托福独立写作范文详解ppt课件

Be simple and sweet
This is convenient. This is easy. This is beneficial. This is easy, convenient and beneficial. Many find it easy, convenient and
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Teenagers are self-sufficient partially because many of them can make money at a young age.
Many 16 to 18-year-old teenagers can work in MacDonald’s. They can deliver newspapers. Some can even work in supermarkets. This is because these places have flexible hours for part-time workers. Students can work on weekends and over summer holidays.
When we talk about dependence of today’s young people, it is hard to be precise or clear.
But as we talk about psychological dependence of teenagers between 16 to 18, we have a better idea that young people are indeed more autonomous than 30 years ago.
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Say what you want.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people in today are less dependent on their parents than in the past.
beneficial. The option seems to be easy, beneficial
and convenient.
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Yes, I agree. Young peopleecause young people can make money. It’s because young people are mature. It’s because young people are emotionally independent.
Being able to require about parents’ previous experience, children should choose their jobs similar to their parents’.
Because children are able to require about 6
Internet. They can make money. They can be financially independent.
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第三段
Young people are now emotionally independent.
Many young people can find solution for their problems on line.
第一段 Yes, I agree. Young people are less dependent. It is because young people can make money. It is because young people are mature. It is because young people are emotionally
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Conclusion 第五段
Young people are now more independent than ever.
They are more mature, financially and emotionally independent.
This seems to be a good thing.Lets have fun & put them together.
independent.
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第二段 Young people can make money today. Many young people can work part
time. There are different opportunities. Some work in MacDonald’s. Others work in offices. Some can even find jobs from the
They come across different matters earlier than their parents.
Many have part time jobs.
Many thrive for excellence at a young age.
They are confident to deal with people in senior positions.
Their information is much more than their parents’.
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第四段
Young people can be independent because they are mature.
They can handle many things themselves.
Information explosion has brought great deal of solution for them.
Young people can communicate with each other better.
They tend to ask their peers when they have problems.