇章结构-PPT资料126页
(differently, 副词修饰动词)
4.The problems that are created by environmental pollution is very hard to resolve
(is改成are, 主谓一致)
减少语法错误
5. Farmer can get more benefits from the new fertilizer.
because it will bring us a lot of help.
独立写作的开头
1. 简单粗暴型 There is a principal reason for agreeing with
IBT独立写作满分标准
1. 减少语法错误 2. 观点鲜明，结构清晰连贯，前后呼应 3. 句式结构多样，用词准确精当
减少语法错误
1. Today, people around the world became more and more concerned about their health
用词准确精当 a. 用词要多样 b. 用词要准确
结构清晰连贯
3.结构清晰连贯 a. 基本结构一万年不变 b. 1, 2, 3; 发展段段首用First, Second, Third或
者是the first reason is..... c. 使用必要的连接词，体现逻辑和层次 比如: therefore, however, furthermore,
3.不用俗语、俚语 pass away/kick the bucket
独立写作文章的基本结构
Personal opinion/view/choice Reason 1 Reason 2 Reason 3
4.The problems that are created by environmental pollution is very hard to resolve
(is改成are, 主谓一致)
减少语法错误
5. Farmer can get more benefits from the new fertilizer.
because it will bring us a lot of help.
独立写作的开头
1. 简单粗暴型 There is a principal reason for agreeing with
IBT独立写作满分标准
1. 减少语法错误 2. 观点鲜明，结构清晰连贯，前后呼应 3. 句式结构多样，用词准确精当
减少语法错误
1. Today, people around the world became more and more concerned about their health
用词准确精当 a. 用词要多样 b. 用词要准确
结构清晰连贯
3.结构清晰连贯 a. 基本结构一万年不变 b. 1, 2, 3; 发展段段首用First, Second, Third或
者是the first reason is..... c. 使用必要的连接词，体现逻辑和层次 比如: therefore, however, furthermore,
3.不用俗语、俚语 pass away/kick the bucket
独立写作文章的基本结构
Personal opinion/view/choice Reason 1 Reason 2 Reason 3
托福独立写作范文详解ppt课件
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Teenagers are self-sufficient partially because many of them can make money at a young age.
Many 16 to 18-year-old teenagers can work in MacDonald’s. They can deliver newspapers. Some can even work in supermarkets. This is because these places have flexible hours for part-time workers. Students can work on weekends and over summer holidays.
Teenagers 30 years ago did not have the instant access to computers and Internet connection.
They will be more reliant on their parents for answers should they encounter problems.
beneficial. The option seems to be easy, beneficial
and convenient.
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Yes, I agree. Young people are less dependent. It is because young people can make money. It’s because young people are mature. It’s because young people are emotionally independent.
Teenagers are self-sufficient partially because many of them can make money at a young age.
Many 16 to 18-year-old teenagers can work in MacDonald’s. They can deliver newspapers. Some can even work in supermarkets. This is because these places have flexible hours for part-time workers. Students can work on weekends and over summer holidays.
Teenagers 30 years ago did not have the instant access to computers and Internet connection.
They will be more reliant on their parents for answers should they encounter problems.
beneficial. The option seems to be easy, beneficial
and convenient.
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Yes, I agree. Young people are less dependent. It is because young people can make money. It’s because young people are mature. It’s because young people are emotionally independent.
托福独立写作开头段的写法.最全优质PPT
explanations, exemplifications, and/or details. Displays unity, progression, and coherence. Displays consistent facility in the use of language, demonstrating
expressed in a different way.——《柯林斯英汉双解大辞典》
e.g
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Brainstorming: prefer to do sth -- would rather do sth live -- reside, dwell small -- little big city -- metroplis Paraphase: Some people prefer to reside in a small town. Others would rather live in a metroplis.
of a person's life -- in one's lifetime
expressed in a different way.——《柯林斯英汉双解大辞典》
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Brainstorming: prefer to do sth -- would rather do sth live -- reside, dwell small -- little big city -- metroplis Paraphase: Some people prefer to reside in a small town. Others would rather live in a metroplis.
of a person's life -- in one's lifetime
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Be simple and sweet
This is convenient. This is easy. This is beneficial. This is easy, convenient and beneficial. Many find it easy, convenient and
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Teenagers are self-sufficient partially because many of them can make money at a young age.
Many 16 to 18-year-old teenagers can work in MacDonald’s. They can deliver newspapers. Some can even work in supermarkets. This is because these places have flexible hours for part-time workers. Students can work on weekends and over summer holidays.
When we talk about dependence of today’s young people, it is hard to be precise or clear.
But as we talk about psychological dependence of teenagers between 16 to 18, we have a better idea that young people are indeed more autonomous than 30 years ago.
How To Use Language in TOEFL Writing
Trust Yourself
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Say what you want.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people in today are less dependent on their parents than in the past.
beneficial. The option seems to be easy, beneficial
and convenient.
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Yes, I agree. Young peopleecause young people can make money. It’s because young people are mature. It’s because young people are emotionally independent.
Being able to require about parents’ previous experience, children should choose their jobs similar to their parents’.
Because children are able to require about 6
Internet. They can make money. They can be financially independent.
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第三段
Young people are now emotionally independent.
Many young people can find solution for their problems on line.
第一段 Yes, I agree. Young people are less dependent. It is because young people can make money. It is because young people are mature. It is because young people are emotionally
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Conclusion 第五段
Young people are now more independent than ever.
They are more mature, financially and emotionally independent.
This seems to be a good thing.Lets have fun & put them together.
independent.
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第二段 Young people can make money today. Many young people can work part
time. There are different opportunities. Some work in MacDonald’s. Others work in offices. Some can even find jobs from the
They come across different matters earlier than their parents.
Many have part time jobs.
Many thrive for excellence at a young age.
They are confident to deal with people in senior positions.
Their information is much more than their parents’.
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第四段
Young people can be independent because they are mature.
They can handle many things themselves.
Information explosion has brought great deal of solution for them.
Young people can communicate with each other better.
They tend to ask their peers when they have problems.